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Part-2



Princess madhubala was abandoned on the rocky hill top, in black mourning gown as the prophecy given by Oracle Kuku . Her family & kingdom went back to the respective homes, mourning over her.
"Why ? Why is this happening with me ? What have i done to deserve this?" Madhu cried bitterly clutching her heart falling on her knees. She lost everything in a single moment, her kingdom, her family, her everything, all cause of her beauty. She hate herself.
Soon, the west cold wind begins to blow increasing the chillness of chilly wintery night, with the dull moon in the sky, looking at the maiden with sympathy. Madhu folded her knees close to her chest & wrapped her arms around her knees, bracing herself, shivering, waiting for the disgusting monstrous serpent to come & take her as his wife. She kept waiting & waiting & waiting. The phrase of night begin to pass, her sobs slowed down, her tears died down, as subconsciousness engulf her. Soon, the instructions of Prince Rishab were followed as west wind carried her sleeping form to the hidden palace. She was gently dropped on the grasses,if the meadow.

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The morning rays peered through the canopy of the forest & fell on the face of sleeping Princess. Madhubala stretched open her eyes & take in the surrounding. She is in grass bed, she jerk up & sit in horror clutching her knees close to her chest. She remembers the place where she was abandoned but now she is somewhere else. She looked around to find any presence but no one can be seen, she is all alone. Then her eyes caught the sight of the magnificent castle before her. She became spellbound seeing its beauty. Its seems to be built of gold.
"Where am i ?" She mumbled & took careful steps towards the castle. She hesitated before entering inside it.
"Its your" she jerk back hearing the whisper of a male. She look around but there is no one. She gulped & gathering courage she step inside. As she step in the whole palace got illuminated. She look around with wonder in her eyes.
"Come in, Queen !" She again heard the same voice, & this time she felt as if someone brush his hand against her.
"Wh.. Who is it ?" She dared to ask.
"Your husband" came the reply, but she cant see anyone.
"Here is everything u wished for, take bath & eat something. I'll see u in the evening" she heard him & soon, sense the absence of some presence. Its like someone was with her but she cant see him. She took a deep breath, & look around. Now, its her fate, its her world, this is where she have to live. Accepting the game of her fate she roamed around the whole palace, discovering the rooms alone. There is no one except her & her husband too left her. She feels hungry & strolled towards the dining area to find hundred of dishes serves before her. She became momentarily shocked but soon she recovered & went to taste them, filling up her stomach. After eating she went to fresh up & again, all she can see is luxury. After the depressing hours of her life she loved the warm bath.

Soon, the day passed , with her getting to know things around. Evening arrives & she lit up the whole palace with oil lamp. She waited for her husband but he didnt appeared. As night drawn, she slept on a king sized bed, on a huge lavish room, tired of being alone the whole day.

Soon, she felt the bed dips as if someone climbs up the bed. She opened her eyes but there is darkness all around. Prince Rishab watch her with a smile playing on his lips, as she tried to adjust the eyes to the darkness. The girl he wished for is now, by his side, all his.

Madhu, stopped breathing as she feel a hand on her stomach. Soon she felt the weight of someone upon her.
"Its me & here no one can enter other than me" she heard her husband whispering in her ears huskily, while his hands squeeze her flat stomach. She stiffened, but she has to do it someday. He is her husband & he has rights on her body, on her soul, to consummate.
Keeping his eyes on her, looking at her intently, he rolled on top of her pressing her underneath him. He first kissed her forehead, relaxing her tensed form. Then, coming down he kissed her eyes, corner of her mouth, all over her face, skipping her lips. He feels elated. She is a pure beauty. Soon, his hands started roaming all over her body over the fabric creating goose bumps & she like a shy bride, let him do whatever he wants with her. He turns her sideways on her stomach & slid down the zip of her gown. His chest being pressed against her back. Madhu took ragged breaths as he slide off the gown from her body. He started showering kisses on her bare skin on her back, making her clutch the sheet as he removed his own clothes. He turned her around this time, adoring her nude body, as he trails his hands up from her stomach to her breast. Not following her control, a soft moan escaped her lips as he touched her soft flesh. He looks back at her face & taking her arms he wrapped them around his neck, letting her feel him. In darkness madhu can vaguely make up the shape of a man. As she runs her hands over his body, through the taunts muscles, she can guess very well that he is well built.
He came back to her face, & close the distance between them as he lock his lips with her, devouring her mouth with all love he has for her. Meanwhile his hands went down on her private parts, stroking her parts. Leaving her lips, he kissed all over her body, sucking & nibbling on her curves taking his time. He kneeled in front of her as they united themselves.

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Madhubala opens her eyes after the passionate love making throughout the night, to find herself wrapped in velvety soft sheet. She sit up but find no one beside her, but the creases on the bed sheet, clarify that she hasnt been dreaming. Then she recalls his words, as he said that he'll show up in evening. Leaving the bed, she went to do the daily chores, living her new life.

Soon the evening arrives & true to his words, Rishab came back. Madhu was standing near a huge window pane of their sleeping chamber when she feels his hands crawling up her stomach from back. For a moment she froze but then, she knows it can be no one else other than her husband.
"How are the arrangements Queen. I sincerely hope, u are not having any problem here" he whispered in her ears.
"No.. Everything is wonderful here" she replied softly.
"Glad !! I will do everything for u" he said huskily as he turn her around & took her lips in his kissing her with longing as he was away from her the whole day.
Madhu felt his lips moving against her, then his lips going down on her jaw lines to her chest & within seconds her grown slipped off from her body, she can touch him, she can run her hands on his body, she can make out his figure BUT SHE cant see him. Its dark & she cant see his face.
"I cant see ur face.. I havent seen you" she said, her breaths were ragged and at once she feels him stops his mouth & finger activities on her body.
"Does it matter that how i look ? Doesnt my love & my loyalty matters to u ?" She feels his breath fanning on her face as he questions her.
"It do. I just want to know who my husband it. I dont know u, i havent seen u, u dont come in day time." She said in one go.
"Madhubala.. U know my love for u, and i love u with my heart & soul." He cups her face as he speaks gently to her "Trust me, trust my love for u, trust ur husband's words, as long as u keep ur trust on me.. We will be happy. I'll never let any misfortune touch u, u'll be in my safe embrace & i always wants to hold u to myself"
His words said it all & without any other question she hides herself in his embrace submitting herself to him, as he moved towards the bed with her.

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Days passed & life was a bliss to Princess Madhubala. The life she had been craved for, is now showering love upon her. She can't ask more. Though not in day, but every night without a fail Rishab came to the palace spending his time with her, being personification of love & desire, he, each night showered her with his love & true to his words, he proved himself to be a loyal, loving & caring husband & Madhubala loves him a lot as he is everything for her.
But inspite of having everything she missed her family. Rishab was only with her in night but throughout the day madhu fight with boredom & soon it overtook her & she grew dull, which didnt went unnoticed by Rishab.

"What makes u sad Queen ?" He asked concerned, one night after their passionate moment.
"Am missing my family. They were forced to abandoned me. King & queen are must be stressed up for me" she replied shakily.
"One day or other u had to leave them right" he tried to pacify her while stroking her cheeks.
"Yes, but they would atleast knew that am good & safe, they would be peace at heart but in this way they are not." She explained.
"What can i do for u ?" He asked as he is always ready to do anything for her happiness.
"Can.. I.. Can i call my sisters here. Once they see me happy, they can converse the same to king & queen too" she asked hesitantly.
"Pardon Queen. I cant allow them to come over here" Rishab said straight away. She got hurt by his answer, but didnt said anything. He too know she is hurt, but he cant do it. He simply took she in his arms patting her to sleep.

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He observed her for days, as she speak less with him. She seems dull, & he cant take it. So one evening he give up on his prior decision.
"I cant see u like this." He admit as they sit on bed with madhu leaning on his chest, her back pressed against his chest, his arms around her petite fame.
"Am happy" she assured.
"If u want, u can call ur sisters here" he spoke in one go.
"What ?" She turn around, trying to measure his expression in darkness.
"Yes u can" he repeats for her.
"But u said.." She trails off.
"I had a reason." He again pull her back in his arms.
"But, remember u will be responsible for the downfall in our relation" he said.
"Why are u saying like this ?" She asked distressed.
"U are calling them, but be careful. Dont let them influence u. Am urs, only urs & u are mine. As long as u kept our love & trust intact, we'll always be together" those were his last words before the morning dawns & he flew away leaving a bright smile on madhu's lips as she got permission to met her sisters.

*Next Morning*

Feeling elated madhu waited for her sisters to appear as Prince Rishab has already made arrangements, sending the messengers.

"Madhu.." She heard one of her sister's exclamation. Madhu turn around, to find her both sisters emotionally looking at her, standing in doorstep. Tears formed in madhu's eyes & she run upto her both elder sisters, hugging them.
"U are alive !" Trishna said as she caress madhu's hairs.
"Oh.. Madhu, u dont know what we went through when we heard about ur dismay. We thought we have lost out baby sister" ria said hugging madhu.
"Yes dii.. Game of fate. I never knew what was going to happen. But whatever had happened it happened for good." Madhu smiled brushing off the tears.
"And come in di. I was waiting for u only." Madhu enthusiastically took them in & that is when both the sister's gaze fell on the marvellous decor of the palace & they became speechless.
"Plz.. Be seated queens. I'll get delicacies for u" madhu giggled & went for arrangement.
"Madhu lives here..i mean.." Trishna whispered to ria.
"Yeah.. I know. Am shocked too. I mean am happy to see her alive, but i think she is a maid here. Looking at her all past misfortunes, she cant be the queen" ria concluded & trishna nodded in agreement. Meanwhile madhu was back with all food items, serving them with her own hands, though her husband offered to leave some invisible servants, but madhu denied.

"Umm..Its very tasty madhu. U too have it" ria said while gobbling on food.
"No dii.. U have, am full" madhu politely refused.
"I feel sorry for u madhu." Ria said with sympathy.
"Why ?" Madhu asked confused.
"We are so glad that u are alive but, being a princess u are living a life of maid, doing all works. Wish u too got married like us to a human." Trishna explained as madhu made confused face not getting a word.
"Dii.. Am having a very blissful life with my husband. I dont need anything more" madhu said.
"Yeah.. But u have to work here for ur survival. Do ur master make u work all day ?" Ria popped up with a question.
"Work ! Am not getting u. Who is master & why will i work form him ?"
"Madhu, obviously u are not allowed to live in such palace just like that. So, its natural that u are one of the maids here" ria said making madhu baffled.
"No dii.. This palace is of my husband & he treats me no less than a queen" madhu cleared the confusion.
"What ?" Trishna choked on her food.
"This marvellous palace belongs to ur husband ?" Ria asked unbelievably.
"Yes, and trust me dii, am good here" madhu assured thinking that her sisters are worried for her "and plz convey the same to father too, & mother, plz assure her that her daughter is safe, now that u have seen me."

Both nodded their heads unable to digest the information that madhu is the queen here.
"And this, a small gift from me & my husband" madhu forwards them some very precious gems & jewellery seeing which their eyes popped out. Bidding madhu with fake smile, and lot of envy & questions in their mind, both the sisters went away.

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As night drawn, madhu waited with anticipated breath for her husband to appears. She has many things to narrate to him. As the night starts shining in its dark glory, Rishab entered their lavish room through window. Madhu feels some movement & turn around to see a figure standing. Knowing that its her husband, she quickly covered their distance & flung her arms onto his neck thanking him.
"Thankyou so much for letting my sisters here. Am so overwhelmed to met them after this long" madhu rejoiced. Prince Rishab smiled, keeping his hand on her small back, hugging her close, content to see the happy smile on her smile & her overjoyed self. She got back to her form like she used to be before.
"U know when they came here, they were so surprised & that thought am the maid here and they.." Madhu excitedly narrate her whole day event to him, as he listen to her patiently sitting on bed, taking her in his arms, though he didnt like the part of madhu, his queen being tagged as maid.
"U are happy ?" He asked her, as she ended.
"Very" she cheered.
"Hmm.." He hugged her close " plz remember, what i told u, dont get influence by them. For ur happiness, i'll not stop u from meeting them & they will come back tomorrow"
"Tomorrow.. But how do u know ? They hadnt said anything about it to me" she said innocently breaking the hug. Rishab looks at her beautiful, brown orbs, full of trust & innocence or everyone, she has no idea of this cunning world But he has, and he can very well guess her sisters by the way she narrated them.
"U will see tomorrow" he said huskily ending the conversation as he took her lips in his, while lowering her down on the bed, making love to her, to his heart content & this time she reciprocated it too with equal desire.

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"Our luck was always this hard. She got everything & we got nothing. Now too, she got every priceless, unique jeweleries, luxuries & look at us. Being a king too our husband, cant afford the gems that madhu had given to us last night" trishna snorted as they both the sisters made their way back to palace as, predicated by Rishab.
"I know trishna. Last night i fought with my husband about the same. But for now, we need to know how madhu got all these & who her husband is" ria said cleverly & step into the palace calling out for madhu. Madhu was surprised at first but then delighted & starts serving them with all the comforts.
"Madhu.. Err.. Where is ur husband, we came to met him." Trishna said.
"Woh.. He has gone out for work & he will be back in night only" madhu replied.
"Hmm.. So what is the occupation of ur husband ?" Ria asked, to which madhu fidget for answer, cause she never questioned her husband about his works or whereabouts, but she has seen bows & arrows which he brought with him every night.
"Hunting.. Ya, he is a hunter" madhu formed an answer, while ria & trishna exchanged a look. Being a hunter & to earn this much wealth, its impossible.
"Oh.. And how does he looks ? Tell us, madhu, at least feed us with some information of husband so that we can tell our parents that what kind of man he is" ria said venom filled voiced which went unnoticed by madhu.


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"Good.. I havent seen him, but His appearance is good." Madhu replied as both gawk at her.
"U havent seen ur husband yet ?" Both exclaimed in unison.
"Umm.. No.. Actually he come in night & went back in day.. Soo.." Madhu trails off. As both the sisters looks at her in shock. First they thought her husband is a robber & not hunter, but now madhu is confusing them. Again, taking as much gems & jewellery as they can by pursuing madhu they left from there only to be back in the next day.

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Days passed & this continued, whenever they come to the place they took some precious things with them, & used to form questions in madhu's mind. And madhu, as usual never hide anything from Prince Rishab. She used to spill out every single thing her sister said to him.
"You should stop seeing them now that ur purpose was over" Rishab said one night as they lay on bed under the sheet, with madhu cuddle in his arms, her body above his, her head resting on his chest. Rishab, got negative vibes from them, though madhu never questioned him, but he can feel her questioning gaze.

*Next Morning*

As usual, both the sisters dropped themselves in madhu's palace early in the morning, this time with evil plan in their mind. After talking for sometime, beating around the bush, they came to the point.
"U know madhu, people are dying outside. Everyday corpse has been founded" trishna started.
"Why.. And how ?" Madhu asked tensed.
"Right after ur marriage, all these start to happen & u know whats the common thing, each person is being killed brutally by a monster" ria feeds.
"Monster ?" Madhy asked.
"And now we are scared to come here even" trishna said.
"Why ?" Madhu asked & both the sisters took deep breath making most saddest face.
"We pity u madhu" cried ria hugging madhu.
"What ?" Madhu said confused.
"U have never seen ur husband right.. And he never let u see his face, & always comes in night. Madhu am afraid that u are married to a monster, as predicted by Oracle kuku." Ria said.
"What all nuisance are u talking of ?" Madhu stands up angrily listening to their words. How can they accused her husband of something so vile.
"I know him, he is not a monster. He is man with heart who shower unconditional love on me, who can do everything for my happiness. He is loving & caring man who cant ever be a monster" madhu said with head held high.
"Really.. Then why he never let u see his face cause he too knows he is the vilest thing ever walk on this earth. He is the one to kill all our countrymen & loot them. Thats how he made this palace, he is not a hunter. He is man eater" trishna said furiously.
"Stop it !! He was right, i shouldnt have called u two here." Angry tears flowed through her eyes.
"Yeah cause he knew, that if we cause here we might know his hidden identity" retort trishna.
"Let it be trishna" ria intervene "she has became blind in love for a monster" ria looks at madhu.
"U know why he is with u, why is he keeping u alive ? Probably he wants one of his own kind baby from u, and after u give him that, he will kill u too. He is just fattening u to fulfill his needs & then he will kill u off. The prophecy was right, u are married to a monster & am scared for ur life" Ria faked a concerned tone as she saw blood drained face of madhu. Ria smirks at trishna, & trishna reciprocate.
"Anyways if u wanna save ur life just kill him off, when he is asleep. We are ur sisters, and we care for u, even if u dont care for us" trishna snorted & taking ria she walked out of palaces, adding the fire spark in their love relation.

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Madhu's heart refused to believe any of those what they said but she keeps on thinking. What if they are right, but her husband told her to trust him & she love him with her everything. How can she kill him. The whole day madhu cried to herself thinking of her fate & by evening she came to a conclusion.
She would see his face tonight, when he will be asleep, if he is was she thinks of him then she will sleep back & if he turns out to be a monster she will kill him there itself but cutting his throat.

As night arrives, madhu secretly hide a sharp razor under her pillow & kept an oil lamp sideways. She waited for him restlessly holding her breath. After what felt like hours, Rishab arrives & find madhu sleeping on the edge of the bed. He went to her & pulls her closer to his chest, knowing full well that she is not sleeping cause she always awaits him. Madhu didnt said anything & silently followed his guide, hesitantly. He peel off her gown & rolled on top of her pressing her nude form beneath his weight. He feels something odd in her, as she didnt reciprocate the way she used to be but then, he assumed the reason & he decided to tell the news in the morning, right now he wanted to unite themselves & he did so.

Hours of night passed & sleep was far away from her eyes. Her plan kept recalling in her mind. She puts her hand under the pillow & draws out the sharp razor. She turns side ways to find him sleeping peacefully with his back to her. She raise herself & wrapped a sheet slowly around herself covering herself. She lit the oil lamp with shivering hand. Her heart screamed at her not to do so, but her mind provoked her & soon tears started flowing down her cheeks. Holding oil lamp in one hand & razor in other she hover over him. For the first time ever, inspite of him telling her explicitly she is disobeying him, & is going to see his face.

As the pale light of oil lamp falls on Rishab face, madhu gasped softly in shock. Its Prince Rishab, the God of Love is her husband. She smiled admist her tears & she kept looking mesmerised at the handsome face of her husband. Never in her dreams she thought it could happen. God of love taking her as his wife. Her hands tremble, as the razor slip off her hand & in the process few flickers on hot oil got pours on the arms of sleeping Rishab. He flinch back in pain, as soon as the hot oil touched his skin. Madhu looked at him wide eyes, as he came wide awake & that is when he saw her with oil lamp. His painful expression quickly turned into extreme anger but then within few seconds, it got replaced by hurt. Madhu observed his each expression minutely.

"U destroyed everything between us. U finished it off" he spoke to her impassively as he raised himself, picking up his bows & arrows in one hand while the other hand rest on her wounded arm.
"No.. Please.. I did wrong.. But i did this to.." Madhu stutter as she saw him moving towards the window.
"Doesnt matter what u did & for what" he said to her looking at her in her eyes.
"Pardon.. Forgive me, i was scared.. Dont leave me, i will die without u" madhu fell on her knees in front of him begging him as she instinct told her that something very devastating is gonna happen. Rishab looks at her painfully, but turned away to go.
"Please.. Dont go.. I will do everything for u.. Dont leave you.. I Love You" she cried frantically holding his hand.
"LOVE DONT HAVE ANY LIFE WITHOUT TRUST !" Those were his last words to her as he removes her hold & flies off, going away from her forever, never to see her again. Within seconds everything got destroyed, a happy blissful life smashed down into empty ness & regret. Madhu cried bitterly, calling him but he didnot returned back. She killed their love that night.

As morning dawns, she find herself tired of crying throughout the night. Human doubt & stupidity turned out to be the enemies of the irrevocable love. She looked around the palace for him but only she could find is void in every nooks & corner. She sink down crying.
"No, i cant let my love go away like that. Its my fault & i'll will do everything to get him back. Either i'll get him back or i will give my life in search of him." She thought determined & went out in search of him. As soon as she stepped out of the palace, it got disappeared. She found herself in the same meadow from which her life started. She roamed in every inch of mountains & forest, in search of him crying for him but couldnot find him. Finally seeing her condition the west wind decided to help her.

"Maiden.. Go to Goddess of Beauty Dipali's temple. She is Mother of Prince Rishab, only she can get u to him, if she wish" It said. Madhu felt relieved for a moment & runs down the hills to the plains to the temple of Dipali, praying, crying day & night for her to appear.

Dipali looks at her & smiled to herself, finally her son had done his job, he brought madhubala to her feet, crying & begging like anything, her face pale, her beauty is covered with tears, guilt & worry.

"Queen.. " madhu kneeled before her wretched, as Dipali smirked. Madhu asked for Her son Prince rishab, but She had once messed with dipali so how can dipali give away just like that. Dipali made her go through hell by not telling her anything about rishab, making her withering in pain of lost love.

After what felt like weeks, she decided to play with madhu.
"I can give u a chance to meet Prince Rishab." She said & madhu looks at her hopefully.
"U need to perform 3 tasks..
Separating mixed grains within one night,
Got types of fleeces of sheep up the mountain,
And to get makeup box of underworld (hell)'s queen" dipali put the condition.
"I will do everything for him." Madhu said.

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"Prince Rishab.." Bittuji runs into Rk's chamber to find his chief's arms wounded & he drowned in melancholy. Bittuji knows why his chief is grieving. Few weeks ago only, the news was disclosed that Prince Rishab was having A secret Relation with The Beautiful maiden Madhubala, awar from everyone, behind Goddess Dipal's back. As Queen Dipali Came to know about it, she was hell angry on him, & as punishment he was grounded in his chamber. The news of their secret relation disclosed the night when he left madhu for her betrayal & returned back forever but he couldnt stopped himself from loving her.
"She is here" bittuji informed about madhu.
"Tell her to go away" rk said in hoarse voice.
"Queen has given her 3 tasks to get u" bittuji said & rk's head snapped to him.
"What ?" He exclaimed & bittuji feeds him with all information.
"Tell her to leave all these. She is putting her life in danger" rishab said restlessly, and even worried as its not only about her alone, its about their baby too. Yes, she is bearing his child. The other morning he was going to tell her but she destroyed everything in the night itself.
"Too late chief, she has already taken up the first task & its impossible to separate all grains. Queen dipali has done this deliberately to get her under her control to punish her for lifetime" bittuji said. Rishab looks out of the window for sometime before ordering bittuji.
"Get her the army of ants with magic spell". Yes, Prince Rishab is the Rebellious guy who rules himself & do what he wants. The ants helped madhu thought out the night to separate all kind of grains.

Next, day when dipali came to the chamber she founded all grains separated & she knew that rishab had helped her, else she would never to able to do it, she scoff at her. Likewise, madhu completed the second task too, as other gods helped her seeing her determination & love for her husband, her passion & sacrifice to get him back.

The 3rd task was deadly, as she has to go to underworld & living person can never get back from hell. Still by following god's guidance, she reached hell & took the makeup box from the queen of underworld.

On way back, madhu was exhausted. She was near to complete her task.
"I will met Prince Rishab, but my condition.." She was tired & wear out.
"He wont look at me like this, in this state" she thought depressed & a thought stuck her mind as she looks at the small wooden make up box in her hand. Cant she use a lil of make up to beauty herself ?? The box is fill with magic spell, which is use to beautify the immortals but is deadly for mortal. Madhubala, being a mortal, as she opened the box, all she could see in black smoke & the next moment she was unconscious on the ground.

Dipali smirked seeing her, and Rishab break free dipali's spell seeing his beloved on such fragile condition. Forgiving her for her deeds, he pick her up in his arms & flew off to the immortal gods, on mount of Olympus. There he narrate his love for her & His mother's disapproval.
"I can get her back into consciousness, but u both need to get married officially. U are keeping relation with her, but u are not married to her yet." The god said.

Soon, they got married & Madhu was given an immortal potion to drink, after which she too become immortal.

Things sorted as Prince Rishab starts living in heaven with Madhubala & the earth was ruled by Dipali, once again, soon the mortal people forget about madhubala & Dipali once again became the undisputed Queen of beauty on the earth, as people starts worshipping her again.

"Sometime irrational human emotions overpowers the greatest strength on the earth, LOVE..
But the power of Love, is strong enough to keep its traces forever, accompanied by Trust !"


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Edited by --Evil_Angel-- - 9 years ago
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Res... First... I m a don!
Beautiful story...
It was such a visual treat... Yeah i m saying visual becos u written so well and i could visualize everything in front of my eyes...

God of love is EROS right? Then how come it become Rishab? Chalo there is an R in Eros... So okay..

I knew it! I knew it already when rk kept warning madhu to trust him and their love but not trust his families words that madhu will mess anf go straight against his words and do something stupid and suffer and the same happened...

God! Are they really madhu's sisters? How could those two bitches be so jealous of their own sister? How can thry envy of madhu's happiness? I hate those two witchy ladies... They should havr been punished by Rk...

I kinda felt the ending slightly rushed... I have a doubt... U have written madhu was bearing his child.. But he left her before letting her know bcos she betrayed his trust... Till then okay.. Then madhu did all the tasks to get back to her love... With Rk's hidden help she completed it..
He actually didnt go against his mother but also won his love.. He got her back.. And Dipali become the goddess of beauty... Thats all perfect... But only thing i wanna know is... Madhu ever came to know abt her being pregnant with rk's child? Or when she turned immortal she lost thr baby? I have this huge doubt... Can immortals have babies? No right? Then what happened to Rishbala's child? He died? If so... I feel so sad...

Oh i also have another doubt... Why Rk refused to show his face to madhu? Why he didnt? If he had then she would have forced to see him stealthily right?

Anyways, it was yet another unique story of urs... With a happy ending... I loved it...
Thanks dear...
Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update. ..aani. .
madhu can't see rishab. .
and rishab said it's doesn't matter if she see him or not ..
only trust was important. .
trishna and ria .. 😡..hates them..
they wash madhu mind. .
because of them rishbala happy life destroy. .
depali. . 😡..even hate her..
she destroy madhu life. .she made madhu alone ..
now madhu only wants to meet rishab. .depali made it complicated. .
finally rishbala are married. .
rishbala live in heaven 😕
awesome ending. .
thanks for pm
Edited by sapnaf52 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res.
unres.

Nice update..
Well written..
Madhu didn't see his face.
But that is not problem for her.
But her sister's made that a big issue.
Rk warned her already.But she was in dilemma.
Small doubt make big mistake.
Because of her beauty ,she affected..
Finally Rishbala are married..
Nice end..
Edited by dharsii - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice start
Poor madhu
Because of the goddess jealousy she's being punished
Happy rk didn't completely destroy her life but what's his plan
Does he plan to marry her pretending to be the monster that way he gets his love his mother doesn't find out n madhu gets her prince in disguise of a beast who will turn into the prince later
So can't wait for u to continue
Plz update soon n send me pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Heatsha8176

Nice start
Thankyou..


Poor madhu
Because of the goddess jealousy she's being punished
Yeah.. Her beauty became a curse to her


Happy rk didn't completely destroy her life but what's his plan
Does he plan to marry her pretending to be the monster that way he gets his love his mother doesn't find out n madhu gets her prince in disguise of a beast who will turn into the prince later
Hahahaa.. Something similar to that..


So can't wait for u to continue
Plz update soon n send me pm

Thankyiu so much dear for reading & commenting :))
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Posted: 9 years ago
Updated on page 15
Pms later.. with another story :))
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Posted: 9 years ago
outstanding update
loved the end
Edited by -DZ- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
madhu's sis are evil nd jealous of her
prince stopped her for meeting them
madhu is suffering coz of her beauty but her love is more powerful
she find her husband back
thanx for pm

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