Picture of You... - Page 3

Originally posted by: shakira07

Aarti...ur poem shook me up a bit! Cud see the ugliness emerging. Sareeta's poem was more abt the disappointment but urs was like those sad, brooding kafkeshque realities of life!!

Three cheers for that - love to dwell on that kind of stuff too!!

Sharika : Yeah , her poem sure shook me up too... for the simple reason that there was a stark reference to the physical aspects of a being rather than jus the sublimal and it paints too clear a picture then leaving very little to imagination , that I guess renders it all the more unnerving !!! And the transition of how the once adorable features... now seem to have acquired a devilish aspect to them is indeed quite grostequely but yet beautiful and I know... and as Aarti mentioned to me over phone taht my comment about Bellatrix Lestrange and Ridhima reminding me of her yday was what kinda got her to pen these lines as well...And I loved the way she brought out the transition in the lines... and I absolutely admire how ppl manage that coz I am totally incapable of drawing references or comparisions between physical aspects of a being and the emotional transition... and possibly my admiration for the talent which can do so!😊

As an afterthought... I thought Bellatrix was beautifully evil..in the sense that she was pure evil...unabashedly... evil... and that makes her ... all the more cold and scathingly evil... Ooooh!!!!

But Ridhima being evil... was almost despisable.. coz she was under this garb of being "I am so innocent" and that is what infuriated me..but all said and done.. the scene on the terrace did make me sit up and watch Shilpa the actress... undoubtedly....

Originally posted by: mehak_kapoor

Acha di temme do u want a hug or kissie???????? UMMMMMMMMM lemme give u both mwahhhh n 🤗 Dono Darling...if I could !!! Hahahaha!!! How sweet... here is a lil kiss for you on your pretty cheek and a warm bear hug!!! Thanks Baby!

Ur poem is perfectly defining armaan's life n his feelings right now........he is totally heart broken at this moment........his love has begun to fade.......ridz has destroyed it all.......
Wat armaan thought of ridz n wat she actually is really frustrating him........ Yep... the typical... Sapna mera... too gaya... !!!

LOVELY POEM DI 👏 👏THank you soooooo much darlin behna!

Originally posted by: luv4prc

wowwwwwwww.. wonderful sareeta dii.. u potrayed a really gud picture in these verses... 👏 👏

Thank you sooooooo much!!! Am soooo glad you enjoyed the lines... and am glad what I intended I managed to convey in the verse!😉

So beautiful Sareeta. Brings out all the emotions Armaan went through so well. Vivid imagery. Loved the way you related the colors and landscapes to the transition in Armaan.

First the realization of love, pure, perfect and ideal. Then the storm clouds brewing and the monster lurking in the murky depths waiting to pounce, and then the final disillusionment at the unveiling of the dark side of his love, the disenchantment, the disappointment, and the fury at being deceived and being lead on.

Meine jo tumhe simple samhja tha, mein galat tha or words to that effect conveyed it all.

Originally posted by: vaarti

Like begets like and so here goes…

A bright pink face,
A white glossy mouth,
Bright red lips,
Sparkling blue eyes,
Striped pajamas in gay shades,
The clown stepped out in the sun
Out to spread laughter, joy and mirth.

Beads of sweat trickling down,
Ran the pink in blotches…
The drip of the red lips like that of blood,
The blue in the eyes smudged beyond recognition
The white of the mouth besmirched by colours undefinable
I watched helplessly and cringed
At the sad, ugly face of my joy thus revealed.

Like you all said before this so evokes memory of the moment when Ridhima laughs and asks him gussa aaya. More like a witch or one of those sssh phir koi hain type characters as someone rightly put it. My blood ran cold for a while there.

Originally posted by: ashvez

Hey....thats a Smack Down!!! BINGO!!! Aaah I like the sound of that... reminds me of Akon's song... Smack That!
Sareeta...for yesterday's eppy...its the best we can get from u...U did it again. Thank you sooo much ... Armaan and his reactions yesterday have made me sooooo happy and boy did I love watching the man seething in fury.... at casting those looks of disgust at that dimwitted twit! Thank you so much babes! Am so glad you enjoyed reading the lines...

👏 *bows to the applause*

Superb...I can relate all the expressions through ur POEM!!! Aaah... that makes me sooo happy ... coz the intent of it all was that.... to bring in the expressions of Armaan and the agony of disappointment

First part of ur poem, is the PLAY SCENE(Love ,affection)

2nd PArt- is after the play where he gives a piece of his mind to Riddhi ( Frustration)

3rd Part ofcourse-Tum Itna gir sakti Ho.(DIsgust).
Tumney mera saath apni izzat ka bhi tamasha banadiya (Aggression) ...Kuch Daag Kabhi NAhin Mit Tey.(Hurt )...Yeh Rang waise bhi Kuch Khaas Nahin...(dissapointed)

Loved your dissection of the verse.... and relating it to the sceness.... thanks .. although I didnt dissect it nor did the thought cross my mind when I penned the lines!! They never do... like I said before... the lines jus floooooowwwwwwwwwwww.... and I had this picture of Armaan in his room staring out at the morning sun... and the words flowed into my wandering mind!

Well yesterday's dialogues & armaan's expressions were commendable...wld leave an impression for days together...I'm gonna put yesterday's eppy in my Favourites.
😊

Yday episode was my wish come true and so it truly is my fav episode of them all!!

Mirror Mirror on the wall... which is my fav episode of them all...

Mirror says: The one that had Armaan seething in fury at the twit he called his love!😆

Ash.

Originally posted by: vaarti

@ notty, did get the idea from there...particularly sareeta's take on ridz reminding her of bella lestrange...

Ahaa , Aarti, I jus mentioned the Bellatrix reference in response to Sharika as well!! I didnt know... a simple.. wayward reference would bring out such a classic ... verse from your Kitty...!! Woohoooooo !!!

Cheers ...to my off hand reference to the beautifully evil witch of Harry Potter series...!!! !!

Originally posted by: nottygarfield

Ugly scary picture.....thats exactly how Shilpa looked/acted and Ridz behaved!

Aarti: It sure painted a very gory ugly scary picture that kinda unnerved me... for a few moments... and boy the power of words I tell ya....

Notty: Shilpa did give expressions especially jus before she utters the words" Gussa aaya kya.." the way her eyes go cold... and the music jus added to the eery bit... and oh , like Gina says.. my blood did run cold for a moment!And when she laughed... oh it was so despisably evil!

Makes me wonder... the gal is quite charming and she can look so horribly evil as well.... with jus a twitch of her muscle... One thing I noticed in both the actors...and I am in awe...

@ sareeta and gina...yeah that was the idea. i am scared of clowns...just all that paint on their faces and it has always intrigued me to know what would happen when the colour runs. not to mention sareeta, the whole clown angle in adhure armaan, i just twisted it a bit here...

not just bella...sareeta...it just struck me...what about the veela? remember the ugly faces that reared when they were scorned??? hmmmm....

Originally posted by: ifrahnaqash

Wow!! what a poem to express Armaan's present feelings!!
Armaan's one line, "Meri galati thi ki mainne tumhe ek simple si ladki samjha", is the perfect, one-line summary of ur poem!!
Exceptionally Brilliant!!

Thank you soooooooo much Ifrah and yes it was intended at bringing about the disappointment in one's life ... at watching the picture we paint ever so beautiful ... go down into the shambles... with the colors fading away leaving a grosteque mutilated version of something that had once been beautiful....

THanks again for enjoying it and yes... the one of Armaan conveyed his disappointment and it would be an apt summary to his expression...that I conveyd in the lines...!