Ravish/Vividha/Atharva FF: Riddle of Love (Chapter Four Updated) - Page 6

Eshu... Wow... U are very gud writter😃.. loved it... Plz continue soon.

It's Awesome eshu!!! Post the next part soon re 😃

Omg yhe secret part was out of the box.So good.U hv focused of each nd avery character.Beautifully crafted.

Loved the story...update chapter 4 soon

Eshaal...that was a beautiful chapter...unravelling Kalindi's past and ravish's suffering...it was so nice that vividha was concerned for him...a beautiful update ..loved it

Eshu,amazing yaar 👏
What fabulous writing 👏
Thanks for the pm.
You are writing so much better than the show.
I loved it yaara 👍🏼
Vivi and raveesh ka story is so relatable and so much genuine,mazaa aa gaya.
Well done and keep writing

Now this was soo soo touching...

Ravish in tears... Wanted to cuddle him yaa.. How lonely is he... He desperately needs someone to care n comfort.. Glad vividha is taking that place...

Kalindi was practical n loved that conversation... Sometimes wonder why can't show have such sane characters... Why does subtlety never seems like an option to them.. anyway... Love that hope that lingers at the end...

Can't wait to read further...

Loved this one dearo.

Read the three parts of ur story.. it was wonderful... Every character has been well defined... want to read more... Do update the fourth part so that new readers like us can also read it and appreciate it.

Brilliant work...

Thanks a lot my friend