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Meera

@Jerry2308

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Posted: 9 years ago

#351

Brilliant update...U have described sumo's turmoil so well..

Glad that sumo ko uska chasmish yaad aa gaya..

Waiting for next update

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Arpi1234

@Arpi1234

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Posted: 9 years ago

#352

Another emotional and beautiful piece..
Love sumo's monologue..
Sumo meeting peeta as well..
Sumo starting to recollect her memories with Shravan..
Those bad dreams keep hunting her time and again..
Sumo is in sumo mode wanting to go to her school...
She started remembering everything what happened TEN years ago..
Let's hope she remember everything quickly..
Continue soon

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AnuradhaMG

@AnuradhaMG

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Posted: 9 years ago

#353

Deeptiii,
Thanx a looot for dedicating this chapter to me 😆...I m sooo happy about it... 😊
About d update...OMG...this is so very emotional...Shravan's guilt, love, fear...all portrayed so perfectly well...u r a master at your work...u really r...👏
I know I don't write big n long comments...but I just love to read ur stories...be it Hide n Seek or Lost or ur OS...I always look forward to reading them n thoroughly enjoy them... 👏

thanx once again

Anuradha

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 9 years ago

#354

Has it ever happened to you...that you click the post reply button but are totally clueless about the reply itself coz you are still overwhelmed. ..just happened to me babe😊

Kya kahoon..you are winning here with each update.

This was such an intricately written chapter yet so simple in its approach. The whole journey back home from the doctor, flashes of her chashmish, the movie, her falling on his lap...every bit of it went by me just like a movie..literally watched the story unfold.

Winced at her confidence when she corrected the doctor about her last name...and Wept when she ran back to him to apologise.

You are growing every day Dips. ..and can't stop feeling proud about that👏

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Nik03

@Nik03

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Posted: 9 years ago

#355

Res 😊
****
Unres
Soo touching update Deepti...❤️
Sumo is remembering bit by bit.From her childhood, her chashmish ,Aditya manhandling her..!!
So loved how she wept remembering her chashmish leaning on Shravan's stomach...❤️
I just dont like it when Preeti made Shravan feel guilty by giving him accusing glance...I soo hate it!!
Them watching movie together, her sitting on his lap was soo love...❤️
Sumo corrected Dr. about her surname was soo heart wrenching 🥺
Their school visit, Sumo remembering little things about Shravan...Now she understood how in childhood she had hurtedhim so many times and he being the best friend anyone could ever get, never complained.It feels soo good to read it dear...❤️
So loved how she ran into Shravan's arms in the end...so beautiful.❤️
Just like Shravan, I am also feeling a dull ache thinking about Sumo duscovering about their bitter past... 😕

Awesome update Deepti... 👏
Cont soon...n thanks for the pm 😊
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik

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lavanya

@amlavs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#356

Res

--unres--

Am speechless...

Amazing...u r am amazing writer...

I can easily connect to the emotions of ShraMan in ur story...

Kudos to you...

LavSriya

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

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Posted: 9 years ago

#357

Res... tried to comment 3 times, something's going on. 😕

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shirly amirja

@shirlys

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Posted: 9 years ago

#358

Wonderful update...hope everything will be alright soon...feeling sad for Shravan...he's feeling so much guilty...can't wait for the next update.

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adityasingh.246

@adityasingh.246

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Posted: 9 years ago

#359

Everytime ur finger moves , it creates a magic !!

Now I'm hooked to this as was to H&S ..

Loved the update .. Her contempating of not remembering him .. & him being there like her old Shravan who he always was but became some1 else due to manipulation by people ..

Her room has memories of so many beautiful moments of childhood,how she became overjoyed to get her old chashmish back like she could feel she got some long lost jewel after a long wait ..

But the same room holds some haunting memories too like that of her & Aditya wedding day .. But she has more good memories there than bad .. Hope she would soon remember her time with him there during Khosala time - dogi na sath mera .. & him teasing her by Jeevan's name ,the preetibhoj day & their many banters ..

& that small scene between them in the night was so sweet .. Like her subconscious knows that he is her home .. Her sitting in his lap was so natural & he finally had a moment of bliss ..Him keeping 3 copies of KNPH is insane .. 😃 so like shravan malhotra ..

Dr Das would surely sail them off through the tough times .. the way he's dealing with Sumo & making shravan realize the gravity of situation .. awesome .. I wish we get such nice doc in real life too ..

The whole school scene was written off so well .. I was like taking a virtual tour .. & bang she got that memory back which would make her guilty .. But she apologised like it was due for a long time .. shravan wud have to be strong in dealing with her .. can't wait for next ..