New Arshi SS:Mann Mayal(Sacred Bond Season 3)Removed - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Interesting start aimmy...
This story is starting with a heartbreak bcoz of one coward who couldn't voice out his opinion and now blaming others for his doings..
Anyway, kushi doesn't have to worry... she is going to meet her prince charming very soon...
Waiting dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Loved the update.. waiting for arhi to meet..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Superb update. Eagerly waiting for the next part. continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Good start. Khushi is never meant for anyone except Arnav. So I'm happy Ali broke the alliance.
Khushi be patient your prince charming is on the way.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Amazing update
loved it
Thanks for pm🤗
Ali and arnav are friends😳 And now that ali does not want to marry khushi arnav is free to marry her
I really like khushi's character...
Update soon
The sneek peak❤️
Well written

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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: swag_on_every1

First would like to comment on the teaser as I didnt know you have started this story a week ago.

I like it despite it was just a teaser and Im wondering who is this Rehan and what does he want from Khushi. I also want to know why did Khushi run away when Arnav confessed his love. Was it because he was his boss and nothing more? Or is it because she loves someone else? *Nahiii* anyway gonna read the first chapter.

now the first chapter

" She was always ignorant of the twisted ways of the world till the day her father passed away. She was left alone with her Mother. And that was the time she came to know the ways of this cruel world. But all this never made her bitter towards life. She was never the one to complain about simple things in her life. She was well aware of the fact that she wasn't someone special."

You cant imagine how much I can found myself through these lines, its like you described my situations and feelings lol

"She was always happy and contented with her life and when her Alliance with Ali was suggested by her Khala she felt life just got completed."

Lol she doesn't know what completed life means yet. How life can be completed without Arnavji huh ?

"His friends circle was always limited. Not that he was arrogant or like that but he didn't like to have many friends instead he believed in keeping just few friends on whom you can rely during your hard times. And his gang was exactly like that

True that. Its not about the quantity of friends but more about the quality. Few friends you can trust😊


"He and Taimoor looked at each other when Haniya raised her hand. A diamond ring was shining on her finger.

"Ali proposed me!"

WHAT THE? WHAT? like the same Ali ??? Khushi's fiancee ?? what a bas****

"Haniya let's take some Selfies to mark the occasion!"

But first, let met take a selfie.

"He glanced at Ali who was looking somewhat tensed. Two years with this guy had told him when he is worried and trying to hide it well"

Of course he has to be tensed. How he is gonna deal now with his future-ex-future-wife alias Khushi ?

"it had been two years since she last met Ali and she wasn't sure if he was the same or not"

Nah... he didn't change this much u will see...lol.

"She was a bit angry with him on not keeping contact with her all these years but she also knew he was busy with his studies"

Poor Khushi 😭 yeah we all know apart from studies with what this Ali was busy with 😡

"I never felt anything for her apa! She was just a mere cousin for me but Ma was so adamant on making Khushi her Bahu. If you guys hadn't forced me then this wouldn't have happened.!

ALI I HATE YOU😡😡😡! As if she loves you ??! she just wanted to give this marriage a chance but you don't deserve it att all !!!

The end with Khushi's thoughts was really painful😭. She doesn't deserve this at all😔. I hate Ali.😡

Just made a link, maybe that's why Khushi refused Arnav in the teaser? 😕I mean like right now she was happy to get married to Ali but he just shattered her dream about a future with him... so she refused Arnav to not get hurt again... idk... 😆

Very good chapter and very well written 👏👏 Update soon plz

And the sneak peak ❤️ it makes me want you to update very very soon.


The overwhelming moment when the comment is bigger than Update 🤗 I loved reading your thoughts on this chapter Sim. Yeah I can also related to Khushi. You can say she is a bit like me in this regard and of course like you too. 😳 I really loved reading the thorough Analysis of the whole part. And yes your guess about the teaser part is quite right 😛

Thank you babes for taking your time out for Mann Mayal. I'm overwhelmed 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Rabiabegum

Awesome start:)! Best of luck:)! Please can you give me links to your other stories or the index link for all of your stories so far. Thank you:)!



thank you 😳

here you can find all my finished and ongoing works 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Amazing update...
Waiting for arshi...meet . ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Glad khushi is acting stronger . It would be interesting to see how story unfolds now
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Interesting start...Waiting for ARSHI to meet.

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