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Posted: 9 years ago
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Queen B detects her son's restlessness, it is either work or love. Shaurya denies the matter of his heart, yet he is disturbed. Willing to see her again,he covers his feelings well, appearing as a well wisher of happiness, yet he is pensive. He doesn't like seeing his beautiful maiden standing with another. A bitter pill to swallow, he watches cautiously and keenly. The sheer force of the vase, shakes him from his stupor he quickly knocks her out of harm's way. A door opened, the opportunity has presented itself, an omen to curtail the event. Blood is shed, but incomparable to the pulsing hurt in his heart. Shaurya seeks elsewhere to lick his wounds, so unbearable it is to observe his possible loss. The stain has already spoilt the ceremony, the maiden is compelled to follow him, she delicately blew his wounds distracting him from the disturbed heart. He stares and his eyes glazed...she shly glances. The strand to bond them subtly caresses her face until he couldn't resist touching. Her breath caught! The shy maiden turns to obtain a chance to breathe and escape. ...evade the flutter in her heart.Too late...much too late, the strings of passion and adoration have entwined and woven to seal their fate.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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really nice post dear
beutiful choiceof words
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Zainab, you are a poet. Loved it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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U describe it so lyrically.. ur posts are a treat to read
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow you penned that so beautiful
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very perfect words we're chosen to describe the perfect couple !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woww...another beautiful post Zainab...! 👏
You know how to play with words...and you penned them down so beautifully...!,

Sometimes, the strongest among us are the ones who smile through silent pain, cry behind closed doors, and fight battles nobody knows about...! This is the battle Shaurya is fighting...if he's not not faking it all, for some vengeance of his...!

There's no need for words when the heart is true...because love can be heard even in the deadliest silence...and Shaurya silence, did have it effects on Mehek...!

Silence speaks...when words fail...! The word "Listen" contains the same letters as the word "Silent"...!




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Posted: 9 years ago
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PH- i guess you teach literature.
Very poetic and a delight to read.

He was pensive and evasive hope he doesn't do anything repulsive.😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Zainab!!! 👏 🤗
Are you a poet? 😃

Very well described the situation... 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just like a poem ,great ,what a post ,I cannot stop myself from saying over here all r brilliant writers, R u in literature

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