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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#111

It was really very authentic and motivational update... 😊

Good work kiddo...

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jasmine87

@jasmine87

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#112

Wow, Superb update..

Thanks for pm.

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#113

It was beautiful beautiful Vrinda...

Kab shuru huaa kab khatam huaa pataa hi nahin chalaa..

From the surface, it might seem like Jalal was being prankish in pjs, calling her a chudail and fooling around.

But it showed a stark difference - he might have called her a chudail, but it was her in laws who treated her like a witch...

And it was particularly painful, reading the part where she'd been discarded like 'waste'. 😭Thankfully, Jalal decided to recycle her feelings, her emotions... just like how he protected her from society's taunts!

Btw, I liked how you took us through the various stages of her grief - first in flashback, then 15 days, 17 days, a few weeks, a month, six months... helped us heal along with her. 😳

Your story had deep-seated meaning and a message to society. It was a tale - not of love at first sight - but of support, togetherness, companionship and trust! It's all about this - saying 'I'll take your hand in my hand forever'

Made for a very poignant read, Vrinda... keep it coming!!!

🤗

(At first, I got a bit of a jhatka when I read husband dead - but breathed a sigh of relief when I realised it was Surya. Is there a back story as to why they weren't leading the life of husband and wife?)

Edited by lashy - 8 years ago

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Vrinda

@--Vrinda--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: lashy
It was beautiful beautiful Vrinda...
oh my god..😲...lashy di here, Vrinda fainting
Kab shuru huaa kab khatam huaa pataa hi nahin chalaa..
really...😲

From the surface, it might seem like Jalal was being prankish in pjs, calling her a chudail and fooling around.

But it showed a stark difference - he might have called her a chudail, but it was her in laws who treated her like a witch...
true that's what society really do to a widow 😭
And it was particularly painful, reading the part where she'd been discarded like 'waste'. 😭Thankfully, Jalal decided to recycle her feelings, her emotions... just like how he protected her from society's taunts!

Btw, I liked how you took us through the various stages of her grief - first in flashback, then 15 days, 17 days, a few weeks, a month, six months... helped us heal along with her. 😳

Your story had deep-seated meaning and a message to society. It was a tale - not of love at first sight
and that's just because this story was written for society purpose only not for some romance or love
- but of support, togetherness, companionship and trust! It's all about this - saying 'I'll take your hand in my hand forever'

Made for a very poignant read, Vrinda... keep it coming!!!

🤗
will try to write such work more and more but dont know if i will be able to do this again or not 😒

(At first, I got a bit of a jhatka when I read husband dead - but breathed a sigh of relief when I realised it was Surya. Is there a back story as to why they weren't leading the life of husband and wife?)
actually i too dont remember y i write that they dont have a husband wifey relation 😔 u see i have pen it down 4 yr back 🤔

lashy di 🤗 thanks for showing ur presence here this means so much to me 🤗🤗

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Janu0727

@Janu0727

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#115

Nice Beautiful Story 😊

Thanks for the PM 😳

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#116

What a lovely 3S, Vrinda! 👏

Jodha widowed that soon after her marriage. The blame game was to be expected due to irrational thinking. Fortunately, Hamida was there for her. And our hero was THE man. His forward thinking, his undying support, his taking on society for their misguided and warped perceptions helped to bring Jodha out of her depression. Both of them are a good example of a couple who do not conform to the unreasonable demands of society and believe that life is to be lived the way it should, according to their own terms.

Wonderful read, Vrinda dear! If you have any more lovely stories hidden somewhere, it is time to fish them out. ⭐️🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--
oh my god..😲...lashy di here, Vrinda fainting
Wake up dear... I told you na.. your short stories and OSes I will deffo read! 😃

true that's what society really do to a widow 😭
>>>😭

and that's just because this story was written for society purpose only not for some romance or love
>>> Nice! 😳

Made for a very poignant read, Vrinda... keep it coming!!!

🤗
will try to write such work more and more but dont know if i will be able to do this again or not 😒
>>> You can try and merge both... romance AND a message for society - generally they make the most powerful kind of stories! 😳

actually i too dont remember y i write that they dont have a husband wifey relation 😔 u see i have pen it down 4 yr back 🤔
>>> Ok 😆

lashy di 🤗 thanks for showing ur presence here this means so much to me 🤗🤗
>>> Anytime darling 🤗

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Anonymous

@ParijatDeewani

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#118

Vrindu I'm finally here to give you a really long comment😆

What a concept yaar just wow 👏

Maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki aisa concept hoga👏

Brilliant vrinda👏

Pehle jab Jo said that her hubby is dead fish you scared the hell out of me yaar😡

But fir rahat mili ki Surya hai😆

Jo aur Surya ke beech wife aur hubby ka relation nahi tha 😆

Par kyu yaar 😕

What's the damn reason for it

Arghhh Jo ke in laws kitne cheap hai re😡😡

Instead of supporting they are just wacking her 😡😡

How cruel of such people yaar😡

No doubt that there still exists a lot of people of thie type

Awww poor Jo yaar😭😭😭

Marriage ko sirf 17 days and this tragic incident😭😭😭

And moreover she lost her parents as well 😭😭😭

How sad yaar😭

There's nobody to console her ...poor soul😭😭😭

Hamida is so good towards Jo yaaar😳

I really loved the way she supported her😳😳

Surya ki mom is just to much 😡😡😡

How dare she talk to Jo like that 😡😡😡

Anyways aise logo ke baare me baat karke kya faayda😆

Oh Jalal ki entry was superb😎

After all hero jo hai woh😎

Kya jodi hai yaar chipkali aur bandar ki 👏🤣

Waise vrinda tune kahi kahi chudail likha hai toh kahi chipkali bulaata kya hai Jalal Jo ko exactly

Jalal wants to console Jo ❤️

That's really nice😳

She's is bestfriend after all😆

Wow Jalal ke aate hi Jo is alright 👍🏼

Woh toh hona hi tha coz Jalal ne usse jo kaha tha after that she had to break her small little cocoon😆

Yup Jo's parents won't be happy knowing their daughter's condition😭😭

Jalal is so supportive of Jo yaar😳😳

Poor thing Jo only wears those white clothes😭

Kitna ajeeb lagat hoga use😡

And Jalal gifted her the same 😳

Loved Jo Ja convo 😳😳

She feels peace in his embrace 😳😳

Her only place of solace😳😳

Well done Jalal kisi na kisi ko toh use normal karna hi tha 😆😆

Jalal takes Jo to face the society👏

That's really appreciative coz Jo agar bahar nahi jaati toh uske liye bahut difficlut hota normal hone me👏👏👏

Are waah Jalal ne kya fitting reply diya re us buddhe logo ko

Uski ladki khud bhaag gayi aur dusro ko bol rahi hai🤣

Huh aukaat yaad aa gayi hogi use toh apni🤣

Finally bandar ne chipkali ko propose kiya😆

At first Chipkali hesitated but finally she agreed🥳

Yipieee🥳

Finally Jalal got is old Jo back

It's a really very much inspiring story vrinda 👏

Esp to those whose thinking is still very narrow living in the 21st cent

So what if her hus is dead

She's young, smart n intelligent

She has the right to live the life of her choice

And everybodu should suport her rather than stopping her😡😡

Arghhh yeh society aur iske log sometimes really I feel like wacking them 😡😡😡

Anyways hum sabki soch toh nahi badal sakte na😆😆

A really good attempt vrinda n it's beautifully written by you👏

Every woman like Jo needs a man like Jalal to support her no matter what😊😊😊

Jo ke liye bura laga yaar uske marriage ke just 17 days baad aisa hona is really unfortunate 😭😭

But kehte hai na Whatever happens, happens for good😃😃

Agar Surya ko kuch nahi hota toh Jo Ja ki story kaise ban paati😉

Awseome story vrinda👏👏👏

I really enjoyed reading it 😉

Waiting for such stories from you

Love you vrindu🤗

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Duha Saad

@duhasaad

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#119

Awesome vrinda

it's really lovely story

and it's actually a real story

in this world many women face this kind of problem

many got punished just because they are widows

many got unfaithful life

and many even committed suicide just because society isn't fair with them

this topic is really a very important topic that have to change

because this topic is really sensitive

I really appreciate your way on writing it

on this you showed a hope for all widows

God bless you girl

now about the story

as I said it's awesome from the starting were you showed the way Jodha's life got changed 100 percent by becoming widow and orphanage in the same time to the way you gave her hope in Jalal who just lived with the society that respect the women even if she is the worst in this life they just respect her as a woman and gives her all her rights without even pointing one finger on her

I can just say really loved it