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Originally posted by: kd83

Very simple, awesome and heart touching story... you have written it beautifully...

The way nandini explain things to him and make him understand is the best part...
So now it's time for new feelings.. nice.. read all the chaptersat once..

Waiting for next update...

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I loved it .smiling wid tears ,I felt every bit of it.

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Manik singing twinkle twinkle??? wow it was so cute!! Manik n Nandini and their sweet little moments...so nice

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Originally posted by: gtilwani45

Oh God..
what i say about this story..
it literally touched my heart ...
it did whenever i read this ...

It made my eyes wet..
manik's dad died ..
oh poor manik..
shoo sad for him..
but nandini is there for him always...
Like always ...

Nandini is making so much
effforts just to make manik happiee.

finally manik touched his guitar.
he sang a song.

wow...

He is making efforts too.
hehe.
kaisee cutely bola na never leave me vrna me
bura ho jauga.

that was the cutest thing.
it touched my heart ...
Waiting for next update eagerly.
updateee soon...
Thanks for pm.


Stay blessed.
Keep Smiling ...

Welcome back 🤗
After so many days...😃. Tumhara comment padhne ka alag hi maja hai 😳
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It's the second last chapter of this story.

CHAPTER 6

Nandini: Uffo yeshe keech kai kaha leke jaa rahe hoh..
Nandini pouted as Manik dragged her outside and stopped near garden. She gasped as she saw the garden all decorated with her favorite orchids and teddy bears. He went into the mid and blew bubbles for as he knew she loved bubbles. She ran upto him and smiled while he looked down

Manik: jab tum hasti hoh naa..toh sab acha lagta..lekin jab tum hasti nahi toh kuch acha lagta nahi..mai sab karunga na tuhmare liye..you just smile..for me
He whispered and she kissed his cheeks then hugged him tightly with teary eyes while he smiled ruffling her hair.He made sure he would always surprise her so that she would smile which soothed his pain. He didn't knew why the hell he was doing this..but it was making him and her happy giving them peace and all this was it for him..now his life revolved around Nandini only.


Nandini was arranging the books when he went and hugged her from behind. He kissed her neck and she smiled cupping his face and placed her other hand on his hand which were possessively wrapped around her waist.

Nandini: kya hua ab tuhme
she asked caressing his face while he mumbled nothing and remained inside her and she blinked doing back her work letting him do what he wanted to.


Old care taker: Waqt kyu barbad karti hoh apna ush janwar kai peeche..hoga ek zamane mai famous or something but now..ushka dimag kharab hoh chukka hai..har kisi koh apna dushman manta hai..sabse nafrat hi expect karta hai joh insan apne Dad tak bharosha nahi kar paya..ushe pyaar nahi deh paya..woh insaan tuhme kya dega Nandini..mark my words jaise ushke Dad..chale gaye ushke pyaar kai tarap mai..weshe hi..tum bhi agar kahi tarap rahi hogi naa..nahi aayega who..yeshe hi marne kai lye chod dega..kyuki insaan hi insaan koh bachata hai..koi janwar nahi
Manik's old care taker was giving her advise for no reason while Nandini smiled listening her.


Nandini: Pehle toh yeh bin puche advise kai liye thank you..aur rakha hoga tumne bhi ushka care..par afsosh tum usshe theek sai jaan nahi payi..tumne sia sirf bura side hi dekha..ushke andar insaniyat bachi hai yaa nahi..kabhi jhaakne ki koshish agar karti..toh shayad yeh sab nahi kehti. thoda sa pyaar aur asha dikhao toh kafi hota hai
She said and left while Manik was listening all this from behind the pillar. Wave of guiltiness and anger filled inside him and left.


Since Manik had singing again his most of the time was spent on jamming and ignoring Nandini which she found a bit weird..he was acting like same rude Manik which was making her more confuse. On Nandini's insist he agreed to roam around with her. They entered a restaurant and spent a time in silence

Nandini: kuch toh kaho..kya hoh gaya hai tuhme..kyu yeshe behave kar rahe hoh kisine yaa maine kuch kiya
She asked softly placing her hand on her but he angrily shoved away and stood up angrily making her shock a bit.

Manik: mat karo yaar yeh sab..you don't deserve this..you don't deserve a animal like me..sahi kaha sabne maine kisike layak nahi hu..pyaar dena karna nahi aata mujhe..mere paas joh bhi aata hai..sab mar jate hai..maa..Dad..Niharika jisne toh mujhe dhoke kai alawa kuch nahi diya..aur ab tum..chali jao warna tum bhi mar jaogi !
He shouted kicking off the chairs while she was numb on her place.

Nandini: kisne kaha! Manik yesha bilkul nahi hai..aur tum keh rahe mujhe jane kai liye..kaise rope sai apne sath baandh kar apne paas rakhte thai..ab kyu yesha keh rahe hoh..mar jaungi lekin tuhmare bina..aur tum bhala kyu marne doge mujhe..Manik is always there for Nandini right
She said cupping his face but he pushed her away and wiped his tears harshly.

Manik: sab jhoot hai..mujhe pata chal gaya..Im good for nothing..nothing ..door chali jao
he shouted and ran away from there while she knelt down crying badly and shouted for him.

Nandini: Manik! Tum yeshe bhaag nahi sakte..kyu bhaagte hoh hamesha apni zindagi sai..come back..come back! Come to me!
She shouted shedding tears but he was gone already. He rushed far out of restaurant and shouted clutching his hairs while she was still crying..there was silence..silence of love on both sides when...BOOM!!!
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