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Beautifully narrated...loved what was written on her mehndi wale hands😳 Pls update soon dear.
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Humara Shravan toh Shakespeare ki kahaani ki hero ko bhi maat dedi romance mein... Shravan's flashback was really funny, for him it was full of sumoholic every where Sumo hi Sumo... Shravan & Pushkar convo was amazing...Ramnath & Sumo bonding is really love to read... Nani mumma & her antics are cute...
Nice update... & thanks for PM...

Vinu... ❤️

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wow
amazing update
absolutely brilliant
loved it
continue soon
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Sooo beautiful..starting me toh dara Diya Maine 5 times page number check kie Ki khi old post toh nhi hai... Awesome update dear... Luv you
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Originally posted by: deltadawn

Res

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Unress

<font color="#0000ff">Me first!!</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Har baar mai ghise pite way me kehti hu how much I love tour story... Its endearing, emotional, tear jerking, brings goosebumps with your cliffhangers and sometimes just plain makes me blush at the beautfiully described romance between them</font>
<font color="#0000ff">.. kya writer ho tum yaar.👏</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Today was nother masterpiece. For the coverage element.. its a healing process and you dsecribed her i teraction with almost everyone in the family getting back to normal.. its not just a Shraman story... Its about that entire family getting back to normal.. beautiful.. really.</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Shravan and Pushkie😉</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Ramnath and Sumo❤️</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Above all nani😎</font>

<font color="#0000ff">And in the end Shravan ki Sumo.. perfect.</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Thankyou.. as always this is my second read.. after wattpad ...😆</font>




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Very nice update.i will wait next update.


THank uu madhuu
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Love yr story
Plz update soon
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lovely update di..plz update next part...jaldi jaldi plz
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Part 26


Kya kar rahe ho sahzade aap na meri naak katwayoge..." Savitri said..

"Are nanima yeh ... Yeh... Kya .. Hai?? I ammfeeling dizzzy... Aisa lag raha hai ke mujhe koi hypnotise karne ki koshish kar taha hai.."
Shravan said not taking his eyes from suman's hand...

"Woh design hai barkurdad... Aap ki biwi ki hatheli ko aur bhi khoobsurat banane ke liye..."

Svravan looked at suman who was bitting her lips...
He tickled on her palm..
Suman wiggled

"Chhoriye na nanimumma aap so jayiye.." Suman said..

"Thik hai ... Savitri sighed...agar tu bol rahi hai to sehzade aap chhod dijiye... Waise aap haar jayoge .. "Savitri smiled..
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"Aisa kuchh nahi hoga ok???? Shravan malhotra kabhi haar na nahi sikha... Aur jaaan plzzz tum chup karke baitho..." Shravan said

"Jaaan????? Hayeee kinna pyara naam
Diya... Dekh jhalllintu humari shehzadegi jaan hai... Savitri pulled suman's cheek...

Sharavan looked at suman.. Who's cheeks has become red...
Waise tune kya naam diya... ?? Savitri asked with afull of naughty ness

Shravan looked at her once and then shift his gaze towads her beautiful hands..
He tickled the back of her palm..
Suman bites her inner lip and wiggled

"Nani maa aap so jao aab bahot raat hogayi .. "She said to nani while trying to pull her palms...

Shravan was agitated
"Teri to.. "Shravan pulled her with full force..
And as a result suman landed up on shravan who fell on his back with suman on his top..
He hands wrapped around his shoulder

"Hayeee teri nanaji ki yaad aa gaya... "Savitri teased them..
Suman let out a loud gasp..
Shravan's face was covered tith her red duppata

She tried to move her dupatta .. From his face..
"Thank uu jaan... "He whispered

Suman immediately realised her position n looked at savitri..
Shravan did the same..

"Woh naani .. Main ...suman tried to get up..hum woh.. "But se felt his strong grip on her
back.."Mera matlab .. Wohhh...Shravan "... she fumbled

"Are kya huya?????shrama kyun rahi hai... Tension mat leee... meri budi ankhon ko kabhi kabhi kuchh nazar nahinaata... "Savitri looked up towards the ceiling..

Shravan chuckled..
"Plzzz ."...she pleaded shravan
"Are maine kya kiya tum khud hi to mere bahon pe giri... "Shravan said
"Kyaaa?????? ..., "Suman screamed... "Aaap .. Aaap .. Chhodo mujhe... "
She got up...

"Aap haar gaye aapna naam dhoond nahi paye bas..."
"Nanimumma yeh haar gaye..." Suman said angrily

"No way .. "He pulled her palms...

"Ufff... Jhagro mat ok do min aur dhoonde dete hai na.." Savitri winked at suman...

Shravan was smiling looking at sumans angryy face...
"Tumlog abhi bhi yahan pe ho???? Nirmala came from behind... Maa aapki dard kaisa hai...??? "She asked savitri

"Hahahha inki pyaar dekhbke gayab ho gaya.. "Savitri smiled

"Nirmala sat beside sumo... Aur yeh kya chal raha hai...?? "She pointed btowards suman's palm...

"Shravan ke life ka sab se badicase ki saboot dhonda ja raha hai. "Savitri said leaning back to the head board...
Shravan adjusted his position...
"Agar tera beta haar gaya to saath dinntak neeche hall mein soyega.. "Savitri smirked...

"Kya??????? Nani plzzz..". Shravan screamed...
Suman blushed and hide her face...
Nirmala laughed..
"Nahi nahin merabeta hi jitega... "Nirmala smiled at suman..

"Time up.." Suman straighten up...
"Aap haar gaye.. "She jumped at joy...

"Are ???? Aise kaise?? Abhi do min huya nahi.. Aur tum chup chaap baitho...aur ab to tum billlkkkuuulll thik ho hai na?? "...He narrowed his eyes

Nirmala was telling savitri about their punjab trip..

"Dekhonna nanimumma yeh cheating kar rahe hai... "Sumo pouted.."do min ho gaya"

"Main aur cheating ??? Jhoootiii.. Khud mujhe ankh maar ke flying kisses de ke mera dhyan hataya.. Ayr ab main cheating kar raha hunnn..". Shravan said looking at savitri..

Suman led a loud gasp... "Ky... Kyaaa????? "

She looked at nirmala n Savitri who were hidding their smile...
Sumo looked at shravan...
"Ab chalo.. Tum dono sone jao... "Nirmala said...
"But badi maa bilkul neend nahi aa rahi hai.. Shaam ko hi to so ke uthhi... "Suman pouted
Shravan got up from nanis bed

"Nahi beta ab raat ho gayi ... "Nirmala said giving medicine to savitri...
"Aaj main nanimumma ke paas so jau??" She asked happily...

Shravan widen his eyes...
"Bandi pagal hai kya??" He murmured
Nirmala looked at shravan whoo is looking at his dumb wife shockingly..
"Bahot din ho gaya kyun nanimumma??? Aur waise bhii yeh to haar gaye ..."Sumo asked savitri...

"Nahi tu shravan ke saath jaa maa ko bhi aram karna hai..." Nirmala said

"Kyun??? Aur waise bhi to woh har gaya yo neeche soyega..."suman smiled..
"Baad mein kisi din so jana .. Aj tu bhi thaki huyi hai maa bhi..,"

Suman sighed.. She turned around nand found shravan is missing...
"Yeh kahan gaya??? "She turned around and asked nirmla...
"Gussa hoke chala gaya... Tu jhalii hi rahegi... Jah mere shehzade ko mana..." Savitri said...

"Shhraav... Shrravan gussa ho gaya???? "She gulped...

"Nahi nahi aisa kuchh nahi tu jaaa...use shayad neend aya..."nirmala said...

"Ab tu jaaa... "She added..
Suman got up from the bed .. She almost toppled but mange...
"Beta ruk ...kamal tujhe upar tak chhod ke ayega..." Nirmala said..

"Nahin badi ma incan manage..."

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"Hey suman tum akele jaa rahi ho??? Shravan kahan hai??? "...Raj asked

"Hey tum sab aa gaye??? "Suman asked.. "Shyad woh so gaya..aur ria rishi sab ..."
she added
"Saare aa gaye rishi n ria i guesss apne room mein hai .. Main paani lene ayi tha... To tum akele??? R u ok now?? "... Raj asked looking at her feet...
"Ya m fine.. "She smiled and headed towards the stairs... But she felt sharp pain while climbing nthe stairs...
She crunched her eyes...
She climbed half of the stairs and found it difficult to climb more..

"Hey suman ruko me help uu .". Raj climed the stairs..
Suman was a bit hesitate as raj hold her hand...
"Are kuch nahi... Bade bhai jaisa huun main tumhare... Tumhari age ki behen hai meri."...raj smiled
Suman smiled ..
"Aaah dhiire... Dhiiire .. Araaam se .. Take your time.. "Raj said looking at the stairs n her feet...

"Use teri help ki koi zaroorat nahinhai raj .."
A voice came from upstairs..

Both suman and raj found shravan was standing on the upstair crossing his hand over his chest...

"Tu waha kya kar raha hai.. Idhar aake help kar ise.."... raj said
"I don't thng she needs any help especially nfrom me..."He said wid a straight face...

Suman is totally surprised by his attitude...

Raj looked at suman then he looked at shravan he is smart enough to realise tHat something is wrong between this newly wedded couple...

"Bakwas chhod .. Chal nahi paa rahi hai... Dekh na "...raj pointed towards her feet...

"Are raj tu suman madam ko nahi jaanti hai.." He cocked his eyebrows..
He leaned towards the stairs and said.. "Yeh ab bilkuul thik hai... Bilkuul.. Kyun suman??? "

Suman gulped as he sound shravan adressing her suman ...

She climbed one more step. And pressed her lips not to show her pain...
"Tu to tha nahin.. Warna tu bhi mera baat pe yakin karta... Shaam se to madam doosron ki seva mein lagi hai.. Kyun suuummmaaan .. "He said stressing the word suman...

Suman scaredly met his eyeszzz

"Ha bas woh sirf stairs pe chadhte time hi .. Bas thodi si..." She fakely smiled at raj and shravan...
Shravan gritted his teeth...

Raj can see that shravan is fuming in anger...
"Mazak chhod aur idhar aa.. Itni raat ko kya tamasha laga ke rakhha hai???
Gharwalon ko jagana hai kya???
Kal shaadi huyi aaj aj hi yeh sab...??? "

"Exactly main nahin chahta ke mrs suman shravan malhotra meri wajaise tere saamne embassed ho jaye.. Kyun maine sahi bola na??? " Shravan looked at suman..

Who was struggling to climed the last 5 stairs

"U know just leave it.. Tu apni akad ke saath reh ... Waise hi itni taqleef mein hai.. "...Raj helped suman.. To finish the stairs...

Shravan moved aside..
Suman took support of the wall and reached tthe door

"Chal ab andar to leke jaaa "...raj said..

"Kya bol raha hai... Itna kar payi yo apne room mein nahi jaa payegi?? Kyun suman???" He stressed ghe word suman.

Raj lokked at shravan.. He sighed.. And signaled shravan to stop doing this...
Shravan sighed...

Sumo get inside...
"Goodnight suman... "Raj smiled and waved his hand..
He looked at shravan.. And signaled "kyaaa kar rahi hai...??? "
Shravan closed the door

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"Aap gussa ho??? "Suman asked

"Nahi to kyun?? Main kyun gussa honga..? " Shravan said sarcastically

"Aap gussa ho .. "Suman said...

"Nahin najin balki main to khus huun ke tum bilkul thik ho..."he pointed towards her toe...

"Waise tum yahan kya kar rahi ho..?? "He asked crossing his hands on his chest...
"Matlab kya bol rahe ho aap.. "She turned around and went towards the wardrobe..
"Raat ho gaya na..."

"Achha to tumhe ab yaad aya ke raat ho gaya.. But phir bhi tum yahan kya kar rahe ho..." Shravan said standing near the bed..

"Suman took her night clothes

"Chalo ab main change kar ke aati hun .." She went towards the toilet...


Haiii.. Shravan kitna gusse mein hai..
She took face wash in her hand
Sumo sab teri galati hai..
She gently rub it on her face
Mana kiya tha usne chalne ke liye
Lekin tu kisiki baat manegi??
She splashed water on her face
Suddenly she remembered shraman's word
"Jaan i am warning uu agar tumhe iss baar chot laagi to dekh lena.."
Sumo kitni bhi dard ho tu ladkhadayegi nahi...


After changing into a lemon yellow satin full nighty with a robe .. Suman came out of the toilet.. And found shravan was folding a duvet..

He turned around and found Suman wearing a night suit though it covers her totally but still he feels goos bump looking at her ...
This is the first time she was wearing such thing...
Suman looked at his eyes and found him staring at her..
She adjusted nher robe ...
Shravan came out of his trance...
He put one pillow on that duvet...
Suman walked towards her bed...

"Yeh lo ab chalo mujhe thank u kaho ??? Maine tumhara kaam kitna kar diya .. Niw u dont have to waste your time here.." He smiled

"Matlab ??? Aur yeh aap mere pillow leke kya kar kare ho?? "She pressed her lips to supresse the pain on her ankle and came towards him...

Shravan looked at her face??? And gulped..but he changer his facial expression quickly..

"Are tum itna taqleef karke yahan ayi .. Woh sirf change karne aur apna boriya bistar lene rite??? Kyun tum to naaani ke saath rehna chahti ho..."
Last line he raised his voice with made sumo shiver...

"Sharavan woh to main..."suman Fumbled...

"Ohhh I understand...Achha to ek kaam karta huun main yeh sab neeche nanimaa ke room mein deke ata huun.. Chalo chalo nani mustbe waiting for u ..."he sarcastically said...

"Aap itna kyun gussa ho rahe ho.. Maine aisa kya kiya.. "Suman touched his arm..
Shravan jerked her hand...

"Lets go suman... "Shravan said calmly...

"Nahi its jaan for uu .. "She whispered...
"K...kya bola tumne??? Mujhe sunai nahi diya..." Shravan leaned towards her

"Jaaan???"She whispered

Shravan threw the duvet in the floor and grabed her arm...
"Kyun ... Kyuun banayu tumhe main apni jaaan...?? "He gritted his teeth...
Suman shivers in fear...
"Shravvan ... "She barely speak...

"Tumhe koi parwa hai mere pyaar kya??? Sab kesaamne baaat tak nahi karti hoo tum thik se .. Aisa maine kya kar diya suman???
Kya gunah kiya jo jaaan banaya tumhe meri.??? Tumse pyaar kiya .. Tumhara fikr kiya???? Basss???? "He screamed

"Shrravan main to bas..."suman was trembling in feaar...

"Shhh... "He put his finger on her lipsss...
"Mana kiya tha maine... Ke apne pair pe zyada stress mat do... L kin huh... Tum meri baaat kyun manogi????? Sab ke liye yeh karna hai woh karna hai... Why dont u understand dammed tht i cant seee your pain.." He hold her shoulder and shaked...

"Shrravan mujhe aap se darr lag raha hai.. " Suman fumbled
But shravan was not in a mood to listen

"Aur tum?? Tumhe meri koi fikr nahi?? Mere pyaaar mere jazbaa mere junnon iska koi kimat nahi hain tumhare paass suman..."

"Main thik huun sravan..."she said in fear...
Shravan hold her and pinned her in the wall...
He leaned towards her ..
Suman can feeel his breath on her face...
He has never seen this much of anger in him...
He was fuming
His eyes were red
It reminds her their encounter on his 20th bday...

"Shravvan aap plzzz... "She couldn't finish...as tears rolling down to her eyes...
"Maine socha ke ke hum punjab jayenge .. Frnds k saaath thodi akele mein time spent karenge but nahi...
Tumne pura ghar ko invitation de diya??????? " He screamed ...
"Kyun tumhe main to chahiye hi nahi.. "He rolled his eyes...
Suman gulped
"Ek kaam karta huun .. Main ruk jaata hunn. Tum jao sab ke saath jao aur njoy karke ao... Waise bhi main itne saal tak to yahan thi nahi.. To phir ab mere hone na hone se kya farak padhda..???"

"Nahin shravaaan"... she couldn't finish.

"Tumbhi khush .. Aur hashi ki baat yeh hai ke tumhari khushi me main bhi khush...
Kambakhat pyaaar jo itna karta huum tumse..."
He gritted his teeth and closed his eyes..

"Aap yeh kya bol rahe hai??" She sobbed...

"Sahi bol raha huun... He screamed...Warna tum mujhe door kyun bhagti..,, mere paas ane se tumhe problem .. Jaaan bulane se problem, tumhare haath pakar ne se problem.. Yahan tak ki mere saath room share kar ne se bhi tumhe problem..."...his voice choked

"Jab koi rishta hi naaahin suman yo hum kyun saaath rahe???? "... Shravan closed his eyes

"Woh woh to main aap mehendi mein.. Apna naaam "...she said between her sobbs

Shravan ddint let her finish as he pulled her hands on the top of her head on the wall...
"On the right corner of your left hand thumb is "shravan..."
He pressed and opend her palms which were pinned down on the wall
"On the edge of the peacock is "ki"..."
He entwined his fingers with hers
"And between your first finger and second finger on ur right hand in "sumo."... ..." He hissed pressing his body on hers...
Sumo's eyes widen...

"Aaap... Aaap ko ... Pataaah tha... To aap ne bola kyun ... "She closed her eyes... And tears rolled down from her cheeks...

"Kyun main tumhari ankhon mein jeet ki khushi dekhna chahta tha.."... He cupped her face...

"Badkismati se tumara pati shravan malhotra hai.. Jiske ankhon se saboot chhupana namoomkin hai... Aur yeh ... He took her palms infront of her "yeh toh meri pyaar ka sabooot tha .. Ise main kaise nahin dhoond pata..."
He touched Her forhead with hers...

"Aur mere is harkat Ke badle m in tumne mere pass na anne ka faisla le liya...suman??????"
Suman break down in tears...its jaan"

She wrapped her hands... Around his torso...

Shravan closed his eyes
She rested her head on his chest...
She can feel his heartbeat

He sighed
"Kyun kahu main jaan???? Jab ki tumhe pasand nahin.. "He wrapped his arm on her waist...

Suman pulled herself... "Kya h rahe ho aap.. She looked at him...Woh to aap mujhe sabke samne bol rahe the to mujhe sharam... "She lowered her gaze...

"Tumhe sharam aye to saza main kyun bhugtuuu... ??? Chhodo naaa rehne do...tumhara naam to suman hi hai na to main wohi bulata hun... Kyun khamakha.." He looked at her face.. Which is cover was th tears...
He pushed the hairlocks behind her ears...

Suman nodded her head on both side...
"Nahi ..." She sniffed..

"Kya nahi?? Aur kyun maanu main tumhari baat... ?? Tumne kabhi meri baat maani...???"
He wiped her ters with his thumbs

Suman looked at him..

"Jab main kuchh kahu tab to sunni nahi baat ..aur ab tumhare kehne pe ...tumhe jaan bulau?? Nahi bulana mujhe.. Koi jaan waan nahi ho tum mere..."shravan said looking at her eyes...
Suman closed her eyes .. And sobbed


"Nani ke paas sona hai na ? Chalo main leke chalta huun... Ooh nahi nahi... Tum to bilkul thik ho...chalo tumhe darwaze tak chhod ke ata huun... "He moved aside

Suman sobbed..

Suman lowered her gaze...she walked towards the bed

"Ek kadam bhi chali na to tange todke ke rakh dunga.. "He stopped her..
And immediately scooped her in his arm..
He adjusted her weight less body and said "tab khelti rehna langdi taang..jitni marzi ho..."
He make her sit on the bed...

Dawai li???? He asked...
She nodded no...

"Haa woh kyun leni hai??
Doosra ka kheyal rakhne mein jo itni busy ho.". He handed over the medicine and she gulped it with water...

Tears was flowing down from her cheeks...


"Pair dikhao..." He oderer.. While taking her left ankle on his lap...

"Shrravan aap plzz chhodo mere pairo ko haat mat lagao..."she tried to stopp him

"Kyun sone jare huye hai mere haath kagane se kharab ho jayega??? "He asked

"Are aap mere pati ho... Aap mere paiton ko... "She couldn't finish as shravan cutted her off...

"R u serious????..shravan sighed . Ek cheeez aaj mujhe batao ke tum sachmuchh educated aaj ki zamane ki ladki ho?? A successful bussiness woman... Ya phir gao ki anpadh gawad... Kuchh bhi bakwas karti hoo..."???

"Nahi woh nanimumma ne bola tha..". She tried to speak...
"Chup chap woh drwaer se balm do... "He pointed towards the drawer
Suman bend a little and took out the balm... And gave it to him...

"He gently rolled the nighty from her ankle.. "... Sumo was feeling uncomfortable...

"Zyada Nautanki mat karo ghar mein shorts mein gumti ho... So relax... "
He looked at her ankle...

"Kitni swelling ho gaya hai dekha???
Dopaher tak itna nahi tha..."he rubbed the balm

"Aur mat mano meri baat.. Kal agar maine dekha .. Ke tum idhar udhar kar rahi ho... Yahan wahan chal rahi ho.. To by god tum mera gussa nahi jaante ho ...pujab jaate time jungle mein chood ke chala jayunga.. Bhagna tab jitna bhagna hai..." He pit the balm in the drawer

He got up from the bed and took the duvet from the ground which he threw some times earlier and switched of the light...

He came back to the bed and sat on his side... And rested his head on the pillow...


"Ab kya let ne ke liye muhrat nikalo ge???" He said to sumo who was still sitting on her side of bed...

"Woh meri pillow... "She was looking here n there.. "Ahh waha hai.." She was about yo get up...

Shravan yanked her arm and she fell on him...
"Koi zaroorat nahi hai.. "He smirked...

"Nani ke yeh baatein yaad hai .. Ke pairon ko haath nahi lagana hai..
Parrr...
He adjusted himself and pulled her from her waist...
Bewakuf ko yeh yaad nahi... ke nani ne aur kya kahan..."
Suman lokked at him...
"Nayi naveli dulhan ko apne pati ke .. Bahon me hona chahiye.. "He whispered...
Suman widen her eyes...

"Kya hua .. Nahi rehna hai nani ke paas sona hai?? Chhod ke ayu??? "...He rolled his eyes

She grabbed his tshirt on her fist.. Amd mumbled "mujhe kahi nahi jana hai..."

"Achha to kaha rehna hai?? He whispered caresing nher head which is resting on his chest...
She didn't replied..
Shravan realised... Something hot landed on his chest...


Ayye... Kyaaa huyaaa... He asked with full concerned..
And found her sobbing silently
Her petite body was shaking...

Aye kya huya ab kuun roo hai. Ho ?? He rolled over her pinning her diwn on the bed...
"I hate youuu ... "She sobbed
Shachhhi????? Chalo very good...ab Dekho meri taraf... "He made her look into his eyes...

"Aap kitna gussa ho gaya the... Kaise bola aap ne ke aap chale jayoge... " she cried closing her eyes

Shravan's eyes were fixed on his quivering lips...
"Mujhe sharam aati hai to main kya karu???? "She sniffed

"Kar lete aap .. She sobbed... Koi besham type ki ladki se shaadi.. London return ... Ya wahi koii...Achha hota...main to aap ki layak hi nahi huun.. "...
"Achha jiii Kisi aur se shaadi ho jaati to achha lagta tumhe.. ???"Shravan put his right hand between her waist and the body and hold her..

"Main to bewakuf huun na..". She hiccuped

"Badi me request kiya ke main bade papa ko samjhayu..."
Shravan cutted her off .. "Badi ma nahi maa. Aur bade papa bhi nahi... Paaapaaa.". Shravan said..hiding his smile..

"Haaa.. Haaa ...Wohi... Main mana kehti ?? Ke nahi koi mat ao??? Mujhe aap ke bete ke saath akele time spent kar na hai?????"She sobbed...

"Pairon me dard ho raha tha ek baar bhi nahi aye "...help karne mein...

"Kyun aayu tum to billlkkkuuulll thik ho...?? "Shravan said pulling her chin up..

"Gande ..."" She hit his chest with her fist...

"Oyeee "...shravan rolled his eyes
"Bure" ... Ke hits him while sobbing

"Sachhh????"he narrowed his eyes...

"Bahot bure... "He wiped her nose which has become red...
Shravan was njoying the innocence of her face

"Itna gussa???? Nani ma ke age main bewakufi kya kar di...toh Main suman ho gayi,????", she closed her eyes... Her body was shaking...

"Kyuuun..maine aisi. ." She opened her eyes and stopped.. As she found shravan was looking intensely at her eyes...

She gulped...as she saw two brown norbs looking at her intensely..
Those eyes were adorning each n every corner of her face...
She felt that he was memorising her face..
she then realised that her robe has been slipped from her shoulder inspite of the knot.. Exposing the inner nighty... With lacy border on her neckline..

"Bolo na... "He whispered...

"Kk... Kyaaa...". Suman forgot what was she saying...as she found his eyes is givving special attention to her lips


"Agar mujhe koi shravan ke badle johnny lever bulayega to kya main johnny lever ban jayunga??"
He caresed her face...

Rahunga to main shravan...
He kissed her tears..
She closed her eyes
Sher slowly put her hands on his shoulder

"Main tumhe kuchh bhi bulayu "
He kissed her right cheek to suck one tear drop
"Rahogi tum shravan ki jaan... "

She snapped open her eyes...

"BEWAKOOF..." He brushed is nose with hers...
"Kitni asani ne qubool karwa diya ke tumhe mere jaan bulana pasand hai..."

Suman bites her lips..
"Jaan "...shravan narroed his eyes..."subhe se tadparahi ho... Mere samne hote huye apne hoton oe zulum kar rahe ho... "

Started breathing bheavily...
"Bahot din se bhukha huu... "He groaned

He slowly pressed his lips on hers...

Suman closed her eyes...
All she can feel his masculine fragrance was overpowering her senses
Shravan tug the corner of her lips..

Suman gasped and shravan didint waste a single sec to caplture those raspberries..
Suman at first didn't respond back but slowly she was melting under his touche.. Shravan gently sucked her lowerlip.. Not hurhurting her as he kenew that she has a cut on the other corner of her lip...
He peched her lips
And again clam those...
Suman's hand traveled on his back

He nibbled her lowerlip
He plunged his tongue inside

His tongue was playing with hers...
Suman moaned..
Which makes turned him on...
After sharing a passionate kisss shravan stopped when she found suman was of breath

"Jaaan tum thik ho??" He touched the cut on her lips...
Suman was overwhelmed by his caring attitude...
"May i... "...Shravna asked looking deep in her eyes...
Suman was trembling and getting enthralled

Shravan gently pulled the knot of her robe .. And made her nightry more visible...
He pulled her a little and grabbed her waist and pulled her yowards him..
Suman gasped as her body arched and touched his torso...
Sunan hugged him
Srvan gently placed the pillow under her head
He pulled him a little
and took off her robe...

She was trembling wearing her sleevless satin nighty...
Shtavan made her rest on the pillow...
Shrvannn...
She tried to say... When he leaned closer and kissed her cheeek...
"Hmmm sharavan ki jaaan..."

"Woh .. Main..."
She couldn't speak as shravan trailed his lips towards her earlobe...
He bites her earlobe.. Letting her out a moan



He continued his kiss on her lacy neckline which was flicking with passion, and her nape, her bare shoulders and her ears
and slowly started nipping at her soft and silky cleavage which was visible from the satin night ware ...her robe was was already on the floor and sumo was not in her senses to realise what was happening around her...

it was a powerful set of emotions she was experiencing in Shravan's hands..
it was as if she never knew her body before, and her body cells were now coming alive one by one when Shravan touched them..She was feeling a strange fire erupt in her loins
Shraaavaannn she moaned...

Shrvan nuzzeled on her cleavage..and sucked

He can see her erected nipples from her nightware...
He pulled the straps down ...
Suman suddenly covered her face with her palms and aslo cover her breast which is half exposed...
Shravan pulled up n kissed her forehead...
He pressed his lips... Over there for a while...and gently pushed her hands...
"Shvaaan... Mujheee.. Mujheee... "She was breathing heavily

"Hmmm bolo na "he groaned...

"Yeh aap "...she couldn't finish as shravan shut het off by claiming her lips again...

His hands roaming around her shoulder..
He touched the neckline... And pulled it down..
His rough hands... Touched her plumpy softness...
Suman gasped and shravan looked at her...

"Shhh jaan its ok,..eaaasssyyy"
... She was breathing heavily as he looking looking directly in her eyes while his hands was caresing her assests...
Suman closed her eyes as his fingers touched her erected nipple...

"Plzzz dekho jaaan .. Plzzz..."
He whispered pressing his lips on hers...
Suman slowly opened her eyes and found him looking passionately on her bosoms..

He looked at her
Their eyes met .. Without breaking the eyelock he placed a gentle kiss on her right bosom
Suman cluched hs back...
Her toes curled as she found the wetness of his mouth conquering.. Those...
She let a loun moan...

"Shhhrravaaan..."
Suman dig her nails on his bavk as he found a wet tug on her nipple
Suman arched her body...

Shravan came upwards to kiss her back when his eyes froze on those bite marks she has is on her shoulder...
He immediately looked at her.,
And hugged her...
He nuzzeled on the crook of her neck "love you jaaan.."..
"I really love you...jaan..
Suman was lost totally lost

He slowly coverd her
He cares her face ...
Suman opened her eyes...
"Tum thik ho??? Zyada ho gaya??? "...He asked caresing her cheeks...

"Hmmm... "She said lowering nher eyes:...
"Kya hmmm?? Zyada ho gaya... ? "He pouted..
Suman blushed...
Shrvan moved aside and lay on the bed resting on his back..
He folded one arm under his head...
"Aeee bolo na ...he looked at her... tum thik ho na.."
Before she could have replied he pulled her on his chest
"Auuu "she screamed...
"Laga kya ... "He asked...
"Uuuhhhuuu .. "She replied resting on his chest...
LTumne bola nahi .".. He asked caresing her hair
"Mujhe nahi pata.. "She blushed n whispered ...

Shravan smiled n kissed her head
"Plzz mujhse apni koi problem nahi chupana..." He mumbled...
"Hmmm" she touched the buttons of his tshirt

"Kya hummm??? Kuch to bolo... Abhi to maine aisa kuchh kiya bhi nahi ke tumri zubaan chali jaaye... "
"Chiii "...she nuzzled on his chest...
Shrvan chuckled

"Achha chalo yeh batao yeh kahan se layi???" He pointed towards her nighty

"Achhi hai na ?? Pura dhaka huya..". She saiys excitedly...looking at him putting her chin on his chest..

Shravan smiled in her innocence

Yeh wala usdin ria ke saath.. "He couldn't finish.
.
"Nahi nahin.. Yeh to preeta ne laake diya tha jab us patah kaga ke maine kuchh nahin kharida .. Aur pajama n tshirt pehen ne wali thi..".
Usne boli thi ke aap khush ho jayoge...
She smiled

Hahahahhahaahah he lauged... "Haaa ekdam sahi...yeh burkha waise hai bohot cute..."

"Burkha ?????burkha nahi.. Hai shravan aap ko pata nahi chala yeh to... "She couldn't finish...

As shrvan hold her with his both hands he pulled her closer And said.. @Ab agar is burkhe ki tarafdari karogi to robe ke saath sath ise bhi utar ke nechh fek dunga.. Bas ho jayega tumhara pati khush bewakuf..."

Suman immediately nodded no..:
Shravan smiled
She again rest her head on his chest
Shrravan "aap se ek baat poocho??"... Suman asked
"Kyaaa..."

"Kal mera rasoi hai mujhe khana banana padega... Aap plz gussa mat hona.. Plzzz "...she was playing with the buttons of his tshirt

"Vandy bhabi jaisa ??? To thik hai..." Shravan sughed and closed his eyes..

"Nahin woh lalaji papa .. Pushkar sabne apni pasand ki cheez..."... Suman mumbled

"Tum aisa kuchh nahi karogi... To mujhse bura.." He changed his side he took the pillow from the ground... And rested on it..
"Koi nahi...Achha main kamal ji bahadur kaka ki help leke karungi"Suman mumbled

"Nope... "Shrav said firmly

"Plzz shravan aaap naa mat bolo.. Rasam hai.. She paused... Waise bhi

Kya... Shravan asked caresing her back

"Kuchh nahinnn... "She whispered

Uhuuu batao.. He looked at her

"Doosri ladki jase naa to meri vidai huyi nahi pak phere... Kyun ke mom n dad to.." She paused
And lookedat him

"Hey jaaan main huun hum sab haina.. Ok tum karo.. Ok..." Shravan said

She smiled..
"Ab paas aoo... "He said...
"Paas hi to huun..." She blushed
"Nahiii. Abhi bhi doori hai...Aauur paas"... he said naughtily

"Nahin bilkul nahin "...she blushed and turned around...faced tge other side .. When she felt a strong hand on the waist..who pulled her and her back crashed on his chest...

Gud nite ... Sumaaan... He teased her stressing the word sumannn...
Shravvvan.. She pouted n hit his hand

"Hahhhahahaha shravan ki jaaan... "He lauged
And burried his face on her hair

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Triiingggh triiinggg...
"Ohh god bhagwanji aapne yeh arlam kyun banaya.." Sumo mumbled in her sleep..

She tried to move,..but she couldn't move because of the heavy weight on her body...
She found she was pinned on the bed while her husband has put one leg on top of her legs..

Both of her legs are trapped under his right leg
And his right hand was wrapped her waist..
She tried to move only found his grip tighen...
"Shhravan arlam... Chhodo... "She said looked at him
"Chup chap leti raho" ... He pulled her closer...
"Kaam hai shravan... Plzzz"... She pleaded

He didind replied
"Are arlam nyo bandh karne do..."suman said
Shravan rolled on top of her and switched of the arlam..
And he paused on top of her...
Suman cluched the shoulders of his tshirt
She pushed him a little and smiled "gud morning..."
Areee aise nahi... gud morning aise thode hi bolte hai???.. He smirked

"Nahiii shravan abhi..." Le is out of words as
. He crushed his lips on hers ..
She was pushing her with all the force she has but couldn't move him a inch...
Shravan nibbled her lower lip .. And then gave a open kiss to her collarbone...
Suman arched back
Suman was lost at this sudden encounter...
Suddenly shravan stopped..
"Itni subhe mujhe door jaane ke bare soch ne ka saza... "He smirked...
Suman was panting...
"Plzzz ... Pplllzzz "...she murmured...
He kissed her cheeks...
"Ok jaaan"... he chuckled

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"Bitiya yeh wala serving bowl mein daal du??? "
Bahadur kaka asked suman..

Ji kaka..suman smiled
"Beta aap chhodo na laddoos main bana deta huun"... kamal ji said..
"Nahin nahin.. Thode hi to banane hai main kar lungi aap kheer tho dekh lijiye kahin jal na jaaye..". Suman said while making the ladoos..

"Waise betiya ek baat bole??" Bahadur kaka asked..

"Bahot hi achha huya ke saahab ne aap ko yehi pe rakh liya.. Nahin to aap ke saadi hone ke baad yeh ghar bahut hi suna padh jata hain na re kamal... "Bahadur kaka asked..

"Aur nahin to kya?????puttar is ghar ko tumse achhi aur koi samhal nahi sakta..". Kamal ji said..
Suman blushed
"Kyaa baatein ho rahi hai..."
Ramnath came inside..

"Nahi woh saab hum bol rahe the ki bitiya isi ghar mein humesaaa rahegi isse ghar ke khushia dungni ho gayi..." Kamal jo said

"Papa aap uth gaya .. Rukiye main aap ke liye chaye laga deti huun"...suman said

"Waise beta chaye to hum pee lenge par yeh saari khushbo..."he pointed towards the table where the food keps...

"Dekhiye na sahab bitiya ne kitta kuch banya hai.. "Bahahur ji said

"Woh papa aj meri pehli rasoi hai to maine socha kyun na sab se pehle bhagwanji ko bhog laga du... " she put sugar in the hot boiling water...

"Wah beta .. Yeh huyi naa baat tune to apni maa aur chhoti maa ko bhi maat de ti."..ramnath put his hand on her head...
Suman blushed..
"
"Aap log sab aa jayiye tab sab milke bhog lagayenge..."

"Kaman bahadur jao sabko chaye dedo... "Ramnath said...

"Hogaya tera?? "Nirmala came hurriedly...

Tu chhod chaye main banati huun... Nirmala said

"Dekho bahu ne aaj pehli rasoi mein bhagwan ji ke liye bhog banaya."..ramnath said

"Akhir parvarish kiski hai.".. Nirmala kissed her forehead...
"Beta tera pair.. ??Nirmala asked..
"Aaj thik huun maa..suman smiled

"Shravan utha?? Chal ja tu dekh ke aa aa..." Nirmala said...
"Use mat upar bhejo tum deke aajao... "

"Tu aja beta mere saath..." Ramnath said
Papa aur bas 2 min..


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"Shravan jaldi uth aj pujaaa hai... Beta... "Nirmala stroke his hair...
"Ab kaun si puja maaa.. "Shravan put his head on her lap...
"Aaj suman ki pehle rasoi hai na to usne bhagwanji ke liye bhog banaya... "
Shravan snapped open his eyes...
"Kyaaa usne phir se..."!!!!!!

"Are bahadur ji r kamal ne uski help ki hai.." Nirmala caresed his fluffy hair

"Ma tumhe nahi pata kaal raat ko phir se pairon mein swelling ho gaya tha.. Yeh ladki na baaz nahi ayegi... "Shravan got up..

"Aisa kuchh nahi hai ab woh bilkul thik jai.. Tu jaldi kar na..." Sab neeche aa gaye hai .. "Tu as usual late..."
"Shravan rushed to the toilet.. Agar main late ho haya to sumo phir se kaam karegi... Ufff bhagwan is bewakuf ko kyun mere palle bandha...
Nahin nahin sorry bhagwan thnk u ke is bewakuf ko mere galle bandha .. Nahi to shravan mar jata aapka.. "He looked towards the ceiling...

Shravan got gown wearing a light blue khadi kurta..
He straight headed towards the kitchen to find sumo .. But she is no where..
Shravan was lost in smell off the food...

"Shravan baba kuchh chahiye aapko?? " Bahadur kaka asked
"Haaan Sumo... I mean suman... ??? Actually mera ghadi room mein nahi mil raha tha to.." He scrached the back of his head...

"Kaise milega puttar ji .. Ghadi to apki kalai pe hai "...kamini came and pointed towards the watch

"Jah .. Teri biwi waha mandir mein bhagwanji ko bhog chadha hai... Kamini whacked his arm

She was sitting infront on the mandir wearing a white salwas which has lucknow chikankari on it..she covered her head with res chanderi dupatta...
She was sitting facing the bhagwanji...

Shravan stand behind... He rang the rang the bell
She looked at him...and smiled...
He was stanging in a prayer position closing his eyes...
After some seconds he opened his eyes

"Gud morning... "He said ..

And saw her cheeks getting red .. As he understands tht it reminds her the morning encounter
She got up..
Everyone gathered and did the arati... Shravan reminds the diwali time where he saw her for the first time
She was doing arati..
This time they did the arati together..

Suman put tika everyone's head..
She came to shravan.. He leaned down and she put tika.. She was about to go .. He signaled him to wait..
He looked here and there no body was there.. He took a pinch of sindoor and filled her the partition of hair..
"Are jaldi aaao... Shravaan jaldi ajaaa..."Lalaji called impatiently

Shravan came and took a seat...
"Jaldi la putttar bhook ke maaree jaan jaa rahi hai..."
Lalaji said..
"Achha kaal jab vandy ne banaya to teri jaan nahi jaa rahi thi..?? "Asked Savitri...
"Jaa rahi thi na ?? Par bhookh maare nahi darr ke maare..." Lalaji shivered

Everyone laughed...
"Achha ramnath hum aj kanpur ke liye niklenge .. Ab to tumhare ghar zyada ruk nahi sakte...beti ka sasural ho gaya..." Nanu said

"Kya bol reho kaka ji .. Yeh aapki beti ghar hai."...ramnath pointed nirmala

Suman came with a bowl .. Follwed by nirmala kamini kamalji n bahadur...

"Sumo tu roj rasoi ka rasam kar aur aise line lagaka khana bana.. "Pushar said
Suman plated laddo, kheer, halwa , pooriya chana aur sabzi on ramnath's plate..

Shravan's eyes widen...
"Wowww... Pehle kaun sa chakhuu... ?? " Asked Ramnath
"Pehle halwa papa .. "Suman blushed...

Ramnath put a spoonfull of halwa in his mouth and closed his eyes.. And smiled...
"Zindegi mein bahot baar suman ke haath ka halwa khaya lekin aaj ka halwa ka swad hi alag hai..."

"Hoga na Ramnath ah khana suman tiwari ne nahi suman malhotra ne jo banaya..."nanu said...
Suman looked at shravan who winked at her...

She blushed

Nirmala handed over a jewellery box contains a polki set to ramnath .. He blessed suman
Suman served everyone...

Shravan pointed her to sit beside him..
"Wow suman... Maine life mein itna achha khana nahi khaya.." Raj said

"Yaar thoda kuchh ria ko bhi sikha do na..."rishi said

"Ha suman this time I support rishi ."... Plzz mujhe sikhao...

"Bro u r realy lucky..."
Rishi winked at him...

"Seriously ekto itni khubsoorat... Aur ...she put a spoon full of kheer .. And closed his eyes... Itna tasty khana.. Two in one combo... Shravan teri to lottery lag gayi ria said...

Shravan smiled
Raj cleared his throat and raised his eyebrows signalling shrabvan whether everything is alright??
Shravan nodded yes

Suman plated the pooriya in shravan's plate...
She looked at him when he first tasted her halwa...
His expression changed to surprise...
"Yeh tumne bana ya??? "He whispered...
"Kyun achha nahi bana?? "She gulped...
"Bewakuf... "He hold her hand and pressed a little...
Making her blush..

"Achha hum abhi thodi der mein niklenge.." Said sameer..
"Achha puttar tu suman ke pehli rasoi m n kya dega... ?? Asked kamini serving poories to lalaji...

Shravan raised his eyebrows... "Mujhe bhi kuchh dena padhe ga kya??? "
"Haan zaroor ... "Said lalaji

"Par aisa kuchh maine nahi suna.. "Shravan fumbled he looked at suman who was blushing looking at her plate...

"Bhai humare khandan ka parampara hai .." Pushkar said ..

"Tujhe badi parampara ke baarein mein patah hai.. "Sharavan turned around and pushkar stops him..
"Sorry bhai ...udhar dekho aap ki jaan udhar bathi hai.. Main to masoom huun... "Pushkar's said..

"Haaa masoom sa shaitan "...shravan said

"Par maa maine to sumo ke liye... Kuchh "
He looked at sumo with a guilty face...

"Koi nahi shehzade main batati huun"...
Said nani

Everyone stopped as they knew that nani will say something new...

"Ji nani boliye na... "Shravan asked seriously as he ddndt get the chance yo know Savitri very thoroughly..
,
"Aap jhalli ko aisa kuchh do jo ki sirf aap de sakte ho."...savitri smirked

"Ayr woh kya hai ?????..."shravan leaned forward as Savitri is sitting opposite

"Ap jald se jald jhalli ke godi mein ek nanha munha daal do... Savitri said...Kyun jhalli... ???"nani smiled

Shravan striaghten up.. And snapped towards sumo..
Who got up from the chair blushinggg profusely and without wasting a time she rushed towards the kitchen...

Shravan scratched the back of his head.. And blushed...


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"Kuchh nahi sumo... Aise nahi rote.. "...Preeta consoles sumo..
Suman was sitting on ge bed while preeta was standing...
Simo hugged preeta... And sobbed

"Sumo dekh at least unko kintni khushi mili.. Aut woh to phir se ayenge na.." Preeta was caresing her head...
"Dekh sumo ab agar tu itna royegi to nanu bhi dukhi ho jayenge...
Aur ab chal packing bhi to karni hai.. Thodider baad tujhe ready bhi hina padega teri muuh dikhayi haina... "Preeta said...

Sumo looked at the suitcases on her bed...
"Kitne dino ke baad hum jaa rahe hai .. Dadji aur biji kitne kush ho jayenge.. "She smiled

"Kush to tab honge na jab tu khush hogi...aur jab tu waha pouchegi... Aur itni kyun udas ho rahi jai.. Nanu se to mile gi na... Tu zindegi bhar ke liye punjab thodi jaa rahi hai... "Preeta headed towards the wardrobe...

"Chal mujhe bol kya kya nikaal na hao.. Main nikaal deti hun to bag mein daal..."Preeta said

Sumo wiped her face and got up...

She found preeta was standing infront of Shravan's closet...
Preeta was about to touch Shravan's clothes when she stopped her...
"Preeta tu chhod main kar lungi..."

"Are main nikal deti huun na.. "Preeta said...
Suddenly they found shravan entered the room with some documents and a packet...

He greeted preeta with a hello
"Sumo idhar ao inpe sign karo... He called her
"Kya hai yeh... "?? She asked...

"Tumhe jail bhej raha huun..." Shravan said with a striaght facce
"Kya?????" Suman screamed
"Visa ke papers hai bewakuf" he smiled

Sumao came and signed the papers after reading them...
"Packing kar rahi ho ???"he asked.. Looking at her red n puffy eyes
"Jii... "Suman said while singing those papers..

"Aaa preeta shayad maa tumhe neeche bula rahi thi... Woh muh dikhai mein jo ayenge to unke liye kuchh food wood I don't remember exactly... " Shravan smiled at preeta...

0Are yaar sumo tu packing samhal liyo main aunty se baat karke aati huun "...preeta left the room ..

"Kya baat hai??? Meri jaan ki ankhe laal ???"
He bent down a little and asked ..

"Woh ... Nanu .. Woh... "She said
"Are to kya huya.. Hum wapas aake milenge na.. Aur preeti to hai..."he caresd her face..

"Jaan main soch raha huun tumhe naya naam duun... "He pinched her nose

"Aur woh kya?? "She asked..
"Ronduuu ... Cry baby... "He laughed
Suman hits him on his chest...

"Sachh muchh jaan tum kitna roti ho..."he wrapped his hand around her waist

"Kyun aap rulate jo ho... " She struggled to get out..
"Achha maine kab rulaya???? "... He tighten his grip

"Kyun kaal raat ko...? Kya kuchh nahi bola... Kiya kuchh nahi sunaya.. Kitne gusse me the .. Kiyna darr lag raha tha mujhe aap se ...".she looked st his eyes

"Achha?? Main sirf rulata hun?? "
He pulled her closer.. Their bodies meet
"Mera rulana yaad hai... Aur uske bbad jo pyaar kiya ... Wohhh yaad nahi ????"he deepened his voice..
Suman widen her eyes .. And immediately lowered her gaze..
"Woh bhi tobolo kya kya kiya?? "He smirked
"Shravan .. Packing karni hai... " she mumbles

"Karenge packing saath mein packing .. But uske saath .." He couldn't finish... As Suman closed his mouth with her palm...

To be continued...

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soo much to read!
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Piya!!!🤗
I missed you and ur story so badly!!!And m literally regreting to read it this late😕
I had missing from ur story from Chap 18 and i commenced from there and believe me I'm all Flattered..like WHT A MAGNIFECENT PIECE!!
For me it was nothing less thn a Trilling Roller Coaster!
The way u are carrying ur FF and proceding it..its just making me more and more Entralled by it!
Update by update i just got more and more Aamazing!ohh amazing seems a small word it was beyond tht!😉
The roller coaster of emotions you penned just entralled me..there were times i couldnt stop laughing or smiles and there were times too whn i coulnt hold my tears as if thy had their own mind...u knw why tht happened so...coz i was so deeply engrossed in ur story and totally into it and thts the plus point here which proves ur excellenncy and efficiency in writing skills!⭐️
Ohh and how can i miss this...Shraman moments...Outstanding!👏...Shramanliciously Delicious!❤️...agar yeh choclate hoti tu by now i wud have devour it!😆😳

Coming to ur updates...
I have so so so much to say but agar mein shuru hoi tu yeh ek long chap say kam nhi lagay ga😆..so just gonna talk about highlights...so i'll go Chracter by character...


Shravan:

Ohh I so love this Beshram naughty Shravan of urz..m so fallen for him all over again☺️
HIs action speaks so loud tht how much he loves her how deep he has drown into the valley of love just for this girl his wife!He just cant even bring a fade thought of living with out her..without seeing her...without touching her..feeling her...sensing her..its like hez totally addicted to his Lady love his wife!
His possessiveness his care his concern his everything for her is just so intense and thts what marks his standard way above thn anyone cud possibly think of...it just made my heart swell with sheer love and respect for this man...A husband who scolds and gets upsets from her wife just coz she dosent take care of herself...awwh thts sheer sweet of him😳..and the way he showered her with love and sheer care..ohh tht was Enchanting!
He just made me Awe Struck!..adding to tht making me crave for such a Husband☺️
He just wants her out of tht nasty gutter of past she has fallen coz of wht he thinks and in some way is true...and plz plz plz Piya its a special requst make Khurbanda pay really badly really badly i really cant stand such creeps😡..hope u'll do so😳
I really loved how he stood beside her in hr crucial time and was admant to never leave her whn she herself ws asking him to leave her and he trusted her whn she lost all hopes and trust in herself!


Suman:

Ohh this poor girl...she has been suffering alot since her childhood.I'm so spellbinded in her case.Its like her state just shoots an achning pain in my heart.A girl like her so naive so innocent so loveing so caring so honest has to face such bitter phases of life face such demons endure such agony torment...i feel pity for her.Though she recieves so much love from her family but still her fate manges to spoil her but as we all knw Ups and Downs are a part of life simillarly after every sadness happiness will find its way to us just like after the evacuation of thundering clouds a Rainbow appears to spread cheers of happiness...same wud happen with her.
I salute her courage her bravery with which she faced thoz monsters and beat the hell out of thm nd moreover whn she saw Shravan being a red bull and ready to kill thm she just forgot all her pain her fear and comforted him...Its so true God Almighty has gifted women with sheer enduring power and thts the plus point for us and we shud thank God for tht!
Piya the way you narrated her tornment agony fear pradicament...everything was just Comendble!...so Brilliantly Penned!...tht u made me speechless!⭐️
A special mention of her nightmares and her wedding nite(sorry i dont wanna use tht word)...the way u naratted both scenes was so engaging and i literally felt the pain in me while i was reading it...u did a Stupendous Job!!⭐️..Hell Tremendously Penned!👏


Friends and Family:

I really loved the family bonding thy have..bilkul hum sath sath hain types...the love and care tht flows between all of thm is just heart touching.The bonding she has with Ram and Nirmala is so lovely and the way their whole family including there friends got scared and hell worried about her was damn sweet.its so hard to find such loving and caring joint family Nowadays...and reading it like you naratted it was a bliss😳
The whole clan made sure not to make her feel left out or special thy just acted naturally as thy wud always do and encouraged her to fight her demons and move on and come back to her lively life.
Vandy's rosai ki rasam was😆😆...aisa halwa sirf humaray kitchen mein hi banta hai🤣...n lalaji named it Jalua...damn hillarious😆
Pushkar scenes were also really cute and hillarious i loved thm all.
And Nanimuma adressing thm as Jhalli and Shehzada...was.....⭐️...❤️
Shravan friends were so supportive and I totally agree with Ria..whtever she said to Shravan to make her his..i totally agree as this wud be the only way to erase all the nasty and pungent memories of thoz monsters and all she need is pure and passionate love which somewhere she also craves for.so my vote is with Ria😊



I think i better stop now...ek pura chap bangaya hai...SSOOORRYYY!!!😳
Kya karon had to cover up for 7 chaps and still feel like m missing so much and shud have mensioned but i guess tumhari nani ankhon ko aur kasht nhi deti and save ur time..warna tu i still have so much to say😳

All in all i just Loved and Enjoyed it to core!❤️
It was hell Stupendously Penned!⭐️
U r a Fantabulous Writer Indeed!👏
Love you soo much❤️ and tons of hugs and kisses for u my cutoo🤗
Plz plz plz update the nxt part soonish will be eagerly waiting and han Thank you sooo much for all the Pms😳

Tadaa!🥳


Take Care!
Suu❤️
Edited by Sunain - 9 years ago

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