Je T'aime Last Part Uptd May 26th Pg: 19 Pics Added to all parts. - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Get well soon Lubna .. the updates can wait ..health is more important..
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Take care Lubs !!
we will wait for the stories, get well soon buddy 😊
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Hey Guys!! Firstly I want to say sorry to everyone who read it, liked it and commented it, for not responding to your comments, but I've read every one of them. I truly appreciate it and can't thank enough for the love you guys give me. I know I took too much of your time, so here you go... really hope you like it. Love you guys🤗🤗🤗



Pushkar was still deep in his blissful sleep when his phone started ringing. Hmmm... Who's this?? he asked in a drowsy voice.

Can I ask you why you booked a Honeymoon Suite for me??

Bhaiya?? he jumped to a sitting position.

Shut up!! Now tell me what are you up to?

"I'm sorry Bhaiya I forgot to tell you but there was no room available, they said it's fully booked for another two days and Bade Papa wanted me to book in Shangri-La as the event is in the same Hotel. But what happened Bhaiya, you got married on your own wish and you can't share a suite with her. This is Sumo!! someone you know in and out more than anyone in the world".

Share a suite, I can't stand her anymore, thought Shravan with a sadistic laugh at himself. "Everyone change Chote and so did I", you go back to sleep I'll call you later.



This way Sir!!

Shravan turned towards Hotel staff who was directing the way towards their suite, he saw Suman giving the luggage to the Porter who put in the luggage cart and was waiting for him. They headed towards the lift which took them to the top floor.

The staff member used the room key card and entered the Duplex Terrace Suite with Eiffel Tower View. Suman was just awe to see such a beautiful suite. It had a personal terrace with view of Eiffel Tower. There was a shine in her eyes as she was touring the duplex suite with staff which didn't get unnoticed by Shravan.

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No matter how hard he tries he always felt the innocence in those eyes, but now his mind has control over his heart which forbids him from looking in them. He cannot afford another heartbreak.

"Never again" he said to himself.


Over here is the bathroom with personal Jacuzzi and as the staff lady was about to start again, Shravan stopped her.

"It's OK we will take a look later. It was a long flight. Need to catch some sleep".

Sure Sir, she said smiling making Shravan regret it right away.

Sir the menu is right on the coffee table, you can order anything you want.

"Thank you, he cut her off".

And here's the Do Not Disturb sign. "Bonne journe" Have a great day!! Enjoy your stay Sir and Maam.

He sighed as she left. There was an awkward silence they both looked at the bed at the same time. It was decorated with beautiful red roses shaped like a heart. Their breath hitched at the sight but they both quickly turned to the other side. He then rushed and took all the flowers away and put all the decorative pillows in the middle dividing the bed.


Hello Khan Uncle!! he said as he picked up the call.

How are you my Son? It's been so long.

I'm fine Khan Uncle, yeah almost 5 years since you visited me in London. How's Sana?

"She's doing great on business front can't say anything about her personal life, she's on her own in that matter". And Congratulations my Son. How's your wife?? I'm excited to meet her.

Thanks Uncle he said looking at Suman, she's doing good, their eyes locked for few seconds before he came out of his trance, "we'll meet you at the party tonight".

Okay and if you need anything call Sana, I'll text you her personal number.

Sure Uncle.




"Tumhe kuch khana hai to order kar lo, I just want to sleep for little while", he said without looking at her while opening the Champagne bottle.

It's OK I'll just have these strawberries with melted chocolate.

He gulped as he stared at her while she was busy eating strawberries with chocolate but turned away as she looked towards him and just thumped on the bed.

Suman made herself black coffee and headed towards the open terrace. She couldn't believe that she was looking at Eiffel Tower. "Wishes do come true she thought, but I never expected it like this". Everything is messed up now, it was so good back when we were little. She sighed and just dozed off at the sun lounger with Eiffel Tower in her eyes.


Shravan woke up right away as Ramnath called to ask if they reached safely. He looked around but couldn't find her, but as he was rushing upstairs he stopped and went to the terrace only to find her sleeping facing towards the Tower even though bright sun was facing her. He stood between the sun and her for few minutes looking at her how her expressions changed as he stood there blocking the sun from her serene face.

Suman go sleep inside, he tried to wake her up but she was in deep sleep. He got frustrated at this and picked her up and lay her down on the bed. He hated himself for sitting next to her for almost an hour as she was holding his hand in her sleep. I'm not going to fall for it again he reminded himself and put her hand on the bed before leaving the suite. He head down to the restaurant and had breakfast and informed the staff to take breakfast to his suite in an hour. He was thinking what did he do to deserve this life as he saw young couples who were there for Honeymoon lost in each other.

Love was every where here in Paris except for him!!

Everyone was happy except for him!!

Everyone had someone to love except for him!!

He kept drinking until he just collapsed on the table.



Suman woke up at the knock wondering when did she come sleep on the bed. She took a quick shower and had breakfast when she found few hundreds Euros on the table with Shravan's note to do some shopping at the Designer Boutique downstairs. She sighed at how her relation has changed with him, she did had a backup plan yet she knew she had to do this.

She was just amazed at the exquisite beauty this Hotel holds, it was just beautiful and elegant with high crafted ceilings and breathtaking chandeliers. She enquired about the boutique and reached there but she couldn't pick one for herself. Many were very deep necked or too revealing. Even though it looked good on her she was not in a mood to wear such revealing gown now. She was tired of trying them on so she went back to the suite and waited for Shravan to come.

Shravan woke up with heavy head and came back to the Suite. It was lunch time by then but none of them were ready to talk to each other.

Did you get your gown??

Hmm... No I..

What!!! Did your ego stop you or take my money??

No Shravan. I did go but...

Stop lying Suman!! Your ego must have stopped you.

This made Suman furious. Why would I lie about it?? I'm telling you that I went over there but I didn't...

You didn't what?? You didn't wanna buy anything. Stop lying I'm not going to fall for another lie again.

I'm not lying Shravan why would I??

I don't know why maybe because you like it, just like you did the other day. Do you think I believed when you said you went to the Mandir to do after marriage Puja??? You can fool everyone but not me. I can see through you very well now.

"Come on Shravan!! relax main tumse usi din baat karna chaah rahi thi par ye Paris ki baat nikal gayi, and don't worry main ab tumse jhoot nahi boloongi. Lekin mujhe bas ye samajh nahi aa raha ke tumhe mere jhoot se itni takleef kyun ho rahi hai, I thought ki tumhe to jhoot bolne ka to bahut shauk hai na to shayad tumhe doosron ke jhoot bhi cute lagte honge".

Kya bole ja rahi ho tum??

"Wahi jo tumne kiya hai. Tumne Aditya se ye kaha ke mere aur tumhare beech woh sab kuch hua hai jo pati patni aur lovers ke beech hota hai".

Aditya!!! Tum us Aditya se milne gayi thi??

"To, tumne aur apne kitne doston se ye baat kahi hai jo mujhe koi aur aa kar ye baat bataye".

But that's not important, just tell me if you said this to him or not?? Shravan please tell me I need to know the truth.

He just tried to leave but she held his hand. So you are quite does that means you said that???

"Tumhe jo samajhna hai woh samjho". I don't care.

"Fine mil gaya jawab. You know what I feel ashamed that I trusted on a person like you, I thought you were my friend but you always disgraced me in front of your friends. I can't believe that you can do such a thing!! Actually you can do it because you don't respect women. You know what the sad part is that you lowered my standard by adding your name with me!!! Because in real life I don't even look at you. You can dream all you want but you would never get me. Now I don't care what you say to anyone".

"Remember two things Shravan that Sumo is dead for you now!! I'm just Suman for you. The other one is that you married me because of your Dad right? so let me make it clear that I'm not very delighted to see you as my husband as well, I married you for Nanu and I pray that he has a long life but God forbid something happens to him I will leave your house rightaway. Always remember this".


He just picked his phone and left the room. Suman sat there in isolation while Shravan headed to the Bar again.

"I don't care about what she say. She doesn't matter to me", he kept reminding himself. His phone pinged

Hey handsome!! Party starts in an hour. See you soon. Sana :)

Will be there in time... he replied.



He was dreading to back to the suite as he didn't want to face any other humiliation from her. Why does everything related to her hurts so much, he thought.

He walked in and went straight for a shower and got ready. What will she wear?

I don't care.. Let her wear whatever she wants... I won't even look at her anymore... His mind and heart were talking to each other while he was setting his hair for the perfect look in the new Tuxedo that his Dad gave it to him. He smiled as he remembered his Dad. Thank You Papa.

He put on his watch and looked at the time but didn't wanna ask if she was ready. He turned around and his heart skipped a beat. There she was all ready in the gown he bought for her for the Reunion Party. She looked beautiful just like last time. He remembered how close he was and still the feels he gets around her hasn't changed, in fact it has increased more, no matter how much he hates her he still want to just hold her close once more. Touch her hair once, touch her eyes once and... he got himself out of thoughts.



She didn't say anything just followed him. They reached at the 2nd floor to climb down from the giant staircase that leads to the Party Ballroom. She accidentally stepped on her gown and tripped but Shravan held her before she could fall. He then took her hand and walked down the staircase.


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Sana was standing down at the end of the staircase to welcome all the guests. Shravan smiled looking at her while Suman was confused how he knew her.

Hey Handsome!! she screamed and hugged him as Shravan let go off Suman's hand to hug her back.

"You didn't change"

Neither have you replied Shravan, you look as gorgeous as before he said ignoring Suman.

Shut up!! You never looked at me before so I don't trust you.

Milwaooge nahi?? asked Sana

Oh I forgot about her he said looking in her eyes, this is Suman Shravan Malhotra and this is Sana Khan, Khan uncle's daughter and my friend from Oxford.

Hi said Suman as Sana pulled her in a hug making her smile.

So nice to finally meet you.

Finally means??

Since I heard Shravan got married I wanted to meet you she said giving a big smile. Let me take you inside. She then pulled Shravan to the side, "Ye wahi hai na jis ki wajah se tum aur kisi ke baare me sonchte bhi nahi the".

No replied Shravan, "aisa kuch nahi hai..."

"Stop lying Handsome I can see in your eyes. The way you look at her".

What an irony he thought, someone who he had not met in years can see in his eyes what he always wanted her to see and respond in the same way.



A/N: Sorry guys got lengthy again to fit the songs in this one. I couldn't rush to the story I had in mind, so the songs are in the next part. And Yes there are two songs, one is "Je T'aime" as I told you earlier and the second one is "Manzilen apni jagah" for Sumo.

Pre-Cap: Acha ab ye batao ke "Never say I Love You ko French me kaise bolte", he asked looking directly in Sumo's eyes.

Ne dis jamais je t'aime je t'aime

Aur kitna zeher bhara hua hai tumhare dil me Shravan??

Itna ke main tumhe ek pal ke liye bhi bardaasht nahi kar sakta!!!!

I want a divorce Mrs. Suman Shravan Malhotra!!!!


Hope you guys enjoyed it. Relax guys, picture abhi bakhi hai...

Please let me know if you liked it. Thanks :)

Lubna.



Edited by LubSha - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
I am in looove with this story Lubs😃

I can't point exactly what it is...but there's something very alluring about the way you are writing this.

He picked her up to get her inside. See this is the Shravan I like. Someone who hates ,but not enough to not care.

Everyone has someone to love except me, sigh, the guy is such a mush deep down. A lot of love and a lot of attention, and he is sold.

She wore the reunion gown, I actually went back to think that I never thought of what she might have done with the dress. Clever writer you are!!

Aditya follows them to Paris. ..in thoughts and in deeds, the guy can beat a chewing gum when it comes to being sticky 😕

Gorgeous Sana ...I am counting on her to create some much needed friction between this rigid duo😊

Ironically, the prequel sounds super exciting to me given how sad demand of Shravan is.

Lubs. ..I am going to hound you for updates on this one!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Amazing...!!!
Honeymoon suite😆
Dreams do come true...Par aise ye nahi socha tha🥺
Reunion gownThis came by shock for me😆
Precap💔No divorce yaar please..honeymoon suite mey divorce??💔😭
All in all amazing update Lubs...!!!👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
I hope u health is fine di
Vaise bhi I like Heal and Hearty Lubs di 🤗🤗

Lovely update di 👏 👏
I dont like this type of shravan
Cold and heartless
Honeymoon suit ❤️!!!!
Mein bhi Ladhai !!!! No No
But shravan still care for her
How much to hide but still sumo is in his heart always 😳 😳
Reunion gown !!! This is shock for me
But still no effect
I hope thses sana willl play positive in shraman 's life
But Please No divorce 😭 😭

Waiting for nextt sooo sooo eagerly
Plzzz update sooon




Luv
Tiii se tinnna
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank You Note:

Hey guys I will take out time to reply to each comment soon but till then I want to thank everyone who commented.

Sunain, Safire, Minho, Resh, Tina, Nuts, Joyness, Pinky.Padda, RahmanR, Faith28, A.Hanjal, Priti, Spandana, Shirlys, Edkvforever, Suprisomya, Swarnima, MysticRiver, Eva, Vinu, Nik, Harshi_ta, Sal, Anu, Mayuri, Madhu, Dolly, Arpi1234, Amlavs, Dips, Tabby, Sanjh, Resh.
Sorry if I forgot someone.

Thank you everyone once again. I will reply on the comments soon.

Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
As much as it hurt to go over the dreaded conversation between them. There is a beauty to this story maybe brought along by the alluring language or the location... A city designed to make the feeling of love come alive as a visual. And place these two oblivious souls in there who fail to do just that. See and show the love they have.
Heartbreaker. ❤️

Hows your health now? Doing good?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing update...
Hoped their mu ll clear but it's getting complicated here...
Mm... Sana...hope she plays a positive role here...
Divorce???
Let's see Wats gonna happen next...
LavSriya
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Hey, I'm in love with this story very badly😃
I'm waiting for their milan sab jagdon ke badh!
Waiting for the next chapter...

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