WhenLoveCalled pg112 discontinuation note - Page 31

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monikaseth thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
πŸ‘ awesome great sabak sorry not able to reply before so many parts πŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
very sweet parts.i read the last three today.ak r simply cute.luved their cute fights and kripa's sabak was brilliant.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: brite_dawn52

wah!! kya sabak sikhaya,,,,,,,,very well done,,,,,
waiting for the next part,,,

thankyou zarah.

u know i thought this part was rubbish when i wrote it but im gald u liked it.

there will be more and more πŸ˜ƒ 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

πŸ‘ awesome great sabak sorry not able to reply before so many parts πŸ‘

Hey thankyou

i didn't know u actually this ff too.

its okay. atleast u did now. all of it is most appreciated.

well continue reading and enjoying.

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: deeya123

very sweet parts.i read the last three today.ak r simply cute.luved their cute fights and kripa's sabak was brilliant.

Thanx Deeya.

They certainly are a cute couple anf thir fights ar also very cute.

well carry on reading and enjoying πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 18 years ago
hahaha...kya sabak sikhai thi kripa ne! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
can't wait for the next part...now angad's gonna take what he wants regardless@ πŸ˜† bachke rehna kripa dear πŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Aabha

hahaha...kya sabak sikhai thi kripa ne! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
can't wait for the next part...now angad's gonna take what he wants regardless@ πŸ˜† bachke rehna kripa dear πŸ˜†



thanx Aabha.
Yes Kripa certainly did teach him a gud lesson but our Angad os just not going to learn now is he πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

bachke to dono ko rehna parega ek dusre se.

well continue reading and enjoying.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thaapar house

Pari:
(on the phone) aaj phirse aap kaam se gul hone kee baat karahe hai? πŸ˜›

Saumya: Kya kare, 😊 Jitna apne aapko busy rakhna chahta hu, utnee hee tumhaaree yaad aatee hai

Pari: Acha sunye, aaj pandra taarikh hai

Saumya: Wow Pari! πŸ‘ kiska janam din hai aaj?

Pari: Saumya...😲 aap jaante hai na ke aaj Danima pure pariwaar ko lekar mandir jaatee hai

Saumya: ha, ha jaantahu. per mujhe kyu bata rahee ho yeh sab

Pari: kyu ke aaj aapko bhi aana hai 😊

Saumya: πŸ˜” Dekho Pari aaj mujhe bohat kaam hai

Pari: abhi thoree dair pehle to office nahi jaane ke bahaane bana rahe the πŸ˜› or mandir kee baat aayee to forun kaam nikal aaya

Saumya: mujhe mandir se koi problem nahi. Lekin wo Hitler...

Pari: 😲 eeh!

Saumya: sorry πŸ˜› Danima ke saamne jabhi aata hu na to zubaan phisal jaateehai or najaane kya kehdeta hu

Pari: itna darr te hai aap unse?

Saumya: wo hai hee aisee hastee [:xx]

Pari: me kuch nahi jaantee πŸ˜’ aapko aana hee hoga

Saumya: ek shart pe. Tumhe mere saat ghoomne jaana hoga πŸ˜›

Pari: πŸ˜” Danima kee permission milegee?

Saumya: itnee baar hum mile kya unkee permission se?

Pri: Saumya aap jaante hai ke wo sab Danima ko pata hee nahi tha. πŸ˜” Lekin aaj to onhe pata hoga na

Saumya: to apne humraaz kab kaam aaenge? πŸ˜‰

pari: Papa? πŸ˜•

Saumya: or nahi to kya. Dekho wo sab sambhaalenge 😊 ab tum sirf ha kaho

Pari: theek hai. Lekin aapko pehle mandir aana hoga

Saumya: theek hai. Kitne baje?

Pari: 2:30 baje

Saumya: to phir me do baje ghar pe hee aajaoonga

Pari: theek hai. chalo bye

Saumya: aise nahi πŸ˜›

Pari: Saumya!

Saumya: Mujhe meree good morning kiss deeye bagair jaane nahi dunga πŸ˜›

Pari: πŸ˜’ aap nahi sudrenge. (she gives him a kiss over the phone) Ab khush? πŸ˜›

Saumya: Bohat πŸ˜ƒ chalo bye. I love you

Pari: I love you too πŸ˜ƒ

Two in the afternoon...

Prince:
nopes πŸ˜’ Is baar me teree koi madad nahi karunga

Saumya: Oh come on uncle

Prince: pichlee baar bhi mujhe kitna kuch sunna para tha πŸ˜›. kuch maloom hai tujhe? Puree raat bahar makho ke saat sona para tha πŸ˜†

Saumya: πŸ˜”
I'm sorry unce. Lekin is baar aisa kuch nahi hoga. Dekhye itne dino ke baad me Pari ko bahar le ja raha hu. Kuch to rehem karo πŸ˜”

Prince: Bilkul nahi 😳 ab jo bhi romance karna hai wo shaadi ke baad

Saumya: Uncle...

Prince: Mene kehdiya na

Saumya walked out wondering what to do, when he saw a worried Rani rushing around and going straight to Prince's room

Saumya:
Kya huwa aunty?

Rani: πŸ˜” pata nahi. achanak Prince ke pait me dard horaha hai kabse me onke liye dawai dhoond rahee hu. koi farak hee nahi paraha. Abhi kuch dair me mandir bhi to jaana hai

Saumya thought Pait me dard? πŸ˜• abhi abhi to mere saat araam se baat karahai the? 😈 samajh gaya. wo bhi mandir na jaane ke bahane bana rahe hai.Me bhi dekh ta hu kese wo apnee chaal me khamyaab hote hai

he walked inside to find Prince in the bed and Rani fussing over him

Saumya:
Kya huwa uncle? abhi do minute pehle to aap mere saat khare hoke baat karahe the πŸ˜›

Prince: (innocent laugh πŸ˜†) kya Saumya tu bhi mazaak karta rehta hai

Rani: Saumya yeh mazaak karne ka waqt nahi 😑 dekhai nahi deta me itnee pareshaan hu

Saumya: Pareshaan to me bhi hu

Rani: Tujhe kya huwa?

Saumya: πŸ˜›kehdu uncle?

Prince became alert and warned him not to say anything

Rani:
πŸ˜• kya baat hai?

Saumya: me inke dard kee waje jaanta hu πŸ˜› or ilaaj bhi

Rani: to jaldi bata na. wese bhi dair horahee hai πŸ˜”

Prine: πŸ˜’nahi Rani rehne do. Pata nahi Saumya kya kehraha hai. is bechare ko takleef kyu derahee ho?

Saumya: (goes closer to him) are nahi uncle 😊 is me takleef kesee. Wese bhi aapka khayaal rakhna mera farz hai πŸ˜†

Prince: yeh farz kisee or din nibhaana beta. 😳 filhaal me theek hu

Saumya: Wah! πŸ‘ ilaaj ke naam se hee theek hogaye. hmmm mujhe daal me kuch kaala nazar aata hai πŸ˜›

Prince: (panics 😲) hehe, tu phirse bakwaas karne laga

Rani: πŸ˜• yeh kya kehraha ha Prince?

Just then Surekha enters the room with Pari. Prince immediately begins his act of shouting in pain and moaning that his stomach really hurts.

Surekha: kya huwa Prince ko? πŸ˜”

Rani: Ma, πŸ˜” pata nahi achanak inke pait me dard hone laga hai

Surekha: tune doctor ko bulaaya?

Saumya: kaha Danima πŸ˜” auntyji pareshaan hai ke kuch samajh me nahi aaraha. πŸ˜› mujhe lagta hai ke phone kardena chaheeye

Prince: nahi, nahi πŸ˜’ (in between moans) kyu khamakha doctor ko bulaate ho. Maamuleesa dard hai, theek hojaehga

Saumya: aise kese theek hojaehga? nahi uncle I can't see you like this

Prince: (grabs hold of his hand and presses it really tight. No- one can see it) 😡 Beta mujhe pata hai ke tujhe meree itnee fikar hai πŸ˜› lekin mene kaha na ke me theek hojaoonga.

Saumya: (comes closer to Prince and speaks low near his ear) aapto theek hojaenge πŸ˜’ lekin mera dil to bait jaega na

Prince: kya chahta hai tu?

Saumya: aap jaante hai

Prince: 😳 mera jawaab tu jaanta hai

Saumya: theek hai (gets up and speaks louder) Danima me to kehta hu ke uncle ko hospital lejaana chaheeye πŸ˜› ise pehle ke inka dard barjaeh.

Prince: are nahi nahi πŸ˜’πŸ˜” iskee koi zaroorat nahi

Surekha: kya bacho jesee baat karaha hai 😑 Pait me dard hai to oska ilaaj karna zaroori hai

Prince:ha to wo ilaaj...😊 ha Saumya kehraha tha ke oske paas ilaaj hai

Saumya: πŸ˜• mene kab kaha?

Rani: abhi thoree dair pehle to kaha

Saumya: aunty wo to me sirf inhe behlaane ke liye kehraha tha πŸ˜ƒ but I think this is very seious 😈 or hame forun action lena chaheeye

Prince: (pulls Saumya closer in again) πŸ˜› abhe kyu mere peeche para hai?

Saumya: mere romance ka pata saaf karke aap apna romance chala na chahte hai πŸ˜› Now how can I let that happen? 😊

Prince: theek hai, me teree madad kar deta hu lekin tujhe bhi meree madad karnee hogee

Saumya smiled 😊

Surekha: πŸ˜• yeh kya baate karahai ho tum dono?

Saumya: kuch nahi danima. uncle mujhe onkee madad karne ke liye kehrahe the 😊

Surekha: πŸ˜• kesee madad?

Both Prince and Saumya panicked and quickly thought of a cover up

Saumya: are onkee tabyat theek nahi hai na, oske liye. Me kaam karta hu ke me lejaata hu uncle ko hospital.

Rani: πŸ˜” aapko akele nahi jaane doongee

Surekha: theek hai. Saumya tu Prince or Rani ko hospital leja. Me or Pari mandir jaate hai

Just as they are leaving Saumya nudges Prince to stop Pari, or their plan would be failed.

Prince: Ma (moans ) Rani kee madad karne waala koi hona chaheeye na. Saumya to mera khayaal rakhega os darmiyaan Rani ka koun rakhega khayaal?

Rani: πŸ˜’ Prince mujhe apnee nahi, aapkee pari hai is waqt

Prince gives her a stern 😳 disappointed look

Surekha:Tu theek kehraha hai . Wese bhi kuch dino se Rani bhi kamzore hogayee hai or ose madad kee zaroorat hai. Pari tu bhi thairja, me akele hee mandir chalee jaatee hu

Pari nodded like a good obedient child

Both Prince and Saumya waited impatiently for Surekha to leave. Everytime she said she was leaving, she still stood there explaining things to Rani. Giving instructions. As she left both of them sighed with relief.

Saumya: maan gaye aapko uncle πŸ‘ kya acting kee hai aapne

Prince: rehne de, rehne de πŸ˜› ab ziyada mazaka lagane kee zaroorat nahi. abhi bhi me apna irada badal sakta hu

Saumya: abhi bhi danima ghar se dhoore nahi gayee hogi πŸ˜›

Prince: (gets off the bed) πŸ˜” tu baar, baar mujhe ma kee dhamkee kyu deta rehta hai?

Saumya: 😊 kyu ke onhee kee wajese mera kaam hota hai

Rani: 😑 yeh sab kya natak chalraha hai Prince?

Prince: uffo jaaneman 😊 itna khafa kyu horahee ho? πŸ˜‰ yeh sab aaphee ke liye hee to kiya hai (embraces her πŸ€— )

Saumya: 😳 ehem, ehem

Prince: πŸ˜’ kya besharmo kee tarha hame dekhraha hai? Tera kaam kardiya na? apni Pari ko le or nikal yaha se, ise pehle ke mera irada badal jaaye πŸ˜›

Saumya gave an innocent laugh πŸ˜ƒ, grabbed Pari and left the two love bids Prince and Rani alone

end of part.
I hope u guys liked this part, especially those who wanted SP romance.




Edited by arwa72 - 18 years ago
monikaseth thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part and ya i read this ff from this month bec i love to read your all ff πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
my name is Zahra and not Zarah,,,,,,,,
and by the way,,,,the part was good,,,,,,,

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