Arhi FF: Nilagiri Diaries - Part 11 Updated 30th May - Page 10

It is hard for me as a reader to fully grasp the relationship between Nina and Arnav so I assume it will be harder for the new wife. The next few weeks or the chapters you write will determine how this relationship is headed because misunderstandings are bound to crop up with other characters in the fray. Perhaps this is also needed for Khushi to come closer to her husband. Arnav has shades of grey which is something I love to see in characters. The predictable ones are so boring 😊

I have a suggestion - can you draw up a cast of characters after the index of this story? The two-name characters are confusing (for me) as I prod along.

Hiya from a silent reader. Chapter 6 reminded me of a novel, I read decades back. Sharatchandra chattopadhyay' Shesh Prashn explores the same issues of freedom to choose, freedom to feel. Nina is a strong character and it would be intetesting to see her relationship with Khushi.

hello ,

Wonderful update

Originally posted by: kushiarnav1

this update is way tooo much for my pea size brain 😉😆.

friendship between men an women that too young adults. Always there is a big door for misunderstanding for others... let see where this leads...

thanks for the updates ...

Well written. Awaiting to read Khushi n Arnav conversation.

Originally posted by: p4peppa

Hiya from a silent reader. Chapter 6 reminded me of a novel, I read decades back. Sharatchandra chattopadhyay' Shesh Prashn explores the same issues of freedom to choose, freedom to feel. Nina is a strong character and it would be intetesting to see her relationship with Khushi.

Originally posted by: mklam

It is hard for me as a reader to fully grasp the relationship between Nina and Arnav so I assume it will be harder for the new wife. The next few weeks or the chapters you write will determine how this relationship is headed because misunderstandings are bound to crop up with other characters in the fray. Perhaps this is also needed for Khushi to come closer to her husband. Arnav has shades of grey which is something I love to see in characters. The predictable ones are so boring 😊

I have a suggestion - can you draw up a cast of characters after the index of this story? The two-name characters are confusing (for me) as I prod along.