Ressi res😃
soo much to read!
will unres whn i complete it all😉
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Piya!!!🤗
I missed you and ur story so badly!!!And m literally regreting to read it this late😕
I had missing from ur story from Chap 18 and i commenced from there and believe me I'm all Flattered..like WHT A MAGNIFECENT PIECE!!
For me it was nothing less thn a Trilling Roller Coaster!
The way u are carrying ur FF and proceding it..its just making me more and more Entralled by it!
Update by update i just got more and more Aamazing!ohh amazing seems a small word it was beyond tht!😉
The roller coaster of emotions you penned just entralled me..there were times i couldnt stop laughing or smiles and there were times too whn i coulnt hold my tears as if thy had their own mind...u knw why tht happened so...coz i was so deeply engrossed in ur story and totally into it and thts the plus point here which proves ur excellenncy and efficiency in writing skills!⭐️
Ohh and how can i miss this...Shraman moments...Outstanding!👏...Shramanliciously Delicious!❤️...agar yeh choclate hoti tu by now i wud have devour it!😆😳
Coming to ur updates...
I have so so so much to say but agar mein shuru hoi tu yeh ek long chap say kam nhi lagay ga😆..so just gonna talk about highlights...so i'll go Chracter by character...
Shravan:
Ohh I so love this Beshram naughty Shravan of urz..m so fallen for him all over again☺️
HIs action speaks so loud tht how much he loves her how deep he has drown into the valley of love just for this girl his wife!He just cant even bring a fade thought of living with out her..without seeing her...without touching her..feeling her...sensing her..its like hez totally addicted to his Lady love his wife!
His possessiveness his care his concern his everything for her is just so intense and thts what marks his standard way above thn anyone cud possibly think of...it just made my heart swell with sheer love and respect for this man...A husband who scolds and gets upsets from her wife just coz she dosent take care of herself...awwh thts sheer sweet of him😳..and the way he showered her with love and sheer care..ohh tht was Enchanting!
He just made me Awe Struck!..adding to tht making me crave for such a Husband☺️
He just wants her out of tht nasty gutter of past she has fallen coz of wht he thinks and in some way is true...and plz plz plz Piya its a special requst make Khurbanda pay really badly really badly i really cant stand such creeps😡..hope u'll do so😳
I really loved how he stood beside her in hr crucial time and was admant to never leave her whn she herself ws asking him to leave her and he trusted her whn she lost all hopes and trust in herself!
Suman:
Ohh this poor girl...she has been suffering alot since her childhood.I'm so spellbinded in her case.Its like her state just shoots an achning pain in my heart.A girl like her so naive so innocent so loveing so caring so honest has to face such bitter phases of life face such demons endure such agony torment...i feel pity for her.Though she recieves so much love from her family but still her fate manges to spoil her but as we all knw Ups and Downs are a part of life simillarly after every sadness happiness will find its way to us just like after the evacuation of thundering clouds a Rainbow appears to spread cheers of happiness...same wud happen with her.
I salute her courage her bravery with which she faced thoz monsters and beat the hell out of thm nd moreover whn she saw Shravan being a red bull and ready to kill thm she just forgot all her pain her fear and comforted him...Its so true God Almighty has gifted women with sheer enduring power and thts the plus point for us and we shud thank God for tht!
Piya the way you narrated her tornment agony fear pradicament...everything was just Comendble!...so Brilliantly Penned!...tht u made me speechless!⭐️
A special mention of her nightmares and her wedding nite(sorry i dont wanna use tht word)...the way u naratted both scenes was so engaging and i literally felt the pain in me while i was reading it...u did a Stupendous Job!!⭐️..Hell Tremendously Penned!👏
Friends and Family:
I really loved the family bonding thy have..bilkul hum sath sath hain types...the love and care tht flows between all of thm is just heart touching.The bonding she has with Ram and Nirmala is so lovely and the way their whole family including there friends got scared and hell worried about her was damn sweet.its so hard to find such loving and caring joint family Nowadays...and reading it like you naratted it was a bliss😳 The whole clan made sure not to make her feel left out or special thy just acted naturally as thy wud always do and encouraged her to fight her demons and move on and come back to her lively life.
Vandy's rosai ki rasam was😆😆...aisa halwa sirf humaray kitchen mein hi banta hai🤣...n lalaji named it Jalua...damn hillarious😆
Pushkar scenes were also really cute and hillarious i loved thm all.
And Nanimuma adressing thm as Jhalli and Shehzada...was.....⭐️...❤️
Shravan friends were so supportive and I totally agree with Ria..whtever she said to Shravan to make her his..i totally agree as this wud be the only way to erase all the nasty and pungent memories of thoz monsters and all she need is pure and passionate love which somewhere she also craves for.so my vote is with Ria😊
I think i better stop now...ek pura chap bangaya hai...SSOOORRYYY!!!😳
Kya karon had to cover up for 7 chaps and still feel like m missing so much and shud have mensioned but i guess tumhari nani ankhon ko aur kasht nhi deti and save ur time..warna tu i still have so much to say😳
All in all i just Loved and Enjoyed it to core!❤️
It was hell Stupendously Penned!⭐️
U r a Fantabulous Writer Indeed!👏
Love you soo much❤️ and tons of hugs and kisses for u my cutoo🤗
Plz plz plz update the nxt part soonish will be eagerly waiting and han Thank you sooo much for all the Pms😳
Tadaa!🥳
Take Care!
Suu❤️
Edited by Sunain - 9 years ago