NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 15~CHAPTER 20-UPD 12th Nov - Page 37

Originally posted by: harshu27

adwi once again u prove dat u have mastery of words...👏u r review just amazing...👏

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Adwi... beautiful 👏 👏 and the parallel with a painting was superb ⭐️⭐️

Mix emotions with shades of feeling in a manner of no more or less. It's bit painful with sadness but I love ...love ...loved it.🤗 So took out some lovely touchy part from it.

'But Ustaad would've found the perfect one... instantly... be it a sword, OR a bag!' the prince smirked

Intelligent way to mark two target at a time.

'Ustaad... you seem quite distracted this evening... possibly because of this new assignment...

Memory of past meeting with ustad again hunt his thought.

'Samarth Singh...' came a voice from inside, pulling them out of that peaceful reverie 'Charanjith'

the new visitors in town

Two helping messenger of Baisa with her signature style care for people with laddu in pouch . Enough to get trust of people and feeling of indebt. Azeez didn't leave him alone.😊

'Tiring work... rearranging the sick house' Vaid kaka puffed

Heera is a most caring and capable person who make kind of hospital in that time.👏 Vaide kaka's love for his bitya very well showed in that convo and Amk's courtesy make place in kakasa's heart.

*Ahem* Charanjith spontaneously cleared his throat, about to interrupt the hateful remarks.

But the more composed Samarth Singh immediately took over

Amk not only planned well but keep tight check on their identity , not to connect with people, concentration on aim, silent instruction to Azeez each time. Ustad the intelligent officer in action. 👏

This halt at Parnagarh was not a social visit. They were not here to 'leave an impact'. And definitely not here to bond with ailing children.

Not to mention, Samarth Singh had his personal reasons to stay away from this kid 'Pappu' too.

Reason is not only focus but memory of past and pappu's attachment to him is something special.

Heera bitiya used to visit the rest-house at least once a day... often, she would have a few toys made for the children...' he paused 'but all that has stopped... she is not here... and everything feels so empty and lost!'

Charanjith's glances casually shifted towards his friend's face, observing the eyes

Kakasa gave much things about soft heart's goodness.His statement of emptiness well explain his pain. at this Azeez's glance and Amk's stoic face were remarkable.⭐️

'By the way... I've been meaning to ask...' Vaid kaka glimpsed at the older of the two 'Samarth beta, you seem like such a fit-and-fine young man... your name and your etiquette suggests that you must belong to a good family... how is it that you haven't married yet. their fathers would be very interested in such a proposal... so, if you wouldn't mind, please give us the details of your parents... or grandparents... and I'll take care of the rest... Parnagarh would be honoured to have a jamaisa such as yourself...'

*Ahem* *Ahem* 'Parnagarh's jamaisa?' Caught off guard by kakasa's proposal and the irony of it all - Charanjith suddenly cleared his throat, louder than before.

'Problem with your throat?' Samarth darted his friend a stern stare, not too pleased by whatever it was that his gestures were trying to hint at 'Need water?'

This one is so special and charming.😛 In any situation you manage to write light moment to bring smile.Both buddies noisy-silent conversation makes me giggling but feels pinch of pain too. How was the reaction of Shahib if all in place. The way he sideline his inquiry.⭐️

The grimness in his frowns eased off, the gravity in his expressions slowly dissolving as he sat there for a moment, away from prying eyes

His pause shows tug at his heart to give away precious thing.

'By the way... I... I wanted to give you this... Maharaj kakasa's laddus... the maids had mentioned that you'd enjoyed them during the feast...'

Gift of her care for his like. He leave everything behind at house but memory of home maker comes along with him.

The young man had assumed that as they no longer lived under the same roof, with the passage of time, he would forget it all. But that was far from the truth. Ever since their last meetin It was as though his heart had also joined forces with twisted fate, and had turned into an uncontrollable rebel of sorts - wanting what it could not have. Thus, punishing him for his decisions that kept her afar.

She is not here... and everything feels so empty and lost'

Pushing down the emotions that'd parched his throat - Akbar dipped his fingers into the pouch to pick out another sweet, another part of her gift, that he was about to give away.This touchy writing is heart- rending and Kakasa's sentence was mirroring his condition. 😭

Heera receive her Godfather as unexpected arrival and it was a fresh breath for her. 😊Ranisa's intro is like her personality in one glance. Her whole heartedly welcome at Bansi, her keeping lens at side, insist for head massage and convo shows their special bonding and motherly care gave feeling of home and she falls into memory lane of past . Kakisa's proud feeling for oil was so typical. All this makes the scan more sensible.👏

'Intelligent enough to reach out to us, even though you were alone... intelligent enough to outwit those spies outside your town that were intercepting your scrolls...

Like Ranisa's wary and political point out on scroll. Her motherly voice out at heera's wary for her people is like background for proposal. Their discussion of fighting for land and justice was excellent. Remembrances of Durgabai was so emotional , we can reading out mother's pain, fear, concern at child's stubbornness.

'Kakisa...' Heera wiped her cheeks for her 'nothing will happen to me...'

'I didn't have the heart to make only one...'

Her confidence, her response to painful statement and composed posture to bring her parents like person out of grief demands high regards for her.⭐️ She feels the ability of masking face is Her Shahib's gift.

Her thought of void drawn her into memory of lovely moment and it was so fragile and only to savor. 👏👏

And every instance she thought she saw glimpses of that lost lady, she would find HIM.

He came along with her.😳

She was lost because he had stolen a part of her. Probably, the best part of her.

And not only had he slyly stolen the best part of her, he'd sent a part of himself with her too. A part of himself that'd merged so intricately into her world that she couldn't detach from the effects.

Beauty of love.

He invaded her hours. Her solitude. And her peace. It made her angry. It made her sad too. Angry because the bitterness of the heartbreak hadn't been enough to forget him. Sad because she couldn't remember those memories with pure unalloyed fondness either.

Kambkhat Ishaq

At least when she used to lay in bed at night and converse with her diamond ring earlier, it was only jiji she missed. Now, crazy as it sounded, she missed him too.

She lost both of her companion and missed them but,

Durga is her emotion and Shahib is her feeling.

Her ego taunted her for it every night, and she earnestly wished it wasn't the case - but she did miss him. She wished she could dislike him for what he'd done - but she couldn't.

There's lying a beauty in depth of love.👏

'A groom for you...'

Some day before it may be a cause of redness on her cheek but now it's like a mountain falls on her. Another shock in short span of time. 😭

'A groom?' the young lady swallowed softly. And she swallowed again, but that didn't seem to stop her throat from becoming dry 'Marriage?'

Painful for her 😭and Happiness for others

But now, and forever hereafter, 'marriage' was a route she could not take.

Vow of her life.

Last part is a perfect game of Amk⭐️

But Heera was too shocked to heed any of it. 'JIJASA?'

a soft tug at the border of his dhoti drew his attention to the small fingers that were splayed beside his feet. He glanced at the child with a mild frown, trying not to let his impatience show 'Pappu?'

Both in tricky situation.

Originally posted by: lashy

Good Morning Banjaras and Baisas 🤗

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Good evening, Lashy dear. It is 5 p.m. here and 9.00 a.m. over there.

And no no I don't do any calculations- it only takes a screen swipe on the hp to get the time. Hooray for smartphones.😆

Originally posted by: lashy

clever teacher...

what's the time difference for you and periyamma then?

Originally posted by: lashy

Adwi, Mitu, Divi, Rose absolutely loved loved loved your reviews dear... thank you so much for it... 🤗 made my day...

I will reply to all of you soon...

Harshu have to read part 10 will do that today! 6000 words, eh? 😉 FF Khiladi you've become!