ShraMan FF: Holding You, (C18 pg 102) - Page 18

Originally posted by: evaviego

Ch 3

Speechless is what I had become initially. Honestly speaking when i started reading , i did not expect it to be this good and spellbinding. I guess this is your best update so far.

Impeccable, Flawless and Beautiful.

If keeping us waiting results in such beautiful updates, i am ready to wait as long as you say.😉

Mostly people here thoroughly know Shravan's POV and i must say they write it amazingly.

But Suman's its yet to be explored here.

But after reading this i dont want anyone to go deep into her views. I want only this image of hers in my mind, which you have created. Like no one ever has.😊

I do not usually write drabbles as comments😆But this one forced me too😛

i love the way you write.❤️

Originally posted by: evaviego

Ch 4

Thoughts you want to know.😆

you leave the person in a state where all the thinking capacity is lost and the person is left dazed.😳

speechless again.

the one who breaks you makes you.

His pain is written in such a way that something burns inside me every time i read it. Thats the effect it leaves. I feel the pain. And that i guess is the biggest compliment i can give to a writer.😳

If this was the way the show proceeded it would have reached the heights that no show ever has.

Stupendous update.😊

Waiting eagerly to know how this unfolds.😊

Originally posted by: nuttynuts

That was a really intense update. Emotions galore. Beautifully put into words. I hope Sumo handles him well. Continue soon!

Nuts

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#003399">Sometimes, he felt that she had a little bit of him inside of her.</font>

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#003399">This line, made me think of heathcliff and Catherine of Wuthering heights!</font>

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#003399">Just beautiful, just beautiful!</font>

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