AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 57

Originally posted by: hatelove2012

Oh wow. SO much happenings...I am glad that Zoya and Asad are calming down little and Zoya gave Ayaan an idea to. Make him sing. Awesome. Can't wait to see what will happen next.

Originally posted by: padda3princess

Awesome update

Originally posted by: hatelove2012

Just read ch 13. Awesome and some secrets out as well. It's an awesome FF very interesting. Can't wait to unfold more secrets and what Zoya is so scared of Samir. I hope Asad finds out about him and do something.

Originally posted by: Asyalover

Awesome update...and i love harmless MU in stories like asad is thinking od zoyaan...i wonder how thr Royals will meet zoya...cont soon..thnks 4 pm

Originally posted by: anuv6

big big hugs fr ur long update dear.,
LUVD the updates so so much...
u r an amazing writer dear. damn gud
i like the way of ur writing, especially the wao of ur mentioning ASYA 's pain, longing, heplessness, pain pasts ...its like tasting a very gud poem of expressions...amazing
their funny nd sweet bickering...choo cute
i thought to pick my fav parts bt really i cant bz every ASYA parts are my fav's , be it titli scene , zoya's taunting of asad's smoking, care towards each other...finally the singing scene where zoya drawn towards asad's passionate voice nd their little unkknown emotions...so so so gud
all the char are so perfectly merged and defined within whole updates;
its may be ridiculous fr u bt after read this much long update, i felt WHY???? it had to ends 😒
felt sad after read ur update bz u really made me miss MY ASYA yaar, its like i see them through ur update like i said before an another version of QH, uff i really miss them more nw
unsaid words, unsaid emotions, unknown care nd more nd more...its more than PERFECT update
cant wait fr the nxt update,
update sooonish as u can

Originally posted by: Always_asya

MIND BLOWING UPDATE
totally loved it
loved asad and malik convo
asad is very kind to help malik and police force though he hate the law
zoya got to know about son of kasuali and s a little
loved her lecture to asad about smoking
her way of explaining asad the bad effects of smoking was too funny
i just hate these royals who came for their selfish reasons and started to insult dilshaad
asad took his all anger on poor zoya
it is the second time he brought zoya's parents in fight
zoya was really hurt to hear his words this time she was not at fault even
loved ahil zoya and ayaan's togatherness on asha cafe
so zoya swiped ayaan's credit card and thought he did not know but he did still let her doing her mischief
he is such a sweet brother of her .I always loved their bonding
asad saved zoya from goons but zoya was angery to be thankful and she is right on her place
poor soul got nightmare of that 🤬 sameer
loved the way zoya taunt asad about smoking by singing
she did let him apologize bcs she know that he will do that again and again
loved her convo with zeenat though it was very short
i really want zeenat to make a visit
to make asad's mood sour ayaan came to his home to play video game with zoya
loved the jealous asad and ayaan is making him more with his actions
so asad is mr jinn who made the high score from zoya i guess and i am sure he was the one who was following her
the magazine headline left asya embarrassed
loved their banter each time
why zoya felt related to pari?
loved the beach scene my favourite from this update
ayaan again lose from asad but is not ready to give up
so he is going to make zoya to race with asad next time as he said
i would love to see that too
finally he succeed to make asad sing but did not exactly tell him who said to him do that
lovely update
antvthe teaser is teasing me to read the next part as soon as possible
😊
loved your another longest update dear
thanks for pm and update soon