RiKara SS - Everything I Do - Pt22, 23 pg67 (18/7/17) - Page 18

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hii Sakura.. how's your exam stress doing .. 😆 .. an a little late with the reply.. can already see a new chapter posted but will get to reading it after a while.. for now m still in the previous chapter feels..


Your RiKara are perfect for each other.. both are hugely flawed.. are hurt n trapped.. n since they are trapped retaliations will follow.. it's expected .. Ri reacts.. n she draws blood too.. Omkara is hurt really bad.. he's hurt for a relationship that will no longer see the light of the day due to Ri.. RI's anger is justified just her techniques disappointing.. Omkara was right.. he should have been the target.. would have made it worthwhile.. anyway.. let's see how they move beyond this cat n mouse game.. where does reconciliation lie... cause they can't go on like this.. there's a certain sense of futility that lies in all this.. can't wait to reach how these two end up together .. if at all.. :).. n glad about Omkara keeping to his promise..

Will get back with my review on the next chapter.. thode time baad.. thanks for this amazing story girl.. n all the best for your exams :))..
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Posted: 8 years ago
So beautiful
I love they way you portrayed them in this chapter
Just so gentle and dare I say loving
Excited to see what's going to happen
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Posted: 8 years ago
This chapter was a nice change of pace from the destructive revenge game being played out between Om and Gauri. Gauri's so soft hearted and pure yaar... She's tried her hand at being a petulant rebel but seeing the reason behind Om's actions has her wanting to back him up.
You drew a beautiful comparison in this chapter which I found so apt... Tej is like Kronos, bent on destroying his own... Shivaay is Zeus, always like lightning, striking down anything that wants to hurt his people... Rudra is Poseidon, calm but capable of being stormy and Omkara is Hades... Gauri his willing Persephone.

I love how by the end of the update, they were both supporting each other, like members in some twisted Emotional Abuse Survivors Anonymous, even if circumstances had forced them into that situation.

Eagerly waiting for more from you!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Such an amazing chapter. Full of emotions. Loved it. Ri is love. Loved the way you portrayed all their emotions and everything. This Om is too good. I loved the way they supported each other. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Post soon.
And btw thanks for the PM. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
This rikara is love. Thanks sakura for giving this beautiful update. Nothing more to say. This is awrosme going.
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Posted: 8 years ago
What an awesome update! Loving the story track.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
So finally someone has come in Om life who is willing to share his pain.
Its nice that in time gauri came to know from where om is coming from. It would to read gauri POV to know om completely.
I hope rudra will stop saumya in time.
I am loving rikara, though there is no love between but there is am emotional connection and understanding which matters the most.
Looking forward to read next chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago
So, the thing is--I don't read full fledged fanfictions, especially incomplete full-fledged fanfictions that are angsty to an extent (I like light-hearted comedies when it comes to my soap-opera ff's because we see enough angst in the opera itself) because I have short attention span and don't have the patience to wait for updates or read through the whole thing.
But your work is brilliant and to top it all off--something or the other is always happening and nothing is a filler--I like how qquick it is. In 6 chapters--the lead couple has gone from unattached animosity to some sort of emotional dependence on each other and I love you for that.

I cannot wait for more, no mind to that angst it might have because I love the characterization and there is kindling between Om and Gauri that the show is lacking at the moment.
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Posted: 8 years ago
I wish ri is genuine this time i mean though she took the slap but I feel she still has some hidden motive behind all this sudden change

wonderful update n plz update pretty lil liar once u are done with ur exams
good luck for rest and study hard😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
What a fine Update...
Gauri was coming to say no but seeing the scenario everyone would have reacted that way...

I really feel no child would face it the situation that Omkara and Rudra are in its excruciating to see...


Gauri came between...

You really explained Omkara's anger well I was imagining the Mahadev's Rudra roop when the Sati was killed... but Gauri calming him down and then washroom scene was perfect...

I am sorry Today I don't have words as really this situation really makes me speechless...

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