ts- mujhko bhaave galliyan teri galliyan epilogue on pg 74 updt on25/9 - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update dii
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm
Sorry for the late reply
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shot 2
A brilliant and hilarious update!!!!🤣
Raksha I know that I tell you this every time but it's true every time - your dialogue is amazing so I have to quote it here please: " Raman- arey jab tum coffee pee rahi thi balcony.someone waved from down and tum lafanga keh kar ander chali gayi thi .main wahi hoon jisne hi kiya tha.lafanga.he said blushing like a newly wed bride making Ishita some at his cuteness.


Ishita supressed her smile and asked- so may I know ki Mr lafanga yahan kya karne aaye hai.

Raman- tumhara naam janne.

Ishita- kyun.

Raman- fir karni hai.

Ishita- fir? Kyun.Maine kya kiya .

Raman- churaya hai.

Ishita- kya.

Raman- iss lafange ka dil.he said smiling.

Ishita smiled a little hearing his words and said- aisa hai naa lafanga ji.mere padosi bahut khatarnaak hai.agar Maine chillaya aur woh aa gaye naa toh saari aashiqui chaad deni hai.

Raman- aisa mat keh madrasan. I have met ur neighbor. That moti aunty,I was so afraid of her.I thought what if she sat on me."

Ab dil to chraliya aur ab hone wali biwi hun!?!??
Naya doodh waala!!!😆

He pushes his way inside her house - she says she will call the police:"Raman- bula lo.I don't care.do I look like a milkman.main bechara PSR enterprises the marketing head,Raman Kumar bhalla,mujhe dhoodh wala bana diya.I am very angry and not going anywhere.koi apne Raman ke saath aisa karta hai kya.huh bolo.he said with a cute pout.😆

She cannot resist his charm and goes inside and sits next to him:
"Ishita came and sat beside him and said- ek minute,apne Raman.yeh kab hua.

Raman blushed and said- if u r my would ne wife then I belong to u only naa.

Ishita- ur would be wife.yeh kab bani main.and don't u even know the name of ur would be wife.

Raman- yes of course, u r Mrs Raman Kumar bhalla. Of course soon to be.

Ishita- this is not my name.so don't act over smart and go from here.she said angrily.

Raman folded his hand and said- gusse se bologi toh nahi jaaunga,pyaar se bologi toh mar bhi jaaunga."
Absolutely brilliant!!!!!😆 loved it!!

He kisses her softly on her hair - haayeee!!!

He goes home and hugs his mum being in his dreamland and tells his mum that he has found her bahu and Toshiji is very happy when he tells her all about it and the fact that she is Madrasi which she does not mind at all - yayyy!!
Now we need to know more about her background!!!!

Both went to sleep dreaming about each other!!

Next day he goes again and she send him a cup of coffee - wah kya baat hai - lagta hai kuch kuch hone laga hai!!!!❤️

Beautiful song choice!!!!

Looking forward to the next update please and thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!!!


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Posted: 9 years ago
Uber cute update Di
Loooved it
How cutely Raman complained her " do I look like a doodh wala to you"😆 bechare Raman ja popat kar diya

My god how cutely and sweetly he flirt with ishita
And aunty wala scene was hilarious🤣
Ishita was impressed by his cuteness and charm
Would be Mrs Raman Kumar Bhalla😳

Raman was so excited and Happy to found his love
He told toshiji about her and she was double excited
Awww their morning coffee session was😳
But want to know where is ishita's family??
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
love at first sight for raman
dhoodh wala poor him
enjoyed it lot
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
hayeee kitna cute update tha
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Posted: 9 years ago
yayaya
yippee!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
I AM THE 150TH LIKER😃

update was lovely
loved it so much

raman...
he is such a cute one
and ishita has also fallen for him

the way he was calling himself her raman
i just loved it

and toshiji too accepted it
but,poor fellow
don't know her name

i just loved the morning scene
he went to meet her
and ishita sent him coffee

thanks for pm di
please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
sorry for late reply i am having problem with my net
but update was awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very beautiful
Raman is super cute
I was wondering where that similar chai/coffee from balcony scene saw.
It was from love aaj kal
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story di😃
Loved it loads 😃
Raman is so cute 😃
He has gone mad in love😆
Such a cutie😆
Ishu also likes raman😳
Raman is really behaving like a love sick puppy 😆
Please continue soon can't wait to read the next part 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
SHOT 3

Ishra were busy in having coffee together,Raman sitting on his bike while ishita in her balcony. They were looking at each other and smiling slowly. A strand of hair was adorning her face while blocking his view, he blowed air from that far and her hair fly in air,he signalled saying,now it's perfect.

She blushed and went inside the house to make her breakfast.after putting idli in the steamer,she went to check on him,only to see him not there anymore.she was disappointed and thought,may be he went to his office,after all he is marketing head of PSR enterprises. She thought and a smile crept on her face remembering his cute face when she called him.dhoodh wala.she was lost in his thoughts when her door bell rang.she went to open it lost in thoughts only to see him standing smiling fully.

Ishita- aap,yahan kyun,kaise.don't u have to go to ur office.yaa sach much mein dhoodh wala banne ka irada hai.she said smiling.

He came inside saying- kaisi biwi ho,apne pati ko sirf coffee pila kar office bhejogi,yaa breakfast bhi dogi.he said sitting on the dining table.

Ishita was just looking.

Raman- what,aise kya aankhein phad phad ke dekh rahi ho.I know I am too handsome but stop staring ,it's pretty embarrassing jaan.go and bring hot hot aaloo parantha for ur handsome would be hubby.with raita and chatni.he said while she made a perfect O with his advances.

Raman- go jaan,I am hungry and getting late too.

Ishita- I am thinking why not ask my neighbor aunty for parantha. Actually she is Punjabi naa,she knows well to make parantha.bulaun aunty ko,kahun kya aap par baithne ko.she said smiling.

Raman made a sad face and said- nahi khilana toh mat khilao.aise dhamki toh mat do.koi nahi,main bhookha hi chala jaata hoon.but ab tum apni saas ko kya jawab dogi that u couldn't take care of ur Raman. He said with a cute pout and start walking out of her place.

Ishita was just looking at him.this man never fails to amaze her.behaving like he is actually her husband and she is a cruel wife sending him empty stomach.he actually made her feel guilty.

Ishita- idli khaoge.she asked making him stop in his way.he turned and smiled fully nodding yes.

She smiled and signalled him to settle down on the chair while she went to bring idli with chatni sambhar.Raman was sitting on the chair humming a song waiting for her when she came with hot steaming idlis along with chatni sambhar.she served him and settle beside him to have her breakfast.

Raman had a bite and said- u know I never eat this yummy idli, it's so delicious madrasan.

Ishita- why u r calling me madrasan.

Raman- coz u madrasan and I don't know ur name.

Ishita- but yesterday u called me ishi hearing aunty.

Raman- woh toh aunty bulati hai,main thodi naa bulaunga.I am special naa,so I will call u with a special name.

Ishita smiled and little hearing his words and said seriously- raman,I want to saw something.please stop this,it's not good.I can't throw u out of my house but please stop coming to my place like this .agar koi dekhega toh kya kahega.moreover I don't like this kind of flirting.she said only to see him looking at her dreamingly.

Ishita- what,

Raman- phir se bolo.

Ishita- kya.

Raman- mera naam,it's sounds so good from ur mouth.

Ishita- mains itna kuch kaha,tumne bas yahi suna.

Raman- main bas apne kaam ki baat sunta hoon.kaho naa phir se.,Raman.

Ishita- it's not joke Raman.I am very serious.I don't like this kind of flirting.

Raman didn't let her complete and said holding her hand-its not flirting .it's love true love,I can't explain u when and why I fell for u but its true ki meri feelings tumhare liye utni hi sachchi hai jitni tumhari tumhare bhagwaan pe shraddha.I know it's hard to believe but I have never fallen for a girl in my life and will never fall again for anyone,coz I love u madrasan.I really do.saying so he kissed the back of her palm and went finishing his breakfast leaving ishita lost in his words.she was standing near the table taking the plates in her hand while her mind was still in his words,his honest confession.when she felt a pair of hands grabbing her waist. She closed her eyes feeling his touch.

Raman- BTW ,thanks for the lovely breakfast.next time I want it from Mrs Raman Kumar bhalla's hand sitting in my lap.love u madrasan,take care.saying so he went kissing her earlobe making her stick to the place.she was touching the place he kissed.she can still feel his touch on her.a smile crept on her face remembering his cute antics.that's when she remember that he is going.she went to the balcony and waved him bye,he was waiting for her bye.he sat on the bike waving her bye and went but not before giving her a flying kiss making her blush.she was busy in blushing when her phone rang.she picked it up and said- yes just coming.saying so she hung tha call.she was going to change when her mobile rang.she picked it reluctantly seeing an unknown number.

Ishita- hello,whos this.

Raman- Raman patidev.he said smiling.

Ishita- Raman,aapko mera number kahan se mila.

Raman- dhoondhne wale toh rab dhoondh lete hai ,yeh toh sirf number hai.waise bhi kya karna tha,just pick ur phone and call on my number.haan that's reminds me,how u can be so careless.u should keep ur phone password protected.agar meri jagah koi aur hota toh,usse mil jaata naa tumhara number,khayal rakha kar madrasan. He said making her smile.

Ishita- can u tell me why u called.I am getting late.

Raman- that's why I called u.See I have left a packet on ur table,a purple one.

Ishita look around and saw a beautiful parcel on the corner table.

Ishita- yes I found it,I am keeping it safe.aap jab aaoge toh le lijiyega.

Raman- ohho toh someone start waiting for me.not bad madrasan ,but that parcel is for u.wear this today.I know u will look more stunning then I can ever imagine.just prove me right sweetheart.

Ishita- no Raman,I can't accept any gift from u.

Raman- kyun jab mera dil le liya toh gift kyun nahi.waise bhi I am not asking u.but ordering u and if u don't listen to my order then requesting u.please wear this one for me madrasan.

Ishita- but Raman.

Raman- please,for me.I know u will not disappoint me.will come in the evening.saying so he hung the call.

Ishita was standing with her phone in her hand when it ringed again.she picked it seeing it from her hospital.

Ishita- hello.

Rec-maam this is to inform u that ur appointment for the day is cancelled so sir told me u to inform.u that he has given u that long due day off.if u r interested.

Ishita- yes yes,I want it badly.waise bhi i was working like a donkey in all these days.so please say thanks to sir on my behalf.

Rec-sure ma'am,saying so she hung the call.

Ishita sat on the sofa nearby,she wanted this leavd since last month when she wanted to go with her parents to their native after her broken engagement with subbu.yes she was engaged with subbu and was about to get married but at the last time, subbu and his family denied for the marriage coz appa couldn't arrange for the asked amount for dowry. Subbu was a software engineer who was going to USA and his parents want him settled before that so his marriage was fixed with ishita and ishita being a dutiful daughter never asked anything from her parents,though ishita don't like his dominating nature but she never said a word to anyone.everything was going smooth when suddenly his parent asked for 25 lakhs as dowry.appa couldn't arrange and the marriage broke.ishita was somehow happy coz she don't like him but the society never let her stay happy.all started questioning her for no reason.her parents suggested to go to their natives.she too wanna join but couldn't as she didn't get any leave from her hospital.and being a gynecologist she can't leave her patients in pain.and today finally she got a leave.

Ishita- shayad main isliye nahi gayi kyunli mujhe Raman se milna tha.a man who really loves me.a man who can make me forget the wounds I got by this society.I will not stop myself this time.if he will love me,I will love him back.I also want a loving and caring hubby.agar meri shaadi dahej ki wajah se tut gayi toh isme mera kya kasoor.I know Raman is the one for me.and I will not leave him.he made me feel goosebumps with his touch,he make me feel desired.she said caressing the parcel lovingly.

Ishita smiled caressing the parcel and finally opened it only to find a simple blue saree along with matching accessories, bangles, bindi,a lite delicate diamond set with a note.she picked it and it read,

Want to give sindoor and mangalsutra too but lagaa tum naraaz ho jaogi ,so this much for now.would love to see u in this.just don't look too beautiful which I can't handle,love u madrasan

Tumhara lafanga.

She smiled reading his note and brought it near her lips,then stop and look around that noone is watching her,then she kissed the note.keep it safely in her diary and start decorating the house for his arrival.

It took her three hours to arrange the house,decorate it with flowers and floating candles.after a hard work of three hours,she was satisfied with the outcome.

Ishita- its looking beautiful, Raman ko jarur achcha lagega.now I should start making food for him.but kya banaun.she was thinking when she remember that he was asking for aaloo ka parantha .

Ishita- woh toh mujhe banana nahi aata.aunty se puchti hoon.thinking so she went to her neighbor.she welcomed her warmly.

Ishita- aunty I wanna learn ,how to make aaloo ka parantha.

Aunty- why ishu.if u wanna eat u can eat in my house.Maine aaj hi banaya hai.

Ishita- no aunty,I want to make myself.actually some guest is coming.can u please tell me the recipe.

Aunty- oh its easy,saying so she told ishita the recipe to make it.

Ishita went to her house and start making it .but couldn't give it proper shape.she trued ,tried and tried and finally after two hours she could make some good paranthas which were tasty as well as looking good.she prepared raita and look at the clock.its was three,she skipped her lunch to make parantha for him.she was feeling hungry so made instant noodles for her.she was eating when she got his message.

Will be there at five.be ready.

Ishita smiled and fasten her work.she cleaned the mess she created in making perfect parantha for him and went to take shower again as she was so much in flour that its hard to recognise her.

She came out feeling fresh after showering and picked the saree to wear only to find the blouse was loose,she look at the clock,it was 4.30.she speed up and tighten the blouse,wear it and draped the saree.she comb her hair and let it be open.applied kohl in her deep brown eyez and a light shade of lipstick .she put the bindi and was wearing the bangles when her door bell rang.she look at the clock,it was 5.15.

Ishita- Raman hi honge.she said and speed up wearing the bangles.she ran to open the door bell due to the constant ring.and finally open it only to saw him standing in front of him with a bouquet of white lilies in his hand.

That's all for now.enjoy and do comment and hit likes.will wait for it.

Ps- getting pathetic responses. Comment and like if u all want me to continue my work.


Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago

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