SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12 - Page 13

I just loved loved loved chapter 2! It was so beautiful & so dreamy with lil lil things & lil lil gestures of Swara & Sanskaar!

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

I just loved loved loved chapter 2! It was so beautiful & so dreamy with lil lil things & lil lil gestures of Swara & Sanskaar!

It is such little things and little gestures that add up to so much right - so much so that finally Swara admits to Sanskaar that she is in love with him and she has even learnt to read his eyes, she did not need him to say that he loved her.

Though I'm scared of the last line & immediately reminded me the tragic you mentioned at the beginning!

Well, however much of candy floss my tales could be, there must be something sour to break the sweetness, right?😉 - it will not be a tragedy but yes, it would cause quite a bit of angst - which is what Act II is going to be all about.

Please update soon bcoz I simply got bowled by your writings & with these 2 chapters, I'm in love with this piece of yours!

Well, I have the draft of Act II in place - one final round of editing and it should be ready to post - soon. I just pray it lives up to your expectations😳

Loads of love & hugs Nyna <3

Originally posted by: sneharay

Awesome update.. 👏

Res nyna. Will Unres soon.

Nice &beautiful update nyna dear

Hi
It's very interesting how you have developed swasan relationship in a coffee shop.it's very refreshing to see the girl who does not believe in love and loving maths.glasses to hide brings some of my own memory 😳 .the coming together of swasan from strangers to coffee table sharing partners was so realistic.the deal to teach each other is the starting of a lifelong partnership.you have made simple scene of life come out very well to show the start of something so heavenly (love) . 😳 .
For chapter two I can say it was the natural progress of two people who are falling in love.walking her back home on her asking is admirable.becoming cupid for raglak makes them and me fall in love a bit more.
Your a fantastic writer.I am honoured to get your pm.thank you so much for this piece of literature. 😊
Minerva

Originally posted by: showrav24

Nice &beautiful update nyna dear

Loved swasan small small moments for coming closed.so sanskar realized much earlier that his feel for swara thats why he not continue to pursuit kavita.swara also loved his company & slowly slowly knowing him his every move & she accept she falling in love & finally confess. i Like their romance 😳

But become sad by last line why u say that that means u going to separate swasan😭

update soon dear

Bye

Originally posted by: darcyholic

Hi
It's very interesting how you have developed swasan relationship in a coffee shop.it's very refreshing to see the girl who does not believe in love and loving maths.glasses to hide brings some of my own memory 😳 .the coming together of swasan from strangers to coffee table sharing partners was so realistic.the deal to teach each other is the starting of a lifelong partnership.you have made simple scene of life come out very well to show the start of something so heavenly (love) . 😳 .
For chapter two I can say it was the natural progress of two people who are falling in love.walking her back home on her asking is admirable.becoming cupid for raglak makes them and me fall in love a bit more.
Your a fantastic writer.I am honoured to get your pm.thank you so much for this piece of literature. 😊
Minerva

Res for part 2 Nyna. 😳
Unresed.😃
Awesome! Fabulous! Mindblowing! Spectacular!👏👏👏👏
It was indeed "A Walk To Remember" for SwaSan.😳 I loved each and every moments of SwaSan.😃 First at the coffee shop.😃 How they were sitting holding each other's hand. Then their walk that changed their lives.😳 Swara was daydreaming about Sanskar, although she still didn't believe in love then, and finally kissed him on his cheeks.😳 Then Swara gifted Sanskar a book of her choice which Sanskar truly liked and treasured it.😃 And even dated it.😉 And again Sanskar saved Swara from those boys.😃 He was so protective about her.😳 They way Sanskar asked Swara to remove her big glasses and his reasoning was so sweet.😳 And then he pecked the corner of her lips.😉 And wow! Sanskar at the beginning only realized that Swara was special for him, much special than Kavita too.😃 Loved those SwaSan moments so much.😃 This part was very touchy when Sanskar accompanied Swara to the lecture just for her sake and Swara was so much caring towards him that when he fell asleep on her shoulders, she didn't disturbed him and also didn't allow anyone to disturb him.😉 Sanskar felt sad when he heard about Swara's dad was finding match for Swara.😛 Loved their plan to unite RagLak.😃 Even Ragini sensed that something was brewing between SwaSan.😆 And finally they were able to unite RagLak.😊 And finally this part of SwaSan was so dreamy when Sanskar asked Swara about how she would liked to be proposed by her man, and when she accidentally and without realizing uttered 'u and me' and Sanskar was surprised and amused at it. And finally Swara realized that she had fallen for Sanskar and Sanskar fell for Swara.😳 And their kiss.☺️☺️ And I think even Ragini could guess what had happened between SwaSan without even seeing them, by both of their absence from the party.😉 And the photographer clicked pic of them and thought them to be a beautiful couple.😃 Beautiful couple indeed - SwaSan.❤️ But Nyna, I think u gave us a hint of SwaSan separation?😕 Are u really going to separate them? If yes, then don't take much time to reunite them.😉
U know, I'm in love with this chapter.
Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

I hate Mondays too😡 - as I read somewhere - "Mondays are an awful way to spend one seventh of your life."

But today is a good Monday as a meeting with the auditors got postponed - so an okay day so far😉