Mehrya SS : One Last Chance Part 16 Updated 30/5 - Page 30

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Posted: 9 years ago
Udii baba... Flash back mein flash back...
He he he gud one shri... Khadoos was remembering their courtship period...

Bhai ki yadasht shyad kamzor hogayi hai... It was he who faked not her... Baat karta hai... HAS SHE NEVER LOVED ME 😡

Reality check Mr khanna...its hard for a girl to move on.. but when she moves on she won't even give a damn to u 😕


Shri.. Thanks for this quick update 😳
Waiting for the next chapter... Aajayngy hum log Saturday bomb lekar 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
too good
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
This one is definitely my favorite part till now I love shaurya's turmoil beautifully written and edited update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MomoShivi_Fan

@Shrishti Sweetie loved this part and I can't wait for Part 8... please continue the next part soon... Thank you for the PM!


Thanks alot Ammu...Glad you liked it...

Working on the next part...I guess thoda delay hoga...😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Okay so it was khadoos Kumar's flashback ...seeing mehaks reaction leaving him seeing in pain ...

U deserve it shaurya ...😡😆

Well I guess now he sumwer started to give his mind sum work to think..😉
Warna he was hell bent on torturing her...!!
Shaurya thought mehak wud feel for him like this >

But I guess he got the unexpected from the expected person..😉😆

Bravo mehak ...be strong , and keep ignoring him..
And after his flashback ...
Wen he was actually questioning his Intelligence of faking his love I was like
Now I think he is desperate to find sum answers..after knowing the mehak of the courtship period to the present mehak ...😆

Well I wanna know wat this devil khanna is gonna plan next for her 😉

Awsum update shrishti

Thank you for accepting our dhamkis and updating while ur net was slow...

And


Girl 😳...do conti soon..warna u know wat me and appi will do 😆😉



Thabs thank you for such beautiful comments...You are getting very innovative and colourful with your comments...loving them...

N yes I do know what I would have to go through if I dont udpate it on time...I will try to!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: crtkelly


He had asked his secretary Riya to leave for the day as he knew she had just got married and it didn't seem right to keep her waiting in the hotel so late

Hey Shristi, can I just say how much I loved this sentence right here? I don't know if it was intentional or not , but this here, exemplifies Shaurya's innate goodness. A true villain would not have cared at all for his underlying only that the job got done...like my topic on motherhood, this is an instance that has you holding on just a little longer, because it gives you a hint of the man behind the anger and his potential.😊

Now for the rest, I am so, so, so, happy that this was a flashback. For the life of me I could not understand how in the story line Mehek would have even contemplated doing such. I would rather she walked, away and let him bleed out ( okay maybe she could call for help) after the way SK has been reacting to her of late😆

But it seems that our khadoos, with this recollection, maybe taking a step in the right direction. A bit of soul searching is needed for sure.

Thanks for the quick turn around, and of course the PM. Looking forward to what comes next😊

Kelly





I am so happy that you liked the update Kelly...Like i have said before, the only reason Shaurya betrayed Mehak was coz according to him, she had hurt his ego and he couldn't digest the fact that a mere middle class gal could defeat him...It was a big blow to his already inflated ego...

But Shaurya does have a good heart only thing is he doesn't know when and whom to show his kindness to...and this is what I feel for our Shaurya in the show too...Its a major flaw to his character But with Mehak around, I m sure she will help him find this side of him too...Hoping for it😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: zaara2212

the past was such a cute thing .. mehek cared for shauraya so much... and its sad to know that Shauraya was acting it all out 😭
why is it that shauraya thinks Mehek would still care when he humiliated her 😭😭


Yes the past was indeed good...Well Shaurya played out very well maybe thats why Mehak couldn't ever realsiethat he was faking...

That past was a very random thing tht i thought about...I wanted Shaurya to make that comparison with the present situation so that he realizes that if he has changed, so has Mehak..


Thank u dear😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

I know right 😆😉...u and me holding bombs ...😆
Tibs ???
She is busy aapi ..with her job ...I guess she wud be back to normal on Wednesday..
Tho Thursday unke thread mey ..unka sawgath bomb ke sath karenge ...wat say 😉😆 ???


U both have become the official ZKM gundis now...😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Udii baba... Flash back mein flash back...

He he he gud one shri... Khadoos was remembering their courtship period...

Bhai ki yadasht shyad kamzor hogayi hai... It was he who faked not her... Baat karta hai... HAS SHE NEVER LOVED ME 😡

Reality check Mr khanna...its hard for a girl to move on.. but when she moves on she won't even give a damn to u 😕


Shri.. Thanks for this quick update 😳
Waiting for the next chapter... Aajayngy hum log Saturday bomb lekar 😆



Thanks Sham...Happy that you liked it😳

I guess this time I guess the next update will be a but delayed as I am not happy with what I have written...so will have to make major changes to that part...Lets see...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks Niharika😳

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