New FF- Hamesha!!

Hey Everyone!

So im slightly dissapointed with how this is turning out so here's me just giving my two cents worth and writing a ff on the current track. PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT AND LIKE so that i know whether i should continue.

Hope y'all enjoy! 😛


Tester (start of part 1):

Raghav pulled on his glasses, shielding his eyes from the cruel world outside. He couldn't let anyone see through him; no, that kind, calm, sweet raghav was now replaced with the ruthless businessman he had become. Still, his eyes gave away the pain, the hurt he'd been through, somehow humanizing him- something he detested.
He stepped out of the rolls Royce and strode into his office, walking into his cabin without a second glance at the dozen employees who stood and greeted him.
"Sammy, mera secretary appoint huyi hain kya abhi tak?" He asked his friend and manager.
"Haan Raghav, woh aaj hi join kiya hain" he replied.
"Hmmm, usse andhar bhej do, mujhe use kaam dena hain" raghav said mindlessly, staring persistently at the file in his hand.

Raghav heard the knock and asked the person to come in, without lowering the file from in front if his face.
"Good Morning Sir".
At the voice, his heart seemed to still, as he felt a thousand memories flood into him. He lowered the paper as both of them froze at the sight if each other. It was Naina.


DONT FORGET TO COMMENT! <3

congrats
interesting start..
naina as raghav's Secretary...
what will he do

Continuee pliss...this is really interesting

Congrats on the New Story.

Good start, do update soon!

Hey guys!

Thanks for the amazing response, sorry i wasnt able to update earlier. Actually I have a series of debate tournaments and so Im supeeer busy, but he's a short update, promise to update again soon but in the meantime i hope you guys enjoy and PLZ PLZ PLZ COMMENT!

Part 2-

"Naina?" Raghav breathed, incredulous at seeing her there. She stood frozen, a expression of shock frozen across her face. He couldn't believe she was there, standing in front of him. Just then the door opened and sammy walked in, breaking our trance.

"Raghav, yeh hain Naina Mehra, tumare nehi secretary" He said to me. I whipped my head up the minute he said her name. Mehra? My name? Why did she still have my name attached to hers? I looked at her and realized with a jolt that she was wearing sindoor, and a mangalsutra, my mangalsutra. An unnamed feeling coursed through me at the realization, and I felt something warm coursing through me.

"Main kaam par shuru karti hoon" She replied hurriedly, scurrying out of the room, leaving me reeling in confusion in her wake.

**

Naina sat at her desk, unable to concentrate, knowing he was a wall away. She loved him. She had tried to disassociate her feelings from him but it didn't work. She loved him just as much, if not more than she always had. Suddenly her phone buzzed and she picked it up, startled by the noise.

"Naina, tumme naya maalik ka ghar jaana hain, aur unka files lekar aana hain" Pandey ji commanded naina over the phone.

"Lekin- But pandeyji had already disconnected he call. Naina sighed and closed her eyes, her in Raghav's house? How could she go? But there was no choice, he had to go if she wanted to keep her job and she needed this job. She stood up resigned, praying to Ganpati that it would be brief.

**

Raghav was sitting in his grandmother's room, his eyes overcome with emotion. His Dadi had woken, she was fine. True, her state was fragile and she wouldn't be able to tolerate any mental disturbance, but she was awake and talking to him. He also felt a strange sense of satisfaction, one of the first things daadi had done as soon as she'd woken was to tell Raghav to banish the Mehra parivaar, which raghav had done with gusto. He was glad to be rid of them, every time he looked at them he was reminded of his past, he was reminded of her. Daadi had been exhausted after he outburst at her pathetic children and so she'd laid down for a nap, but the anticipation loomed. She would wake soon, and then she'd want to know about her. What would he tell her? How could he tell her the truth?

He was sitting there contemplating about what he'd tell her when his maid walked in.

"Saab who aapse koyi office se aayein hain, kuch files chahiye unhe" He said. Raghav looked up at the interruption and expecting it to be sammy he asked the maid to send him in.

"Kya hain sammy" He said, without looking up, rubbing the bridge of his nose with his forefinger an thumb. When he didn't get a response he looked up and was left shocked. It wasn't sammy it was her. Naina.

"Tum, yahan?" He asked, his voice coming out more broken than he'd intended. Before she could answer a voice came from the bed and they both turned.

"Naina! Meri Bacchi!" Daadi's voice said. Naina looked to her in shock, before a wide smile spread on her face and she rushed over to the elderly lady, tears in her eyes.

"Daadi! Kaise hain aap?" She asked as daadi hugged her to her chest.

"Ab theek hoon, tum dono ko dek kar bilkul theek hoon. Raghav idha aa" She called. Raghav obeyed silently standing next to naina as he looked at daadi. She took his hand and placed it in Naina's beaming.

"Aise hi rehena, ek dujre ke saath" She beamed. Raghav looked up and met naina's eyes, seeing the same pain, the same remorse he had in her orbs. What were they going to do?

Originally posted by: giyadd

loved both parts !

Fantastic update, loved it.

Lovely update..both shocked seeing each other naina still using mehra..dadi is out of coma and seeing raina together happy

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