My heart beats for you : Rishbala FF *Note on page 4* - Page 2

Originally posted by: aishu007

wow mel nice start...congrats for your first story...continue soon...

Originally posted by: madhurish

Reserving this post...

Will read the update and edit my comment...

Sorry now in office.. Will edit later...

But thank u so much for taking my request and posting your first story..

Congrats...

Unres...

I said i will edit later.. But after reading i couldnt help comment immediately...

Beautiful start...

U have written so well...

Aww.. Feeling bit sad for madhu... Sometimes being rich can take away ur small happiness.. She has every wealth in her life.. But she misses her freedom and happiness...

Malik shouldn't force his will on her daughter.. If she likes dance then he shld let her dance.. If she is not interested in marrying he shldnt force her... See he is not going to live all life with thst guy.. But she is going too..

Though akshay seems to be a nice guy madhu has no special feelinga for him..

I wonder where Padmini has gone leaving her daughter with her father... She elobed with anyone she loves truly? May be she felt her husband so uncaring and unloving.. So she left him for another man.. And malik would have given her a ultimatum.. Either live with me as a family or leave my daughter anf go wherever u want.. Haha!

Okay.. Rishab is a waiter.. In a star hotel.. Guess its his part time job.. I wish anf hope he is a dancer too.. I love to him as a dancer... Both rk and madhu will make a beautiful dancing pair..

Loved the update...

Looking forward to read the next...

Thanks dear...

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi

Congrats dear for your first story

Superb start so madhu is very rich

She is engaged but not happy with this relation

And rk is waiter in madhu's hotel

Waiting for next

Originally posted by: Tinku16

😛wow rich madhu n poor rk...roles reversal as usually its rich rk n poor madhu...love to read the story...

Originally posted by: keerthiprasad

Congrats for your story Dr.
Superb start...Loved it
Madhu craves for her mother and missing happiness being rich random even engaged for her father ..
And rishabh is a waiter in a hotel and admires madhufor her humble nature...
Hope soon they will get to know about each other
Waiting for the next update Dr

All the best...

Originally posted by: harini_

Congrats on your first story
Awesome part,
Madhu's father is a leading business tycoon and her mother was an actress,
her parents got separated and madhu doesn't know why they separated,
she always wants to lead a normal life but its not possible for her,
Akshay and Madhu are engaged,
he loves her but she never loved him for her father she accepted,
Rishab is a waiter in their hotel he was surprised by seeing her humbleness,
continue soon

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Mel congrats on your first story.

Must say beautiful start.

Poor Madhu misses her mom but her father is a shrewd businessman and has fixed her alliance with business family only. Madhu is going to fall for Rishab.

Originally posted by: dharsii

Nice start.
Malik is bussiness man and padmini was actress.
nice idea.
Where is padmini?
What happen to her?
Madhu missed her very much.
Rishab is waiter.Cool boy..
He attracted towarda madhu.but he controlled himself.
update soon.