Nice update. Story is getting more and more interesting.
I guess this story is more about emotions rather than sudden twists and turns...that's what makes this a nice read. It makes you "feel". I subconsciously put myself in Khushi's shoes whenever I read this story and hence, my reactions also tend to be a bit extreme towards Arnav at times.
The beginning of the update shows Arnav's concern for Sia and how he prioritized her over his work. That is a welcome change. Even few weeks back, work was his top priority even when he had the accident and came to know his driver had expired in that accident.
So what changed now? Is it really his attachment for Sia? Or is it his sense of guilt and the need to redeem himself? If it is the former, then that's a positive change because then, it is something he is doing because he feels Something genuine for the child. Feelings arising out of guilt can never be completely genuine.
Payal's resentment and her taunt about him using Khushi and Sia for filling his emptiness, maybe a bit too harsh and out of line, especially coming from her, a friend who didn't keep in touch or know the whereabouts of her very dear friend. But the actual taunt itself is really apt for him. Isn't that exactly what he is doing? And of course, the guilt also plays a part.
If his life was not empty with a loving wife and a baby to love, would he have still thought about Khushi with the same feelings? Would he still have got Khushi and Sia home and looked after them with the same care? In my opinion, the answer's a big NO. He may not have been a cheat but he is definitely not trustworthy either when it comes to Khushi. All his actions are driven by his guilt and his life's emptiness.
Khushi is so innocent and naive...and that's her biggest fallacy. After everything that happened, she still remembers things about Arnav and is feeling drawn to him in her current state of memory loss.
Please show her as a strong personality once she regains her memory. It will really break my heart if she turns out to be emotionally and financially dependent on Arnav to take care of herself and Sia.
Did she not have a career for herself? She was hardworking always. Payal has become a doctor...what did Khushi do with herself? Hoping against hope that her marriage with Shyam was a happy one...and she loved Shyam in her own way. That will be the hardest slap on Arnav's face. He deserved an unhappy marriage, Khushi never did.
Wish you too a very happy, joyful and safe Diwali!!!
Edited by saack - 9 years ago
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