DESTINY PLAYS A BEAUTIFUL GAME(ShraMan Story ) Chapter 4 updated pg 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ppoduval


Hi! Loving your intro of the story! Architecture itself is very tough, take it from an ardent architecture student, love in the architecture is going to be awesome! 🤗

PS- No offence but its Sir JJ School of Architecture in Mumbai, thats the dream architectural college of India. 😊

Now i have changed it ...thanks for telling me

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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing start
cannot wait to read more
continue soon
superb
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 2 ( THEIR FIRST MEETING)

AT AIRPORT , MUMBAI

(HERE A GUY IS COMING OUT OF THE AIRPORT...THIS GUY IS NONE OTHER THEN OUR SHRAVAN...)

SHRAVAN (Sigh of relief): Huh !! Finally 1st step of my life towards my dream..

(Shravan was towards the taxi stand but suddenly he collided with someone who was totally lost in her own thought but she doesn't fall she only got tripped ...and she again get lost in her own thought and as she was walking off a suddenly a breeze flow through their faces and at that time half of her duppata falls on shravan's face..:)

then after some time when she tries to move she realizes that her duppata got STUCK somewhere so she looks back and saw a tall not tall , very tall guy with a good physique is standing in front of her she didn't saw his face as it was covered with her duppata,mean while shravan was lost in her beauty.She removed her duppata from his face said sorry without looking at him but shravan was kept on staring at her that he didn't even realize when she left the place...the only word that came out from his mouth when he notices that she left was;;;;;SHRAVAN: Beautiful ...(Then he realizes what he was saying and snapped his finger at his head and says ;;;;;;SHRAVAN: Shravan tu to mumbai aate hi pagal hogaya hai ...U should focus on your career ...but she was really very beautiful...shravan beta to tu pagal hogaya hai nikal yhan se nahi tu pata nahi kya kya sochega tu ...

(SORRY I DIDN'T TELL YOU WHO WAS THE GIRL ...BUT I THINK YOU GUYZ KNOW HER VERY WELL ...SO U CAN FIND OUT ...BUT IT'S MY DUTY TO TELL SO SHE IS OUR SUMAN)

SHRAVAN AND SUMAN BOTH LEAVE FOR THERE COLLEGE IRRESPECTIVE OF THEIR DESTINIES IF THEY MEET AGAIN OR NOT...

Edited by komal2002 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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HERE COMES 3RD PART ... DO ENJOY IT!!!!!!!!!!

THERE ARE 3 HUGE BUILDING CARVED LIKE A SEMICIRCLE WITH A BIG HOARDING ON THE MIDDLE BUILDING "S.T. TRINITY AN INSTITUTION OF ARCHITECTURAL STUDIES" AND A SMALL BUILDING AT OTHER SIDE SEEMS TO BE AS HOSTEL .

HERE COMES A GUY HOLDING HIS BAG ON ONE SIDE ...HE IS OUR SHRAVAN ...HE ENTERED THROUGH THE BIG GATE OF INSTITUTION AND HEADED TOWARDS THE MAIN BUILDING .

HE GOES TO RECEPTION AND AFTER FILLING ALL THE FORMALITIES HE GRABBED THE KEYS OF HIS ROOM AND HEADED TOWARDS HOSTEL.

MEANWHILE SUMAN ALSO ENTERED THE INSTITUTION ...SHE GOES TO THE RECEPTIONIST AND REQUESTED TO MEET THE CHIEF PROFESSOR WHO HANDLE ALL THE ADMISSION ...AFTER SO MUCH OF ARGUMENT SHE SUCCEEDED IN HER PLAN AND GOT THE APPOINTMENT TO MEET CHIEF PROFESSOR . AFTER 10 MIN SHE GOT THE CALL BY THE PROFESSOR ...SHE ENTERED THE CABIN AND THE PROFESSOR ASKED HER TO BE SEATED ...AFTER CONSULTING ALL HER PROBLEMS ALSO SHOWING HIM HER PERFORMANCE HE GET VERY MUCH IMPRESSED BY HER DETERMINATION AND SAID:

PROFESSOR:I AM VERY MUCH IMPRESSED WITH YOU I HAVEN'T SEEN ANY GIRL WHO IS THIS MUCH DETERMINED TOWARDS HER PARENTS DREAM ...YOUR PARENTS WOULD BE VERY PROUD OF YOU IF THEY WERE PRESENT IN THIS WORLD .

SUMAN : THANK YOU SIR .BUT I WANT FULFILL THERE DREAM SO I WANT ADMISSION IN THIS COLLEGE ...SO SIR PLS TRY...

PROFESSOR: SO MISS MEHRA YOU GOT THE ADMISSION

SUMAN : THANK YOU... THANK YOU... THANK YOU... VERY MUCH SIR ITS VERY NICE OF YOU ...

PROFESSOR: SO YOU CAN GO AND COMPLETE ALL THE FORMALITIES ...AND MAY GOD BLESS YOU...

SHE SAID THANK YOU AND HEADED TOWARDS THE RECEPTION.

HERE WHEN SHRAVAN ENTERED IN THE ROOM AND GET SHOCKED AFTER SEEING THE CONDITION OF THE ROOM ...AS I TOLD YOU IN THE PRECAP

EVERYTHING WAS MESSED UP ...

AND AT THE THE NEXT MOMENT A BOY ENTERS THE ROOM FROM THE BATHROOM IN JUST A TOWEL WRAPPED AROUND HIS WAIST ...HE WAS DANCING LIKE A BABY IN FRONT OF MIRROR

SHRAVAN CAN'T STOP HIS LAUGH SO HE STARTED LAUGHING CLUTCHING HIS STOMACH VERY HARD ... AND THE LAUGHTER WAS TO LOUD THAT IT WAS AUDIBLE TO THE GUY AND HE STOPS DANCING AND SAYS :

GUY :BAS ! BAS! Ho gaya circus khatam ...itna bhi bora dance nahi karta main ...

SHRAVAN CONTROLS HIS LAUGHTER

SHRAVAN (In a laughing tone): Sorry ! sorry ! maine pehle kisiko bhi aisa karte nahi dekha to control nahi hua...once again sorry ... by the way i am shravan your new roommate

GUY: It's okay i can feel your emotions ...i am aditya welcome to my beautiful room sorry sorry messed room as you can see .

AFTER CHATTING WITH THE GUY ABOUT THE COLLEGE ...HE HEADED TOWARDS THE MAIN BUILDING FOR KNOWING TIMETABLES AND THE BATCH ... IN WHICH HE WILL GO

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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 4

AT THE RECEPTION ...

SUMAN WAS FILLING THE ADMISSION FORM ...AND AT THE OTHER SIDE SHRAVAN WAS ALSO HEADING TOWARDS THE RECEPTION .

AFTER FILLING ALL THE FORMALITIES THE RECEPTIONIST GAVE HER THE KEYS OF HER HOSTEL ROOM AND AS SHE WAS LEAVING FROM THERE SHRAVAN ALSO CAME ...

HE FELT FAMILIAR FRAGRANCE WHICH HE SMELT ONLY ONCE HE TURNED TOWARDS SUMAN. AS HER BACK WAS FACING SHRAVAN HE WAS NOT ABLE TO SEE HER FACE BUT WHEN HE WAS ABOUT TO CALL HER ADI CALLED HIM .HE TURNED AROUND TO FACE HIM.

ADI: HEY BRO WHAT ARE YOU DOING ?? I THINK WE SHOULD LEAVE FOR THE CLASS AS IT IS ALREADY LATE ..

SHRAVAN: YEAH I AM COMING JUST WAIT FOR A MINUTE ...

SHRAVAN TURNED AROUND TO THE GIRL ...BUT SHE WENT FROM THERE...

SHRAVAN POV:

DON'T KNOW BUT I FELT THAT THE GIRL WHO WAS STANDING HERE HAVE A SIMILIAR FRAGRANCE OF THE GIRL WHOM I MET AT THE AIRPORT "THAT DUPATTA GIRL"...HO SAKTA HAI KI VU MERA VAHM HU BUT ...OH GOD THIS DUPATTA GIRL IS MAKING ME CRAZY...PLS HELP ME...


Edited by komal2002 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chalo... They met at last... Okay not totally but still... Lovely update riya... Abhi adi firse! Matlab firse gadbad.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...
Let's see what happens next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
My...3 in one go...Time legega to read...RES
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Hey komal...Sanjh is right...Tu toh badi utawali hai..😆3 in one go...hattrick kar de tuune...
Loved it...they were cute...😃
Par I have a suggestion...ye chotu se updates dene ke bajay u can combine all these three as one chappy...what say??well thats what I think...Baki tumhari marzi...
Waiting for the next..
ANU😳

Edited by anukulgr8 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Read all the parts...nice read!
College going ShraMan 😃... so college romance of cards!!😉
You know what I loved the most...how u say..."Our Shravan"...😳😳
Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow!! This is really interesting and a completely different plot...really like the write up...please update soon😊

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