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Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Very interesting update Krishna . Your knowledge over dance , Bhangimas , Bhava and Nritta was commendable . You rightly mentioned that Bhava , the emotional state of a character portrayed by the dancer must be an inherent quality of that dancer , very difficult to learn and express it in a correct way !Physical gestures and facial expressions by Dharani were well described by you .😊 Your eagerness to give every detail to the reader is praiseworthy . Well written update .

Originally posted by: ..RamKiJanaki..

Wow, what a breakthrough in your story, Shru!

First of all, I loved the little glimpse we saw into Radhika's mind. So she really does love her daughter, just forgot how to relate with her recently. I hope soon, mother-daughter regain their relationship.

Dharani's dream was so sad, sent chills down my spine. 😭 I love how you correlated people's sins and atrocities on Earth, with Dharani being marked for their torture. It was difficult to read though, but very deep and well written!

Originally posted by: KanhaKiChutki

This chapter had a lot of things. So many.

The dance, Dharani and Pragati's bond, Dharani's vision, all of it. Like I said earlier, it gives a lot to think about without being too much to read. Pravha's realisation. Next update jaldi jaldi 😳

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

Certain things needs destruction. There is no point fearing it though it can choke u

Originally posted by: SenAnu

Sru!!

Took a break from studies to read your FF and My God, it was completely worth it :)

Loved it dear!

The last line is a dangerous cliffhanger 😆

Loved the whole part Sru!

Keep updating!

P. S. Your reviews are awaited :)

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Wow! This was really nice! Loved Dharani's explanation of the performances of the bhavas! Also, Dharani's dream was described soo well! Can't wait to see what's up with that gruesome vision!

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Nice chapter Srutha😊