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Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

gud morning Didu...

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Awesome,Awesome,Awesome

= thanks so much dear i am glade u like it😳

..Fantastic update Hala Dear..Lovd it totally.

= i am glade😳

.1st 2 parts were super and njyoable..Nxt 2 parts were emotional and joyful one..The convo btwn ja and hira s nice.

=😳

.They shard many things..And at the end how ja didnt follow his own rule s funny..Breakfast part s lovely..

=😊

Giving into each otr's taste.

=😳

.Mobile phone s gvn by jalal..Oh..Hira's 1st call to him s lovely..They r behaving lyk couple..Ja s changing bit by bit..Ts rukaiya.. I hate her..

= ya i can understand😡

Maina and hira convo s cute..And the naughty boy mirza and his way of using girls for cleaning room s hilarious...at the end he cleand the room..Woh..I was shockd by the arrival of all her bro and sis in mansion...Hira s njyng nt to bother about the future..Love her..The part where ja came and caled off the engagemnt was my fav..

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

The FB part where jo come to orphanage and cheatd by tat man s very emotional.

.Poor little jo..

=

And Moti poor soul dnt knw what she s dng..Jodha frgt her name and everything.

=

.Mr.pickle become her 1st frnd.

= i liked that you called him her first friend 👍🏼 exactly

.She always have a bond with cats either directly(her name by jallu) r indirectly(bloody dres)

= and her eyes 😳

And will moti tell the truth..?

= eventually she have too😳

The nxt twist s ja heard ruks evil talk..His pain and mainavati's sudden speech,hira and ja's hapiness in her arm..Wow..U r amazing ya.

= thanks dear i am glade u like it

.And the FB Part of ja angry with jo s cute..The small house and the happiness s back for maina..I think ja s also changing in ts house..The stuborn game for cleaning btwn them s lovely..Will this home bring back jo's memory..?

= we will see😊

The part where mirza and bakshi got teared dres and broken pearls were well written..Oh god jo's own stitch dres..Their dance..Jalal's concern for hira to resize the ring..The last part s icing on the cake..Birthday gft as ring tat too with her name by her..Wonderful update..how come u write such a long chapy.!Love the update Hala.

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

wonderful update, Hala...loving this story

Originally posted by: avishi467

Hala di finally i got time to read.firstly hatsoff to u for dis sooo big ,amazing,fabulous, mindblowing...etc chapter.

=😃 thanks so much dear..i am glade u like it

the quote is very nice.jakal jodha spent again one night together also jalal share his past soo cute

=😳

.hira is really funny & so talkative.he gifted her a mobile.he always care for her

= yes he do😊

.ruq devil how can she try to torture our innocent jodha but jalal did right

=😊

. he know everything.why moti is still hiding truth frm hira

= she is scared on herself

.she should tell hira

= (nodding in approval )

.mainavati getting better each day due to hira.

= she is taking care of her like her own 😉

mr pickle is very nice.funny mirza got punishment .flashback is my favourite.

= 😳

who is that man who separated jodha frim jala'

l.

= will be known in future chapters😉

now mainavati & hira bil live in old house.theur phone cal is cute.wow jalal tajen her with him.she really love him soo much.ring with jodha nane.when jalal bil know that hira is only jodha.plz di uodate soonish.can't wait.thanks a lot di for om.sorry for late .take care.love u di.plz forgive ur little sister. love u umaaa. ...

Originally posted by: swetiii

oh my God
it was an amazing chapter
fabulous

= thanks so much muskan ..glade u like it😊
Jo is such a naughty little kitty
Hehe

=😉
and Jalal is also breaking away from his gloomy lifestyle
he was helping her in cleaning 🤣

that was a big blow to ruku
waaahhh
maza aa gaya
he took Jo for dinner as his fiance
wow

=😊

I don't understand one thing
how did she forget everything
I mean she remembers her 1st day in the orphanage but she doesn't remember her own name

=the memory was moti memory nt jodha memory but jodha dnt remeber much about her first day ..she remeber only flashes[/DIV]

Nw u asked how she frgt her own name

Well jodha was 5 years old ..she had the memory and brain of 5 year old ..which usually get attached with belongs, places and faces and that all was taken from her..nw how she frgt her name too?

[DIV]When great ma asked her abouy het name although the old man told her dnt say ..she answered KITTY ..that wht she though is her name ..she was rarely called jodha and her circle of people was only jalal and her mother..so she was really nt called much and didnt need once to say her name ..which fr her was nothing but kitty..but when again great ma confused het about it ..and the man told her grownup dnt lie ..so when she told tht she frgt and that she was wondering in street she also was so confused but. Believed really that she frgt ..and when she gt dissattached from home and every thing she knew and her life gt 180degree change ..she frgt ..like anychild in her place would hv plus she wasnt left with any of her belongs which usually what a child get attached with ...at last as the flashback said ...she though her name is kitty and jodha was fr her a word ..

it was fab

=🤗
update asap buddy please

Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

Hello hala ..
Amazing update ...

= thanks so much prii ..i am really glade u like it

Joja's relationship is getting stronger day by day ...

= true😳
Now m eagerly waiting for that update where jalal will see a glimpse of jo's bracelet ...
Nd will try to dig past nd find about hira ...

= sooner than u though ha😉

Ohh god .. All sisters nd boys of orphanage came to meet hira .. 🤣

=😆
Ruks plan back fired her ...
Jalal not only cancelled their engagement but also threat her ...

=😉

Hira bought a ring for jalal for his bday ...

When will jalal comw to know about jo ..
Who was that man who left jo in orphanage ...

So much suspense ...

Plz update asap ..
Cant wait ...

Update soon

Originally posted by: diya2291

U Study Well And Here Will Finish Your Thread

Originally posted by: zynahsiddiqi956

hello hala n vrinda..vch story next.?? m waiting..