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Devakshi FF: Small Moments

Part 18

Just as Dev looked up to instruct the driver to turn the car around, the car rolled to a stop and the driver said, "Aa gayein sir." Dev whipped his head to the left and sure enough, there stood Elena's house. The main door was slightly ajar because the Police were still around for last minute queries. Dev didn't know what to do.

On one hand he wanted to jump out of the car and run to Sonakshi and never let her go. But on the other hand, he didn't want to see Sonakshi with Ritwik. When he didn't move, the driver said, "Sir yahi hai who ghar jahan aap jana chahtey the." Dev looked back at driver who looked at him expectantly. He nodded slowly and stepped out of the car. For the next five minutes he just stood there looking at the door.

"Kya karoon?" He thought to himself.

Finally deciding that he would just check on Sonakshi and leave, he took a few steps forward. "Par agar main ussey chhorkeye nahin ja paya toh?" He wondered. Resolving his dilemma he said, "Nahin. Main Sonakshi ko ekbaar dekhey bina nahin jaa sakta. Who theek hogi toh main bhi theek rahunga" and with that he went to the door and pushed it opened and slowly stepped in. The first person he saw was Ritwik who was talking to Prakash about something. The moment Ritwik spotted Dev his eyes became as wide as saucers, "Mr. Dixit? Aap yahan?" Before replying to Ritwik dev looked around but Sonakshi was nowhere to be found.

"Haan. Batata hoon." Dev said nodding. But he first went to Prakash and clarified every single detail about the incident and Kushal's current situation. After bidding adieu to Prakash, Dev sat down beside Ritwik on the Sofa. "Sonakshi theek hai naah Ritwik?" Dev asked in despair. "Haan Mr. Dixit. Woh theek hai. Kuch nahin hua ussey. I came at the right time." Dev smiled a sad smile, which reminded Ritwik of Sonakshi's sad smile. "Thank you Ritwik, ussey bachaney ke liye. I will always be grateful to you for that" Dev said sincerely. Ritwik looked at Dev closely, "Par Mr. Dixit, aap yahan kar kya rahey hai? Aapki toh shaadi hai naah aaj?" He asked confused.

"Shaadi thi. Ab nahin hai" Dev replied. Ritwik eyes widened once again. "Ab kyun nahin hai?" Ritwik asked even though he knew exactly why the marriage had been called of. Dev's face said it all. Ritwik smiled internally but nothing showed on his face. "Kyunki jissey main pyar nahin karta, main uskeye saath kaise rehta?" Dev said standing up from the couch and walking to the window. "Par ab kya fayda" he said softly. But Ritwik heard and this made him confused, "Matlab? Aap toh yahan Sonakshi ke liye aye hai naah? Toh who yahin toh hai" Dev turned to face Ritwik. "Pata hai." He paused. He looked at the direction of the room, Ritwik said Sonakshi was in, earlier when they were talking to Prakash. He started at it longingly. She was safe with Ritwik. He was sure now.

"Ab main chalta hoon. Uska khayal rakhna Ritwik" Dev said to Ritwik, who was still utterly confused. "haan who toh main rakhunga" Dev was satisfied. Dev continued, "Mujhey pata hai you'll take care of her. After all, you love her as much as I do." Dev said, almost as if he was talking to himself. The moment Ritwik heard this he stopped Dev, "Ek minute, aapneye "love" se kya mean kiya?" Dev looked at Ritwik and said, "Jo log aksar mean karteye hai when they say a boy loves a girl." And this just made Ritwik burst into laughter. "hahahaha- Apko lagta hai...hahahahaha...main Sonakshi si se waise wala pyar karta hoon?" He asked wiping his eyes. Now it was Dev's turn to look confused. "Arey Dev babu, when I said Sonakshi is my childhood friend, I meant just that. Friend. Woh meri best friend hai. Bilkul meri behen jaisi. In fact kai baar Sonakshi neye mujhey rakhi bhi pehenayi hai." Ritwik said winking at Dev.

Dev's jaw almost hit the floor. "Par phir who photo?" Dev wondered aloud. Ritwik paused, "kaunsi photo?" Dev whipped out his phone and showed Ritwik the photo, explaining when and why it had been taken. Ritwik smiled even wider. "Arey yeh toh tab thi jab Sonakshi aapko miss karkey ro rahi thi and I was comforting her. " He put a hand on Dev's shoulder. "Chinta mar karo aap. Aapki jagah koi nahin le sakta. Sona neye who jagah bus aapko hi di hai. Ab jaiye jaakey dekhiye ki jagah abhi hai bhi ya, kisi aur ko de diya usneye" Ritwik said, laughing at Dev again. Dev cracked a relieved smile. He couldn't believe it. And here he was planning to go back without coming in. How stupid would he have been.

Without wasting anymore of his time he made his way to Sonakshi's room. Sonakshi stood at the window of her room and looked at the stars. Hearing a knock she said, "Door khula hai Ritwik" because she knew her Mashi Mesho were tired and asleep by now. "Ritwik bahar dining room mein hai." The moment she heard his voice she turned around with a small jump. "Dev?!" She almost yelled. "Shhh. Sonakshi! Tumharey Maashi mesho so rahey hai naah? Dheerey bolo!" He said with a lopsided grin, while Sonakshi just stared.

"Aapki shaadi?" Sonakshi queried still standing near the window like a statue. "Saari taiyaariyan ho gayi hai. Mandap me baithneye se pehley socha aapseye Mil loon Dr. Bose." Dev replied cooly taking a step towards her. Sonakshi didn't know how to reply to that. "Kya hua Dr. Bose? Plan achha nahin laga?" He said stopping right before her. Seeing him in front of her, took all of Sonakshi's rational thoughts away.

Caressing her cheeks lightly Dev said softly, "Uss bas***d neye tumheye kuch kiya to nahin?" Sonakshi nodded her head in negative, having lost her ability to speak. "Kitna bada gadha tha main" Dev continued. "Jab main tumseye alag reh hi nahin sakta, pata nahin kyun maine koshish ki." Seeing the dried tears he said, "Bohot rulaya na maine tumheye? Ab aur nahin. Sonakshi having somewhat regained her senses said, "par Natasha?" Dev smiled. "Natasha se shaadi meri majboori thi Sonakshi. Who main tumheye protect karney ke liye kar raha tha. Kyun kissey, you don't need to know now, kyunki all has been taken care of. Ab kisisey darr nahin. I will protect you." Dev said slowly pushing a strand of her hair back as it fell on her face.

He hated seeing those dried tears on her cheek so he bent his head slightly and kissed her on her left cheek first and then on her right and Sonakshi just stood their reveling in the feelings it erupted in her. Spotting a small scratch on her neck, and he winced internally thinking how it must have hurt sonakshi even if it wasn't big. That was undoubtedly Kushal's fault he left a soft kiss on top of it too. Sonakshi sucked in a deep breathe and almost grew limp in his arms.

Satisfied by her reaction Dev stood back up straight and took a step back. "Toh aaj uss raat waali baat ko khatam karein?" He asked smiling at her. Giving her no chance to say anything he said, "Uss raat main yeh kehna chahtha tha ki...I" and Sonakshi could hear her own heartbeat once again.

"I love you Sonakshi. I have since that first day you bumped into me uss medicine shop ke bahar. And tab seye ab tak, har roz who pyaar badhta gaya. And now I am in a state jahan tumharey bina main koi bhi scenario soch hi nahin sakta."

"Itna ki jab tumheye chot lagti hai, I feel the pain. Tum meri jaan ban gayi ho Sonakshi. And I never want to part with my life." He finished. Taking Sonakshi's hand in his, he put it on his heart and Sonakshi was surprised to find it thudding as loud as hers was. "See what you've done to me Dr. Bose?" He asked smiling at her.

"Kya aap apni puri life is pagal, erratic, coffee pe haq jataney waaley ke saath bitana chahengi?" He asked looking at her earnestly.

Sonakshi's heart just about stopped beating. She had never imagined her dream to come true. And now that it had she had no words. He was here. He loved her. And he wanted to spend the rest of his life with her. Could anything be better than this? So mustering up all the strength she had left in her, she said, "Haan Dev" and that was all he needed to hear.

Within moments his lips were on hers and her hands were in his hair. They kissed each other as if their life depended on it. Dev smiled into the kiss and bit on Sonakshi's lower lip which made her gasp and open her mouth granting him the perfect opportunity to deepen the kiss. Only when they felt the scarcity of air did they break apart. Dev touched his forehead with her's and said, "I love you."

And in that moment nothing could go wrong for Sonakshi. She had him with her and they would be together forever. That was the bliss she always wanted. So she smiled up at him and said, "I love you too Dev." Before pulling him in for another kiss.

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Toh aaj ke loye buss itna hi!

Can't believe the FF is almost over!

:')

Just two more parts to Go!

Happy reading!

Also confession scene achha nahin laga toh don't hit me please!

Tried my best!

Hope you like it! ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww... Deeps di... Loved ur ff... And also the confession... Simple yet beautiful...
I loved it really... Kushal is really a haggard and phir se aya hai sona ko pareshan karne... And ritwick is also soo good.. Aisa dost hona chahiye...

Dev ka pyaar ritwick ko dekhke toot gya... Par thank god driver ne ghar pohucha dia... And phir dev ka confession was... Awww... Loved it... Really... Sona got all she wanted...

Thr passionate kiss was also too good... Thank u fr fulfilling this...

I wll also miss this update... Want an epilogue also di... Pls...

Jaldi update kariyo... Cant wait fr thr marriage...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mishti, I want to kill you and hug at the same time for both the updates. The moment i read Kushal's name 😡, i was feeling like to comment even before reading the update. But second update managed everything. It was beautiful just like Devakshi. Thank God Ritwick clarified everything, vrna Dev babau toh ulte pav laut jaate.
I liked their confession, it was direct and simple. Looking forward to the last chapters and i hope you will come up with something else after this.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh Mishti, you scared me...Pehle Kushal ki entry and then Dev ki MU..OMG...😲
Thank god double update diya, nahi to kitna wait karna padta, aur soch soch ke humari halat kharab ho jaati ki kahin Dev vapas to nahi chala gaya😆

Beautiful confession dear...loved it.❤️

All's well that ends well...😊. Finally Devakshi❤️
So 2 more chapters to go...waiting..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Damn this Khushal again comes after Sonakshi he is really obsessed
thanks to Ritwick that finally he was stopped at the right time
and polices took him away yes now Dev has to make sure he gets send to maximum security 😆
Dev seeing the photo of Ritwick and Sonakshi thinks that he has lost her to Ritwick and now he feels its his punishment
but wow I was so glad when he decided to go into the house and Ritwick explains him that Sonakshi is his childhood friend she is like his sister its only Dev that she wants and he tells Dev to go into the room and see her
the confession was simple yet it held love and its more important about the people been in love confessing then making special arrangements that can always come later


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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG!!!😳
it was amazing👏
aur chinta mat karo confession scene bahut achcha tha😊
aur pehla update padh kar main to dar hi gayi😕
mujhe laga ki tumne to cliffhanger de diya
but thank god u continued👏
and thanks for the pm
and update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 17
Oh no...yeh toh kushal hai...
Main na ab issey sach mein maar dalungi...
Thank God...Ritwik saved her...
Aur yeh kya?? Dev thinks he lost her??
Next update abhi padhti hun...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 18
Wow...finally Dev realised that Ritwik is only her friend...
Aur confession bhi ho gaya...
Yipee!!
Waiting eagerly for the next part...
Aur haan...iss FF ke baad epilogue bhi chahiye...
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mishti sachiii bolu to i wanted to kill u when I read first part... 😡
But in second part I want to hug u 🤗
Simple and cute confession I liked it 😳
Tm suspense queen ho yaar... 😆
But but i'm sad ki soon dis awsum ff will end 😭 can't u extend it plzzz 😒
Thanks for Pm 😳
Waitingggfor next part so post soon dear n if u can't extend it den come soon with next ff 😊
Ye lo do do update ek saath krne k lye 🤗 ❤️ 🤗
I ❤️ u 😉 😛 😊 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mishti_94

The update is hereee!

No more waiting! 😉

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Devakshi FF: Small Moments

Part 17

"K-Kushal?"

Sonakshi's face paled.

She most definitely had not expected this monster to turn up again. Dev had said he had been taken care of. So how was he here now? Did Dev lie? But why would he lie?

"Kya hua Sona? Darr gayi mujhey dekhkey?" Kushal sneered at her.

Sonakshi immediately tried to close the door on his face, but Kushal proved to be stronger and he pushed it open with such force that Sonakshi jerked back into the house. It was too late now. Kushal was already inside and had closed the main door with his foot.

Sonakshi quickly scrambled for her phone which was on the couch, but the moment she picked it up her heart felt ice cold. The battery was dead and there was no way on earth that she could call anyone. Seeing her in that position Kushal laughed out a cruel laugh. "Lagta hai iss baar kismat bhi wahi chahta hai jo main chahta hoon" he said looking at Sonakshi. He was still standing beside the dining table while Sonakshi was on the couch in front of the TV. He was still ten steps away from her but not for long.

"Par tumneye mujhey dhoonda kaise?" Sonakshi asked stalling his approach and looking for a loophole. One of Kushal's eyes had a black mark around it revealing the fact that he had been beaten up and his nose was held in position by a plaster, which had broken, courtesy of Dev. He half smiled at Sonakshi and gazed at her piercingly, "Tumheye kya laga? Apneye pyaarey Dev ko mere peechey bhej dogi aur main chala jaunga bhaag keye?" His smile disappeared. "You should have known better Sona. Main apni cheezon ko kabhi share nahin karta."

Folding his hands before his chest he leant against the dining table. "Ab kya hua? Bhaag gaya Dev tumheye yahan chhorkar?" He said smirking again. Sonakshi irked by his words said, "Tumheye jo pata nahin uskeye baarein meye baat mat karo Kushal" Kushal laughed sharply. "yahin baat toh mujhey itna pagal kar deti hai Sonakshi. Such attitude is position mey rehekey bhi" he said looking her up and down lecherously. Sonakshi was disgusted. She had started panicking inside. She needed to escape. NOW.

Gripping the remote in her hand she stood up, "Dekho Kushal, agar tum do minute me yahan se nahin gaye toh main chillaungi!" Kushal just looked amused. "Theek hai. Chillao. Par phir jab tak koi yahan tumhey bachaneye ayega, tum unheye nahin mil paogi" he finished calmly. Sonakshi gulped, "Matlab kya hai tumhara?" Kushal stood up straight and reached for something on the table. "Dekho Sonakshi, main tumharey liye badi mehnat se jail se bhag kar aya. Pata hai tumhara peecha karna kitna mushkil tha jab ki mere peechey hi police padi hai" he told her matter-of-factly. "Par main aa gaya tumharey peechey peechey yahan. Par issey pehley ki police yahan tak aa jayein, aur mera mood kharab karein-" he paused, retracting his hand and to Sonakshi's utter horror she saw that he was holding a knife.

He looked her straight in the eye and said, "Main apna kaam khatam karna chahta hoon. Agar tum meri nahin ho sakti, tum kisiki nahin ho sakti" saying this he lunged at her. Sonakshi screamed and ran towards the rear end of the house. She went into the first room on the right and tried closing the door but failed yet again. Kushal was right on her heels. Throwing the first thing that her hand came into contact with, at Kushal she was satisfied with the flesh object contact she heard and ran and hid behind the bed.

But Kushal recovered soon enough and didn't waste his time. Reaching Sonakshi, he literally dragged her out and grabbed her neck tightly. "Bas kuchh pal aur Sonakshi. Phir tum chali jaogi aur main tumharey peechey peechey aa jaunga" he laughed again. Sonakshi saw her own reflection on the dressing table mirror before her and realised she indeed would die. This was it. But just before she closed her eyes in surrender she her a loud bang and the hand on her neck loosened.

Immediately she opened her eyes and saw Ritwik holding a cricket bat, through the mirror. Turning around she saw Kushal lying on the ground. She didn't know how to react. She just sat there with eyes wide. Ritwik bent down and checked if Kushal was still breathing. "Rit-Ritwik? Woh mar gaya kya?" Ritwik looked up at her and smiled a bit, "Nahin. Behosh hai." Immediately after that they heard police sirens and minutes after that, they were inside, dragging Kushal out, assuring her of being safe now and taking her statement about what exactly happened.

After Sonakshi was brought back out to the living room, Ritwik made her sit down on the Sofa and gave her a glass of water. She still hadn't reacted. Numb in some kind of shock, she just nodded when necessary. Once the men had taken out Kushal and all the questions were done with Ritwik cam forward and sat beside his best friend, "Tum theek toh hai naah Sona?" He asked her with eyes full of concern. Seeing him look at her that way, something snapped in her and she broke down into tears in his arms.

Dev on the other hand tapped his fingers impatiently as his private jet landed on the Kolkata airport. As the plane touched down and slowly rolled to a stop, Dev whipped out his phone to switch it on and arrange for a car when he was surprised to see that there were almost forty missed calls. Assuming them to be from his family members who might still not know about the wedding being called off, he ignored it and arranged for a car first. He had taken gotten the address to Elena's house in Kolkata through his numerous contacts and was now ready to go there.

Sitting in the car he decided to see if there were calls from Riya or his mother. But he was shocked to see that all the calls were from his friend Inspector Prakash. He quickly called him back. "haan Prakash, bol. Sorry main plane me tha. Kya hua?" The answer his friend gave him made Dev tighten his hand into a fist and punch the seat in front of him. The poor driver got so scared that the car swerved a bit. Dev furiously yelled into the earpiece, "Woh bas***d ab kahan hai?"

Hearing that Kushal had been taken care of, Dev calmed down a little but then replied in an icy and dangerous tone saying, "Iss baar agar who bahar aya Prakash, tum logo ko toh main chodunga nahin, saath saath uska bhi permanent solution nikal dunga" When he was sure that his messaged had been received clearly, Dev asked Prakash, "Sonakshi ab theek hai naah? Mujhey abhi bhi time lagega uskey paas pohunchneye meye. I want to see if she is okay. Click a photo of her and send it to me. Abhi" he instructed his friend. Once Prakash agreed Dev disconnected the call and waited with baited breath.

On the other hand Ritwik succeeded in calming Sonakshi a bit. When all her tears had dried up finally, she sat up and wiped her eyes. "Thank you Ritwik. Thank you time par aaney ke liye." Ritwik hit he lightly on the forehead. "Pagal. Best friend ko koi thank you bolta hai kya?" Sonakshi smiled. But then furrowed her brows. "Par tum Kolkata kaise ayein?" Sonakshi questioned.

Ritwik smiled wider and said, "Aunty uncle ko tumhari itni chinta ho rahi thi ki unseye toh chup baitha hi nahin ja raha tha. Isiliye unhoneye mujhey yahan bhej diya tumhara khayal rakhneye kyunki aaj to Dev ka..." And he stopped. Sonakshi smiled sadly. Seeing her smile he continued, "Saurabh ko ana tha, but last minute me business ki koi kaam aa gayi toh main aa gaya aur abhi toh mera workload bhi kam hai. Aur dekha, aaney ka kitna bada fayda hua?" He said happily.

"Main iss ghar ke lane me ghusneye hi wala tha ki aa police car came up to me and Kushal ki photo dikhakar they asked if I had seen him. Tabh hi I knew kuch gadbad hai, but I didn't tell them. I asked them to be around aur seedha yahan aa gaya. And I was right. That bas***d was here" Ritwik finished angrily. "Room meye andar jaaney se pehley I informed the police aur phir TV ke peechey jo cricket bat tha who lekar I went to get you out" he finished seriously.

Sonakshi was so glad she had a family who cared for her so much. She was so lucky to have people who would never let her be alone. She silently sent thank you prayers back to Delhi, to her family. At that moment Elena's parents came rushing into the house and went straight to Sonakshi. The police had called them after taking Kushal away and they had come home in a hurry. "Shona! Theek acheesh tui?" (Shona, are you okay) Sonakshi smiled and hugged them, "haan Mesho and Mashi, I'm okay." They were in tears and hugged her tightly. On spotting Ritwik they thanked him profusely while Ritwik continuously refused to be thanked, with a laugh.

As things slowly settled down Sonakshi sat on the couch with a cup of coffee. She had talked to her family and assured them about her safety. But now her thoughts drifted to Dev. She wished he was here and she could find some solace in his arms. A tear escaped her eye. "Sona?" Ritwik came and sat beside her. "Dev ki yaad aa rahi hai?" She didn't reply verbally, but just kept her head on Ritwik's shoulder while he patted her head softly to comfort her. Unknown to them, Inspector Prakash took a picture from outside the window and sent it to Dev.

Hearing his phone ping Dev immediately opened the message. But on seeing the picture he couldn't smile. His Sonakshi was perfectly fine. He was ecstatic about that. But in the picture he could see that she didn't need him. Because she seemed content with her head on Ritwik's shoulder. Dev gripped the phone tighter. Was this it then? Had he lost Sonakshi to Ritwik?

Because it definitely seemed like that. He had lost his chance. Dev dropped his head in his hands. Sonakshi could never be his now. Serves him right for leaving her at the wrong moment. He didn't deserve her. She was so amazing and he was just a coward. And now he got his payback. This was it. She was safe with Ritwik. What was the point of him going to see her?

He couldn't even keep Kushal away from her. He had failed her and this was the best punishment. He decided to tell the driver to take him back to the airport because the truth was, he had lost Sonakshi and from what he could see, she would never have been his anyway.

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