NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 29~CHAPTER 34 - Page 39

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: binduprasad41


I know adwi is best and pretty much smart
And our cookie too 😳

Yayyy... I was right
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Posted: 8 years ago
Author Sabina, only for THIS thread the color is Green, to honor the entry of 'green eyed monster'!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy



You know there's this kid in class... she's not the noisiest... but when she speaks, she always gives the right answers...
just saying... 😉

Shruthi right too... and Akku/Bindup half right😛

😉

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy di


Can I give you a tight hug for this

🤗

big huggie Lashy di

It all started with Bindiya's 'You used to be such fun'

and it ended with Heera being like how she used to (though only for an hour) betting... giggling... etc... yes in that one hour, her life came a full circle...

Only instead of with jiji, she was having fun with/against AMK! 😉

yup Amk is bringing old Heera back 😉 to her old nature and Durga must be happy in heaven seeing her sister like this 😃


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

@ Vrinda

Thank you so much for coming back to me with reviews of both chapters... That was very sweet of you...😳

I WAS ALWAYS HERE DI BUT LIL BUSY...😳...MISSED U 🤗

I hope your exams went well dear 🤗

THEY ARE STILL ON 🤣 OR MERI RATOON KI NIND UDA RAKHI HAI 🤣

The start of the chapter was so emotional where one sister go to other for some relief from all what happening around her...😭...which is very disturbing to her soul...with many thoughts running in her mind...and finally she had a good sleep in hug of her sister...😃


yes that scene was an emotional scene😭... And I love the way you have worded it... A good sleep hugging her sister 😊

U LIKE MY WORD 😲 BUT I THINK IT WILL BE BORING AS I JUST TYPE IT AFTER GETTING BORED OF MY BOOK 😲😲

The situation of AMK room shows that real wedding going on...not just a formality, from AMK's friend teasing him to everything was fun reading...👏

The thing is... Even if he sees this only as a formality, his friends know that he does love her and that this will be his one and only wedding to his one and only love thus making it a real affair... Even if he kept telling himself and reminding them it wasn't so

AND FRIENDS SHOULD BE LIKE THAT ONLY 👍🏼


But that was how it was... And unfortunately that is how it is even today in many families

YUP BUT U CAN TYPE A LIL DIFFERENT NA

The chores after marriage at entrance of room was so fun with bride and groom being stop at door for some gifts... 🤣

Thanks dear... I am glad you enjoyed that part😳

Nice poem Lashy di...👍🏼

Thank you

😳😳

Their first night and Heera's inner fight are very well written...👏...but AMK being AMK fulfill his promise by not asking his husband right and let Heera sleep on her bed all alone and peacefully without any disturbance...👍🏼

Yes... He is a gentleman, after all...Thank you so much for your comments the chapter 33... I totally enjoyed reading it!😳

THANKU DI AND IT WAS MY PLEASURE AS GOT TO READ CHAPTER 33 AGAIN 😳


Lashy di I really don't know why u thought that this chapter will be boring as this for me was very well written and different chapter which remind me of first chapter "durga and heera doing bidding for horses"

As I mentioned before, this line brought a big smile to my face... Since it obviously struck you immediately what I was trying to convey👏

IT WAS NOT A BIG TASK..I THINK EVERYONE HAS GOT THAT MESSAGE 😳

But I literally hate the start...😡...u have shown Mahendra as such a loving husband toward his wife...which he is not...😡...and I was knowing it, two evils are soon gona shake hands against our Hero Heroine...But I m thinking of Heera what if Mahendra after knowing Amk is Ustaad tell this to villagers and they take their shoulder away from Heera what will she do...😭...Hope my thinking is wrong...😭

For this, I would unfortunately have to tell you - wait and watch...

AND UR SMILEY SAY THAT MY IMAGINATION IS QUITE TRUE


But, Heera cannot ride horses because of her partial vision... So, what would she do with a horse?🤔

AMK IS HERE NA WHO CAN GUIDE AND HELP HER TO RIDE HORSE IN PARTIAL VISION CAN'T HE 😒

Yes... She has just taken the first step by going to the race, staying there, enjoying herself, betting and giggling... Why she even had a long silent conversation with Khan Sahib! Let's see how their relationship progresses from here😎

WAITING FOR THAT ONLY


Thank you very very very very very very much Vrinda🤗

ITA BDA THANKS

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Posted: 8 years ago

Just for Manu di... What about us😭

Your OS based on trust and hope..their conversation.. . It was lovely ❤️.. But Why Heera calls him certain someone 😆

Kuki!!!! 🤗 Arre baba sab ke liye hai! Jisko khana hai le lo! 😃 And since you will be with Azeez, you will get to sample these in Parnagarh too! 😉 As a side business of peanut farm, I am going to make these delicacies of peanut butter as well. 😃

And Kuki, you don't know why Heera calls him 'certain someone' here? 😲 Pati ke naam nahi lete hai! Ab samjhe! 😆😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: selvi1275

Lana...Beautiful OS...the way u portrayed the sceneries...the climate, colors of the sky, greens, meadows, trees, shades...I was also walking there,...Ball of Fire...

Keep it coming...Ball of Fire


Thank you so much! 😳🤗 That is what the author's purport is, to connect with the readers and take them on the ride and if that is achieved then half the job is done! 😃 And we live in this wonderful world, had to use its beauty! 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: selvi1275

Adwi... beautiful review...it was joy reading yours...READERS TREASURE AND AUTHORS PRIDE ... Someone had written and i absolutely second it...and also happy u've increased font size...


Adwi, Here, here...to that someone! 😃 You deserve it! 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

🤣

meri siggie mein to koi nahi udta...😛


Achha!? Tab toh hamare dekhne ka andaaz alag hai! 😉😃 Jahan se hum dekh rahe hai wohan se toh bahoot kuch ud raha hai! Other than you flying in the air, I can see Mr. Fly Guy's hair flying, heroine's earring flying, their eyelashes flying, BB's beard flying! 🤣🤣🤣
Edited by lghosh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Green and Yellow
Greedy Fellow

Pink and Blue
My love is true

Red and yellow
To catch a fellow

Pink and green
Fit for a queen

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