Dear Yellow boots,
it's a fantastic work..each characterization is brilliant..it's unique ..the title, story, way of unfolding , background of the story, all are new and different for me..incidents are seems to be realistic..
Khushi is a fighter..I love her character..you portrayed well the ambitious young girl who wanted to achieve in sports, one who felt the difference of her economy status by her classmates..a lonely young girl, an ambitious young woman who struggled to stand in her own..a young heart with unknown feelings for Arnav..
you did excellent job in bringing out different dimensions of Khushi..her problems are so close to an ordinary woman, but the way she tried to overcome the problems is an inspiration..
her growing affection and unknown feelings are sweet..you stopped at the point.. 😉
I loved how you shown him as a usual man , not some superhero..he is genuine..he's trying to correct his unintentional mistakes..the younger Arnav didn't realize his habit of behaving differently in each time would make khushi feel like that..they were not friends yet they maintained a Good relationship with bitter experience..he's too hard on him and his feelings are still hard to digest..his anxiety for khushi's groomsearch and protective feelings are confusing him..
each character in school is different..I liked how you explained them..Arnav's father and mother are still a mystery..thank God, his mother realized her fault a little and let Khushi live..
it's very sad to experience the bad phase in life for someone's misunderstanding ..I felt so bad for khushi..
Anjali-arjun-dhumba a lovely family..NK is as usual lovely..other than these people I found little hard to know others..Akash , a good friend to Khushi and lav, not so close cousin to arnav , had crush on Payal..Payal seemed to be a straight forward high class girl who doesn't involve so much with others..Aman is a mystery..like khushi I found him too a little difficult ..
Preeto is a cheerful woman..I still had to read..but I have to say that this is one of the best fiction I found in IF..
Thank you so much dear for writing this..God bless you..
I hope you will continue it in the future..you are talented..please do write in future..I wish you all the best for your professional and personal life dear..
with love,
mathi:)
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