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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
amazing
totally loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Hey...Waiting for nxt part...
Plz update soon...dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
hello forum ppl ... m back fron vvacation it was awesome... and will update next part shortly...
c u soon ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its morning ... sumo sleeping in sharavan lap and sharavan sleeping in sitting position...

sumo first open her eyes due to sunlight jondirect uski ankhoon mein phardh rahi thi... she raised her head and about to standup... but woh uth nahin pati cuz sharavan nay apna haath us per rakha hota hai...

she very carefully hold his hand and move a side.. and look him and smile slightly... and went to washroom to take a bath...

afte few mins sharavan also wake up but found bed empty he become worried and went downstairs to look suman... but didnt found her...

he again came back to room ... or washroom ki taraf jata hai check kernay ... ussi time sumo open the door and collide with him and loss her balance but at mean time sharavan hold her and save her to fall... sumo closed her eyes cuz usko laga k woh gir jaye gi... sharavan was lost in her beauty ...

after few mins sumo open her eyes and looked at sharavan who is stare her with love... sumo become red and said sharavan ...

sharavan : huh!!!!

sumo: mujhe choriye...

sharavan : chordhnay k leye thordi pakra hai...

sumo: blush!!!!

sharavan stand her up proper and look at her from head to toe...

sumo is wearing beautiful pink sari...

sharavan : bohat achi lag rahi ho...

sumo: thank you... ummm sharavan ... woh... she starting playing with her pallu...

sharavan : confused ... kuch kehna hai ??

sumo: woh mein soch rahi thi k ... humay ab ghr jana chaye ... I mean apkay ghr... wahan ma papa b wait ker rahay hogay humara... itnay dino se ap yahan mere khiyaal rakh rahay thay ... per nw m fine .. to kun na ... hum... ap kay ghr chalain...

sharavan: sumo its ok ma papa ko pata hai tunhari condition and if u need time to koi.issue nahin hai...

sumo: sharavan mein apni responsibilities nibhana chati hoon... mein janti hoon nano ab kabie wapas nahin ayen gay... or is reality ko mein maan chuki hoon ... or is such ko b k mein ab kisi ki biwi kisi ki bahu hoon.. to its ok... apnay or ap k ghr walo nay apna farz nibhaya hai ab mere bari hai ... kya mujhe mera farz nibhanay nahin dain gay..

sharavan looking her lovingly and also bit confused tht kuch din pehlay she is not accepting anything and suddenly she become so responsible ...

sharavan : ok agr tumhara yahi faisla hai to theek hai mein ma se kehta hoon k him ghr aa rahay hain ...

sumo: ok mein apna saman pack kerlayti hoon jab tak...

after few hrs both left tiwari killa and reached to malhotra house...

sumo in thoughts ... sumo ab yehi tumhara ghr hai or ab yehi tumhari duniya... nano mujhe apka ashirwad chaye ... mujhe itni power dsin takay is ghr k logoon ko humesha khush rakh sakoon... specially sharavan ko jis nay her kadam mein mera saath diya hai...

sharavan came to her and put his hand on her shoulder... sumo looked at him sharavan : kya sooch rahi hoo chalo... sub wait ker rahay hain ...

sumo just nod...

they both went inside the house where malhotra family waiting for their bahu.and beta
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I quite liked the fact that she dealt with her grief positively and is eager to get going with her duties. .lovely update. .please give us longer updates if possible 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
So finally Sumo entered into Malhotra house... Her duty as a DIL & wife of Shravan will start now...
Vinu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing update
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
part 9
sumo and sharavan entered malhotra house and was ... welcome by nirmala and ramnath ...

nirmala: ek min beta aj tumhara ghar perwaesh hai ... phelay she did aarti and than said to sumo to drop the kalash of rice...

sumo did the rasam accordingly...

and nirmala took her to sharavan room which is now her room too...

nirmala : beta tum aj aram kero kal tumharay rasaoi ki rasam hogi ok... she put her hand on her cheeks and said welcome home beta... mujhe puri.umeed hai k tum is ghr k leye sharavan leye bohat lucky hogi...

sumo: sumo k ankh mein asoon atay hain and she hugged nirmala tightly... Ma mere humesha ek wish thi k kash mere Ma hoti... aj ap nay mere us kami ko b pura kerdiya... I promise Ma k mein is ghr ko ap ko ... sharavan ko humesha khush rakhnay ki koshish keroon gi... aplog nay mere leye itna keya hai lucky to mein hoon jo mujhe yeh periwar milla...

nirmala : just pass the smile and us k ansoon poochti hai.. and left the room...

both didn't noticed tht sharavan sub deekh raha hota hai...

nirmala saw sharavan and said... beta woh bohat mausoom hai... or samujhdar b ... humesha uska.khiyal rakhna ..

sharavan: don't worry ma ... mein uska khiyal rakhoon ga..

nirmala put her hand on his head and left ...

sharavan enter in the room...

and went to his cupboard... and making space for sumo stuff...

sumo came to him and asked what is he doing??

sharavan: sumo yeh ab humara room hai to jitna huq mera hai utna tumhara b hona chaye... is leye ab se yahan kinher.chez tumhari hai ... chalo unpack ur stuff I will help u in arranging ur belonging ok...

sumo just pass the smile and said thank you...

sharavan : ek or baat mein janta hoon k we r married per hum us say phelay dost thay remember... so no.formality... kabie b jo chez chaye u can tell ... ok

sumo.: ok

both complete the work now its dinner time...

all malhotra family having dinner... after dnr ramnath and sharavan went to study room for some case discussions... nirmala and.sumo in nirmala.room and having talk... nirmala gave he bangle to her as a ashirwad as malhotras parampara...

sumo : thank you ma.

ramnath enter the.room... ary bhai yeh saas bahu mein kya baatein horahi hain...

nirmala: kuch nahin... bus aisi ... beta jao ab raat kafi hogaye hai sharavan b wait ker raha hoga ...

sumo said good night to them and left...

sumo entered the room and saw sharavan who is busy in some work...

sharavan saw her and said tum kahan thi...

sumo : Ma k pass... she gave me the bangle look its lovely haina ...

sharavan just took a glance and said ya very nice...

sumo.: ap busy hain ...

sharavan : huh!!! ya.actually ek case mein phass gaya hoon papa se b discuss keya per kuch or b study kerni hai... takay case.or strong hojaye... to.bus ussi.mein uljha hoon..

sumo: mein.kuch help keroon ?? ap mujhe thorda case brief kerain shayed mein kuch help kerdoon...

sharavan just look at her... and smile... tumhay law k baeray pata hai??

sumo : nahin pata to nahin hai per kabie kabie ap k sawal mein he us ka jaab hota hai ... shayed mujh se discuss ker k.ap ko us ka jawab mil jaye...

sharavan sumo ko case brief kerta hai

sharavan : hummm !!! actually murder case hai sub ko lag raha hai k biwi nay apnay pati ka murder keya hai... liken biwi nay aisa kuch nahin keya...

sumo: or apko kya lagta hai ??

sharavan : may b biwi nay khoon keya hai cuz saray saboot uskay khilaf ja rahay hain...

sumo: kya woh biwi apnay husband se pyar kerti thi ?

sharavan : confuse !! pata nahin shayed nahin ...

sumo: apnay jo story bataye hai us se lag raha hai tht she is innocent...

sharavan: how can u say that??

sumo: sharavan us ka husband shakki insan tha or apni biwi ko galat sabit kernay k leye woh kuch b kersakta hai shayed apna khoon b ...

sharavan : look at sumo amazingly...

sumo tum kya jasos ho ??

sumo : lol ... may b and winked at him...

and went to washroom for freshup...

sharavan smile thanks sumo...

next part will be updated shortly ... and try to put sone romance actually I am.unable to write how can I start there romance... plz gimme some idea...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update Maria...
Sumo toh kaafi hoshiyar nikli... Jagga jasoos type... 😉 She gave the hint of murder case ... 👍🏼

Romance on next part waiting...

Vinu ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
part 10

the days passes... sharavan won the case which he discusse with sumo...
rasoi rasam has also b done ... now its been two months... since they got married... and duration both share good friendship bonding... the married couple bonding is still awaited...

its sunday ... all four sitting and having breakfast sumo made special breakfast for everyone... talking and laughing are going around...

nirmala: sharavan suman mujh tum dono.kuch imp baat kerni hai ... tumlog ki shadi ko do months hogaye hain... or mein nay or tumhara papa nay decide keya hai k kun na ek reception diya jaye tumlog.ki shadi ka...

sharavan : Ma yeh sub ki kya zarorat hai...

nirmala: zarorat hai beta ... mein janti hoon jis tarha shadi hoe ... kisi ko batanay ka mauka he.nahin.milla ab suman b is ghr mein comfortable hogaye tum dono.. ab apnay rishtay k baeray mein soocho... beta suman ka b to.koi sapna hoga na apni shadi ko lay ker ...

sharavan is about to said something at.moment sumo hold his hand and squeeze it ... sharavan look at her eyes which saying tht its ok dont argue with ma.

suman : Ma apko jo theek lagay woh kejeye humay koi problem nahin ...

sharavan : theek hai ma and left and go to his room...

after sometime sumo come...

sharavan: sumo kya zarorat thi tumhay ... yeh...

sumo didn't complete his sentence... and said... sharavan ek reception he to hai ma kaun sa dobara shadi ka bol rahi hain or kum se kum ma papa ka to soochain ap unkay only son ho unki b to koi wish hogi na ...

sharavan: tumhay koi problem nahin hai??

sumo: mujhe kun hogi... apko kitni bar keh chuki hoon mein is rishtay ko dil se accept ker chuki hoon...

sharavan : agr dil se accept keya hai to kehti kun nahin ho jo kehna chaye...

sumo: kya matlab !!!

sharavan come close to her and look into her.eyes... and hold her.hand... sumo meine tumse apni.dil ki baat kahye thi per tumnay ek bar b nahin kaha...

sumo: sharavan ... woh... (((blush))) mein woh... she become red...

sharavan: plz sumo ek bar ... kya tum mujh se pyar kerti ho ?

sumo still sharma rahi hai and sharavan uski ankhon mein happiness deekh raha hai but still he is teasing her so tht she will express her feeling ...

sumo us about to say ... at mean time ..
nirmala come and said beta aj raat ko function k leye tyar hojana sumo yeh tumhara dress hai... mein chati hoon k mere bahu aj sub se sunder deekhay ... and also said suman or.mere saath zara neechay ao to decide the menu... tere papa nay to apnay associates ko bula liya hai ... sharavan tumnay b kisi ko invite kerna hai to kerlo... yeh keh ker nirmala suman ko apnay saath lay jati hai...

its party time now...

sumo came to room to get ready... she is wearing bery beautiful red gold sari and jewellery... she is struggling with her blouse dori which is unable to tie up... her hand is unreachable...

at mean time sharavan entered and saw her and was.mesmerized in her beauty... he has no words to say anything...

he is just staring at her... and automatically uski kadam sumo ki taraf bhardhtay hain... he hold her hands and put them down... sumo look him through the mirror and start blushing...
sharavan tie the.dori and said bohat khoobsurat lag rahi hoo ... bis ek chez ki.kami hai... he is about to unlock her hair... she look at him and he.asked the permission may I...

she just nod.

sharavan unlock her hair... and said khulay baal mein zyada achi lagti hoon... ab chalain neechay sub wait.ker rahay hain...

the reception was grand all are happy... and congratulate the couple for future.life...

all guest left... the malhotra family sitting and having talk...

ramnath : sub acha hogaya... sub khush thay...

nirmala: hummm... mein to apnay.betay or bahu ko deekh rahi ... tum dono humesha.aisay he.khush raho...

ramanth: chalo sub jao or sojao kafi raat hogaye hai ... aplog thak b gaye hogay...

yeh keh.ker ram and nirmala apnay.room.mein chalay jatay hain...

suman is about.to.leave but at mean time sharavan stopped her... and make her face him...

sharavan : sumo subha tumse mein kuch poocha tha jab to tum bach gaye ab mujh apnay sawal ka jawab chaye...

sumo: sharavan plz mujhe janay dain... or apko mera jawab pata hai ...

sharavan : jany k leye thordi pakra hai... or jawab to mein tumharay mun se sunoon ga...

sumo: theek hai mein ek shart.mein kahoon gi... phelay ap apni dil ki baat mujh se.kahain...

sharavan still holding her and come close to her sumo closed her eyes ... sharavan is inches away... and come close to her ear and said I LOVE YOU SUMO... DO U.LOVE.ME..

sumo blushed and hug.hom tightly... and just nod in affirmative...

sharavn also hug her and said aj ki yeh raat humaray.pyr k.naam... and pick her up in bridal style...

sumo become.shock and said sharavan kya ker rahay hain koi ajaye ga plz utareye.mujhe...

sharavan : shhh!!! yun chilao gi.to.ma bahir ajain gi and agr mun bund nahin.keya to mein.kerdoon ga... and give.her devil smile...

sumo in horror become quite ...

sharavan ummm good girl ab chalain room mein... sharavan sumo koin room.mein.lay ker jata hai per room.is full.dark on candles.light wss visisble...

sumo look the room.and asked sharavan yeh sub kya hai..

sharavan put heris down and said.. sumo mein humari.dosti.k rishtay ... pyar k relationship mein bandhana chata hoon kya tumhay manzoor hai...

sumo just hold his hand and smile... sharavan understand her approval...

ok guys next art will be updated tomorrow be ready for.there next level romance... hope u like ... good byeee

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