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Monalisa(Hundi..my mom gave this name :)..

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Posted: 9 years ago

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read All the parts...this is the bestttest part...waiting for Soha Dev convo... and Thank u for the pm ...

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rose4ever

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Posted: 9 years ago

#252

Loved it Divya & Suvika👏⭐️

For me,Ishwari's character is irredeemable but if there's anything that I could have considered acceptable in the show,this is it( another option being therapy for Ishwari,but can't really see that happening on Indian Tv). Introspection and realisation of her own faults/thoughts was a must.Kudos to you for writing it so well.

If there is to be any hope of a reunion,Dev & Sonakshi need to open up completely and need to let each other see and hear exactly what they've been thinking and feeling.Expose their vulnerable side too.There are so many misunderstandings due to lack of communication & trust and you just paved way for all that to happen.

I would have surely loved this being continued as an FF but I'll take what I can get.I am hoping for some new OS though

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sa1234B

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Posted: 9 years ago

#253

Wow ...Mind blowing update👏...loved ur writing

Thankyou for writing dis Wonderful OS ..

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Suvika.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: randomramblings
amazing, can we have a part 4 of dev and suhana's talk please.

Thank you.

Part 4 alone won't be enough for the dad and daughter. They need more than that to start and build their relationship.

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Suvika.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: fanktlk

Thanks for understanding Geena. Let me give it a thought.. I shall PM about Neha... 😉

😲 😡 PM-ing OS is against IF rules 😆

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Suvika.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: fanktlk

This OS... I was the one who told you I want to write. You can't take credit for my involvement in this. 😡 😆

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Suvika.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: Shlroy
One of the best ffs that I read.
Truly spellbound esp the end

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Deepa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#258

How mean you both are for breaking my poor heart...Suvi you are spanking me ?! Geena how can you accept defeat so easily?😭

On a serious note, I understand your explanations and accept it. Ofcourse you are the writers and know better 😳 However if it is possible give us an OS for Dev-Suha conversation, I would love to read those emotions via your writings !

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Suvika.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: tia.o
You guys are incredible. Excellent, excellent three shots. But the final shot has to be Suhana and Dev's meeting
I wanted this talk to happen when they broke up. I wanted everything to come out in open and them to accept the reality or walk away. But you guys made me happy with this writing.

I love a good story telling and this is an excellent writing.

Thank you so much Tia. 🤗

This talk was definitely needed. They were stuck in a rut, refusing to accept that they were stuck because neither was looking where they were going.

Suhana - Dev - lets see what the makers give us first. If they mess it up, we'll write another one. What say??