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Part 11- This is not comedy part. Sorry I was busy so not able to update it quickly .. Hope you guys will understand and forgive me. Secondly I will try to give reply to each and everyone once am free to do but please do write the review for this part because i was not sure about it. But Soni encouraged me to post it even if it is different .😳 Thanks to soni .

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Ishwari's Niwas

After 2 days Ishwari, Mamaji , Mamiji is back from Banaras. Although Buaji is still in ICU and is danger, but Ishwari is not ready to stay back as she was not restless because sonakshi is staying in Dixit house. No one is there to monitor her.

Breakfast table

Everyone is eating breakfast , Ishwari is sitting next to Dev and feeding him with her own hands.

Dev- Maa. What happened? Mamiji was telling me that Buaji is still in ICU and in danger?

Ishwari -Do u feel bad that I came early?

Dev keeping his hand over her- Of course not Maa. I was just want to know the reason. If you are not comfortable in telling me the reason that is ok.

Ishwari with smile- Naahi Dev.!! I was missing you all especially you. Waise maine buaji ke bete ko paise dekar aayi hoon and unko kuch bhi chaiye then hum log yaha se de sakte hai. Tujhe toh pata hai I don't like to stay outside home.

Dev- ohhh Maaa.. saara din sirf humare baare mein sochti raheti hai!! Meri Maaa.

Ishwari - Mera Beta!!! Kitna Karta hai Mera Dev!

Sonakshi tired hard not to laugh at these talks but she could not control .

Dev through eyes gesture- Not again Sonakshi..

Even Sonakshi replied to him through eyes- WHat can I do? Thoda Limit mein melodrama karo

Dev smiled and closed his eyes- Ufff..

Ishwari was scared to see so pure and genuine smile on his son's face and more scared because that she was not the reason of his smile. She could not understand what they were saying that was hurting her more.

Ishwari again tried to divert - Dev.. Tujhe yaad hai Buaji jab humare ghar aayi thi jab tu 8 saal ka tha.Humare liye Buaji ne kya nahi kiya. Tere school ka sweater bhi lekar aayi , Jab ki unki beti ke liye dress lekar aana tha. Sach mein Dev Bua ji ne bhi bahut help ki.

Ishwari forced Dev to go back into his childhood days, which brought tears in his eyes.

So again Dev and Ishwari were talking about their past, which no one could understand other than them.

Meanwhile Sonkashi got a called from someone and after hanging up, she quickly go to hospital saying she has some work to do.

Dev didn't realised when Sonakshi went to the hospital as he was more engrossed with Ishwari's talks.

Dev- Neha!! SOnakshi Gayi?

Neha- Kab ki Bhaiya.. Bye am going too.

Ishwari was happy to see all this. and at last her Dev was back according to her.

Dev was restless and bit sad when came to know Sonakshi went to hospital without saying bye to him.Off he went to office with sad mood.

Afternoon - Dev's Office

Sonakshi came to Dev's office in the afternoon

Sonakshi - Hello!! Is it possible to meet Mr. Dev Dixit now. Although I don't know have any appointment.

Tina not able to recognised Sonakshi- Sorry Mam. Sir is really busy today, I don;t think I will able to do anything for you.

Sonakshi- See! I will not take much of his time. Just 5 mins. I promise. I will go inside , speak and run outside( All this she was doing along with actions)

Tina find quite funny the see the actions of Sonakshi- Well.. Mam . You are not understanding I can't do anything because he is too busy.

Sonakshi taking her lips out and making puppy face- Please!! Please!! Hold her hand.. Pleassseee

Tina finally give up- Alright I will ask but I won't promise.One important meeting is going on. You have to wait for 15 mins, then I will go inside and i will ask.

Sonakshi- Goddd...and controlling her anger- yeah !! main toh free hoon since childhood. I don;t have any work other than to wait for him.

Tina- Well am sorry I can't do much other than this. else you write the message I will give it to him.

Sonakhsi= Naahhh.. I will wait.

After 15 mins , after the meeting was over, after almost everyone went out.

Tina- Well Mam. Your Name or Card please .. I will go inside and ask him.

Sonakshi took out her card from her purse- Give it to her. Hopefully he will recognised me.

Tina without reading the card went inside Dev's cabin.

Dev was too busy with his all paper work.

Tina- Sir. !! Sorry to bother you . But this Miss. really need 5 mins of yours. She wants to speak to you regarding something important.

Dev without looking up and extending his hand- Well Tina. U know am really busy today and who is she?

After reading the card, smile came on his face, he keep all his paper work aside and was looking at the visiting card. Tina was confused to see him like this.

Dev- Well Tina .. Please send her in. And one more thing. She is not Miss but Mrs.

Tina was happy and confused to see him like this and went outside quickly.

Sonakshi came inside and said- Hello!

Naughty mode is on Dev- Well!! How come doctor is over here? Kis ko Bimar karna hai?

Sonakshi with serious tone - Excuse me. I am doctor & my job is to save and not to make anyone sick.

Naughty Dev realised the seriousness tone of Sonakshi- Well. I know you are good doctor. Well!! Sit down first and what would you like to have?

Sonakshi was about to sit on one of the chair in front of Dev but Dev quickly hold her hand and pulled her and forced her to sit on the sofa.

Dev called Tina on her mobile phone gave instruction to her for not sending anyone inside & not to transfer any calls .

Matured Dev went to refrigerator and took soft drink , poured it on two glasses, and came sit next to Sonakshi.

Dev offered her cool drink & sit next to her.

Sonakshi taking a sip- Well you have a nice cabin and office.

Dev- Well thank you for the compliment

Sonakshi- Well your office is very close to my hospital.

Dev- Oh really! that is news to me.

Sonakshi- But traffic was way too heavy at this time, so it took more than one hour for me to reach over here.

Dev after observing and listening her , come more closer to her and putting his hand over her shoulder- Kya hua??? You are not here to tell me all this thing? Right? Now tell me without any hesitation What is the matter?

Sonakshi looking into his eyes- Well Dev. I got a call from Prajwala foundations this morning. They want me to come and visit the red light areas of Delhi,they need my help.Many females over there need immediate attentions, some of them need lesson for protection against AIDS and so on.

Sonakshi - Well am not the only one who is going there. There are 4-5 doctors who will be going there along with me.

Matured Dev was listening carefully.

Sonakshi- Well this might create problem to your company's reputation in future , if media came to know about me going over there or your rivalry may use it against you. I don't know but my job can create problem to your company. So am sorry in advance. But I can't say NO to them just because they are rejected from my so called society.

Matured Dev- Hmm .. Well don't worry about my company image or anything as if now. But...

Matured Sonakshi looking at her watch- Well thank you Dev for your time. But am in hurry and need to go. Well see you in the evening.

Sonakshi quickly went outside and off she goes .

After that remaining half day Dev was not able to concentrate on his work.Full time he was thinking about sonakshi and her words.

Tina observed the relentless of Dev and gave suggestion to him to go home and take some rest instead.

Ishwari Niwas

Dev entered the house and enquired about Sonakshi.

Ishwari and Mamiji again started to back-mouthing Sonakshi but Dev ignored them and their talks and went to his room.

Sonakshi came went straight to Neha's room to meet Neha, Riya , Nikki to discuss the weekend plans.

Keechu bhaiya informed Dev that Sonakshi Didi came home and busy with Nikki, riya and Neha.

Even during dinner time, Dev wants to sit with Sonakshi , but Ishwari as usual pulled Dev along with her , started her usual boring talks.

After dinner, Dev's patience was almost finished , got up and said- Accha .. Maa aaj bahut khanna ho gaya na.. Main and Sonkashi walk par jaa rahe hai. U don't worry about us. Try to sleep else I will come to your room after walk.

Sonakshi , Neha were too shocked, so much that both of them were standing like statue.

Dev came toward Sonkashi and said to her- Come Doctor let's walk and talk, hold her hand and both Dev and statue sonakshi went outside.

Over here Ishwari was fuming and was very upset. Neha understood everything and came towards Ishwari

Neha- Maa. Bhaiya !! Aaa walk health ke liye important hai.

Ishwari- Tum sab room mein jaao.Aur mujhe needh aa rahi hai.

Neha self talk- Bhai!! Kya kar rahe ho? Maa kabhi bhi Sonkashi ko nahi accept karegi aise? ufff..

On the Road

Matured Dev- Madam?? What's wrong with you? Why are u walking like robert?

Statue Sonakshi- Nahi ? Woh walk and talk is like 440 v ka shock.

Matured Dev smiled again - Well I really need to talk to you regarding afternoon matter.

Matured Sonakshi- NO.!! Please !! Dev!! I can' t say No to them because I don't think this is right. They are victims , forced to do things , no one enjoys to do such things but circumstances forces them. I don't think it;s their fault. They need help and see.

Matured Dev- Hold on... AM not saying they are wrong or anything. I know and have full respect for those females as well.

Matured Dev- They are selling themselves to earn money, not begging. Someone is taking advantage of their innocence.I can't even think how much brutal things they must have faced in life. They need help and I personally believe in that. Don't worry about company image or anything. But do you know there will be mafia, goons and all types of wrong people will be there.

Matured Sonakshi- Hello.. You don't know me. Ms. Sonakshi Bose kisi se nahi darrti.

Matured Dev- I know. I am concerned for goons,mafia .Bechare pata bhi nahi hai unko ki unke area mein mad sonakshi aa rahi hai. Kya hoga unko?

Mad Sonakshi- U mean to say you were worried for them ?? Means yeh toh hadd hai ?

Matured Dev- Obviously Sonakshi. Do u think I will be worried for you? Nah.. I am worried for them , for everyone . I am not sure whether they have experience in facing any mad person. First time experience hoga na unka. Poor people.

After listening this mad Sonakshi was really mad at Matured Dev Dixit, leave him in the middle of the road, came home , went straight to the bed.

Matured Dev called one of the top most Private Security Agents of the Delhi, gave them full instructions, how to be with Sonakshi, and protect her but don't disturb her otherwise he is not responsible for the consequences.

Next day

Ishwari Niwas

Mad Sonakshi was still upset at Dev Dixit, which was now too normal for him,. Sonakshi without discussing anything with him ,went to the hospital.

Dev didn't go the office, because he had some other plans in his mind.

In the mid afternoon

Feminist 1, Feminist 2, Feminist 3 and Feminist 4 from Jaan Maan Mahila Ka Vikwas came to Ishwari Niwas to meet Dev Dixit.

Dev was discussing some important things with Private Security agents, when he saw these females entering into Ishwari Niwas.

Ishwari,Mamiji and Mamaji also sitting in the living room , when these four came inside Ishwari Niwas without any prior notice and an appointment.

Feminist 1 - Well Mr. Dev Dixit , hope you remembered me, Well we spoke to each other over telephone few months back. I am here to review few things hope you don't mind.

Feminist 2- We would like to speak to your wife. Where is she? Hope you know how much we value and gave importance the life of female?

Ishwari- Bhaiya!! Yeh sab kya hai? And kaun hai ?

Dev through hand gestures told her to calm down , he can handle it very well.

Feminist 3- Oh very dominating.. Not even letting your mom to speak.

Feminist 4- Am sure he must be applying the same rule to his wife as well. MCP type you know. Never let anyone to live life at her own will. So gunda type I tell you. These kind of people have no right to survive. They should be hanged till death.

Ishwari- Areee areee kaise and kyun kar rahe ho ? Sab sonkashi ki galati hai.. Naa woh hoti and na yeh sab mere bete ko bolti.

Feminist 1,2,3,4 - Oh I see psycho Mother in law. We will free your wife from this hell.

Feminist 1- See I have told you guys he is not right person.

All feminist 1, 2, 3, 4 was going on and on and on ...

Dev after 5 mins told them -Let's go and meet my wife. It's almost afternoon and iI know where she will be now ?

Feminist 1-Lets' go the hospital. If you want to face the humiliation and some hardcore truths about yourself? What can we do ?

Dev- At present she is with Prajwala foundation team , at one of the red light area of the Delhi. Let's go and do something for real victim

Feminist 1- What ? How can she go there ? How did you allow her to go such places? Don't you understand that place is not safe for the female? You are not at all concerned for her safety. This is how you are fulfilling vows of our marriage. Disgusting.

Feminist 2- I thought that you will never put your wife's life in danger , not nope you are more downgraded person that I have ever thought.

Dev- Enough. All of you can do my hayye hayye session after going there. I will myself attain that session I promise. But am asking you guys to come with me, and helped Sonakshi in healing the real victim..

Feminist 1,2,3,4- We can't go there. That's beyond our range or I would say at present we want to solve small problems, we want to improve the society. Once the society is improved then we will handle or look after more complicated issues of the society.

Dev with smile on his face- Baadi Baadi Baatein Vada Paav Khate. All of you can write or give speech on female's respect , but none of u has guts to fight for it. People consider feminism bad not because you all are wrong, but you guys are not fighting for correct things. Real females are having some real issues like dowry, female infanticide, child trafficking and many others. First fight for real victims, makes this place better place. If you really want to fight for self respect, then don't just write about it, but do it in real sense as well.

Anyway you guys continue...

Off he goes ..

Red light area

Sonakshi was busy in giving seminar on most important topic for them awareness of AIDS.

Dev didn't feel the need to disturb her, rather he choose the sit near 3-4 kids who were discussing important things among themselves.

Boy1- One day I will become doctor like didi, become successful & will take my mom away from this place forever.

Girl 1- One day I will become police officer , I will stop goons from bringing any girl in that place And yes I will take away my mom away from this place.

Boy 3- One day I will become engineer, famous and rich, then I will give everything to my mom.Hope she will not cry for money anymore.

Girl 4- But kya aisa sach mein ho sakta hai? Hum log yaha se jaa sakte hai? Maa toh hum ko kahi lekar bhi nahi jaati hai. Aur na koi hum ko apne ghar lekar jaata hai.

Girl 1- Jab hum log rich and successful hoge then sab hum ko and humari maa ko lekar jaayege yaha se.

Dev had tears in his eyes listening to these talks - Wahi Sapane , wahi umeedh, Wohi zindagi ki majboori, Kyun Zindagi deti hai bacchpan, jab cheenti hai maasomiyaat. Apno ke dukh ke bhooj ke saath baachpan,Baadi Baadi Mushkil ke saath baachpan , Kasssh aisa kuch ho jaye ,humme phir se jeena seekhaye!!!


Over here Sonakshi has finished her seminar, 4-5 females came towards Sonakshi

Female 1 - Didi ? Doctor banne ke liye kya karna padta hai?

Sonakshi - Study means padhai.

Female 2 gave a small box to Sonakshi- Didi Yeh rakho!! Woh mera beta bahut padhna chahata hai.Uski help karo do. Usko yaha se lekar jaoo..

Sonakshi was speechless and helpless , she can't help them in this regard. She quietly gave back small box to her- am sure woh accha doctor bannega. Don't worry,

Female 3- Kaha se kuch bannega didi. Humara jo hua so hua. But sab mein humare baache ki kya mistake hai. Unko koi lekar jaaye yaha se. School mein daale woh acche wale Engligh medium school mein . bhejne ke liye money and bahut kuch kuch lagata hai jo nahi hai humare passs.

Female 4- Aap kuch kar sakti hai didi?? Aur hum ko bataao kya karna hai hum log waise karege.

It was painful for sonakshi to give them any advice in this regard, so much sadness in their eyes. Their sad eyes were searching hopes in her voice. But she has limitations. Her heart wants to help each and everyone but in reality she is not that powerful to help . Not even one.

Sonakshi saw Dev sitting with kids, with deep thinking . Sonakshi was came and stand next to Dev.

Sonakshi - What are u doing over here ?

Dev- well I came here just like that. Well this is different place.

Sonakshi introduced Dev to one of Prajwala foundation team member, after mutual introduction, Dev took him in the corner for some discussion.

Dev- Sir. I want to say I want to open an english medium school at this place.

PTM( Prajwala Team member)- SIr that would be wonderful.But you know the risk of involving yourself. Right?

Dev- I know .. AM sure whether this school will be completed in 1-2 years, but it will be . We need to fight against govt, mafia and any rules and regulation. I need your support and I will give you full support.

PTM- Thank you so much sir. But Why are you doing this?

Dev- These Kids should get the credit.- yeh bilkul mere jaise hai. Wohi Sapne and Woh kuch karna ka josh hai.

Sonakshi heard everything but remain silent .

After talking with PTM Dev who was once again went back to chat with kids.

Dev dropped Sonakshi at the hospital, went to his office straightway.

In hospital.

Elena - Sonakshi !!What are u doing? U can't be too emotional like this. See we are doctors and not god. We need to be practical at times. I know it is difficult to keep yourself de-attached after seeing the pathetic condition of woman. BUt you have limitations.

Sonakshi - I know Elena. I am not sad rather am thinking about Dev.

Elena- Sonakshi?? Dev??? Anything happened with MR. Dev Dixit. Did he trouble you again ??

Sonakshi with tears in her eyes- Nahi.. But I want to say something else.

Elena- What ?

Sonakshi - I am blessed to know Mr. Dev Dixit. Today he did something which no one could think about. Actually I was expecting him to shout at me after I told him about prajwala but rather he was so supportive. Helpful, kind, giver yet strong.. He is sooo..

Elena- Sonakshi .. Do you know what you are saying ?

SOankshi- Yes I know what I am saying.

Elena- Are u in love with him ?

Sonakshi was speechless and nervous- Kuch bhi Elena. If am appreciating him that doesn't mean I am in love? in low tone( Or does it mean this )

Elena- Well sonakshi I don't need answer. But I guess you need to find and give answers to yourself. OK bye take care.

Sonakshi in thinking mood- May I in love????

Next part-

Drunk Sonakshi- Dev.. Koochi Koochi Kooo.. Come to me..

Over scared Dev- Hawww Sonakshi..Leave me Sonakshi..

Drunk Sonakshi = Yes I want you to touch me and rather sometimes I visualised us to do kissing as well.AAj main visualised nahi karogi actual mein karogi..

Over scared Dev- Kya bol rahi hoo Sonakshi.. Please mujhe chhod do.. Bhagwan ke liye mujhe jaane dhooo. Main kya and kaise karo yeh sab ??? Mummy...

P.S. Pls do share your views . Bad / good/ fair/ medium/ anything will do.

PS. This is not proof read and is written from a smart phone , therefore do pardon any typos, grammatical errors and plot holes.

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Disclaimer - Iss kahani mein istemal kiye gaye sabhi patra aur ghatnayein kalpanic hain. iska kisi bhi cheez se match karna keval sanjog samjha jaye 😆😆

The conversation and story that follow is all fictional. Nothing written here is a mere projection



Edited by mayu1982 - 9 years ago
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too good interesting precap pls pls update soon
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mayu of all your chapters this was the best. You have touched on a very sensitive and sensible topic and i really hail you for that. would like to see Dev and Sona working as a team to do something really useful for the kids. jaroori nahi hai ki woh ek full school he khol de aur logon se panga le.i am not sure what are you plans regarding this line of story, lekin haa being a very successful businessman, he could start a social wing in his company that looks for volunteers who could go and teach the kids even as a part-time. get them admitted through orphanages into good schools
(orphange taaki aise baccho ke past ke bare mein kisi ko bhi pata na chalein, not that they need to shameful, but to protect them from the unnecessary taunts of our society).
To top it he can appoint neha as the person in charge for this activity, according to your story she is already a teacher and she should be more than willing to help knowing the plight of these children. is tarah se bhai - behen ka milaap bhi hojayega, aur ishwari ko sona aur khatkegi ..😉

well lagta hai aap ke story padke mujh mein bhi ideas jag gaye hai..but i know i can never write as beautifully as you..
whatever you planned, i am sure you will make it a roller coaster ride with lot of emotional and fun filled moments. .. love your style of writing a lot.

eagerly waiting for next update.
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Beautiful update mayu dii...
Dev supported sona...great..
N precap is damn funny...
Update soon di...

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