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guddu met dada daadi and they complain geet fr leaving them they ask hr to come back with them but she said hr life changed so much and took promise from them fr not reveal hr id to her family
daadi ji having believe on geet she can't change this much
geet sending food from hr home fr dada daadi and they happy enjoying food made by their guddu
ayush get sick geet taking care of him
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Chapter 7


ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

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Location: Presidential Suite, Khurana Hotels, New York
Today was "Karva Chauth" and also today Thakur Amardeep was discharged from the hospital. Geet was unable to come and meet them due to Ayush's ill health. Maan got his grandfather to the Khurana Hotels, New York. As the owners, Hotel's Presidential Suite was meant exclusively for them.





Maan and Vicky settled in Thakur Amardeep and Savitri Devi. As Savitri Devi was fasting, Thakur Amardeep and Maan were worried about her health. Vicky went to pack as he was leaving for India tomorrow night. Ram and Janaki wanted to come to meet Thakur Amardeep so Vicky and Adi had to be in Delhi, although Maan was the first choice to leave for Delhi but Maan had to be with his grandparents also. Vicky on the excuse of packing went and made a call to Geet saying, "Bhabhi, Dadimaa ka aaj "Karva Chauth" kaa vraat hai aur mujhe nahi maloom ki unhein kya dein kyunki woh High Blood Pressure ki patient hain aur unhein dawaa khaana zaruri hai." (Bhabhi, today is Dadimaa's "Karva Chauth" fast. We don't know what to give her? She is a High Blood Pressure patient, and needs to have her medicines.)

"Bhaiya, aap Dadi ko room service se keh kar daab(coconut water) aur thode fruits khila deejiye! Bhaiya, sorry mujhe phone rakhna padhega Ayush ro raha hai." (Bhaiya, you call room service and ask them to get coconut water and fruit platter for her.I'm sorry, I'll have to call off as Ayush is crying!) Geet adviced and kept the phone down. Vicky had vowed that he can see no other girl as his Bhabhi except Geet whether Maan marries her or not. Hence, since that day 7years back, he started calling her "Bhabhi" and Geet started calling Vicky "Bhaiya". Vicky did as adviced surprising Thakur Amardeep and Maan. Savitri Devi was extremely touched by his this gesture and said, "Jug, jug jinda rahe puttar! Aaj mera Vicky asal maniye mein bada ho gaya."(Blessings! Today in true sense my Vicky has grown up!)
Rest of the day passed without any event. Thakur Amardeep was sleeping on and off due to weakness and Savitri Devi was also resting along side him. Maan went to Hotel's business centre to finishing his pending work of two days!

Location: Lakshmi Narayan Mandir, New York (FICTITIOUS PLACE)



Maan and Savitri Devi reached the temple around 08:00pm for doing Savitri Devi's "Karva chauth" pooja. Just as they were going to step on the temple's main arena where the idol was placed,



Maan's phone rang. "Dadimaa, aap chaliye mai Dad se baat karke aata hoon!"
Savitri Devi nodded and climbed the steps. There were many women there all dressed in bridal finery doing pooja. Suddenly Savitri Devi saw a familiar face stunning her. She was standing in front of Lakshmi Narayan idol with head covered holding a photo. Savitri Devi went near and tapped her shoulder.

Today is Karva Chauth and since past 10yrs., she is fasting. First three years she had no name and face for whom she was fasting, but seven years back she did get a name and face. Suddenly she felt someone tapping her shoulder and she turned to see Savitri Devi there. "Guddo, tu yahaan?" (Guddo, you are here?)

"Haan Dadi mai mandir pooja karne aayi thee." (Yes Dadi, I came for prayer.)

"Solah shringaar karke?" (All dressed up?)



"Haan aaj sajne-savarane kaa mann kiya toh..." (Yes I felt like dressing up today.)

"Geet, tum kitna bhi jhoot bol lo. Kitna bhi apne ko professional aur emotionless doctor dekhao magar tumhaari Dadi jaanti hai ki tumhare mann-mandir mei hamesha se MAAN THAA, HAI AUR RAHEGAA!" (Geet no matter how much you lie. No matter how much you keep a professional and emotionless doctor charade but you cannot hide from your Dadi. I know that in your heart there always was Maan, Is Maan and will always remain Maan!)



Savitri Devi said holding Geet's hand up carrying Maan's photo.
Unable to hide any longer, Geet finally confessed, "Aap sahi keh rahi hain Dadi. Magar yeh ek tarfaa pyaar hai. MAAN NAA TOH KABHI MERE THE, HAIN AUR NAA KABHI HONGE! Meri aap se aur Daddu se vinamr vinti hai ki aap bhi yeh baat maan leejiye, aur hummei milaane ki koshish chod deejiye. Unki shaadi unki pasand ki ladki se karaa deejiye!" (Dadi you are right. But this love is unrequited. Maan was, is and will never be mine. So I humbly request Daddu and you to forget about making us come close to one another. Please get him married to a girl of his choice.)



Seeing Maan approaching Geet said,"Dadi, abb mai chalti hoon kyunki woh aa rahe hain aur mujhse dekhte hi aneko sawaal poochenge!" (Dadi,I shall now leave as Maan is coming and he will ask me infinite questions.) Geet left in a hurry from there.

Maan reached to see his Dadimaa standing alone."Dadimaa, aap kissi se baat kar rahi theen?" (Dadimaa, were you talking to someone?)

"Haan beta!" (Yes!)

"Uska naam kya thaa?" (What was her name?)

"Naam???"(Name?)

"Dadimaa, yeh videsh hai aur yahaan gairon se baat karna safe nahi hai." (Dadimaa, this is a foreign land and its not safe to talk to strangers!)

"Beta kuch gair, apno se zyaada kareebi hote hain. Chaliye pooja karte chaand nikal aaya." (Some strangers are closer than our loved ones. Anyway lets do pooja as moon has arisen.)
Unknown to Grandmother and grandson duo, someone had captured Maan's face through her chalni (Sieve).


(Please imagine Maan without the turban!)

On reaching home, Geet thanked Rosie Aunty and Matron for baby sitting Ayush.
"Anna, what is this festival that you do every year?"

"Yes Anna, I also want to know." Matron also supported Rosie Auntie

"This is a festival in which whole day you fast for your husband's long life. Its mainly done by married girls but sometimes unmarried girls also fast for theit future husband, fiance or the man whom they romantically love. Its usually celebrated in the Northen states of India."

"So whom do you love? As your husband passed 6 1/2 yrs.back."

"I have loved one and only one man in my my life. I keep fast for only that person for past 7yrs."

"Maa, mujhe aapki godi mein sona hai!" (Mom, I want to sleep in your lap!) Ayush came and climbed on Geet's lap. Thereby stopping any further converstion. Rosie Aunty and Matron left for their respective homes.

Geet carried Ayush to his bed and laid with him on the bed trying to make him sleep. Once he slept Geet again drifted to her happy and carefree past when she had Maan for the first time.

SEVEN YEARS BACK

Location: HANDA'S INAUGRATION PARTY IN THEIR NEW SIX STAR HOTEL , AMRITSAR, DECEMBER 2009
Geet had just got ready and come downstairs when she banged into one of her Beeji's very old friend who looked at her and said,"Aye Haye, aaj meri Guddo toh bahut sonni lag rahi hai. Abb Sharmilee banke matt beithna sabse baat karna. Mennu patta hai aaj tere ko dekh kar bahut munde tere se vyah karna chaawange!" (Oh my God today you are looking gorgeous. Now don't sit like a shy girl, talk to everyone present. I know today lot of boys' family will bring marriage proposals for you.)



"Yeh aap kya keh rahe ho Auntyji?" (What are you saying Aunty?) Geet blushed and ran away.

As she was looking behind she banged into one of Daarji's distant relative. The distant aunt taunted Geet saying, "Goonghi hone ke saath-saath, abb andhi bhi ho gayi hai kya?" (Along with being mute you have also become blind!)

"Chachiji woh..."

"Hatt pare! Mennu jaane de!" (Get out of my way!) The woman pushed Geet and walked away as if Geet was a piece of garbage bringing tears in Geet's beautiful hazel eyes.



Geet went outside to a secluded corner and cried her eyes out. When that didn't reduce her pain she started singing,
"Megha chaaye aadhi raat..."

Geet had just finished singing when a man at once spoke in a deep baritone, "Tum bahut accha gaati ho!" (You sing very well!)
Geet was startled hearing a male voice so close, but she didn't turn. The deep baritone turned now seductively husky, "Tumhari awaaz mei bahut dard hai. Mujhe batao kya dukh hai tumhein!" (Your voice has lot of pain. Tell me whats troubling you!) Finally she turned and her world stood still never had she ever seen such a handsome youngman. He was more handsome in reality than his picture!



He was in his late twenties, tall with chiselled jaw line having sexy stubble, large beautiful dark brown eyes & well toned body with 8pack abs. She was in a frozen state just looking in his hypnotic dark brown orbs.



Geet doesn't recollect how long she stood there gazing in her love's dark brown eyes.



Just then Geet heard footsteps approaching and some voices coming in their direction, giving one last look to the love of her life,



she lifted her lengha gracefully ran in the direction of main Hotel building. On reaching the building, she ran to the washroom closest to her to bring her wayward emotions in control.

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Chapter 8


ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

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SEVEN YEARS BACK

Location: HANDA'S PARTY IN THEIR NEW SIX STAR HOTEL , AMRITSAR, DECEMBER 2009

She composed herself, freshened up and left for where the main party was being held. She was about to approach her Daarji when she saw her love touching her Daarji and Beeji's feet. Before she could make her presence felt she saw him recieving a phonecall and everyone was tense. Then he left abruptly. By the time she reached the group of elders, he was not there. Seeing her there Savitri Devi exclaimed, "Arre Guddo tum aa gayeen!" (Oh Guddo is here!) Geet bent and touched Daddu, Dadi and Ram Uncle's feet. Then she was introduced to Janaki Aunty, "Beta yeh hai humari bahu Janaki. Maan aur Vicky ki Maa. Janaki yeh hai humari Geet!"(Geet, this our daughter-in-law Janaki. Maan and Vicky's mother. Janaki this is our Geet!)

Geet bent to touch Janaki's feet but Janaki stopped her and said, "Betiyaan pair nahi chooteen. Aaj se tum humari beti ho." (Daughters don't touch parent's feet. From today you are our daughter.) Janaki gave an affectionate hug.

"Aur yeh sabse chota aur sabse natkhat Vikram Singh Khurana matlab, Vicky." (This is the youngest in the family but biggest prankster, Vikram Singh Khurana or Vicky) Ram introduced Vicky.

"Guddo, dekh khaana lagaa ki nahi. Tere dono Veerji ko maine bhejaa thaa par koi wapis nahi aaya. Lucky se toh mujhe zyaada umeed nahi thee magar tere Abhishek Veerji se thee. Kash Rudra hota yahaan." (Guddo, please go and see if dinner is ready or not? I sent your both brothers to check, but neither has returned. I didn't excpect much from Lucky but from your Abhishek Veerji, I did. I wish Rudra was here!)

"Daarji, Abhishek Veerji ko jaldi mein daftar jaana padha. Mai dekhti hoon ki Khaana tyaar hai ki nahin." (Daarji, Abhishek Veerji had to suddenly report for duty. I will go and check if dinner is ready!)

"Maaa! Maaa pyaas lagi hai." (Mom, mom, I'm thirsty!) Ayush's sleepy voice broke her reverie once again.


Location : Unknown Old barn on outskirts of Delhi

A man in early thirties is pacing restlessly waiting for someone. Two men entered and at once extended their hands for a hand shake. "Welcome back! We missed you in these seven years!"

"Not as much as I missed being out. But getting me out on parole was the best you guys could do?"

"You have charges of raping a minor and murder! This is the best that we could do in present circumstances."

"Where are the two b*****s?"

"I don't know. No one has seen them since you went to jail. I suggest you keep a low profile if you don't want to be arrested again."

"Where is that b*****d MAAN SINGH KHURANA?"

"He is in New York for inaugration of his new Hotel."

"Book my tickets for New York !"

"But you are on parole you cannot exit India."

"I don't care how you do it. Pay under the table; give me a fake passport or anything you have to do. I have to be in New York within two weeks."

NEXT DAY IN NEW YORK

Location: Geet's apartment in New York City
Today it was Sunday so Geet had washed her long hair. It was third day of Ayush's flu and medicines had finally started kicking in so he was feeling much better. Ayush had his breakfast and went to sleep. Once Ayush was sleeping, Geet went and took bath so she could shampoo her long hip length hair without disturbance.



She sat in her balcony where sunlight was radiating so she could dry her hair.



She was relaxing with her cup of black coffee and newspaper. Suddenly the bell rang surprising her as she only ever had two visitors, Matron and Rosie Aunty. Today being Sunday both would be at Church so who could ring the bell? Putting the safety latch, Geet slowly opened her door to find Maan Singh Khurana standing there looking extremely handsome and dashing in his white shirt and blue jeans.



Geet was about to shut the door, when he pushed his foot through the crack of door opening and spoke in his deep threatening baritone, "Mere muh par darwaaza bandh karne ki soochna bhi matt. Mai darwaaza todh ke bhi andar aa sakta hoon phir tum apne makaan malik ko jawaab dena." (Don't try slamming door on my face. I can break down the door to enter but then you will have tough time explaining to your landlord!)
Geet unlatched the door and let him in. Maan looked around and immediately got a warm feeling of home with bright coloured cushions and Ayush's toys scattered on the floor.



Geet bent down to pick up cushions and toys from the floor making her long semi dried hair come forward like a curtain making Maan close to loosing his senses. He wanted to bury his face in the shiny dark curtain of her hair having relaxing and romantic aroma of lavender. Maan averted his gaze to control his emotions. He looked around the apartment and there were mainly photographs of Anamika and Ayush and some with her batchmates.










Maan saw a steaming cup of black coffee on the side table and started sipping it. Geet was horrified, "Yeh kya kar rahe hain aap? Yeh meri jhooti coffee hai." (What are you doing? This is my sipped coffee.)

"Toh kya hua? Mujhe koi problem nahin hai. Tum apne liye ek aur banna lo!" (So what? I don't have any problem. You make a fresh cup for yourself!)

"Mr. Khurana, kya aap mujhe battaenge ki aap yahaan kyun aaye hain?" (Mr. Khurana, will you kindly tell me why are you here?)

"Tum churidaar kurte mein bahut sundar lagti ho!" (You look beautiful in a churidaar kurta.)



"Mr. Khurana, aap..." (Mr. Khurana, you...)

"Mr. Khurana nahi MAAN bolo." (Not Mr. Khurana, say MAAN.)

"Maine pehle bhi aap se kaha thaa ki mai apke Dadaji ki doctor hoon aur kuch nahi." (I had told you earlier that I'm only your grand father's doctor.)

"Magar mai sirf doctor-patient ka rishta nahi chahta hoon. Mai ek dusari tehara ka rishta chahta hoon." (But I'm not interested in this doctor-patient relationship. I want another kind of relationship.) Maan said coming close to Geet.

"Mai jaanti hoon ki aap ameerzaadon ko ek ladki se kaisa rishta chahiye! Magar maine aap se pehle bhi kahaa thaa aur phir keh rahi hoon ki mera peecha chodh deejiye meri sagaai Dr. Armaan Malik se ho chuki hai." (I know what kind of relationship you rich bachelors want from a girl. But I had told you earlier and I'm telling you again that stop thinking about any relationship as I'm engaged to Dr. Armaan Malik.)

"Sirf sagaai jo toot bhi sakti hai. Aur jiss mangetar ke liye tum mujhse ladh rahi ho woh toh ek dusari ladki nahi doctor ko abhi propose kar raha thaa. Kya naam thaa? Haan, Dr. Riddhima Gupta."(Only engagement which can be broken also. The fiance for whom you are fighting with me is currently proposing to another girl no another doctor. What was her name? Yes Dr. Riddhima Gupta.) Maan said looking at Armaan and Geet's picture but coming more closer.



"Aapko mere ghar ka patta kaise mila? Hospital se?" (How did you find my address? From hospital?) Geet moved away and tried to change the topic.

"Nahin! Nancy se." (No! From Nancy.)

"Nancy?"
Maan had tried to get Anamika's address through formal channels but was unable to. Then he tried non formal channel i.e his charm and flirting with Nurse trainee, Nancy and got Dr. Anna's address.
"Mr. Khurana, mai phirse pooch rahi hoon ki kya aap please mujhe battaenge ki aapko mere se kya kaam hai?" (Mr. Khurana, I'm again asking what work do you have with me?)

"Mai tumhei apna banna naa chahta hoon. Isse pehle tum galat samajhkar bharko, mai saaf-saaf batta doon,"MAI TUMSE SHAADI KARNA CHAHTA HOON ANAMIKA"!" (I want to make you mine. Before you start erupting and talking nonsense I will come to the point, "I WANT TO MARRY YOU ANAMIKA!")

"SHAADI?" (MARRIAGE?)

"Haan Shaadi. Kya tumhei manzoor hai?" (Yes marriage. Do you agree?)

"Mr. Khurana aap bilkul pagal ho gaye hain. You need a Psychiatrist!" (Mr. Khurana, you have lost your mental balance. You need a Psychiatrist!)

"No I need you Anamika sweetheart." Maan took her in his tight embrace.



"Aap..." Geet was struggling to get out of his strong manly embrace.

Just then Ayush came rubbing his eyes in his pajamas,"Maa, Mennu bathroom jaana hai."(Mom, I want to use the washroom.) Seeing Maan he stopped rubbing his eyes and stared at Maan. "Maa, yeh kaun hain?" (Mom, who is this?)

"Ayush, mai tumhari Maa ka friend hoon, Maan Singh Khurana." (Ayush, I'm your mother's friend, Maan Singh Khurana.) Geet gave Maan an angry glare."Ayush, I see you like soccar. Which is your favourite team?" Maan said trying to divert Ayush's attention.

"Man U"

"Ayush, tumhei bathroom jaana thaa naa?" (Ayush, you wanted to use the washroom?) Geet knew that soccar was Ayush's weakness.

"Haan Ayush tum bathroom ho kar aao phir hum baatein karenge. Mai abhi yaheen hoon. Lunch ke baad jaaongaa." (Yes Ayush, go to the washroom then we will talk. I'm here till after lunch.) Maan comfortably sat on the sofa there, ignoring Geet's angry glares.

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Chapter 9


ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

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Location: Anamika's apartment in New York City

As Maan had said the whole morning and afternoon he was in Geet's apartment. Maan and Ayush got along like house on fire! Geet could see that how much a young child needs and misses his father. How she wishes she could fulfill that vacuum in Ayush's life. On both Maan and Ayush's demand Geet made pasta and tomato soup for them and khitchri for herself as even after 7yrs.,she could not relish western and continental food. Soon Ayush became tired and started yawning and soon went to sleep while sitting on the sofa. Maan carried sleeping boy and placed him on his bed. When he came out, Geet asked,"Aap coffee lenge?" (Would you like coffee?)

"Nahi mujhe abb wapis ghar jaana hai. Anamika ek baat aaj mujhe patta chali ki har bacche ke liye dono maa baap kitne zaruri hote hai. Humari shaadi ke baad mei Ayush ki poori zimewaari utthanoga tum chinta matt karna." (No I have to go home. Anamika, today I understood how necessary are both parents in a child's life! After our marriage I will handle all Ayush's responsibility.)

"Maine abhi "haan" nahi kiya hai." (I have not said "yes" as yet!)

"Toh "HAAN" karo naa sweetheart." (Then say "Yes" sweetheart.) Maan said in his irresistable seductive voice.

"Aap ne apne parivaarwalon se iss baare mein baat ki hai? Unka kya kehna hai?" (Have you spoken to your family. What is their opinion on this?)

"Mai pehle tum se baat karna chahta thaa. See you soon sweetheart!" (I wanted to talk to you first.)

"Yeh sweetheart, sweetheart kya lagaa rakha hai. Humare beech koi rishta nahi hai." (What is this sweetheart, sweetheart again and again. We are not any relationship.)

"Sweetheart nahi kahun toh kya "MISHTY" kahun?" (If I don't call you sweetheart than what should I call you "Mishty"?)

"Mishty bhi nahi sirf Anamika yaa Anna." (Not even Mishty, please call me Anamika or Anna.)

"Bye Mishty!" Maan said giving her a peck on her cheek.



Geet was stunned and blushing by Maan's this display of affection.
After clearing the living and dining room, Geet sat with her cup of coffee looking in distant horizon reflecting on past and present events of her life.

SEVEN YEARS BACK

Location: HANDA HAVELI, AMRITSAR, TWO WEEKS AFTER HANDA HOTELS INAUGRATION



Today "her love Maan" was going to come to meet her for matrimonial purposes. Maan was the same handsome youngman whom Geet had fallen head over heels in love with when she meet him near the pool side two weeks back. Hence, when Daarji had shown her Maan's photograph she had at once said yes. Her Daddu, Dadi, Papa (Ram) and Maa (Janaki) were ecstatic and said its "yes" from their side as well but it was better if Maan and Geet met face to face for formality sake. As the time was approaching, Geet's nervousness was increasing. Geet was being given a lot of instructions and advice by Beeji, Dadimaa and Janaki as they desperately wanted this alliance to be fixed. No one even once thought that by doing this they are making Geet more and more tense and stressed thereby it could result in Geet loosing her voice. All women dressed Geet with lot of love and care like a bride and she was looking an epitome of beauty



but only sore point was that according to Handa tradition, the future bridegroom could only see his future bride's face after saying "yes". Hence, Geet's face was covered in a long ghungat.



Maan came Handa's got busy in welcoming him. Savitri Devi and Janaki had forewarned that Maan doesn't like fried and oily stuff hence they got sandwiches, pasta and cakes along with the regular heavy nashta of samosas, pakode etc. After finishing the refreshments Maan and Geet were sent to Geet's room to talk.

Once in the room, Maan saw a bright and colourful room but unlike a regular teenager. A room full of thick medical books. The only form of entertainment was a "taanpura"



and a "harmonium".



"Tum gaati ho?" (You sing?)
The ghunghat covered head nodded yes.

"Tum kahaan tak padhi ho?" (Till which class have you studied?)
There was no response. Just tinkling of her bangles.

"Dekho mere se sharmaane ki zarurat nahi hai. Jo bhi mann mei ho bol do." (There is no reason to feel shy. Please tell me whatever you want.) Again there was complete silence. Just chiming of her anklets.

"Kya tumhei khaana banna na aata hai." (Do you know how to cook?)
Again the ghunghat covered head nodded yes. By now Maan's patience was exhausted and he opened the bedroom door with a bang and left. Frightening Geet and she followed Maan at some distance behind him.



He stood outside in the veranda as his family was sitting with Handas. Janaki saw him and nudged Ram to follow her. Seeing their son and daughter-inlaw going out Thakur Amardeep and Savitri Devi also followed.



On reaching the veranda, Khurana elders saw a furious Maan. Thakur Amardeep asked, "Kya baat hai Maan puttar?" (What is the problem Maan?)

"Dadaji, Dadimaa, Mom aur Dad, aap sabne mujhe samjha kya hai? Ki mai ek bei padha likha gaon ka gawar ladka hoon jo ek gaon ki gawaar ghoonghi ladki se shaadi kar loonga jo ek shabd tak nahi bol sakti! Naa toh yeh bol sakti hai, aur patta nahi dekhne mei kaisi hogi jo itna lamba (Long) ghoonghat ordh rakha hai. Khair, Dadaji aapne mujhe aapni kasam dekar yahaan ladki dekhane laaye the toh mai aa gaya. Mera decision hai ki mai ek ghoonghi ladki se shaadi nahi karonga." (Dadaji, Dadimaa, Mom and Dad, who do you think I am? You think I'm an illiterate village bumpkin who will marry an illiterate mute village girl. The girl who can't speak even one word. She can't talk a word and God knows how she will be to look at whose face is covered by such a long veil. Anyway Dadaji you made me swear on you so I came to see the girl. But my decision is that I will not marry a mute girl!)



"Maan beta, aap humari..."(Maan, please listen...!) Savitri Devi tried explaining.

But Maan thundered, "DADIMAA, I WILL NOT MARRY A GIRL WITH SPEECH IMPAIRMENT!"



Unknown to Khuranas, Handas had heard everything. Seeing his Dadaji and Dadimaa's shocked expressions, Maan turned. Seeing Daarji and Beeji standing there Maan with folded hands and a softer voice said,"Daarji aur Beeji aap mere se bade hain, iss liye mai aapse haath jodkar maafi mangta hoon ki mai aapki Geet se shaadi nahi kar sakta! Mai saaf-saaf bolne mei vishwas rakhta hoon aur woh yeh hai ki "aap ki poti aur mai kabhi bhi ek nahi ho sakte kyunki hum ek dusare ke liye banne hi nahi hain. Iska kaaran yeh hai kyunki mai kissi aur se pyaar karta hoon!" Mai asha karta hoon ki aap meri baat samjhenge." (Daarji aur Beeji you are elder to me so with folded hands I ask forgiveness but I can't marry your Geet.I believe in talking straight and that is "your grand daughter and I can never be one as we are not made for one another. The reason for this is that I love someone else." I hope you understand my point of view.) Touching Daarji and Beeji's feet Maan walked out of Handa Haveli without looking back. Leaving insulted Lalaji & Jassi; humiliated Thakur Amardeep, Savitri Devi, Ram & Janaki; and furious Abhishek and Lucky! Geet had just walked in and heard everything and was feeling extremely guilty for being the cause of her grandparents insult and humiliation!

"Laale aur Parjaijee hummei maaf kardo. Aaj humare badtameez aur ghammandi pote ke kaaran aap sabko kya-kya sunna padha." (Gurucharan and Bhabhiji please forgive us. Today because of our arrogant, ill mannered and vain grandson you had to hear a lot!) Thakur Amardeep said with folded hands and wet eyes. The eyes that never bent in front of any mortal except the Almighty today were bent in front of an old, close and insulted friend due to the arrogance and vanity of his own grandson, Maan. Thakur Amardeep then went with folded hands in front of his darling Guddo and said,"Guddo, aaj yeh Thakur Amardeep tera apradhi hai. Aaj mere parivaar ke ek sadsaye ne tumhe Mata Lakshmi ke swaroopa ka anaadar (insult) kiya hai. Ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar dena!" (Guddo today this Thakur Amardeep is your criminal. Today one of my family member has insulted Goddess Lakshmi's incarnation, you. Please forgive me if you can.) Then Thakur Amardeep bent to touch her feet but Geet held him before he could bend more than half way! Then Geet shook her head in negative under her long ghunghat. No one had ever thought that by following centuries old custom of covering prospective bride's face in long ghunghat this disaster could happen. Geet uncovered her face from ghunghat and said,"Daarji, aaj Geet ek prann leti hai ki woh iss janam mei kabhi shaadi nahi karegi!" (Daarji, today I take a vow, that I will never ever get married in my this life!)



"Geet puttar, yeh kya keh rahi?" (Geet what are you saying?)

"Daarji aur Beeji bass abb mai aur agni-pariksha nahi doongi! Har baar aap mujhse milaane kissi ladke ko le aate ho aur woh Handa parivaar aur meri beizzati karke chala jaata hai. Abb aur nahi. Aur agar aap mujhse zabardasti karenge toh mai iss jeevan ka aanth kar doongi." (Daarji and Beeji, I will no longer give any more test. Everytime you get prospective bridegrooms to come and meet me, then they insult Handas and me and leave. But no longer! If you force me, I'll take my life!)



Throwing her dupatta which was on her head on the floor she walked out of the house. A little while later, everyone heard a melodious voice singing,

"Rula ke gayaa sapna mera..."
(Please listen from 01:15)






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Edited by LM1991 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear Friends,

HAPPY DUSSHERA!


Today I have given triple updates so that the past of Geet from Geet's point of view gets over.
Many of you may not agree with what I'm showing but as I have said before I'm not a trained writer and neither a humanities student. If at anytime you feel the story is dragging, let me know I will wind it up as soon as possible!
Please do give likes and your valuable comments!
LM
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow maan...kya dadagiri hai...dekhte hai geet k answer kya hota hai...

awesome updates...

loved dem very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Great update
Maan asked Geet to marry him
Geet remember 7 years back Maan rejected her
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Like the way you are writing the story
Update soon
Will be waiting

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