Unshackled- a shraman ss [chapter 8 updated pg42] 04/05/17 - Page 26

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Emotional chapter
Urvashi is so irritating😡
Shravan was singing Sun mere Humsafar song..Poor shraman😭😭
Doctor ne Sumo ko kisi ke saath aane ko bola
Hope it's a good news and nothing serious.. Excited for next part


Thank you😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tinna28

Shayad mein comment karna bhul gayi thi 😆
Pata nahi ...mujhe yaad nahi
Its was too too good dolly
👏

Feeling very very sad for suman
Suman is such gem wife
😳
Shravan is. Very lucky to get her
Humsafar song and shraman 😭
Ab yeh doctor ka kya mamla
That she expecting
Ohhh !!! My god Ab kya hoga 😊
Plz update sooon

And sorry agar dubara comment hoh gaya
But i didn't think aise kuch hua hai 😆

Update soon dolly
Luv ya


Haha..dubara nahi hua u just forgot😆😆

Thank you so much tii baby😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tinna28

Thanku for dedicating a chappy to me 🤗




But still i am waiting for an os 😭

I hope high will consider my request soon 😭


Welcome baby🤗
Oh god! Tu meri jaan le kar hi manegi na...chal i'll write one as soon as i get an idea or p.m me if you have one 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sorry guys for being Mr. India from some days and not updating...without wasting much time here I am with an update

"Uncle sab thik to h na?" She asked scared

"Haan haan beta everything is fine...tum bas kal subah 10 baje mere clinic aa jana"

AT ARORA'S CLINIC

"suman beta...thank god you got preeti with you...meet her she is my wife shalini arora"

"Hello doctor"

"No need to be formal suman beta ...call me aunty"

"Thank you aunty"

"So beta aj ke baad tunhaara ilaj main karungi"

"Kyu? I am still not fine?"

"You're completely fine darling ...but you're pregnant too...to tumhe agle kuch mahine meri zaroorat or padegi" she smiled

"WHAT??" Preeti shouted "omg!!! Di I am so happy for you" she said and hugged sumo while sumo just stared blankly not speaking anything

"Come beta I'll do some check up's and prescribe you medicines"

IN THE CAR

"preeti sun mere pregnant hone ki baat abhi kisi ko mat batana please"

"Kyu di? Ap khush nahi ho kya?"

"Main kyu khush nahi houngi? I am obviously happy but to janti h na ghar me sabko humare divorce ko lekar already kitni tension h...main nahi chahti sabko aur tension ho"

"But di..."

"Please preeti"

"Fine...but ap shravan ko to bataoge na?"

"Hmm"

"Di he needs to know"

"Haan vo me sab dekh lungi"

"Fine take care of yourself di "

AT THE NIGHT

suman is thinking about her and shravan's dreams about their children

FLASHBACK

"sumo"

"Hmm?"

"Tum bhi preeti ki tarah drama karogi jab tum pregnant ho jaogi?" He said referring to a crying preeti literally begging for choclate pastries at 2 am in the night

"Maybe"

"Arey yar"

"What arey yar...pregnancy hormones does that to you "

"Acha tum badi research kar ke baithi ho" he winked

"This is normal...no research needed"

"Oh! Tumne to nahi but maine kaafi research kari h"

"Like?"

"I got some information about the cafe's and restraunt's that are open till late at night and some which open early in the morning...kyuki Tum to ho hi bhukkadi"

"Hawww mean kahike"

"Maine or bhi kuch socha h"

"Kya? "

"Ki hum na humare babies ko vo sari khushiya denge jo humein nahi mili. ...we'll give them the much needed happy family , a cheerful environment to live. ...vo humesha apni life k liye bhagwan ko thanks bolenge. ..humari tarah apni zindagi ko kosenge nahi" he said with tears in his eyes and she listened with tears in her's ...her hand drawing soothing circles on his arms

"Bilkul aisa hi hoga Mr. Malhotra ...and ek minute tumne bola babies...aise kitne chahiye tumhe????" She asked sounding scared

"Atleast 5"

"Sss" he heard her gasp

"Jaan hi le loge meri...tumhaare bache tumhaari tarah honge ...ek dum hatte katte...oh god sharvan i am so scared "

"Haha pagal...chinta mat karo 2 will do for now and I'll be there with you all the time to care of you"

"Pakka? "

"Promise" he said and kissed her forehead reasuringly

FLASHBACK ENDS

"Vaada kiya hi kyu jab pura nahi karna tha shravan? Ab kya karu main? Kaise sambhalu tumhaare bache ko akele?...i don't know what to do

Next day in the evening shravan gets a call from doctor arora

"Shravan beta are you sure about your decision?"

"Konsa decision uncle?" He asked confused

"Dekho beta i know ye tumhaara personal matter h and i should not interfare but i know you and suman since your childhood and being your family doctor i would recommend ki tum abortion k baare me ek aur baar socho...this can me harmful for suman"

"Abortion???...ye kya bol rahe h ap uncle mujhe kuch samajh nahi a rha?"

"Suman ne apne abortion k decision k bare me tumse baat nahi ki? "

Sumo pregnant h??? And she has decided to abort tge baby???Or usne mujhe batana bhi zaroori nahi samjha...just this thought made his heart bled

And he went to the place he thought was the best at the momemt THE BAR

After drinking till he could not he went to her room

"Sumooo...sumooo tum aisa nahi kar sakti sumoo"

She was in deep slumber when she heard a familiar voice screaming her name...she realised it was him ...her shravan...what was he speaking about ?

"Kya bol rahe ho tum shravan...tum bilkul hosh me nahi ho"

"Please mere bache ko mujhse mat cheeno sumo...me bilkul akela ho jaunga...tumhe yaad nahi humne kitne sapne dekhe the is bache ko lekar"

"Sab yaad h isliye to ye faisla liya"

"Please aisa mat karo na sumo" he was literally begging and she could not see him in this state so she just pushed him out of the room and closed the door on his face

Oneither side of the door sat 2 souls completely broken

Next morning he found some papers on his office table ABORTION it read

Just seeing that his heart stopped beating for a second

"Tum aisa nahi kar sakti sumo...me tumhe is bache ko marne nahi dunga"

He went to her to talk about this

"Kyu aye ho yha? "

"Apne bache ko tumse bachane"

"Jo ho nahi sakta uske baare me sochna bhi nhi chahiye Mr. Shravan malhotra "

"Kyu kar rahi ho tum aisa?"

"Me us bache ko akele nahi sambhalna chahti"

"To ye bacha mujhe dedo please"

"Acha kisliye? Taaki urvashi uski zindagi barbaad kar de...kyuki tumhaari shaadi ke baad tumhe is bache se kya matlab hoga? Tumhe kya farak padega ki vo aurat mere bache ke saath kya kar rahi h"

"SUMO" He shouted

"Chillao mat Mr.malhotra...mene decision le liya h or ab vo nahi badlega"

"Ye bacha sirf tunhaara nahi h...ek baat yaad rakho abortion bina dono parent's ki signature k nahi hota"

"Abortion k alawa bhi bache ko marne k bohot tareeke h" she snapped at him and he stood there dumbfounded not finding words to speak all he could speak was an almost inaudible "why?"

"Kyuki me nahi chahti jo tumhaare or mere sath hua vo iske sath bhi ho...tum jaante ho jab zindagi me ek bhi parent nahi hota h na to uski kami zindagi bhar mehsoos hoti h jese tumhe tumhaari ma ki hoti thi...or sab kuch janne k baad...ye janne k baad ki iske paida hone k baad mere pas ise baap ka naam dene ka haq nahi hoga...ki ye apna bachpan apne papa ko kisi or aurat k sath dekhega or uske baad apne hisse ka pyaar unke doosre bache ko dete. ..."

"BAS SUMO. ...BOHOT HUA"

"kya hua? Nahi sun paa rahe ho? Par sachai to yehi h Mr. Malhotra or me ye sab jaante hue bhi is bache ko is duniya me nahi laungi...chahe iske liye mujhe koi bhi kadam uthana pade BUT THIS BABY IS NOT COMING INTO THE WORLD...AND THAT'S FINAL"

TO BE CONTINUED

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Posted: 8 years ago
Dolly baby you are slowly climbing up my list. ..and that looks FINAL as well.
Do anything. ..Inject some bravery hormone into Shravan, or shaq ka keeda into Suman or better still some coma inducing drug into Urvashi. ..kuch bhi kar...but end mein sab theek hona chahiye.

Abhi Abhi to mujhe tumpe pyaar aane laga tha Dolly. ..phir no 1 pe aana hai? ??😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Dolly baby you are slowly climbing up my list. ..and that looks FINAL as well.

Do anything. ..Inject some bravery hormone into Shravan, or shaq ka keeda into Suman or better still some coma inducing drug into Urvashi. ..kuch bhi kar...but end mein sab theek hona chahiye.

Zaroor😆😆 btw the ideas😆🤣👍🏼

Abhi Abhi to mujhe tumpe pyaar aane laga tha Dolly. ..phir no 1 pe aana hai? ??😉

Nahi re baba. ...bilkul nahi...sorry shaktimaan🤣 i promise me sab thik kar dungi 😛


Thank you di🤗


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Posted: 8 years ago
Arey, aisa diktha hai miene beech mein kuch chapters nahi padha hai😲
I don't know how..
So will read them and will comment after that..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dolly 🤗

Kitni din baad ayi ho yaar 😛 missed you re 😳
Yeeeyy, Sumo is pregnant
But why abortion 😭
I think yeh Sumo ka plan hai, so that Shravan tells the truth 😉
But khushi ki baat ye hai ki is chapter mein Urvashi nahin hai ;)
Cute flashback 😳
Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yeh ho gaya panga! Res!!!!!!
Waise Maine bola tha sumo is prego
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Safire

Arey, aisa diktha hai miene beech mein kuch chapters nahi padha hai😲

I don't know how..
So will read them and will comment after that..


Sure 😊

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