Unshackled- a shraman ss [chapter 8 updated pg42] 04/05/17 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is so interesting...
Shravan is with someone else...But woh hai Kon?I am so confused
Eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

This is so interesting...

Shravan is with someone else...But woh hai Kon?I am so confused
Eagerly waiting for next update
Thanks for the pm


Thank u!! Just gimme some moments
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Thank you so much for the love you've poured!! I am really really grateful to each and every one of you ...so he's you go with the first part please let me know how do you like it...this is dedicated to all the sweet souls how commented and showered their love for this...

''shravan utho na...it's already so
late...meeting k liye bohot late ho jaoge tum''

''sumo sone do na yaar...bas thodi der or''

''acha mujhe to uthne do''

''chup chap so jao thodi der aur''

this was an everyday practice in their room from the time they had recoinciled ...every morning suman trying to wake him up and shravan trying to sleep again

she just stared at his sleeping figure ...the man sleeping beside her caging her in his arms he was her world her world just started with him and ended there...after reconcilation it was difficult for them to accept the sudden changes in their life but they did it because they were together two bodies and a soul...they decided that whatever happens they will always remain best friends before anything and trust each other on everything...they always gave each other the much needed space but did not think twice to evade the personal space when required...shravan had became the over romantic lover boy and never left a chance to show it to her and same was with her they always expressed their love by little things like cooking his favoraite food and he did so by planning short weekend trips to her favoraite places even their simple actions showed the love they had for each other the way he held her whenever they go for a party ...his hand would just not leave her waist...the way she ruffled his hair lovingly the way they stared each other whenever they get ready those small eyelocks in the room full of people ...those holding of hands under the dinning table those small goodbye kisses and welcome hugs...that all were the signs that displayed their love...everyone in the family was proud that they were together and knew how much they loved each other

''sumo ye acha h haan...mene tumhaari baat nahi maani to tum esa karogi''

''arey mene kya kiya?''

''acha itni der se intensly stare kar rahi ho...neend kese ayegi mujhe?...or upper se bohot kuch karne ka man ho raha h...'' he said sheepishly snuggling closer into her hair

''tum naa...sudhroge nahi kabhi...typical romeo

''your love made me so darling'' he said peppering kisses down to her neck from her ear

''shravan utho na please..tumne bola tha na aj tumhaari ek important meeting h Mr.mehra h sath''

''arey haa...ye case mere firm k liye bohot imporatnt h...i just hope sab theek se ho jaye''

''mujhe tumpe poora bharosa h shravan you'll do it''

''thoda nervous hu''

''really? jis shravan malhotra ne london me khud ki ek succesfull law firm kholi vo bhi akele aj vo ek simple si meeting se dar raha h...''

''you always know how to cheer me up na?''

''i've learnt that from you''

''i love you sumo''

''i love you too...chalo jaldi ready ho jao varna late ho jaoge''

he goes and gets ready and kisses her good bye before leaving

the day went normal with sumo completeing her orders and praying for him to get a possitive response from the meeting

''she came back to a grumpy sitting shravan reading his files''

''how was the meeting'' she asked hugging him from behind in a chirpy voice

''good'' he said plainly

''response?''

''positive''

''to fir ye khadoos malhotra vala muh banaye kyu bethe ho?''

''me busy hu na sumo...''he said getting irritated

she was taken aback by the response ...never it has happened that shravan has shouted on her...sometimes when he was busy he would just calmly request her to let him work but this was something to worry about

''okay ...sorry'' she said slowly and left

after some time she came back to the room with two cups of coffee hoping to cool him down

''shravan ye lo coffee''

''thanks''

after taking a sip...

''ye kya h sumo? nahi banayi jaa rahi to ramu kaka ko bol deti? isme bilkul bhi sugar nahi h''

she tasted it and said...''h to sahi sugar...kya ho gaya h tumhe itna kyu chid rahe ho''

jab zindagi hi feeki pad gayi ho to coffee meethi kese lagegi...he muttered under his breath

''kuch bola tumne?'' she asked concerned

''none of your buisness...thanks for coffee''he said coldly and continued his work

''none of my buisness?are you serious shravan malhotra ? everything related to you is my buisness''

''sumo please''

''okay fine'' she said and went to sleep

''please don't make it difficult for me pata nahi kese jee payenge hum ek dusre k bina'' thinking this a lone tear escape his eyes

TO BE CONTINUED ...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Super one 😊
But why shravan is like avoiding her 😲
Thanks for the pm di❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Varshin

Super one 😊

But why shravan is like avoiding her 😲
Thanks for the pm di❤️


Thank you so much varshni...wait for the story to unfold babe😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Nice one! So this is how misunderstandings begin? continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
The beginning was pure bliss! !😊
Romeo! ! Well,,that reminded me of anti-romeo squad! !totally out of context though! 😆
Trouble in paradise! 😕

If there were promos for the stories,,it might have sounded like,,.
Kyon jeena padega alag,, unhein,,jo bane hai ek duje ke vaaste! !

Curious much..!!
Thanks for pm!!😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Namiksfan


Thank you so much varshni...wait for the story to unfold babe😊

Waiting di...😊
Continue soon
Edited by Varshin - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
What happened suddenly his behaviour changed after the meeting. Aise kyoun kaha kaise jeeyenge hum ek dusre ke bina, kya ho gaya meeting mein apne aap ko bech ke aya hai kya. 😲 Mornings scene was so romantic & evening scene become so pathetic. 😡

Waiting to know what is the reason behind his angry mode behaviour 😲

Nice update 👏

Thanks for PM

Vinu
Edited by vimikrao - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Very interesting story 👏 will wait to see what come next

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