Arshi FF: The Broken Hearts#2 NEW LINK ADDED pg 153 - Page 73

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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the update👏
I know Payal hurt Arnav, but I don't think Payal was in the wrong when she asked if he was getting rid of his loneliness as from what Payal has known, Khushi was badly broken by Arnav and now suddenly Arnav's life has crumbled with broken marriage and aborted baby and in front is the child he has yearned for, Arnav has a long way to convince that he is regretting and is genuinely sorry, what goes around, comes around, trust is like a fragile mirror, once broken, hard to piece together.
Eager for the next part, Arnav whispering sorry to Khushi.
Thank you for the pm😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update. Story is getting more and more interesting.
I guess this story is more about emotions rather than sudden twists and turns...that's what makes this a nice read. It makes you "feel". I subconsciously put myself in Khushi's shoes whenever I read this story and hence, my reactions also tend to be a bit extreme towards Arnav at times.

The beginning of the update shows Arnav's concern for Sia and how he prioritized her over his work. That is a welcome change. Even few weeks back, work was his top priority even when he had the accident and came to know his driver had expired in that accident.
So what changed now? Is it really his attachment for Sia? Or is it his sense of guilt and the need to redeem himself? If it is the former, then that's a positive change because then, it is something he is doing because he feels Something genuine for the child. Feelings arising out of guilt can never be completely genuine.

Payal's resentment and her taunt about him using Khushi and Sia for filling his emptiness, maybe a bit too harsh and out of line, especially coming from her, a friend who didn't keep in touch or know the whereabouts of her very dear friend. But the actual taunt itself is really apt for him. Isn't that exactly what he is doing? And of course, the guilt also plays a part.
If his life was not empty with a loving wife and a baby to love, would he have still thought about Khushi with the same feelings? Would he still have got Khushi and Sia home and looked after them with the same care? In my opinion, the answer's a big NO. He may not have been a cheat but he is definitely not trustworthy either when it comes to Khushi. All his actions are driven by his guilt and his life's emptiness.

Khushi is so innocent and naive...and that's her biggest fallacy. After everything that happened, she still remembers things about Arnav and is feeling drawn to him in her current state of memory loss.
Please show her as a strong personality once she regains her memory. It will really break my heart if she turns out to be emotionally and financially dependent on Arnav to take care of herself and Sia.
Did she not have a career for herself? She was hardworking always. Payal has become a doctor...what did Khushi do with herself? Hoping against hope that her marriage with Shyam was a happy one...and she loved Shyam in her own way. That will be the hardest slap on Arnav's face. He deserved an unhappy marriage, Khushi never did.

Wish you too a very happy, joyful and safe Diwali!!!
Edited by saack - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
such a lovely update
when arnav need to spend time with khushi,he isn't read for that but when he willing to spend time with khushi and sia . he doesn't have any right to do it.
y khushi dream abt arnav instead of shyam . .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful update
Arnav is taking good care of Khuhsi and sia
Loved the update too much
Payal is very rude with Arnav
Her tuants may really hurt him so much
Waiting for next update eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
What an update! Arnav learnt his life fully where he says "Love is key to make couple together," wonderful. In past khushi always say correct things of life, but now arnav it is. And sia fever comfortable to arnav make me wonder.
Payal for first time regretted her words on arnav. Okaie, he cheated, hurted khushi. But can't she see the love towards sia. Hope payal would his true love towards sia.

Happy diwali
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update...oh now he knows money cant buy everything...atleast he found that...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Arnav's clients would have been shocked to see arnav getting panicked over a little child crying.
It kills arnav to see Sia in such a state. He would move heaven and earth just to make her smile.
Khushi's dreams are her true past but it is best of she forgets them
Little Sia is just as much attached to arnav as she is to khushi.
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update...first thank u for long update.Kushi tell arnav about her dream that make arnav think what happen in past. Sia is not well arnav get worried seeing her condition.Payal ignore arnav throughout the treatment make him angry.Payal taunt what he did in her life & bzcos of it she is suffering now.Arnav feel hurt the way payal said & he know the mistake he done cannot be redo. Thank u for pm & update
"Wishing U A Very Happy Deepavali"
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Posted: 9 years ago
ASR is trying to mend what is broken
but is it possible to mend it
khushi is trusting him again but this tie there is a difference her trust has a limits
sia is attached to him like he is really her father
Payal's anger n bitter words r apt for him n she is just looking out for her friend whom he had left shattered yrs back n when u love someone all u care abt is their safety even if u have to hurt someone else n u know ur r cruel but ur love for the one u care over powers everything else
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mind blowing update...
The gussa payal had for arnav is reasonable enough
And khushi n arnav emotions on high...
Sia is such a cute littlechild
Plz use jaldi theek kar do...
Loved the update
N wish u a very happy n prosperous diwali...

Love ya!!!
Aashi❤️❤️

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