Ishra Ts 'Rabba Mere Naam Kar Usse' part 2,pg-12 feb 7 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Nice start anju.
Ishra met thrice in a day .
raman liked Ishita but she was giving a cold shoulder to him.
Bala was beating someone abd Raman saved him which raised enimity between raman and bala .
Update next soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
sorry for commenting so late...
lovely update
bala was beating a guy and raman stopped him...this arose an enemity between them...
raman met ishita at airport and again saw her twice...
seems he has fallen for her...but seems she isn't interested...
continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63





PART 2


It's evening raman was unpacking his bags humming some songs..he get all his shirts and pants out of the bag that's when he noticed a piece of cloth on the sib and a beautiful stone hanging on it..he took it in his hand and looked it very carefully..Suddenly he remembered ishitas beautiful eyes and the scene when her dupatta got stuck with his bag..he smiled thinking about her and placed it carefully at the table..

After some time mihir and raman was having their dinner and before this raman tells all the happenings of the day to mihir..Especially about ishita..

Mihir : you don't know her..woh kahan rehathi hai yeh bhi nahi patha..even you don't know her name..bas ithna patha hai ki pehali nazar main ledki pasand ageya..kamal hai bhai aap bhi..


Raman: tu help karega na mera?

Mihir: main kaise..maine tho usse dekha bhi nahi hai?


Raman: main bathatha huna ki how she looks..


Mihir: teek hai bhai tho bolo..main bhi tho sunu apni bhai ki pasand ke bare main..jisne pehali mulakath main hi mere bhai ka khosh udadiya hai..


Hearing mihirs words raman smiled and sat their lost in her thoughts..

Mihir: arey bhai tell me na..

That's when he starts to sing..placing his palm on his own chin like he is in an other world..



Ho... Ek ladki ko dekha toh aisa laga
Jaise khilta gulaab
Jaise shaayar ka khwaab
Jaise ujli kiran
Jaise ban mein hiran
Jaise chandani raat
Jaise narmi ki baat
Jaise mandir mien ho ek jalta diya..
Ho.. ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga

Raman made mihir stand and starts to move his legs like he is dancing with ishita..mihir smiled at his bhais craziness and starts to dance along with him..


Ek ladki ko dekha toh aisa laga
Jaise subahon ka roop
Jaise sardi ka dhup
Jaise bina ki taan
Jaise rangon ki jaan
Jaise balkhaaye bel
Jaise lehron ka khel
Jaise khushbu liye aaye thandi hawa...
Ho.. ek ladki ko dekha toh aisa laga

He took a doll from the shelf and starts to sing again looking it lovingly like he is seeing her face in that doll...


Ho.. ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga
Ek ladki ko dekha toh aisa laga
Jaise naachata Mor
Jaise resham ki dor
Jaise pariyon ka raag
Jaise sandal ki aag
Jaise saulahn singaar
Jaise ras ki fuhaar
Jaise aahista aahista badhta nasha

After their talk about ishita raman comes to his room and lays on the bed..he took a diary from his bag..he placed the dupatta piece and the rose which is fell from her bag..on the dairy then he write above It..

"Tujhe Mila Nahi Humsa Koi, Humein Mila Nahi Tujhsa Koi Ye To Kismat Ki Baat Hai, Ki Humari Nazar Me Is Kadar Basa Nahi Koi.."

After that he slept keeping his head on the diary...

Next day at the college raman was playing tennis with some girls when some boys comes to him and said..

Boy: dekho tho sahi ledka chageya hai ek hi din main..ledkiyon ki line legi hui hai peeche..


Hearing this raman smiled that's when bala comes there with his tennis bat and said..


Bala: ledkiyon ko tho koyi bhi hara saktha hai..himmath hai tho ladkon se khel..


Raman: I am ready..

Bala and raman starts to play the game and the other students cheered for bala..at the end of the game bala wins and said to raman..

Bala: dekha yeha ledke bhi hai.. saying he start to walk from there

Raman just smiled at his words and called his name from back..

Raman: bala..


Bala turned to him while raman comes near him..Forwarding his hand to bala he asked politely..

Raman: Friends?


Bala didn't said anything but went from there showing attitude..seeing this raman again smiled..


Its evening bala was driving to his home on his bike that's when some goons blocked his way and starts to beat him badly..He was trying to beat him back but the goons are more than 10 numbers..He was trying very hardly but he was losing his energy..


One goon was about to his on balas head but the nick time someone stopped holding the stick..bala looked up to his savior and he was "raman"..at the next second raman starts to beat the goons hardly..bala too starts beat and at last they get success full..


At the end of the fight bala tries to go near Raman but Raman ignored him and went starting his bike..

Bala wants to say thank you to raman for helping him..so he went to meet him on his house..when he reached there mihir opened the door..

Mihir : koun?


Bala: hai iamb ala..mujhe raman se milna tha..


Mihir: bhai se..kya hua kuch kaam tha kya..

Bala: yah..

Mihir: just come inside..

Bala get inside the house and see many photos of raman at walls and many trophies and prices at the shelf..he looked att the things very carefully and took one trophy in his hand..

Mihir: who bhai ki hai..woh tennis mein state champion the..


Bala stunned hearing mihir that's when raman coms to them..


Raman: hai bala..tum yehan?


Bala: tum tennis mein champion hai? He asked showing the trophy,raman nodded his head,,


Bala" phir college main hara kyun?


Raman: kyun ki main chahtha tha ki iss college gude se kyun na main dhosthi karle..he said smiling..

Bala: why?

Raman: actually pehala din hamara fight se hua tha..phir maine suna tumne won justice keliye kar rehe the..thi mujhe lega tum uthna bura nahi ho jithna tum dikhana chahthe ho..

Bala smiled slightly...

Raman: waise woh log tumhe maar kyun reha tha?

Bala: who log uss lekde ka aadmi the jisse maine uss din maara tha..kisi mla ka beta hai.phir bhi sala ledkiyon ko ched reha tha...

Raman: waise college main tumhare bare main kuch accha impression nahi hai..


Bala: jantha hun..wahi accha hai..


Raman: phir bhi..."friends" he asked again forwarding his hand..


This time bala smiled at him and hugged him saying "best friends"


Mihir too get inside there hug and said.."main bhi friend"


.breaking the hug bala said to raman.."I am sorry yaar"

Raman: na..friendship mein no sorry no thank you...only yaariyan..


Yaaron dosti badi hi haseen hai
Yeh na ho to kya phir
Bolo yeh zindagi hai

Koi to ho raazdaar
Begaraj tera ho yaar
Koi to ho raazdaar

Yaaron mohabbat hi to bandagi hai
Yeh na ho to kya phir bolo yeh zindagi hai


The next day raman and bala starts to go college in balas bike..all college students are stunned seeing them together..bala said from now raman is his best friend so he is also their friend too..


Between all this raman tried to get any information about ishita but he was getting nothing..every day evening he went to the mall with bala but he didn't see her..bala was confused with his behavior so one day he asked why he everyday comes to the mall..at last raman said he is searching a girl who he met on the very first day of his arrival..

Bala: tu pagal hai kya? Kisi ledki ke chakkar main tu har din yehan atha hai..kal se mujhe math bulana..tere who mihir ko lana..

Raman: please na yaar..ek hi nazar main pasand ageyi thi who mujhe..usse dekhe aisa lega jaise wahi hai jo mere lie bani hai..

Bala: yaar iss tharah ki baathom mein mujhe koyi interest nahi hai..i am going..

Saying he went from there leaving raman at the mall..

Raman: chal ja..mujhe kisi ki help nahi chahiye..main khud doontlunga usse..

Saying he too went from there..


Precap : ishra

So friends here is the next part..hope you like it..please ignore the typing mistakes...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
superb update
Bala and raman became best friends and Raman knows that Bala is not that bad
waiting for ishra to meet
do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Awesome update
I think dis concept is of tamil movie
Isint it
But u have written it in a fab way
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Superb update
Bala n raman became frnds
Raman is searching ishita
Like mad man
Precap
Sounds interesting
Continue soon
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Thanks for pm




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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Nice update
So now Bala and Raman became best friends..
Raman comes daily to the mall to search for ishita...
Pls continue soon and Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
amazing update
raman told about ishita to mihir and was dancing with him he is so cute
next raman was playing tennis with the girl in college a boy came there and said see raman have came one day before but girls are behind him bala came there and asked raman to play with him they played bala won and taunted raman and was goign raman asked him for friendship but bala left from their showing attitude in evening bala was going home but some goons started beating him rmaan came and helped bala
bala was goign to say thanks to raman but he left from there bala went to ramans home mihir opened the door bala said he want to meet raman he saw many trophies mihir said raman have won all this he is state champion in tennis bala was stunned he asked raman so waht was that in college raman said he wanted to be friend with him their talk was nice both became best friends raman was still searching for ishita and daily goes to mall with bala he asekd raman what is he doing daily coming in the mall raman old him bala said he is not interested in all this and left from there precap is interesting pls continue soon
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Superb update
Raman bala r friends now
Raman searching ishita
Waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Nice update Anju
bala and raman became friends now
raman is searching ishita daily
update soon

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