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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kuki715


Baba re... results times arešŸ˜†... good luck ShagunšŸ‘šŸ¼...



Haan yaar... exams mein jitna darr nhi lagta usse zyada toh results ke time par lagta hai! šŸ˜†

Thanks Kuki! šŸ¤—
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"> AwwwšŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—So that's mean there's another celebration very soon!!!🄳Don't worry, darling... you will rockit as always..😃</font>



Haan party toh I'll definitely throw whether marks are good or not... because the fact that result day has gone calls for a celebration in itself! šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†

Thank you Akka... your words truly light up moods! šŸ¤—ā¤ļø
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Felicity-



Haan party toh I'll definitely throw whether marks are good or not... because the fact that result day has gone calls for a celebration in itself! šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†

Thank you Akka... your words truly light up moods! šŸ¤—ā¤ļø




@bold: That's the spirit, MY LADY!!



Chellam... Read and Learn. 😔 You just started doing all DQs because where we all gave you 100% marks and that mysterious person gave 99.99% marks šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Felicity-

Lashy Di, Kausi Akka, Tai Saheb - šŸ¤—

You know what Di-s, my boards results coming on 15 May. And now I finally know what tension means!! šŸ˜›



Good lucky lil shagun šŸ¤—


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Chellam... Read and Learn.😔You just started doing all DQs because where we all gave you 100% marks and that mysteriousperson gave 99.99% marksšŸ˜†</font>



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Felicity-



Haaye sun ke bohot accha laga!! Thanks Tai!! šŸ¤—

Nw waiting fr d party on d flooršŸ˜Ž
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Posted: 9 years ago

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Good lucky lil shagunšŸ¤—




Thank you Di! šŸ¤—
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hiding Behind A Stranger.
(a novel by Lashy)

How the novel unfolded so far...


Chapter 1. The Introduction of the Farmaan..

'Shehzade...' the chief minister called out, 'It is not just about the Shehenshah's word... if I recall rightly, a farmaan was issued too... a few years ago...'

Whether bought, brought, stolen or snatched, the prince was going to get his hands on this farmaan, BEFORE it could reach the court.


..and the chief characters..

The young heiress Harka Bai..

She was every bit a 16 year old who was a gifted learner. A mathematician. A Linguist. A biologist. And most importantly, an expert Healer. By having never let pride get in the way of acquiring knowledge, she'd thus accomplished at 16, what most people twice her age couldn't.

Durga Bai !

Her parents could not have chosen a better name, for her personality was as intense as the gusts of an unpredictable night storm.

By 17, she could make her own decisions - whether it concerned governing the estate or buying a horse.By the age of 13, she had learnt to shoulder responsibilities with a smile - becoming 'parent' to her sister and a 'guardian' to her entire community.

Kunwar Mahendar..

The determined young man had gone against his parent's wishes and offered her his hand in marriage -

...
Chapter 2. The bitter memory..

Now In the wilderness...

'You have to stay back and take care of all this when I'm gone!'

Heera's empty glare drooped down till it fell upon the two artefacts nestled within her cold palms - a diamond ring and a small urn of ashes - precious artefacts that not too long ago formed the very identity and essence of Durga Bai

'I didn't even listen to your last words, jiji!



The nightmare..

Jiji ran around the Haveli, with her eyes opened wide

Every trick uncanny, she may have tried

Every nook and cranny, she may have spied

But never did she find me, because I know how to hide!



Alas,

For, he took away the Farmaan,

Then, took away her modesty,

And finally, took away her life too.


...
On the way...

The stranger..

This traveller was a Mughal. And an avid rider too


Chapter 3. Reverie at Aidabad and the Canal Bank


" Blind or Bizaare?"

Return of the 4 dams

Chapter 4. Stranger, the Saviour

'But, I am blind...' she paused 'Actually, I am partially blind!'


Chapter 5. Entry of the protagonist..

She picturises him..

Hereby, I commence my narration

About a man, who by trade, was a businessman,

A deal he struck with the Lord in Heaven

And was bestowed with good looks in the bargain!

With features sharper than a sword's blade

And wet long locks of a deep brown shade,

His skin possessed the fairest of complexions

But in the mirror of his eyes, I saw a stormy reflection!


Chapter 6. The Tale of two Rings.


"Ustaad" !

'Those men are depraved' continued the senapati, fanning the fire that'd just started burning 'They spare no one... they're so depraved, they have a special army just to commit such crimes...they're so depraved, they even have an experienced mentor... called Ustaad... to recruit and train such barbarians... they...'

*** *** ***


Her first Doubt...

She was going to learn more about this mysterious Persian who'd drawn her out from the jaws of death. Where did he travel so late at night? How could one so young, achieve success, all by himself? And what was it about him that was not-so-commonplace?

'Why would a man who trades with the royal family... and one who regularly journeys up north, live so far away from the capital?'

'Why would such an eminent merchant live in a run-down haveli... in a small town like Aidabad, so far away from riches and splendour?'

Heera's glimpses fell upon the diamond ring that adorned her finger - a ring that'd been jiji's favourite, and thus now her own favourite one too. After losing the person with whom she shared all opinions and thoughts, the ring was beginning to fill an emptiness by becoming a passive friend of sorts. And, during every sleepless night over the past week, the lonesome younger sibling had found herself spending a good while staring at that precious possession. Conversing with it. Wanting to unload her many worries upon it...


Having removed his rings and neatly arranged them upon the dresser, one after another, his tough gazes were drawn towards a particular one. An oval-shaped ring set with a topaz that was fortunate to possess a rare yet vibrant shade of light brown. Akbar Khan instantly knew what it reminded him of.

Picking the ring up, he felt compelled to do something else - he held its stone in front of the soft light of a night lamp. The earthy glow that shone through made it appear more ethereal than any other gemstone he had seen.

Not only was this hazel-brown topaz unique, it drew its elegance from being clear-cut and subtle.


Chapter 7. More about him..

'A handsome and powerful young merchant with no wife, no mistress and no weaknesses! What a pity!'

'Actually, that's not entirely true!'

'Well...several people have approached her master with marriage proposals... but, he's the one who has turned them down!'

'Not only that... apparently, he doesn't visit women... doesn't touch alcohol... in fact, he doesn't even smoke the hukkah!'

Unlike her normal etiquette, she was beginning to find herself paying quite some attention to their banters about this mysterious 'Khan Sahib' - more attention than she'd paid to any such frivolous banters before.


Chapter 8. Close Encounter of the two!

Right now, she stood in front of him as a dignified aristocrat, as the self-assured leader of her clan. And the stunning transformation from the garb of a dull cotton attire into an apparel of shimmering blue silk with such flattering ornaments, only enhanced her already-rich elegance as one would imagine.


Raising a brow, Akbar sternly looked up to dart her a glance, before turning aside. As a man who'd never let his grit be swayed by beauty or charms - as a man who didn't want to be fascinated by her finesse, this was a juncture where he found himself failing in front of Harka Bai's perfection. Yet again!

Chapter 9. The Story develops..


'Was this...' he added 'Was this how it always was?'

What he hadn't admitted yet, was that hers was the most inspiring life story he'd heard so far. In his travels over the years, he'd had opportunities to meet exceptional ladies - poetesses, musicians, painters, politicians and scholars - but, fact remained that none of their talents could hold a candle to the unique accomplishments of this young lady.

* * * * * *

'Kunwarsa...' he weighed his words with utmost care 'We don't know what lies in Parnagarh's future... but, we can protect the people and their heiress if we make a wise decision...'

'Please acknowledge my proposal and accept Harka bitiya's hand in marriage...'

*** *** ***


'This humble message comes to you...' Heera began reading its contents aloud 'from Parnagarh, the land of valleys...'...

'Please stand by me... please show your support for a great warrior like Durga Bai, by helping me bring the criminals to justice... please speak up for Parnagarh in court!'

Chapter 10. The Signals

Then, why was 'she' left feeling so perturbed by it?

Was the life so lonely that she'd become desperate for some intelligent company after the demise of her jiji?

Was it because his subconscious knew her spirit was unique, too unique to allow it to be extinguished? Was it because he knew she was a noble soul - a soul so noble that it would make any man want to protect its essence from dying out, though she'd never ask for such protection herself?

*** *** ***

He felt a strange but certain twitch in his chest - and ironically, it was that unfamiliar twitch that brought him face to face with the facts.



Karkuzhali.

This is an exercise to cheer up Lashy..

( Will continue..)


Edited by karkuzhali - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

I am going out for dinner.
Any editing will be done after I come back

KK.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


I am going out for dinner.
Any editing will be done after I come back

KK.


Enjoy your dinner sachu patti šŸ¤—

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