FF : Her First Love 2nd thread, Chapter 20 in pg 53

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Vincy Anne

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Posted: 8 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
thanx for the update...😃
mainawati arrgh hate her !!
she is too eager for this rishta , even fighting with bharmal thank god he was sensible here .

& i just love love loved the way jalal gave it back to surya , it would be riveting to see that how in future both JaJo will manage this surya...😛

Interesting precap !

Thanks dear,

I hate her too, she's obsess and the thing about Bharmal being sensible is kind of a last minute thing.

Thanks again i couldn't resist the urge to have Jalal humiliate Suryabhan. That future is something I really have to come to think of.

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Vincy Anne

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Posted: 8 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: RSlovesJA
Wow ja tackled surya so well... enjoyed.. continue soon nd do pm

Glad you like that part, thanks for reading. 😊

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Vincy Anne

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Posted: 8 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: Naazrt

Thank you Naaz, actually JaJo are not parted, sorry if you think that 😆
Just to make things clear Jalal is not angry at Jodha or whatever, he's just possesive of her hence he is super pissed off with Suryabhan for behaving the way he did. 😊
THANKS ALOT SISSY FOR PM ME ..
Love you...

Your welcome, love you too. 🤗

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Vincy Anne

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Posted: 8 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: ..Prii1994..
Hahhahhaa. . . Jalal was rocking . . . . . 👏

Yes he was, thanks for the feedback. 😊

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Vincy Anne

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Posted: 8 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: melovesja
Yes, maina and Surat both behave weirdly but it's a part of story to move and may be something towards prologue and some saw jo when she see off jalal and his parents. Keep continue with little part of lovely jj. I like jalal most in this chappy.😊 update soon.

Thanks for reading.

Yeah they are sort of a little obsess and you are right it's part of the story to move.

The thing about the prologue is complicated really but I'm trying to get the storyline to fit so I'm mostly playing with the characters. And the part where someone saw JaJo and Jalal's parents was a last minute decision on my side.

I'll try my best to include JaJo scenes in each chapter however base on some of these coming chapters I can't promise much, I'll see what I can do.

Jalal was the star of this chapter 😳

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Vincy Anne

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Posted: 8 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: swetiii
amazing chappi
JJ & moti irritated with Surya
he was so arrogant idiot
but Jalal showed him his position
Hehe
update asap buddy

Thank you dear,

Yeah they were very annoyed.

Jalal had to be the star of the show 😆

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Vincy Anne

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Posted: 8 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: eshalli
Superb chapter dear
Jalal rocks...
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Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm

Thank you dear,

He does 😳

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Vincy Anne

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Posted: 8 years ago

#318

Originally posted by: harshu27
hii vincy h r u????? after a pretty long time gt an upte to read😉and it was intersting...😳sply maina i feel she is too irritating 😳i mean without asking jo straight surya was sent to her office to pick her up i mean jaan na pehchaan quiet weird...😆but dn loved d way jalal gave him bk 😎his signature smirk ufffand i njoyed reading dis part also dat tease a thorn session too...😆😉thou d chap was small...but dn i loved it...and m eager to read d nxt updte d precap looks really intersting...😳

Hey dear, I'm good. How about you? Hope everything is well over there.

Yeah I kinda went overboard with my dislike of Maina, and let's just say she wanted to be a ccupid but failed dramatically. 😆

I admit I'm a sucker for bad ass Jalal and his smirk and I just couldn't resist to bring that back into the story rather than he's romantic avatar. 😳 And of course Jalal and his teasing is the icing on the cake 😉

Glad you loved the chapter. 🤗

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Vincy Anne

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Posted: 8 years ago

#319

Originally posted by: pandrangijyothi
Wow.. Chapter - 19 is there!
Maina wants... Jo's marriage with suryabhan
Surya irritates ja & jo
Finally Jalal shows his position to surya
Waiting for your next update dear. Please update soon... 😉

Thank you dear,

yes a lot is happening and unfolding.

Be prepared for a roller coaster ride 😆