Shivika Short fiction : The Touch 'O' clock! Part 6 final updated.. - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update...
Eagerly waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Awww. Sahil se bhi chottu update. Hw can you do this to us. Kitni mazae se I am reading it . Achanak end huwa. You are such a cliffhanger 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Awesome but it's so small 😭😭.
I want a very very big and romantic update 😳😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Short but up to the point😊
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesomeee
its true...
the money she had to give him...can be return in future..
but wat he had taken from her can never be return
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3
" you wish to stay or not
when love decides to make you stay
you will not be able to move out..."

"Anika" he calls for her as she moves out of his circle.
"Ruko, Anika...ruko" he grabs her hand little tight.
" Shivaay...leave me" she struggles to get out of his hands.
They both almost fight. As she struggles out herself successfully, she manages to open the door. Unknown to her or them, Tia heard all their conversation somehow and planned to hurt Anika. She places a piece of glass on a ledge near door which is at some height.
"Anika" Shivaay helpless on her anger just want to grab her and keep her close. Unfortunate to their destiny, they reach that point where the glass was placed, as he grabs Anika around and twirls her close to that ledge. He hurt Anika's back deeply. A long cut appears on her back tearing her suit and she cried clentching onto his shirt. She almost fell into a hug to him. As he moves his hand on her back, he sees the cuts, hurries her into his arm and takes her back to his room, places her on his bed on her stomach. To much to his effort s of calling someone to help, Anika stops him from calling anyone.
To come to her toes again, she demands to check her injury herself but as the cut is deep, the pain seems to be deep.
"Anika...stop it pls" he cries in front of her to let him help. She seems to not respond. He hold her arms tight while standing and facing each other, seeing her in pain, still being stubborn to not let him touch.
"Anika, I swear, if you will not let me see this, I will handle it myself then" he shows his strong eyes to her, still feeling helpless for her.
He is unable to bear her pain, he is trying to support her, ask her softly to lay on bed in her stomach, so that he can check. She does the same now unable to hold herself back and be strong.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful update.
Can't wait to read more 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4
"Love will take you far
very far..."

"Anika, relax, am trying to call someone" restless Shivaay tries to reach someone at home to help him for Anika, but much to his efforts, Tia managed everything in such way that no help could reach him.
He is never been worried about anything in his life prior to this." What happened..suddenly, why no one is up and around?"
"Ohh Goddd" he compose himself and thinks to help her out by himself.
He goes back to his room, takes out the first aid box. When he turns back to Anika lying on bed little unconscious, he goes to her, keeps the box by her side, takes out the scissors.
"Anika, I have to rip ur shirt, stay calm" he speaks in her ear very low, lying above her holding himself with his hand.
"Shivaay..NO!" As she speaks, he didn't care, he tore her shirt from the back and an undershirt with the lace.
She manages to bring her hand to her back, trying to stop him from seeing her bare back. But its late as he already ripped it off a little too much. He brings her hand back to where it was.
"Anika..you are hurt and only I can help right now" informing her and assuring her that nothing is going wrong.
Although he tried to maintain to keep a calm mind seeing her bare back a little too much, while he is done removing a small piece of mirror tucked and aiding her wound, touching her didn't seem easy to him. He kept control over his emotions of loving her. "Yes Shivaay, this bring a chill to your spine" his inner self talked to him right here, then.
When he is done all dressing her wound, he needs to help her change those ripped clothes.
Anika too kept calm, his touch seemed to soothe her pain now but she has to keep it till here, no more thinking or going beyond this. She allowed him enough to see her, now she can't.

"Anika..." As he speaks in her ear. " I need to change" she tries to get up. Since its a deep fresh wound, its not easy right now, she fell back. As An vaay is still up on her. He helps her to get up and sit.
"Wait, I will get your clothes" he gets her clothes.
Although the situation is getting weird for her. Shivaay is having a change of heart. His heart is beating fast. He can not let her go anywhere alone right now. "But how will you change" he questions seeing her straight in her eyes with affection and an unknown feeling. Hesitant she is " I will".
She waits him to move back and somewhere where he can't see her. But he isn't moving.
" Shivaay" she roll her eyes thinking how she tell him to go.
"Anika , am not going anywhere" he bends down near her face, picks up the new shirt and tries to touch her. He is not feeling awkward but a sudden right over her takes over his mind and he continues to remove her shirt. Anika refuses to take his help and gets up quickly forgetting that in a current event she is helpless and feeling extreme pain due to her sudden action.
He comes close to her from her back. Her ripped clothes, her back back are almost touching him, he is so close. She is not able to understand what is effecting her more, his close proximity or her wound. She stays calm, let him do whatever he wants, she thinks.
He holds her shirt and ripp it off whole with scissors. As the shirt drops down, she immediately covers herself with her hand. He gets her shirt and helped her wear. As he pulls it down on her hand, he opens her hand and pulls down the shirt more.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Eagerly waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Nyc story.
I liked how u really handled this differently.
Hate Tia!!
Anyways continue sooon.

Love sharmi

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