Shivika TS--An Ending...(off-track)-- shot 2(pg 1)[25/4/17]*completed* - Page 6

Originally posted by: KashiTessa

The last part bought tears to my eyes.
Continue soon

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

it's too heartbreaking 😭

Originally posted by: zyrah17

Beautifully wrritern dear
but it's emotional 😭
thanks for the pm 🤗

Originally posted by: Mystery1234

I am crying 😭
Shivay died...the love story remained incomplete
it was hell emotional..
The words depicted their pain
Amazing
Loved it
Thanks for the pm 😊

Neha, the 1st Shot is Wonderful...⭐️👍🏼

Shivaay's grp won the competition🥳...& Shiaat gave credit to the whole team (this definitely is out of character for Shivaay 😉😛)...

Anika is happy with Shivaay's success, but she is sad bcoz Shivaay will be away & they won't meet for 3 months...😔

Shivaay offered to not go & stay back with Anika...awww But Anika encouraged him to go on & he took promises from her that she won't cry & will keep smiling & stay happy...😳😃

Anika came to see off Shivaay...😎😊

Shivaay gifted Anika a CD of Darshan Raval's song which is her fav & a small letter which was sweet...😳😳

Shivaay seriously, he ended up giving the gift to Rudra & Saumya was the one to bring it to Anika...😛😆

The song in the background with the ShivIka scenes on front was absolutely splendid...👏⭐️

(anika-"I have made food for you"

shivaay-"its looking delicious" and ate a bite

anika-"how is it?"

shivaay-"its tasty...its yummy.." and he ate the whole food

anika-"you ate whole alone, I didn't even taste it" and made a puppy face. She saw about one morsel was left in the bowl and she ate it.

Shivaay-"ani..don't" and anika spit it out

Anika-"yuck, its tasteless. Why did you ate it"

Shivaay-"because you made it..")------ This flashback scene was adorable😳😳...made me remember Anika's peheli rasoyi from the serial...😉😆

ShivIka library flashback was beautiful...😳😳

The flashback scenes you added to signify that even when far apart they miss each other & live with the help of the memories they created together...The kept on thinking about each other😳& smile never left their face...😃👏

Finally completed reading the 1st shot...Will read the 2nd shot now...😉😃

Om-"shivaay don't close your eyes" and shivaay slowly opened his eyes.

Ambulance arrived there, shivaay was taken inside the ambulance. Om sat beside shivaay holding shivaay's hand

Om-"nothing will happen to you..." and a lone tear escaped from his eyes.

Shivaay called out om with great difficulty. Om brought his ears close to shivaay's mouth

Shivaay-"O...Om, plz d...do ta...take c...care of my fa...fa..family and plz...tell Ani...to re...member her pro...promise"

Originally posted by: Roselind

Neha, the 1st Shot is Wonderful...⭐️👍🏼

Shivaay's grp won the competition🥳...& Shiaat gave credit to the whole team (this definitely is out of character for Shivaay 😉😛)...

Anika is happy with Shivaay's success, but she is sad bcoz Shivaay will be away & they won't meet for 3 months...😔

Shivaay offered to not go & stay back with Anika...awww But Anika encouraged him to go on & he took promises from her that she won't cry & will keep smiling & stay happy...😳😃

Anika came to see off Shivaay...😎😊

Shivaay gifted Anika a CD of Darshan Raval's song which is her fav & a small letter which was sweet...😳😳

Shivaay seriously, he ended up giving the gift to Rudra & Saumya was the one to bring it to Anika...😛😆

The song in the background with the ShivIka scenes on front was absolutely splendid...👏⭐️

(anika-"I have made food for you"

shivaay-"its looking delicious" and ate a bite

anika-"how is it?"

shivaay-"its tasty...its yummy.." and he ate the whole food

anika-"you ate whole alone, I didn't even taste it" and made a puppy face. She saw about one morsel was left in the bowl and she ate it.

Shivaay-"ani..don't" and anika spit it out

Anika-"yuck, its tasteless. Why did you ate it"

Shivaay-"because you made it..")------ This flashback scene was adorable😳😳...made me remember Anika's peheli rasoyi from the serial...😉😆

ShivIka library flashback was beautiful...😳😳

The flashback scenes you added to signify that even when far apart they miss each other & live with the help of the memories they created together...The kept on thinking about each other😳& smile never left their face...😃👏

Finally completed reading the 1st shot...Will read the 2nd shot now...😉😃

Originally posted by: Roselind

2nd shot was heart-wrenching & emotional...😭😭

Shivaay was returning before the expected time & Anika got excited...😃😃

Shivaay asked her to meet where they 1st met...😳😳

Anika's mom suggested the best dress👏...same dress which she wore when they 1st met😉...awesome idea...😃⭐️

Anika excitement k chakkar mein time se pehele hi Church pahunch gayi...😛😆

ShivKara talk about IshKara😳...Om was going to deny, but couldn't & he agreed to what Shivaay advised😃😉...

Shivaay ko aur sabra nhi hua😉😆...he decided to walk to the Church...😛😎

Shivaay should have crossed the road with full attention😒...but then again, this is one of our generation's biggest problem, raashte se zyada phone pe dhyaan hota hai...😭

(Shivaay slowly closed his eyes and was trying to get all his beautiful memories with parents, his friends and his Anika close to his heart.

Om-"shivaay don't close your eyes" and shivaay slowly opened his eyes.

Ambulance arrived there, shivaay was taken inside the ambulance. Om sat beside shivaay holding shivaay's hand

Om-"nothing will happen to you..." and a lone tear escaped from his eyes.

Shivaay called out om with great difficulty. Om brought his ears close to shivaay's mouth

Shivaay-"O...Om, plz d...do ta...take c...care of my fa...fa..family and plz...tell Ani...to re...member her pro...promise"

Om-"nothing will happen to you shivaay...you will be fine.." and shivaay gave him a faint smile.)------ Neha you have nailed this scene 👏...It was beautifully painful...Beautiful bcoz Shivaay remembered his family, frnd & Anika while requesting Om to take care of them & ask Anika to remember her promise😳...& Painful bcoz Shivaay was fighting life & death..😭😭

Om couldn't take up Anika's call bcoz he didn't know what to say to her...so he called Ishana instead who sounded shocked & in angst...😒😭

IshRu supported Anika when she was engulfed in sorrow...👍🏼

ShivIka Hospital scene after Shivaay's death & Anika reaction broke my heart😭😭

I cried for Anika😭😭...

Anika stopped crying & IshMya helped her reach home...😒

Finally Anika broke down after holding back for sometime...she hugged her mother & let the tears flow out...😭😭

Life is dam harsh...😒😭

Kuddos to you Neha👏👍🏼 for writing this piece, since it must have drained you mentally bcoz writing emotional turmoil based stories are very tough...

Keep writing...😃😊

Originally posted by: Swadarsh

Lovely update

Thnx for PM