Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated - Page 85

Originally posted by: dakshasharma

Really this is d best part of ur story. Father n daughter bonding was top of d world

Very nice...i enjoyed and laughing of Devi naughtiness

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Pls continue ...

Originally posted by: Samzz

This is the bestest part of your story..I read you previous chapters in one go..and you are an amazing writer too😊..sent a strong message home..👏

Originally posted by: mena_k

So cute 😛

Please continue, would love to read more from you 😊

Di I read a few chapters of ur ff...will complete it very soon

Was an epic update

one of the Best part of this FF...loved it so so much...

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
I imagined the scene as Steve in nail polish. Like the caring Devki. His reaction after getting know what devki did was shocking & full of care. He accepted the deal bc the way Dev handled devki & didn't thought abt loss. I agreed that both daughter & son are equally important. No point to divide them with superiority. Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

Yes balancing of professional and personal is most important ingredient of life. Indeed daughter and son are equally important and precious.

Thanks for the comment and glad you like it 😃

Originally posted by: binuuu

Superb part mayu dii...

Oh my God!!! Devki made me laugh very muchh...

Very cute n naughty...

Enjoyed through out..

Awww Thanks for the comment and am glad you like it 😃

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Di I read a few chapters of ur ff...will complete it very soon

But now I read the last chapter

It's sooo amazing

I was laughing like mad🤣

Devki is so cute

Tina...😆😆kya haal banaya devki NE uska

And Mr. Steve😆

I can't tell u how much I love this

And please di do continue...

& PM me next time please

Thanks for the comment and glad you like it 😃 Yes will try to send you PM.

Don't ask me when I will write the next part pls 😳

Pakki wali lazy and superbusy hoon main 😆