*Milengae Milengae* IB FF Part Four updated PG 7 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ISensedYou

Awesome concept manasa...

Looking forward to the updates😃
If u dont mind can u keep oms partners name as ishana?😊

I was really confused regarding that
I started searching names closer to ishaana😆
Now he will be paired with new actress so I was confused of which name to use
I will re think before I change😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PROLOUGE PART TWO


Mumbai Shivaay ke ghar

Omkaara is a handsome young man so tough, but really very sensitive and emotional at times

Listen to what he say::

Omkara talks to himself seeing in mirror:

Om ab tumhae strong banna hoga warna tumare ane wale bacchon ko kaise sambhalogae.

( Jab sae pata chala ki Ishaana maa banne wali hai tab sae Om khud ko tayar karaha hai achae papa banane ke liyae)

Oh God Om tum phir sae bhul gaya subah subah Ishaana ko apni yoga ke liye le jana hai and uss ke baad usae garam dudh dena hai.Om iss sae phelae ki wohi uth jayae jaldi kitchen mein chalo aur dudh garam karkae flask mein dalo.

Om in Kitchen:

Talks to himself

Pata nahi Ladkiya saare kam jaldi jaldi kaisae khatam kartae hai office bhi jatae hai

i really feel weird in this kitchen kaha pe kya hai aaj tak samajh nahi aaya mujhe

par meri jaan Ishaa ke liyae nahi mere honewala ya wali bachhae ke liye

mein kuch bhi karunga any thing...

Om lights the stove puts the vessel on it and pour the milk into it.

Om now introduces himself

Hello all i am Omkaara mein apne Shivaay bhaiyya ke bhai hu,kehne ko toh hamara pura parivaar ek hi ghar mein nahi rehte hai sab ki apni apni priorities life mein. Ek woh thi jis ki wajah se ghar mein sab saath time spend karte the ab jab woh yaha nahi hai toh pura ghar suna ho gaya. Mein ab Shivaay bhaiyya ke saath office jane laga hu, aur Rudra apni further studies ke liyae london gaya hai jo kuch hi mahinom mein waapis aayega. Daadi maa aur papa hamare saath nahi rehte aur choti maa aur chotae papa bhi dusari ghar mein shift ho gaye. Mein abhi bhi sochta hu ki woh puraane din waapis aa jaaye toh kitna acha hota. Ishaa works with us but now she is on her pregnancy leave as she is in her eighth month i should take good care of her.

Mere bade bhaiyya Shivaay mera best friend hai,i need him in every decision of my life but it seems aaj kal mujahe unka nahi unko mera jarurat jayada hogaya. Bhaiya aur Anika ki wajah se mera aur ishaa ki shaadi ho paayi. Anika bhabhi ko miss karta hu, so much, she is like my bestie but i will soon find out her, where ever she is..

Ishaa wakes up and rolls on her bed to see Omkara is not there.. She slowly get up

Om itni subah ut jaata hai see i am so lazy

Mujhae yoga karni hai and mein so rahi hu

i think i should hurry up or else mein class ke liyae late ho javungi

She hurriedly gets up and get down her bed and slightly slips and screams Om...

Om puts off the stove and hurriedly reach their room

Ishaa Kya hua r u ok???

Ishaa hugs Om

Ishaa says I am ok Thank God i was about to slip but some how managed to balance myself..

Om is all angry

How many times i have told you Ishaa???

tum apni khayal nahi raksakthi, agar tumhae kuch ho jata toh mein khud ko kabhi maaf nahi karpavunga

Ishaa holding her ears says " I am sorry Om i will be more careful from now on."

Om hugs Ishaa and tell her to get ready quickly she has only 15 min time.

Ishaa gets ready

She stares into mirrior and say

Mein kithni moti ho gayi hu

smiling she caresses her baby bump

par koi baath nahi meri sweet baby will come in to this world so soon.

Ishaana intoduces herself

Hello

All of you might be confused i am Ishaana Oberoi beloved wife of Omkara... I work with Om and Shivaay Bhai in the same office and look after the administration work. Presently i am on leave. I am expecting my baby in 20 days and i am all exited. But i really miss Anika she is my best friend what if she have any babies till now??? I am not sure but i felt so. Anika and Shivaay bhai helped me and Om getting married going against to our parents wish. I am all happy now.

Pata nahi kya hua ab woh dono, they are not together


Its not thst they have moved on Shivaay bhai abhi bhi Anika ko miss karta hai

and i am sure Anika bhi Bhai ko miss karthi hogi.

I wish humae jaldi Anika miljaye phir sab theek hogayega..

Guys mein app se baad mein baat karthi hu i am getting late for my yoga class


Om and Ishaa leave to the yoga class in their car

hope u guys like it

pls do share ur views

manas😃


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Starting is awesome...waiting fr next update...continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Manas tune mera manas le liya ..
It's lively
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thank u guys will continue soon😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART ONE

Delhi


Oberoi Mansion


Om and Ishaa are really worried about Shivaay. It is Shivika's marriage anniversary that day and they know that Shivaay will lock himself in his room on that day. Om and Ishaa are sad remembering Anika. Om enquires Ishaa as to what happened on that day. Ishaa replies that she has no idea as only pinky ma and ma were at home along with Anika. Rudra and myself were with daadi as she was unwell. By the time we reached home Pinky ma aur maa were fighting with each other.

Daadi was too tensed she tried hard to stop them fight. She called Anika but there was no reply. Then ma informed that Anika left home forever. Daadi collapsed and ... You know everything after that.

Om speaks

Choti maa might have crossed all the limits or else Anika Bhabi will not take that big step, after that things became so worse that Daadi wanted to leave the house. And shockingly choti maa and Chachu left the house. I still remember myself Shivaay and Rudra we entered home at the same time and we tried to set everything right but it was too late. Chooti ma and chachu left the house, Choti ma did not even listen to Shivaay. She has neither said the reason for her leaving the mansion nor the reason for which Anika left the mansion. Post that incident we tried to reach Anika bhabhi but she is nowhere. We searched for everywhere even her family didnt knew anything that time. They demanded that what did we do to Anika that made her take such a big step.

Om and Ishaa get emotional


Om : Isha socho agar hamae aisa lag raha hai toh Shivaay ko kaisa lag raha hoga


Ishaa : Tum sahi keh rahe ho Shivaay Bhai ne bahut kuch saha,

do saalon mein koi sudhaar nahi hua ab sirf koi jaadu ki

jarurathai jaise sab pehle jaise ho jaaye

Mean while Shivaay comes downstairs

Om and Ishaa just hide their pain and plaster a smile on their face.

Ishaa : Shivaay bhai aayiye na hum sab saath mein nashta karte

hai


Shivaay : Nahi Ishaa tum time se kha lena thats very important.

and Om aaj humae jaldi niklna hai we are going to

Mumbai aaj hi ek ghante mein flight hai mein tumse

airport pe milta hu. Haa Ishaa please take care of

yourself your due date is just in a week now.


Ishaa : Haa bhai mein apni khayal rakhungi aap chinta mat kijiyae


Om : Shivaay woh Mumbai ki investors wali meeting hai na jo

last month postpone hua wahi na

mein tumse airport par milta hu.

Shivaay leaves Oberoi Mansion

Ishaa : Om Shivaay Bhai theek toh hai na aaj ke din ki baare mein bhul gaye kya


Om : Nahi mujhe lagta hai woh apne aap ko aur jyada busy

bana rahe. Chodo tum yeh sab tension. Tumhae jyada stress lena mana hai aur dawayi bhi toh lena hai chalo.

Shivaay stops his car suddenly


He gets down

He is now infront of the stairs of a temple.

He talks to himself

Sab ko yahi laga hoga ki mein tujhe bhulne ki koshish kar raha hu. Agar mein tumhae bhul jaavunga toh khud ko kho dunga.Anika aaj mein yaha kuch maangne aaya hu tumhari Bhagwaan se

He climbs the stairs.


Dhuan dhuan si hai zindagi

Dhundhla sa hai khwaab kahi

Kho gayi jane kahaan woh khushi

Dikhti nahi hai roshni

Kaise din the aur kaisi thi wo raatein

Jab karte the hum sapno se he baante

Gum ho gayi hai woh hasi

Shivaay is now infront of God he says

Meri Anika ko hamesha aap par vishwaas tha aur hamesha rahegi. Aap ne uss ke saath aisa kaise hone diya. Hum donon ki faasle jaise kam hua aap ne ussae mujhse itna duur bhej diya. Aap neh sahi nahi kiya. Agar aap sach mein ho toh mujhe meri Anika waapis de dijiyae.

Yahi bolna tha, bol diya ab chalta hu

As Shivaay turns around to leave the temple the priest call him. "beta pujaa karwake toh jaayiyae, kiski naam ki puja karu. Shivaay says "Anika Shivaay Singh Oberoi". He does not stay,

Priest ask him to atleast take prashad.

Shivaay replies "jab woh waapis aa jaayegi tab aa kar lunga prashad."

Voice over: Zindagi mein bura waqt aata hai toh uske baat acha waqt bhi aayega. Kuch aisa hi waqt Shivaay ki zindagi mein waapis aane wala hai. Iss baat se anjaan woh jisse dundh raha hai woh uski kareeb jaa raha hai Shivaay apni gaadi mein bait kar waha se nikal gaya.

Shivaay and Om boards the flight to Mumbai.

At that time Ishaa who is at home instructs the workers to clean the house and is supervising them. Then the cupboard in Shivaays room falls down. Ishaa hurriedly reach the place and starts scolding the workers for not working properly. It is then her eyes fall on a old paper which seems to be stuck under the cupboard all these days. Then Isha takes it and see the name on the envolope. It is a letter written by Anika to Shivaay. Ishaa now understands that Anika had left a message for Shivaay before she left, she decides not to read the letter but wanted to give it to Shivaay immediately.

Ishaa calls the office and ask them to book the next flight to Mumbai. She quickly get ready and pack her necessary things and keep the letter in her handbag and leave Oberoi mansion.

She soon boards the flight to Mumbai.

There at Anika's Place


Anika is getting ready for her office. Then the doorbell rings and she goes and opens it. She says Taayi you are late again. I have told you yesterday na i have to leave early. Now listen pls do take care of Vansh and Ansha they are sleeping right now. All you have to do is when they wake up pls take them out on a walk to near by park. But be careful the road will be very busy take care. I am leaving now. Taayi replies ok and closes the door. Anika leaves for office in her office cab.

Precap:

Ishaa gets pregnancy pains and Ainkaa goes to her rescue. Shivaay learns the truth

Anika teach her kids to say papa and make them meet their father...

I know this part is damn boring

Next part will be little more intresting

Will give a lengthy update soon

Keep your suggestions coming😃

manas

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update...
Eagerly waiting for your next update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update.
Can't wait to read next part.
Plzzz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
wow...it was awesome... 😳 😆

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