Tasveer Banaata hun Mein 1 SHOT, Om & Gauri updtd on pg 33 19 June

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Wow this part is fun filled hilarious and just superb

loved every bit of it

but why is it so short yaar

Edited by taahir004 - 8 years ago

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Hello Ila, 😊
Bilkul KT k andaaz se likha hai! 😛 It was fun to read. 😉 Thanks for the pm dear. 😳
With love,
Aheli.

awwh Thank you.// glad you like it...

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: yayini
KT is one classy villain for a daily soap. His dialogue delivery is superb..
your os just describes his mind voice exactly.. Superb...👏

Yeah he is classy one and really pura DBO hila diya glad you liked it thanks for the comment

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan
Nice one

Thanks for pm

Thanks😃

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Nivijo
Ila this os series of yours is literally marvellous. Loved it. Are you gonna continue with it? Please say yes.
Thanks for the pm.
Cheers,
Nivi

Thank you nivijio glad you like it... Let's see if i am able to post till when... thanks for appreciating...

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: taahir004
Wow this part is fun filled hilarious and just superb

loved every bit of it

but why is it so short yaar

It was short because there is something between omkara and gauri that has to be shown before it... and kaali's pov was needed it here that's why/////

Although you are not familiar with this show you still read and comment thanks for appreciating

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LAKSHMI KRISHNA

@lakshmi32

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Beautiful... You perfectly wrote kaali's POV...thanks for the pm..please update asap..

With love

Lakshmi

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: lakshmi32
Beautiful... You perfectly wrote kaali's POV...thanks for the pm..please update asap..
With love
Lakshmi

thank you for the comment😃

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

TEASER FOR UPCOMING ONE SHOT

I am Glad that you liked my OS Series on Rikara. I hope you will shower your love on my every One shot whenever I write. I have thought of something I want and I am giving a teaser here for my upcoming OS Hope you will figure it out or able to guess the feel... I was searching for the song and title... As you have noticed every Os has a Title and it is based on Song... and I liked this song a lot hope you will too like this...

Here's the link do visit the youtube link of this song amazingly sung.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZSwEnQzg-xE

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZSwEnQzg-xE[/YOUTUBE]

With Regards

Ila

Edited by IlaTanwar - 8 years ago