DIL NE KI HAIN GUSTAKHIYA

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys I'm back with new story. DIL NE KI HAIN GUSTAKHIYA. SORRY HAVE TO KEEP YOU ALL WAIT. BUT I WANT GIVE A NOTE. IN THIS STORY I'M NOT GONNA POST EVERYTHING IN ENGLISH. THOUGH I WILL WRITE EVERYTHING IN ENGLISH BUT SOME EMOTIONAL POTRAYAL WILL BE SHOWN IN HINDI. BECAUSE EMOTIONS ARE SHOWN BEST IN HINDI.
This story is continuation of Mani misunderstanding track. where raman misunderstood Ishita and misbehaved with her. here no romi ss will be shown but yes that track will be there using somewhere so that raman can know the truth. simmi already knows everything but didn't told anyone param's truth due to fear and shame. she loves her bhabhi Ishita now very much.






So, shower your love on this story too like other two you did. I'm not that good but will try to be regular till then i fully fell better. I will post in 2-3 days gap every story.
ENJOY friends.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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INDEX
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PROLOGUE-PAGE 1

PART 1-PAGE 5
PART 2 and PART 3-PAGE 10[https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4774692/dil-ne-ki-hain-gustakhiya?pn=10]
PART 4-PAGE 14[https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/139879550]
PART 5-PAGE 18https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/139961001
PART 6-PAGE 21https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/140219035
Edited by Shani29_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PROLOGUE
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Ishita - "mera haath chodo raman"
Raman-"kyu kisi or ka pakadna h"
He pushed Ishita on bed. He started opening his belt and unbuttoning his shirt.
Raman-i have cried much. Now i will not give any chance to any woman to hurt me now i will make you cry.
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A strong wind blows and Ishita's pic falls down breaking apart. Rooh still didn't spoke anything she took a baby step picked up Ishita's pic she removed the broken glasses carefully not to hurt herself. She had many unshed tears and was feeling heavy and uneasy. She looked out of the window. Clouds were all black. There was a strong thunder and lightings.
Ruhi hugged the broken frame near her heart.
Ruhi-why... Why..?? Am I feeling pain..?? Ishimaa... Where are you..? You know well I... I feel scared in thunder.
Ruhi was not crying she was feeling restless and feeling pain.
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Weather was getting worst. It was about to rain. Raman didn't care about the weather and drove to mani's house. His heart was not ready to agree with his mind. His heart said she is not with Mani. But mind said she must be with him. Somewhere he also wanted his heart to win over his mind.
Otherside Ishita was tired of her continuous cries. She remembered in her unconscious state that rooh is scared of thunder. She murmured rooh...
Ruhi was looking outside of the window just staring at anything.
She felt as Ishita called her name. She looked around and saw no one.
Ruhi-ishimaa...
She murmured slowly and got up to go out..
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It's enough to tease you all. I will try my best to fill every gap which cvs left in real yhm story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting prologue
I love this mani track, but which was not properly closed in YHM
Continue soon
Edited by Jyoti8 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Really Interesting
Update Soon
Thanks For The PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
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How ru shaheen ,how's ur hlth?
Take care

By the way
Very interesting prologue.. really want ishita to stand for her respect & punish Raman for forcing himself on her .& also want to c Raman feeling guilty for his deeds & suspecting ishita's character..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice concept
pls pm me when u will update next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congo for new story...
Superb start..
Waiting for the update & get well sooon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting prologue. Congrats for new story. Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice prologue update soon
Edited by dinuu - 8 years ago

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