Untold Secrets!!! Uptd Chap 11 Pg 134 22nd Nov!!! - Page 23

Originally posted by: melovesja

so, jalal disguise himself as Rajput and love jodha😊 Amer is friendly state. king attack at knight and wants kill own son. nicely written. suspense goes darker

Thanks for pm and update soon.

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Harshu Diii! First of all a biiig sorry for turning up here so late.

And obviously for the story, there is a big hug for you! 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

A very intriguing start indeed, and right from the first chapter, you have captivated the minds of the readers in the story... The disastrous war vs the luxuriant Mughal emperor; the fighters and kings of rajputana, the each and every description and overall the mysterious impact... a very resplendent representation of a regal story!!

The story is already enriched with a lot of characters with different shades, and there will be a lot afterwards too; each of the sketch of the characters has been done delicately I must say, be it the emperor, prince Nazim, Amar Singh, Veer Singh or Badri, all are very interesting, colourful in their own manner and going to say a lot about them with the development of the story I suppose...

The most clever touch of the story lies in the mystery itself... the mystery of the missing prince Jalaluddin... People says he has been sacrificed in the tussle of ambition regarding throne, but we know he is right here, somewhere in this story, hidden... and this is the greatest reason to hook with this one automatically if someone reads the first chapter.

Jodha, the beloved of veer Singh... she is too hiding behind the curtain of mystery so far, and we know almost nothing about her. Eagerly waiting to see her, and also how she is connected with prince Jalal...

Special mention to the description of the war, it's affect on the normal people and the attitude of the royal peoples regarding war. Very nicely crafted!👏👏

Thank you for this story Di. Eagerly waiting for next update.

Originally posted by: cutecc753

very very interesting story. Waiting to read more

Originally posted by: avika444

Time for new chap madam

Update plsss

Originally posted by: harshu27

yeah madam will update 2mrw or sunday...😆😉

Originally posted by: avika444

Tomorrow ?? Plsss ?? 😳

Originally posted by: harshu27

thnx dear...😃i knw i can understand all r confused...😆ya 1st chap is related to jalal but 2nd chap we have jo and abt jalal being der or not u should guess it😆 btw r u sure both r missing...😛ok jo mite b missing but jalal...?😛think again go thru d chap u will get d hint...😃will update soon dear...😃