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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharica

I am back again...

I forgot to ask something...Nikki ne aisa kya kaha Sona ko ki vo vapas aake Dev pe gussa thi and said Justice will prevail..

Was she still upset for that kiss wala scene???



Good Question- Well you will get the answer in next chapter???😳😳

@ BOld?:: Nah nah... Nervous and not upset😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: surbharati

Mayu...expecting more more from this FF...please update soon...really loving to see DEVAKSHI which is missing in our cute DEVAKSHI



The secret of happiness is low expectations #quotes #sayings😉😉😉- Just saying

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Edited by mayu1982 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jo2345

Hi mayu

A small request...can you please update your other ff..I am more attached to that because of little devakshi...


This is also very good...still that is my favourite...


Well i have updated that story as well 😕😕 well am not sure that quality of that story anymore
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Amazing update :)

Superb :)
Loved it :)


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jade0001

After two weeks coming to the forum getting you PM , I have too admit the chapter was fabulous , feisty and had humour too just loved it

I really liked that Dev apologized to Sonakshi for the hospital incident and told her not to be scared of him
he supporting her in front of family that's just amazing
the best part Sonakshi chasing Vicky and hitting him with a belt wow I just visualized that scene hope we get to see Vicky in a similar situation getting punished it would be amazing
Dev telling Ishwari not to blame Sonakshi but support her

I'm truly sorry for such late response


Hi Shaun

And don't be sorry for anything

Well am late comer too ... 🤔
when i am not prefect than how can I expect people to do the prefect things?

Wah wah wah am proud of myself for saying above lines 🤣


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: TwinFlames

what was that? wow wow! loved it.. he he.. dev apologized to sona & support her in front of his family.. amazing!
and Vicky.. hahahaha.. can't stop laughing.. he deserved that only



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sona43

Really nice chapter itto si sonakshi lady khali ban gayi sabhi ladkiyon ko ase hi himmat dikhani chahiye please update soon


Exactly We should be more mentally strong than physical.If we are mentally strong then we can beat and stand up against anything😳


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: flowers321

Hii I read ur all chaps now
It's really mind blowing
Pls post soon can't waiting



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Read the last 3 chapters in a go

Just awesome⭐️
Unique and excellent concept

I m loving this sonakshi
Har kisi ki band bajati hai...
And bunty wala kantaben types scene...
Totally hilarious🤣

Loved each nd every single bit of ur Story

Thanks for PM


Hi Anjali

Thanks for lovely lovely comment😳😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 9


It is almost a week that Sonakshi was not talking to Dev .

Dev was feeling extremely restless and has requested "n " number of time to Sonakshi to share the reason for her anger towards him .However Sonakshi was hardly saying anything other than insaaf hoga!! .. and was throwing her hands and legs in weird direction.


Evening time

Dev's Office


Dev was free before time , he has finished almost all his work for a day


Dev self talk - Aaj main Sonakshi ke hospital mein jaake milta hoon .. Aaj main Jaan kar raheoga Ki Kya Hua hai .Why she is behaving so odd from past 7 days..

Tina was observing dev from a distant

Tina - Sir !! Anything serious .. Mujhe Kuch help kar sakti hoon

Dev - Serious bahut jayada serious. Maine bataya tha na Sonakshi odd behave kar Rahi hai Woh Abhi tak Uska screw gire hue hai .. I am eager to know why and where and what is the reason behind loose screw of her brain ?

Dev - I mean koi kisko kitna pareshan kar sakta hai ..

Dev- AM totally fed up with her. Height of everything.

Tina was smiling and was not saying a word to him.

Dev- Aab why are you smiling? Maine koi joke sunaya. This is reality of my life.

Tina- I know Sir. But am surprised to see how much you are effective by indifference attitude of Ms. Bose.

Nervous Dev- No.. Tina Aisa kuch nahi hai. I am just little bit curious to know why she is behaving like this.

Again Tina said nothing and just nod with a smile.

Nervous Dev- Damn it. Ladki sab ki sab pagal hoti hai..

Sonakshi's Hospital

Dev reached the hospital and enquired about Sonakshi , where he came to know that Sonakshi left the hospital early today.

Disappointed Dev got a call from Ishwari.

Dev- Yes Maa, am coming.

Ishwari- Beta!! Main tujhe yeh batane ke liye phone kiya hai ki main , tere mamaji and mamiji aaj urgently banaras wali Buaji ke yaha jaaa rahe hai. Serious and hospitalised hai. So humlog abhi nikal rahe hai. And yes nikki, riya and neha ghar par nahi hai.. Aaj kahi sab ko jaana tha toh gaye hai, Tu phone kar ke dekh lena.Ghar par koi nahi hai isliye keechu ko bhi chuti di hai maine.. Tu samajh gaya na,

Dev- What ? Ghar par koi nahi hai kya matlab hai ? Sonakshi nahi aayi ghar par??

Irrirated after hearing Sonakshi name, Ishwari with stern voice- Nahi ghar par koi nahi hai. and sonakshi ka mujhe nahi pata hai aur na mujhe jaana hai. Tu baass riya, nikki and neha ka soch pehle.

Dev- Alright Maa. I will look after everyone and if you need help then let me know about it.

Dev hanged up the phone and was tensed to know sonakshi was not reached d home despite being leaving frm the hospital early.

Worried Dev went inside the hospital to enquire about Sonakshi.

Elena saw Dev from the distant and came immediately towards him.

Elena- Hello. I am DR. elena, I am with SOnakshi's frnd.

Worried Dev- Ohh. Wow.. actually am enquiring about sonakshi only. DO u have any idea where is she now?

Elena was smiling hearing the question and more at looking at the condition of Dev.

Elena- Well Mr. Dixit. Why don't you call her and ask her?

Worried Dev- Agar woh itne easy hoti then aap ko kya lagata hai main yeh question aap se and receiptionist se kar raha hota?

Worried Dev- Woh normal kaha hai ? Normal log phone pick karte and bolte hai.. Anyway it is very long list of her abnormalities.

Laughing Elena- Point toh hai. Well she is unique in every way.

Worried Dev- Unique nahi . WOrld ka 8th wonder hai woh.. Anyway please tell me where is she now?

Elena informed him that she is must be at Bose house and advice him to go the Bose house as well.

Worried cum puzzled Dev- Why Bose house today ??

Dev was driving , suddenly saw Sonakshi in the middle of the road,

In the middle of the road

Dev- Sonakhsi. Tum yaha in the middle of the road. kya scooty ke saath kar rahi ho?

Sonakshi- Dance kar rahi hoon? Are you blind? Can't you see my scooty is kharab

Dev- OH k then leave it over here. My driver will bring your scooty. Chalo ghar.

Sonakshi- Mujhe ghar nahi jaana hai.

Over irrirated Dev shout at her - Uff stop this childishness Sonakshi..Enough now

Sonakshi- Don't you dare to shout at me like this.. Main not scared of you.

Trying to calm down himself Dev , pull sonakshi towards car- Chalo main bolta hoon.. Ghar chalo..

Two aunties saw Dev trying to pull Sonakshi inside the car, they came towards the Dev.

Violent Aunty 1 - Oyeee .. Kiii Ho raha hai. Mundi ko kaha lekar jaa raha hai. Main bolti hoon Delhi is so unsafe these days, saying this she hit the Dev with her chappal.

Dev- Ouch.. Aunty!! DOn't do this.. Please allow me to speak.

Violent Aunty 2- Areee kya allow shallow ? HImmat kaisi hui teri Kudi ko haath lagane ki ? Maine tere haath toodh dene hai aaj.Even she hit Dev with her high heeled sandals.

Both Violent Aunty 1 and Violent Aunty 2 starts hitting Dev with chappal & Sandal.

Badly in need help Dev- Mummy.. Areee tum kya dekh rahi ho.. Mera murder hone ke baadh apna moh kholegi kya Sadiyal Sonakshi.

Not so pleased Sonakshi- Sadiyal Sonakshi.. Accha hai .. Aur maariye Auntyji aur main nahi batao kisis ko bhi aap mere so called husband hai.

Both Violent Aunty 1 and Aunty 2 stopped hitting Dev after listening the truth from Sonkashi.

Violent Aunty 1 and Aunty 2- Uff aaj ke baache ghar ki fight road par karte hai .. kitna confusion hota.

Both violent Aunty 1 and Aunty 2 in chorus - Beta ( suddenly calling Dev beta after hitting so much ) Tu Car ka door shoor khol hum log isko daal dete hai other wise humare jaise kisi aur ko doubt hoga and then tenu aur maar paadnei hai aaj.

Dev quickly sit inside the car and opened the door for aunty 1 and aunty 2 to pushed Sonakshi inside.

Fighter Sonakshi- Aunty ji,, Haath nahi laagna.. This is personal.. Haath nahi..

Aunty 1 and Aunty 2 - Areee bata hum bhi yehi bol rahe hai ki personal baatein ghar par karo road par nahi.. Both punjabi aunty were quite capable to pushed itto si sonakshi inside the car within minutes.

Extreme angry Sonakshi- Mr. Dev Dixit .. Am not going home. Stop the car. Main bol rahi hoon.

Matured Dev - We are not going home Sonakshi but somewhere else.


Now near to Jungle

Dev parked the car outside somewhere in jungle , crosschecked the lock of the car , and areas nearby.

Extreme angry Sonakshi- Why here?? what are u going to do now ? Dekho

Matured Dev- Shut up Sonakshi. When are u going to trust me? Anyway i want some answer from you that is reason we are here.

Extreme angry bit scared Sonakshi- What answer?

Matued Dev= Before that I want to behave maturely and sensible . Enough of this Sonakshi. I want to know the reason behind your anger .. Main kya kiya hai ki tum itni gussa ho mujhse ..Kya hua ?

Extremely angry Sonakshi refused to say anything , she was simple looking outside.

Matured Dev- alright then be prepared to stay here overnight.

Confused Sonakshi- Over night? Nahi nahi Mujhe jaana hai.

Matued Dev - Jaana hai toh jaao.. In fact main khud chhod kar aaoga tumhe jaha bhi jaana hoga but first time answer karo woh bhi sacchi moochi wala answer dho.

Confused Sonakshi- Maine promise kiya hai Nikki ko main kuch nahi bataogi.

Mature cum now confused Dev- Nikki ko ? Means Nikki ka kya role hai issmein aab ?? Dekho jaldi bolo then tum ko hi jaana hai kahi ?

Forced to say sach Sonkashi- Woh aaj Neha ka birthday hai. Nikki boli ki aap ke ghar sab ka birthday banata hai, but neha ka nahi. Because woh khud bhi celebrate nahi karti aur aap & your mother never took any initiative to celebrate her birthday as well. Then nikki ne bataya ki aap ke mother ka kaise birthday celebrate hota hai and of course aap ka toh poocho maat type ka hota .. I felt very bad for Neha. Is liye main ghussa thi.. This is injustice. and you are doing injustice with your lovely sister..

Matured Dev- Aaj Neha ka birthday hai? Oh god.. Maine toh kabhi socha hi nahi in fact I hardly get any time to think over this?

Forced to say sach Sonakshi - Don't lie.. Every year you celebrate your mom birthday or not. Then for your sister birthday u are giving excuse of time and all that.

Matured Dev- Nahi .. I am telling you truth .. Maa and Mera is different case. Together we had faced so many problems and we are connected with each other through a lot of things including pain.

Matured Sonakshi- I am sorry to say Mr. Dev Dixit. You are successful in life not because of your mother but because of your sister Neha as well.

Matured Dev- Dekho Sonakshi. You don't know any of my childhood things. So its bit rude to be judgemental without knowing facts.

Matured Sonakshi- Dev.. As far as I know You really work hard as a student. and your mother worked hard to feed everyone and pay the fees of your school. But you are forgetting Neha's role in your life. Agar Neha nikki , riya ko nahi dekha hota , then kya aap and aapki mother kuch kar sakte the life mein? Neha woh silent helper thi jisne aap dono ki help ki, riya nikki ki maa bani jab ki woh khud choti baachi thi.. Aaj bhi woh school teacher hai .. Anyway Neha ke liye main jinta bolo utna kaam hai,

Matured Dev was forced to think about neha..He was restless and ashamed after realising that he was never close to his sisters.

Matured Sonakshi- ANyway pls drop me at my house- Bose house. We are celebrating Neha's birthday at my place.

Matured Dev shocked to hear that Neha's birthday party at Bose house.

Matured Dev selftalk- Baap re.. Bose mad house mein party. Kaise jaao waha par..

Little worried Dev- Sonakshi.. main bhi aaaoo party mein.

Back to normal form - Alright Chalo party mein. But you know everything about my house. How to enter and all that ?

Little worried Dev- Woh main kaise bhool sakta hoon. Itna unique place hai woh.. Waha party .. Wow ...

Outside Mad Bose House

Both Dev and Sonakshi reached Bose house, as usual you can hear noises very clearly while standing outside the house.

Sonkashi- Maaa... Open the door. It's me...

Asha Maaa- Sona.. Baba is after Saurabh.. Fifth position Beta..

Dev covering his face with hands - Yeh fifth position means kya hai... Jaldi batao mujhe darrr lag raha hai.. Head ka pata hai aur bhi kuch hai..

Sonkashi- Aree head toh position one hai.. Fifth position means tumhare legs ko lagege ke chances hai? As soon as door opens pls jump..

Over scared still covering his face- Heinnn

Asha opened the door, Sonakshi jumped it but Dev didn't .

As usual , Dev was hit by the stick , he fell down..

Dev- Oeee... Maaaraaa maaaraaa main.. Aaj ka din hi kharab hai mera. First those aunties hit me very badly now your family always give me unique welcome by hitting me .

Sonakshi- Hello bola tha na fifth position- jump karo . And u were covering your face with hands and stick kaise dekhegi tum ko. Seriously ...you are too much

Saying this she went inside the house, Bose papa were busy in criticising Saurabh, Asha maa in convincing him , finally Saurabh came forward to help him to stand .

Self talk in mind of Dev- Am I too much?You are too much and in fact you are family is more too much...Ouccch mera paarrr..

Riya , Nikki and Neha was pleasanlty surprised to see Dev over there. Dev wished Neha and even apologised for that remembering this important day of her life. Bunty was also present there.

Dev- Aree Bunty tu bhi yaha

Sonakshi- Yes maine bolaya hai ? any problem besides usko yaad tha Neha ka birthday unlike you,

Dev- Yes Besides woh bhabhi ka bhakt bhi toh hai. Kyu Buntyji.

Bunty making sad faces- Sonakshi Bhabhi..

Sonkashi was just stared very badly to Dev.

Dadi- Wah aaj toh kitna accha lag raha hai sab aaye hai.. Kyun Asha..

Sonakshi came with whistle - attention everyone. Come on let's start the birthday party .

Sonakshi - any suggestion for games ??

Dev - what ?? NO no playing games and all that is too childish. Let's talks and relax

Sonakshi - why don't look around before saying this ?

Dev looked around - Bose papa and Asha are doing routine discussion, dadi were asking her typical question from Asha - yeh Sab Kya ho raha haj ? Saurabh dada is at ignoring mood.

Neha Nikki and Riya were at silent mood . BUnty is on guilt mood .

Dev - alright let's go ahead with your plan..

Feeling powerful Sonakshi - alright Nikki . You tell me as a kid which is favourite game of Neha as a kid ?

Nikki - As a kid Neha di loves to play hide and seek but she didn't get enough time to play .

Neha - Nahi Aisa Kuch Nahi hai ..jo Sab Ko pasand hai Woh karte hai

Feeling powerful Sonakshi - no today is your day - so we will do everything whatever you like and then staring towards Dev.

Dev - don't stare me like that . Maine Kuch Nahi kiya hai ..

Anyway let's play hide and seek .. BUnty alright let'a dim all the lights of the house.

Now feeling scared Sonakshi - Nahi Nahi don't do this . Lights should be on.

Saurabh dada with witty smile - oh yes Sona Mona ..let's play hide and seek in the dark ...Maza aayega.

DEV understood with facial expression of Sonakshi that she is not comfortable playing in dark but he was enjoying her state.

First turn was BUnty , Nikki , Asha Maa , Bose papa , saurbah dada

Dev was worried about Sonakshi as she was not coming out and asha Maa was keep on saying - let's forget Sonakshi , she will after sometime. We should continue with our game only

Currently Nikki is supposed to find everyone

Dev and asha both were hiding in the kitchen under kitchen platform

Dev - Sonakshi Bahar Kyun Nahi aa Rahi hai ? Game mein Sab Ko search karna padta hai ?? Nahi ??

Asha Maa - aree beta Sonakshi Ko darkness se darr lagata hai. Isliye Who ek Baar Chupti hai then Bahar Nahi aati jab tak pure ghar ke light on na dekh Le..

Dev now understood why Sonakshi was worried to play hide and seek in darkness ?

As usual everyone were caught by Nikki , this time it was Riya turn.

Inside Sonakshi's Room

Dev runs and go inside Sonakshi' room and hide under the bed of Sonakshi, behind the boxes.

Heard something noises so remove the box with help of mobiles torch .

Dev - Sonakshi Tum Yaha under bed behind these boxes .

Sonakshi was in sleeping position with mobile in hand - aap Yaha Kyun aaye ? Main bahar Nahi aaogi

Dev - ek toh game khelo game khelo chillao and then yeh nakhre?? Means darkness se darr.. chalo Ms. Bose kisi se toh darrti hai life mein - saying this he came more close towards her.

Sonakshi - dare you tried to use my weakness . I will kill you am telling you( while saying this Sonakshi made cute puppy like face )

Uff her mobile battery was down and Sonakshi quickly holding Dev hand tightly.

Frightened Sonakshi - DEV .. mummy .

Dev pulled Sonakshi towards him and she was almost over him now and Dev was holding her tightly .

Matured dev - Kya Hua Sonakshi . Main hoon na .. don't worry .

Frightened Sonakshi - Sab saurabh dada Ki galti hai .

Dev was now laughing - Bose family mein Sab galti saurabh Ki hoti hai.

Sonakshi who was keeping her head over dev s chest - hit him on the shoulder

Dev - ouch Sonakshi .. stop doing it . You are hurting me.

Sonakshi now facing dev , looking into his eyes - so you were laughing at me . Am repeating once again don't you dare to use my weakness against me otherwise

Dev keeping his fingers over her lips - Shhh . Am not that bad. I promise I will not use your weakness against you.

Sonakshi hairs were coming over her face so Dev now moved her hair behind her hairs -So that is reason you were angry with me from so many days. Sonakshi!! You are mad . Simply Mad...

With every touch of Dev , Sonakshi was feeling butterflies in her stomach & was very nervous .Boom !!now even dev's mobile battery were down as well .

Sonakshi hold dev more tightly - mummy mummy ...

Dev - Sonakshi .. hum log bahar chalte hai and light on karte hai.pata Nahi hum log Yaha par kab se??

Sonakshi - Nahi Nahi .. Maa aayegi jab games finish ho jayega .. Maa Ko pata hai main Yaha par hoti hoon .

Dev -Alright then wait karte hai.and hold her tightly.

After 2 mins Dev was pushed very badly and both Dev and Sonakshi shout together - Kaun hai ??

Bunty took out the mobile and showed his face.

Bunty - aree yeh Kya ? Dev Bhai , Sonakshi Bhabhi .. aap dono Yaha par ..Aise ??

Dev - Hain toh ?? Normal hoon main ..

Sonakshi again hit him over his chest - DEEeVVV

Dev self talk - I don't want to share your weakness with anyone Sonakshi Duffer.

Blushing Bunty - But dev Bhai Yaha under the bed behind the boxes .

Dev - Haa toh .. Aab Kya main Sab ke samaane kare???

Sonakshi self talk- Yeh double meaning wale baatein kyun kar rahe hai?

Sonakshi was about to hit him again but Dev hold her hand and pulled her toward him .

Dev- Sonakshi .. Itna pyaar theek nahi hai Bunty ke liye...(WInk WInk)

BLushing Bunty - closed her eyes - Dev bhai Mujhe toh jaane do Yaha se ...

Dev - Haa toh Roka kisine hai ? Aur bata Aab turn kis Ka Chal raha Hai..

Blushing Bunty still closed eyes - saurabh dada Ka .. aap Ko pata hai Riya Ko two times turn aaya .. Nikki Ne usko baaooo kiya na ..

Dev - Naughty Nikki but smart hai Woh

Sonakshi . Areee yeh Kya faltu discussion kar rahe ho under the bed behind the box..


Now even Bunty mobile battery was down , and it was dark all over again under the bed behind the boxes .

Now someone comes over Bunty and pushed him , because of which Bunty pushed both dev and Sonakshi .

Dev and Sona , Bunty - Kaun hai Aab ??

Saurabh dada - aree yeh Kya mela laga rakha hai yaha ? Itne log under the bed behind the boxes...

Sonakshi- Dada..Pls switch on the light. I am little bit.. I can't see anything properly.

Dev Still holding her tight whispering in her ears- aree kya scared? this place is more crowded than your living room...

Saurabh dada- But what everyone is doing over here ?

Sonakshi- Kabbdi ka match chal raha hai dada. Kya faltu question kar rahe ho? Dada!!

Dada- Aree itne log hai then kuch khane ke liye nahi yaha par.. Mujhe bhook lag gayi hai.

Dev- What ? Wow great family. One is this(pointing towards Sonakshi ) other is this ( pointing towards Sauarbh)


Next Episode ( Coming soon )

Sonakshi- Wow. Movie shovie. Well tell us now what is the name of the movie?

Blushing Dev- Well that is surprise. Am sure everyone will love it.

Sonakshi- Awww... Blushing and all that. Adult movie dekhne aaye hai humlog? Dev???


P.S. Pls do share your views . Bad / good/ fair/ medium/ anything will do.

PS. This is not proof read and is written from a smart phone , therefore do pardon any typos, grammatical errors and plot holes.

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Edited by mayu1982 - 9 years ago

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