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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: angel_writer

awesome prologue dear👍🏼

so much suspense...
and hats off to u dear...so many story at a time...👏

eagerly waiting fr the nxt prt
update sooon
and thnx fr d pm dear😊


thanks sweety...ya i know so mamy stories and not updated any one till now...will update this one soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jarir2010

Interesting plot.do update soon .


thank you...will update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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intriguing dear..missed you

I'm excited to read this
~Maha~
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: MahaSrilu

intriguing dear..missed you

I'm excited to read this
~Maha~

Missed you too dear...
will update in few moments...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hehehehe!!! Not talking much lets just start up with this story..shush!!!😆😆😆😆

And yes as many I'm too not keen on making SVR- a villain...don't worry he is not my shalleen...ill soon come with the perfect pic of the svr the villain of mine stry till then one can imagine the one they dislike as the story's villain!!!o

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PART 1

"You have to do it",Avinash shouted to her daughter Anika..."NO, NO Mr Sarla, I will not do it", Anika shouted back to her father...

"Why can't you, you are my daughter and I have full right on you so just listen what I'm telling you and do it or else.."Avinash said in low voice but dangerous enough which send shiver in Anika's body, but still gathering all her courage she spoke, "or else what Mr.Sarla, just to me once and all whatever you are telling me to do is wrong and I'm not going to do it, I would rather die but would not commit such a sin", Anika spoke with determination..

Listening to Anika, Avinash gave her a cunning but evil smile saying, "OH my beautiful daughter...do you really think I would let you die...hahahaha..."Avinash started laughing and then all but shouted suddenly, "NO...I will not let you die...knowing you are the only way through which I can attain my aim" Avinash said with an evil smirk...

Listening this tears welled up in her doe-shaped eyes as she looked up to her father who was now looking like a don which he really is... but Anika was missing his caring dad who she lost in his father craziness to earn money. Anika looking at her father said, "Dad, plz listen to me, you are telling me to play a drama of love with an innocent guy so that you can use him through me and do your illegal business dealings in the name of his father so that if any your member get caught the name will directly come on his dad and not on you..." saying this Anika closed her eyes and took a long sigh then opening her eyes she said, "Dad it an sin to play with someone's feeling and to make the person suffer even when the person had not committed any crime".

Avinash listening to her daughter's word threw an angry glare at her and said, "You girl...just do what I'm telling you to do and don't teach me what to do and what not to...and remember one thing that if you will not listen to me then the result will be not good for you "saying this Avinash turned his face and started pouring red wine in his glass. Anika listening to Avinash's word said, "OR else what...WHAT will you do Mr.Sarla say it I want to know...whatever you will do...I'm telling you for once and for all I'm not going to do what you are saying. It's wrong. It's a SIN...no one has a right to play with anybody's emotion", saying this Anika turned to leave but froze on his place listening Avinash's word, "My darling daughter I know whatever I will do you will not get scared but I know one thing and i.e. how much you hate this business what I'm doing so my princess just think...what if I sell you to my leader underworld don SVR(Siddhart Vikram Rana)...you know na daughter that he has his eyes on you and becoz you are my daughter I'm not letting him take you but if you deny on what I'm saying just remember you are going to be sold to SVR", saying this Avinash moves towards Anika and turning her around he continued, "So you only decide what you want in any way I'm getting the profit and if I sold you to SVR you will be a queen to him and I being your dad will become his main member...so think carefully what you want just few days of yours and then living like a free bird or getting into the world where you don't want to go and that too forever..think fast", saying this Avinash turned his face and again walked towards his bar for drink.

Listening this Anika's eyes started tearing and she wondered where her lovable dad is gone who can't even see his daughter making sad face now he is the one who is making her cry. Anika slowly moving towards Avinash with slow step speak in a meek voice, "Mr. Sarla...plz...I can't do this plz...understand...how
can I do this...and even if I do what if that person will not fall for me", Avinash listening this said "Anika he has to fall for you...and you have make sure that he fall for you by anyhow...attract him, seduce him, even if you have to make physical relationship you can...but make him fall for her so hard that whatever you says him to do he will do that...through him I will do my business and then when I have full control over my business and after knowing even if the curtains is up I will not gonna caught instead Tej Oberoi is gonna caught...you will be free...you can leave Shivaay Singh Oberoi and can live your life your way.."

Avinash then turned to Anika who by now had reached to him and said, "Now you decide what you want...and inform me..." and leaved from there. Leaving Anika all alone in shocked, hurt, angry, confused and most importantly guilty. After some time Anika said looking up as if praying to god said in a low voice, " Shivaay Singh Oberoi ...I'm sorry"...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 2

At one place one man wearing 3 piece suit looking handsome and dashing entered into elevator and behind him following his bodyguards. The man removed his googles pressed last floor of the building where his cabin was situated.

When the elevator stop on his floor and he stepped out of the elevator, he started walking towards his cabin, his style of walking was conveying his attitude, arrogance, style and at the same time intelligence and smartness of that man, he was in the middle of the corridor and before entering into office he can hear voice of walking, rushing, running knowing very well his employees was till now enjoying and gossiping about something and after knowing their boss is coming they started their working, ignoring the hustle and bustle noises, the man entered into his office and started walking towards his cabin. Every employee of his stood up from his seat to greet Mr.arjun rawte, accepting everyone's greeting the man entered into his cabin and removing his blazer he sat into his comfy chair.

Calling his friend Omkara, he informed him that today he has to attend all the meeting on behalf of him and without waiting for his response he cut the call and threw the cell on his desk. Closing his eyes Shivaay mumbled," I miss you mom today...Why you leave me mom. Why you leave me to this man and go mom...I miss you...he doesn't even care for me mom". Saying this Shivaay started remembering...

Flashback

"Dad...Plz...listen to me", Shivaay in pleading tone.

"What to listen??? Shivaay???...You are just creating a scene why don't you understand I don't have time to waste on your stupid wishes", Tej said in frustrating tone.

"But dad!!! What I'm asking for...I'm just saying to spend some time with me...with your son...plz...dad why don't you understand I'm feeling suffocating leaving alone all this years. I just want your some time...I'm not asking you to leave your work and stay with me all the time...I'm just saying some family time..like you, me and dinner or lunch or breakfast anything but some father-son time out of this business world...plz dad", Shivaay said in pleading tone.
"Shivaay I told you...that I'm not wasting my precious time on your stupid demands like spending time with each other ...understand one thing...this business which is now on heights is becoz of my dedication towards business...and in business, time is money...in 1 minute we can make billons deal...and I'm not wasting even my precious 1 sec to your useless demand...understand...and what alone, suffocation you are talking about...you have everything in your life which many of can only dream but you have it in your hand..Say me what you do not have...you have everything...money, name, fame, respect, admirers, etc, etc, then what you want..."Tej all but shouted at Shivaay feeding up of his daily request of spending time with each other.
"I want my dad...I want his time...His love...his care...dad you are right I have everything name, fame, money, etc, etc...and many of the people can only dream about this but I have it in my fist...but dad you don't know inspite of having everything I have nothing...dad the people outside there can only dream of what we have...but they have something that inspite of having everything I don't have and that is family dad...dad I don't want what I have but I want what they have and i.e. family, their love, support.." Shivaay replied to Tej in a frustrating tone becoz Tej was not understanding his p.o.v.

Tej was getting angry due to his convo and after Shivaay was finished he threw angry glance at him and stood up from his seat in the study room and said, "OHH!!!PLZ I don't want to listen your family...time...love...support jaap ...they will not get you what you have now ...you know whatever today we have is not becoz of families support but becoz of hard work and dedication...ughh you know what Shivaay you don't deserve to own this business you don't respect and value what you have...I have achieved it throw my hard work and dedication and you just don't deserve it...just go to hell..just get lost...good for nothing son you are...just like your idiot, stupid mom you are...like she always wished to have family time and etc, etc likewise you are also wishing the same...it's fortunate for me that now your mom Jhanvi died 20 years ago but look her son is having same blood na so you are also following her steps "Tej said in disgusted voice.

Shivaay hearing bad words for his mom got furious and angry and threw hard glance to Tej and said, "YES...dad you are right that it is good that she died atleast she is not tolerating you now...you know dad, you are for no good, not a good husband, father or son, mom loved you and she died waiting for you, waiting to see atleast your small glimpse before she took her last breath but you didn't came and she died...you didn't even came to her barsi becoz you were having your important meetings...you know dad you just say that you care for me but in reality you care for no one but you and your so called money...if I have not given mom promise that I will be with you in whole of my life and taking care of you, I would have left you earlier...JUSR BECOZ SHE TOOK PROMISE FROM ME ON HER DEATH BED THAT I HAVE TO BE WITH YOU ...I'm here...just becoz of mom...JUST BEOZ SHE LOVED YOU...DAD", saying this Shivaay wiped his tears that were spilling out of his eyes and made his way out of the mansion in the car towards the office.

End of Flashback

Shivaay opened his eyes, his eyes were red due to anger, hurt and pain, standing up from his seat he moved towards his cabins window watching outside he said, "Mom I miss you, I love you and I will fulfil your last wish even if it will hurt me to stay with dad, I will becoz it was your wish...love you mom...but mom dad don't deserve your love or mine...".

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Edited by Vishakha.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
amazingly written,dear...
U r truly amazing...
The way u wrote outstanding...

A very different concept...
Very unique one...
Loved it...

They both need love but their respective dads love their business only...poor souls...

First part...
Ani is not bad at all...she don't want to commit such a sin...she tried her level best to make him understand...but her dad...pure evil...he threatened to sell her...i want him to suffer in hell...

Second part...
Shiv needs only two thing...love n family...but his dad wants only one thing...success in business...he didn't even care about his wife...poor shivay...he can't leave him even if he wants to as he promised to his mom...

Awesome...continue next one soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting start
Both need love in their lives
And to be away from their parents
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
amazing update dear
i loved it very much
plzzz do continue soon
and thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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anikake papa aur tej ko me chodungi nahi 😡 bechare SHIVIKA 😭
update soon

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