Incompatible - SS - CHP 10 - pg 51 - Page 11

Originally posted by: deltadawn

sorry bohot lamba khich gaya chapter but want to keep this an SS. so plot building effort.

so far I got -

Nanu knows about Aditya

Aditya knows about Nirmalas past and Shravan

Shravan is helpless (thats a given)

Nanu has observed both Shraman and Adiman!!

Sumo is not helpless, she is matured. like she was when the show began.

ye the chapter ke synopsis.

Superb update di...can feel shravan's pain...feeling sad for both...this sumo is more than the one in the show...loving this ff...u r a magic...wow superb writing...can't wait for the next one...plz update soonish.

Amazing update...I actually started liking Adi when he said he want to help shravan and his mom..But when he said

Amazing update!!!!

Chapter 1
Main aagayi !!!
You really thought I wouldn't come ?
I see you read the Malika post and I am glad you took the idea ;)
I LOVE the pace, the detailing takes me right back to EDKV. The way she tried to move her earrings for him to notice.
Sumo is so innocent it kinds of break my heart.
As I said the little things. The ring part 😭
She is sooo in love with him and he is so guilty.
My babies are hurting but I kinda love it coz this means great writing 😆
Our minds do work similarly. I have parts of the chapter 4 ready of holding you and there is something with Shravan's wallet.
Shravan's thought process is so beautifully expressed, simple but it touches the right chord.
I am kind of proud of you like I go back to your first OS and now you are writing FFs and have fans btw I am one of them ;)
Keep sending me pm I'll read all of it and reply !
Last but not the least 🤗

Amazing !!!! Update soon ❤️

I love sumo in ur story dii she is
No more self respect ki lecture
All the time .but more caring and confident
Shravu is suffering a lot di and even
After seeing everything Ramnath is
Being typical Sasur ando ur long
Update di bcs its like development of story in
All aspects and loved chashmish back
When it comes to Sumo
I hope that adi don't mess anything
Instead solve it remaining things
However shravu sambhaal lega adi ko
Badh ne se sumo ke kariib
Shravu can never move on
Nimmo kash don't create any more problems 4
Shraman.'lovely update di'
Thanks for pm
Will be waiting 4next update ''
Love you
Princess

So sorry !!i am late
Lovely update it as usual
I am feeling sad for shravan ...
Ramu kaka ab to sudhar ja 😡
I really like in your story
No self respect and she is also asking his suggestion
But i didn't get the aditiya character
Is he negative or positive or have some grey shades
I hope ramu kaka willl soon realises his mistake
And i hope pushkar will do something not unlike in the show ...sirf apni shadi ki aur khush
But di chappy was too good 👏
Update sooon ...plz real soon
Eagerly waiting for next
Luv
Tina

awesome...
beautifully penned...
loved it...
thanx for PM...😊