SaMud -HUM HAI ISHAQZDDE...short story - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
ahye
it was so lovely 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Saras seeing kumud dancing at wedding func n pic was so nice.bcz of kumud stopping that girlsaras didnt know that she was princess kumud.kumud near saras who was sleeping n feeling sad 4 him getting scolding bcz of her was cute.but d best was when she got up he held her hand n apologizing.eyelock as very romantic.kumud going 2 fall down during d dance n saras holding her n d pic was superb.prem ratan song...wow...unexpectedly kumud had 2 leave bcz of her grandmother's health.u have written nicely that bcz of that kumud lost her grandmother n saras lost his luv kumud.pics added more beauty n it reminded me of SC golden days.in sc kumud had straight hair.here the way u described her curly hair was nice.
Edited by jasminerahul - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Awe nice
Loved all their cute wee moments together
So he knew he was in love with her since then
Looking forward to getting back to present
N seeing how both handle seeing each other again n of course the fact that both know the others true identity now
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow..nice update...d back story of SaMud is so beautifully written&romantic...Cruel destiny made them enemies now...but d way u r describing Kumud's beauty deserves a standing applause...i am loving it very much...Thanks for d PM...Update soonish dear!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update!!!
The flashback was written beautifully.loved it.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOW!! superb update dear...loved it a lot

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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely update...👍🏼...at present Kumud thinks Saras betrayed her......in their past they fell in love with each other but got separated...👏🤔...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Episode:

IMPENDING DECISIONS- SaMud came back from those beautiful memories that even though they were far away from each other always kept them intact...Kumud's eyes were staring at Saras...

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she didn't spoke a word but her eyes asked a lot many questions...questions as to why he betrayed her...why was she told that he was just a solidier...Saras turned his eyes...Kumud...you to lied...i too was lied...i too was betrayed...why did you tell me that you were just a common girl...Saras asked himself when suddenly a voice coming from outside distracted him...it was the voice of someone's footsteps in the complete silence that the court was filled with...the winds had stopped blowing...it seemed they just blew to make the lovers realize each other's presence...God supported their love even when they themselves are not supporting it...Saraswatichandra's gaze turned to the person who just arrived into the court...

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it was vikram with a smile on his face... " bhaiyaa...i got news from my sources and maharani Guniyal, Rani Kusum and rani Kusum's son kushiraj had been caught..." Kumud eyes him shocked... " maa, i need to save her..." she murmured which only vikram heard as he was standing next to her...he stared at her from the corner of his eye and whispered " don't worry , your family will be safe...we will save them from this devil...i have made all the plans of killing him..." Kumud was shocked...the thought of killing Saras...the thought of killing Sanchay...the thought of killing her love also passed shivers down her body...his word made her tremble... " raja Saras...what we have to do with them...with her..." one of his ministers asked...

Saras was out of words...as far as it was decided...it was decided that punishment will be given only to rajkumari kumud as she disrespected her own fathers words...but now how can Saras give punishment to his love...his Ragini...she was like a part of his heart and he had to give punishment to himself... " bhaiyaa...i feel she needs to be put behind bars for the rest of her life..." vikram says as he already had a full fledged plan as to what he had to do ...Saras stared at Kumud...he kept staring at her for quite sometime while Kumud lowered her eye lashes...

i don't care what she has done and what not, i can't give her punishment...i can't give her punishment at any cost...Saras thought as he was about to speak something but Kumud spoke up " i am ready to accept this punishment..." vikram smirked thinking Kumud was involved in his plan and Saras was shocked...he didn't knew what to do and so agreed...Kumud was taken behind the bars...Saras came into his room...he threw a vase angrily...it hit some glass piece and fell down...it was those same eyes...Saras never got them completed, he framed those eyes only because they were special for him...more special than the face as face just reflects a persons beauty but her deep eyes reflected her inner beauty...Saras ran to it...the paper was fallen down in glass pieces...he tried picking up the paper...tears started flowing down his cheeks...his hands rubbed with several glass peices...he didn't care... " ragini..." he shouted crying while he picked up the portrait with his hands which were totally filled with blood...he hugged it... " i was happy to stay away from you, atleast life won't have played such games with me..." he said still hugging the portrait...he was broken...for people he was fiery prince...but only he knew that how broken from inside he was...he had lost his father at a very young age and from the time cared for all others as a king but just forgot to care about one person...himself...he didn't knew that when his anger that forced him to give severe punishments to some people showed him as a villain in front of every person he came across...i am nothing but a fierce prince who hates mankind...who hates when people are happy...thats what people think about me ... he thinks as he remembers Kumud's cold behavior...he has lost his ragini today...he thought as he still hugged the portrait more closely...

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Kumud was sitting in the jail... " maa...bhabhi...kushi...what should i do...Saras, sanchay...my life is taking so many turns in a day as if i am not supposed to live even with this misunderstanding that sanchay was good..." she thought as she sat their remembering about her beautiful moments with sanchay... " i may have loved sanchay but for you...i just hate you Saraswatichandra...i hate you..." she thought as tears started escaping her eyes...she was alarmed the noise of footsteps...she wiped her tears immediately while she eyed the person who came...it was vikram smiling victoriously while eyeing her...she stared at him with strength in her eyes as she knew what she has to do now...

WHAT ARE KUMUD'S INTENTIONS...???

WILL SAMUD UNITE...OR SANGINI'S LOVE STORY WILL HAVE SAD ENDING...??

Edited by Piyaliiii - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Nice update dear... What will happen to Kumud?..
Thanks for the PM.

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