Unshackled- a shraman ss [chapter 8 updated pg42] 04/05/17 - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Namiksfan


Yar tu shraman p bolti to me kuch bhi likh deti lekin uske alwa me koi serial dekh ti hi nahi ...sachi 7 October k baad mene t.v dekhna hi band kar diya so sowiieee baby😛

Chalo koi nhi..
Forum wasiyo m se koi aapka friend ho toh bolna.

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Acha aur request mante ho ab tak shraman ka ek lovely sa os nahi diya . Very bad😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks again for the love guys and sorry date update actually my brother is getting engaged and i was busy with the preparations

This is to my tii baby as she completed her TS after my dhamki😆😉

''vo papa actually me or sumo...vo...''

''kya bhai ap or sumo fir se honeymoon p jaa rahe ho kya?'' pushkar joked

''main or sumo...hum saath nahi reh sakte ...i want a divorce''

''SHRAVAN'' ramnath scolded

''shravan mujhe ese mazak bilkul pasand nahi ok'' sumo warned sweetly

''main mazak nahi kar raha hu...i love urvashi...me usse shaadi karna chahta hu''

''KYA BOL RAHE HO TUM?'' ramnath shouted

''sahi keh raha hu papa''

sumo could not believe her ears she just could not believe that shravan could do that to her... she wasn't able to form sentences and next she could not see anything

''sumoo ...utho sumoo'' sharavan said

''duur hatiye ap...ap apni urvashi k paas jayiye...hum humaari sumo ko dekh lenge''

''pushkar'' he sounded hurt

''chodiye use'' saying this pushkar picked her up and rushed to the hospital

''doctor ab kesi hvo?'' nanu rushed to the doctor as soon as he came out

''ab thik h vo...but inhe zyaada stress mat dijiyega...or mene reports checking k liye di h'' doctore arora said

''ji arora uncle ap bilkul chinta mat kijiye '' shravan assured him

''arey haan shravan beta ...tumhaare hote hue to suman ko kuch ho hi nahi sakta...bachpan se lekar aj tak tum ese hi to khayal rakhte ho uska'' hearing this the look on his face changed from concerned to resenment ...he was ashamed beyond limits

''tumse mujhe ye ummeed nahi sharavan'' nanu said making him more ashamed of his deeds

''doctore kya hum usse mil sakte h?'' pushkar asked

''haan koi ek jaa sakta h''

''main...'' sharavan tried to ask

''bilkul nahi...ye haq kho chuke h aap'' pushkar glared and went inside to meet her

''sumo...kesi h tu? dara diya sabko pagal ladki...esa karta h koi?''

''pushkar shravan mazak kar raha tha na?'' she asked with hope in her eyes

finding his mouth sealed and not finding himself capable of making words he just nodded in no

she sighed and said ''mujhe usses milna h''

''sumooo...''

''please pushkar''

''fine'' he went and sent him inside

''sumoo...''

''ssshhh...bas ek baar meri aankho me dekh k vo sab vapis bol do shravan''

''sumo...abhi tumhe rest karna h''

''shravan please'' she wanted this to sound like an order but that came out like a plea...this would always happen in front of him...he was sumo in front of the world but only this man had the audacity to turn her orders into plea's

''SUMAN ME URVASHI SE PYAAR KARTA HU AND I WANT A DIVORCE FROM YOU'' he said looking directly into her eyes

''pakka'' she was kind of ashamed of herself for not being able to believe that still

''haan''

''thik h...pushakar or ramnath uncle ko bhejo please"

"Sumo..."

"Please shravan ab humara koi rishta nahi raha...mana no divorce ab tak hua nahi lekin jab rishta dil se khatam ho jaye to fir kisi kagaz p dastakhat k mere liye koi mayne nahi...or haan tum mujhe suman bologe please kyuki sumo mujhe sirf mera chashmish bulata tha ..."

Without saying anything he just want outside

"Suman beta kesi ho tum?" Ramnath asked with fatherly love

"Mein theek hu papa" she assured

"Tum chinta mat karo beta ye shravan ko pata nahi kya ho gaya h...me dekhta hu majra kya h"

"Nahi papa...ap usse kuch nahi kahenge ye matter please yahi khatam kar dijiye. ...mere liye is duniya me sabse zaroori uski khushi h...Or agar vo urvashi k sath khush h to mujhe koi aitraaz nahi h"

"Lekin beta..."

"Please papa...ap mujhe apni beti maante h ya nahi?"

"Ye tum kesi baat kar rahi ho beta...duniya k sare rishte khatam ho jaenge par tu hamesha meri beti rahegi"

"To fir apni beti ki itni si baat nahi manenge?

"Theek h beta...jesa tu chahti h bilkul vesa hi hoga...lekin meri ek baat manegi?"

"Kahiye na papa"

"Mujhe samajh nahi a rha itna sab kuch hone k baad tujhse kis muh se ye kahu ..."

"Abhi apne kaha me apki beti hu...to fir please hichkichaye mat"

"Beta malhotra mansion chalegi? "

"Papa us ghar me shravan ki biwi ban k ayi thi lekin ab to. ..."

"Sirf shravan ki biwi nahi beta tu meri beti bhi bani thi us din yaad h?"

FLASHBACK

after their reconciliation it was difficult for shravan to forget everything and forgive both his patents and get back to normal beacause he thought that his father was Not only his but sumo's GUNAHGAAR too

Sumo: "shravan maaf kar do na...tumnaare parents h vo ...mana ki galtiya hui h in dono se lekin kab bache galti karte h na to parents bhi to unhe maaf karte h na...aj tumhaari baari h

Shravan: "baat agar sirf meri hoti na sumo to me sab bhul bhi jata lekin in dono ki vajah se tumne. ..humare pyaar ne bhi to kitna suffer kiya na

Sumo: "iska positive side bhi to dekho na tumhaare pyyar or tumhaari sumo dono bohot strong h shravan ...na tumhaari sumo tooti or na humara pyaar khatam hua. ..in fact humara pyaar itna Sab kuch seh k or strong ho gaya h"

Shravan: par...

Sumo: koi par var nahi agar tumhe esa lajta h no uncle mere GUNAHGAAR h to me unhe maaf karti hu

Shravan: thik h agar tum yehi chahti ho to me unhe maaf kar dunga

Ramnath who was listening all this felt guilty and accepted sumo by heart as her daughter and from that day he cares for her as a father

FLASHBACK ENDS

"kese bhul sakti hu papa...us din mujhe mere papa ka pyaar mil gaya tha...jiske liye me bachpan se tadpi thi"

"To fir apne papa k liye chalegi nahi?"

"Thik h papa...chalungi...sirf apke liye..."

TO BE CONTINUED...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Res before pm 😉
Thanku for dedicating to me ...awww DND (Dolly the don) 😆
Feeling so sad for shraman 😭
Aur shravan
"I love uarvashi "
Mein uska muh tor dungi 😡

I like pushkar
Very very supporting 👏
Much impressed with pushkar

Aur thankgod teri storymein
Sumo abla naari nahi hai 😭

Aur ramnath ka toh jawab nahi wah wah
Beti baap 😭 so emotional yaar
Paani aa gaya ankon mein

Par chakkar kya hai
Jaldi suspense over kar de yaar 😡

Teri story padte time mere expressions inte weird hote hai na
Mumma hamesha mujhe ghur ke dhekti hai

Jaldi suspense over kar ab

Tiii se tinna
Edited by Tinna28 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sumo ki dard bhari dastaan. 😭
Aur Shravan ka bheja fry
That was an emotional update!

Nuts
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Posted: 9 years ago
Kya hua Shravan Urvashi ne makeup brand badal diya kya jo itna bhaa gayi??
😲


Ye ho kya raha hai?? Koi gif daalo mai phone pe hoon pure weekend.😭

Dolly teri kya dushmani hai mere shraman se kabhi maar deti hai, kabhi divorce karati hai... Tu mil mujhe ek baar !!

Waise jaldi update karna ok. Kuch to gadbad hai daya. Par kya??

Pradyuman analysis needed. Sanjh kaha hai tu?? Spoilers needed here


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Posted: 9 years ago
The shravan Na sathiya gaya bas aur much nahi use achhe se pitai change ramnath se Asia may jadu Kat diya Jo urvashi kind mala Jap raha hai😡
I know palma urvashi me blackmail diya Jo lemon yeah may baat hui with baat bhi to Kat Santa that Na sumo San much think Kat Santa that really divorce is the solution😲
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Kya hua Shravan Urvashi ne makeup brand badal diya kya jo itna bhaa gayi??

😲


Ye ho kya raha hai?? Koi gif daalo mai phone pe hoon pure weekend.😭

Dolly teri kya dushmani hai mere shraman se kabhi maar deti hai, kabhi divorce karati hai... Tu mil mujhe ek baar !!

Waise jaldi update karna ok. Kuch to gadbad hai daya. Par kya??

Pradyuman analysis needed. Sanjh kaha hai tu?? Spoilers needed here




Yeh zaroor PCT se jura kuch Hai!!! Sumo ko bachane k liye hi Shravan aisa kuch Kar raha Hai! Ya fir Ramnath ko! Jiski chances Kam Hai! Kuch bahut badi gadbad Hai!!!!!!! But I strongly feel it's Sumo!
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Posted: 9 years ago
I couldn't control my tears.
Dolly tuje Shraman se dushmani hai kya, jab dekho unko alag karne mein kyoun tuli rehti hai.
Kabhi mar deti hai ab divorce kara rahi hai.
Sumo ko dard mujhse nehin dekha ja raha, aisa kar Sumo ki shadi karwade dekho kaise Shravan bhaga chala ayega. Jab uske samne uski Sumo ki hogi toh Urvashi ko chod ke bhag ayega.

Vinu
Edited by vimikrao - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Namiksfan



Chup kar tu! Tu to kuch bolna hi mat...me tujhse bohot gussa hu😒



Dekho Dekho
Maine kisi ko kitne payaar se request ki thi 😭
Par meri request ek baar bhi nahi ghor nahi farmaya 😕



Koi nahi 😭


😭 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
But why does shravan want the divorce from sumo? He never loves urvashi. Why does he lie ?
Curious to know the reason
Update soon dear

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