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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Congrats on the OS! Thanks 4 a pm! Love fairy tales! Fantastic OS! beautifully written! a modern take on Cinderella story! Geet's dad died! she has 2 suffer so much! hate Rani, Tasha n Sasha! Geet works 4 KA! Dadi invites Geet to the ball n arranges a dress 4 her! Maan bolwed over! Maaneet dance! Geet left! Maan questions dadi! Maan goes 2 get Geet! Rani pushes Sasha! Geet refuses Maan! he confesses n proposes! Maaneet together! perfect end! 😊👏⭐️

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hermosoanu123

@hermosoanu123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Loved the note nd cindrella finaly got the prince charming ...loved it

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@Endgame

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

What a connection ..watching Cinderella now

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tabby999

@tabby999

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Beautiful Os loved it

The note at the end was lovely

Thanks

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Commelina

@Commelina

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Hello to the author there

This is my first time reading your work. And I must tell you your writing is simply beautiful.

First of all I need to confess my love for fairytales. And there are days when I go back and watch all the animated versions. Animated because they are cuter. Lol.

So when I saw a Maaneet version of Cinderella I was excited.

It is very well written. And I really annoyed reading it.

I was imagining Geet in a blue gown, Maan in tuxedo and I don't know why Janam janam song from Dilwale came to my mind. Tasha and Sasha as the evil step sisters and Dadimaa as the Fairy mother. That was innovative. Enjoyed reading the stepmom too.

And our Maan as the charming Prince that was like a dream come true.

I really really loved the last where he decided to go with his headt even when she said that she wasn't Geet.

You've put the story so well.

Geet Handa was celebrated as Geet Khurana.

And Pinky found her Prince too.

And not to forget I loved your note.

Thank you for writing this.

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Lovely OS dear

Loved it!! 👏

I love all the fairy tale stories dear ⭐️

Beautifully penned

Maaneet and fairy tale was a beautiful combo

Loved modern Cinderella !!

Absolutely in love with ur fairy narration

Wonderful work

Thanks for writing it on maaneet Deariee

😊

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Lovely note dear

Thanks for the pm

Hope u write more of fairy tale stories on maaneet

😊

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

wow...cindrella's modern adaptation of maaneet.

It was beautifully written

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Beautiful OS Janemann.. I love fairytales too 😳
Love it ❤️ 😉

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Drashtilove
Congrats..wow cinderella..your note i loved most

Thanks Sabina ❤️
I'm glad you liked it, more so the note

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